“Little Luna don’t listen to her. She knows that she can’t compete with you so she is trying to make you doubt yourself. I promise that you are a hundred times better than she is.”
What would you do if you found out that your boyfriend and best friend where seeing each other behind your back? What happens when a simple high school football game turns in to fate? Ella is a senior and head cheerleader, but her life is far from perfect. Her best friend of 13 years has been fooling around with her boyfriend behind her back. What was supposed to be her best year of high school has turned into the worst. Everett is a senior and starting cornerback for his high school football team. When he travels to their cross-city rivals to play he never expected to find his mate. The day that Everett and his wolf find Ella is the day she finds out that her boyfriend has been cheating on her. Now Everett must convince Ella that love is not dead and to give him a chance. What happens when Ella figures out that Everett is not a normal boy, that he is hiding something from her? Will Everett's secrets tear these two apart or can Ella learn to trust again?
A complete standalone novel with a HEA. 55,000+words.
I really liked this book, I wish there were more but oh well. My only major issue is all the damned "she shook her head yes" "shaking my head yes".....nooooooooo it's nod for yes and shake for no >.< drives me nuts.
What can I say about Ella and Everett? The relationship was just out of no where like most shifter romances are but it was very slow moving. Her friend Greg is just not a developed character. He's portrayed as this wishy washy gay cheerleader and I feel like he could have been more developed. Greg is easily shut up by his mate Scott simply kissing him. So he's silenced and his character just stays simple. Ella is kept in the dark about Everett but he just comes out of no where and scoops her up like it's no big deal. Parker was a developed character until he went crazy and the ending came out of no-where. This book had potential but it just left a bit to be desired. It also could use some editing.
This book had some serious four star potential until the end. We never saw the girl best friend again after they changed schools, but she really just went away??? Parker didn’t. The ending was really anticlimactic. Which was a shame, cause it was going really well. What was the purpose of the appendix bursting?? It added 0 things. We didn’t see her parents again. Daniel was always a problem, and again, we didn’t get any closure. We saw her learn about wolves but not how Ella was gonna take becoming a wolf?? We skipped the end of high school and suddenly were in college… it was a rushed ending and it negated how fun the start of the book was. Which was disappointing.
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His to save. I love it. It's so romantic , full of friendship and loyalty. I love Greg, Ella's best friend he is so adorable and energetic, poor thing with his moon that she doesn't accept the fact the Greg is gay and has his mate Scott; they are so cute and in love. Parker had a fair ending he was really messed up in the head and he was lucky the Everett didn't kill him. Ella and Everett had a HEA ending. I love it. Everett is so cute and romantic. What is not to love.
Ugh ok I loved how this book started off, like the vision was there and it was gorgeous. We just moved on toooo quickly. And I think that was the theme of this book really we were just breeeeeezing through so quickly. I enjoyed the multiple POVs but every time we were in Everett’s POV it came across sososo robotic. Like AI wrote it in comparison to some of the other characters. Like sentences a teenage boy would never say even if he was the Alpha. Also repetitive with the constant Ella-love and Little Luna just over and over again. So for that I am giving a generous 3 stars!
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This was a cute shifter story that had all the elements to be great but just wasn't. This book felt rushed, and the different POV'S didn't help. When you do points of view that is fine, but when you backtrack and overlap them it just makes for a mess! The characters needed to be fleshed out more and explored. This author shows promise and I hope she figures it out.
Plot was interesting if not a little YA for my usual tastes. But it contained way to many sentence and grammar issues to feel as if it was an actual published book. Enjoy the read but know if you do any form of editing in your daily job you'll be editing in your head with this book. If their next book was edited I'd want to read it though!
Very fast paced story with a HEA that you come to want but for the most part this was waaaay to fast paced for my taste. It was almost like a check list with the way you read each paragraph. Get rid of boyfriend, ✅ become alpha ✅ instant money and pack ✅ girl has stalker ✅ cue drama ✅. Overall yes it’s an awesome story but I wouldn’t read it again.
I didn’t expect much and didn’t get much either , predictable , childish and overall the character get everything they want and are the best at everything (like cheer and gymnastics) random things that didn’t pertain to the story got thrown in for no reason it was had.
His to Save begins with the hero meeting his mate, however, she's human and just got out of a bad relationship. This book was funny, interesting, and I enjoyed it. However, there were a lot of mistakes that sort of brought you out of the story, but other than that it was enjoyable.
It was a good plot and the first couple of chapters pulled me in but after that, was like reading a childish play. Some areas were every hard to read because was correcting in my head the grammar and spelling.
there weere somw parts i like and other parts i didnt. some of the pack stuff was a little too far fetvhed. and i felt the story was rushed. but i loved everett's love for ella
The first half wasn't bad, but everything went downhill after the appendicitis. Such a weird thing to put in and then the time jumps started when they weren't used throughout the book. And the plot just got looser and faster.
I loved that this Romace felt real but also had a flair for the dramatics! I also loved that it encased love for everyone no matter what but showed there is an ugly side to the world! Beautifully done!
The story line is great. Characters are fantastic. Bring able to have a his & her perspective is great. It's a clan love story between humans and wolves.
A romance book featuring a human cheerleader and finding her mate in wolf shifter football player from neighboring town. Enjoyed this coming of age shifter book.
This is less than amateur reading. The whole story is very childish. Possibly middle schoolers would enjoy this. I will not read anymore by this author.
3.6 Could have been better... and longer But it was nice, would I recommend it? Eh, its something to read when you've read all the other good werewolf books or even just to kill time.