This is just lousy writing at this point.
Once again, this is a very short book and imagine you spend more than ten percent (10%) of this short book with Ty in his work. It would have been cool if at the conclusion of the work scene Ty did something meaningful or atleast triumph in anything but OMFG, it just left you more angry with the main character. Really we spend pages with this dude fixing a turn table to get him acting like a pathetic loser again. Jeezus H Mice. Who wants to listen to a story about a weak, lame, lousy, lack of confidence main character. Even if you want to keep the boss the way that she is, atleast give me something more than she is just spiteful. J Jonah Jameson works because at the end of the day he is not a bad character and atleast he has some funny quotes.
This book is an over 18+ book, yet it reads as if you were a middle schooler. Know you audience author. Young adult men aren't gonna like this shit. Why would anyone want to read about this loser. WTF. I actually feel scammed. This is a huge waste of money. Don't buy!
This book isn't even fun to read. Ty is one of the most useless main characters I have ever had to experience. For the main character of the book, his impact on the story is so subdued I felt as if we had remove him from the story there would have been no difference. We the reader, always have to experience things from the back seat as Ty literally is incapable of doing anything. He makes no impression on anything. If you are writing a superhero story (which these books are btw) make the main character do something. Even Hughie Campbell from the Boyz comic was very useful and he is almost like this character.
When writing a story the main character should never be the same throughout the story. That is terrible writing. Ty is literally useless in the beginning, useless in the middle and only through sheer luck somewhat useful in the end. What kind of story telling is this. The fact that we only ever get to see what goes on through his perspective hampers the entire story. All the entertaining and fun elements of a superhero story are reduced to him watching from afar while he is scared shitless. SMH
P.S
He meets a demon girl near the beginning, and this is a fine example of how not to write a main character. I swear for a 26 year old man he acts like a p**** and he has no common sense at all. Plus this is the second book. Jeez, make him uneasy and cautious not stupidly afraid. If the main character is always afraid, the meaning becomes diminished. To me, when it's time for the main character to be truly afraid, its gonna lose its tension. (Just my opinion)
***(Definition of Insanity - Albert Einstein). College Drop out my ass.***
P.P.S
Just because you say the main character has more confidence, doesn't mean he does. Actions speak louder than words.