“It is a tree of life for those who grasp it, and those who draw near it are fortunate” (Proverbs 3:18).
The writing Tree of Life is an adventure in style as much as it is in subject. The book makes for a very good series starter, doing a diligent job of slotting everything into place for later books.
My opinion of the books is mostly positive. Why? Well, the best analogy I can think of is that the story is rather like a sponge. It is whole and complete, everything is there waiting to be used and experienced by the reader, but…parts of it are dried and hard; in need of a bit of water and sussing out by the author. Luckily, the novel progressively solves this problem on its own. It’s quite interesting to watch, from a technical perspective, but I won’t bore you with that.
My personal view of the book is overall positive. I rate it 5.8/7; a wonderfully confusing fraction that takes a bit of math to orient around. As a result, I refuse to do the math, and will be giving it a rating of 5.8/7 across all platforms. It isn’t my fault that the maximum rating is five stars out of five and that my numbers don’t fit. Go complain to Amazon/Goodreads, not me. Anyway, on to the book.
What follows is a full length review, broken down for clarity and simulated objectivity.
Characters.
The main character was Hesper, but the issue is that after the first act, Hesper takes on a supporting role and the focus really shifts to her friend Cole. Hesper is simply excitement and quiet interest. There is an element of sublime femininity hiding deep within her that I’m hoping we’ll see down the line. Hesper needs to yell at her husband more.
Cole is the other main character. His fade into the narration happens in tandem with his fade into Hesper’s life; quite an interesting, even scholarly, marriage of content and form. Cole is even more subdued than Hesper, but that’s to be expected since he is sort of the opposite of his brother, David, who I will touch on later (because he’s awesome).
Cole is competent and diligent, and like Hesper, he too has an element of righteous indignation just waiting to be unleashed against his ideological opponents. He doubts the system he grew up in, a system that privileges him, and he stands up against it twice. I’m really hoping to see more of his zeal in later books. I appeal to the book of light!
Setting.
The setting is new and interesting, and very much like a hard sponge. I won’t go into it, I’m sure the blurb and other reviews do a good enough job. Essentially, there was a war in the past and now there are two factions; the more tribal Unified, and the hierarchical Meros.
But—I want to know more! I need details, habits, customs, laws; when Cole goes to court to be impressive in front of Hesper, I want to know exactly how he’s arguing his position! Personal wishes aside, the setting is unique and never disorienting. That’s something that can’t be said for most books of this genre. The writer never assumes you know something about her world, she’s just rather conservative with its exposition.
Issues.
Let’s be fair, no book is perfect. I want to preface this section with this: I’d rather read the work of Mrs. Green-Hart than I would the work of certain great classical and contemporary novelists who will go unnamed. (Dickens, Atwood.) However, even works I like; Pride and Prejudice, Wordsworth’s Michael; have issues that can be revealed to help us better understand the text, rather than to reject it.
As mentioned before, the description of setting was rather sparse, and the conveyance of was inconsistent. We don’t get a lot of the more interesting information regarding the setting until near the end. There were also sudden shifts in the writing from one scene or situation to the next; an example being the two important deaths, which end up being sort of moved on from just a little too fast. Let us dwell and feel alongside the characters.
Finally, there’s a lack of explained foundation. It’s clear that a lot of work went into developing this unique setting, but there seems to be chunks of information that’s either absent or assumed on the reader’s part. A little more accommodation would be good; for example, I wouldn’t mind knowing exactly what the hierarchy is, if there’s a leader or a king, anything of this sort, clearly defined, would be helpful to us non-Meros. Give us district names, Unified tribe names, a map maybe. Surely someone could lay certain things out for Hesper the outsider at some point?
Good Stuff
The style. Wow. You ever read a writer’s first novel, and then move onto the second right away, and see a large improvement? And then their third one is even better? That’s what reading Tree of Life is like. All three, in one book. Interestingly, these shifts all occur around the times where Hesper moves to a new location. Now, I should be clear, it isn’t abrupt, and would probably go unnoticed to most readers. 80% of the writing stays the same, but the rest seems to accommodate to the shifting landscape. Again, content and form lining up.
The beginning of the book, I didn’t really like the writing to be honest. When Hesper moved in with David was my favourite style. Things got smoother, and like David himself, they got chill AF, and kind of lazy. When Hesper and Cole went on their mission, the style changed to something closer to a mystery. There was a lot of collection of information, density of prose, and interesting action and chase sequences. A really terrific way to end a novel like this.
Moving on to my favourite character, David. The man is a few wives short of a kingly harem, but he’s doing a good job of losing them one by one. This guy has one thing I always look for in characters from narratives of any sort, not just novels. That’s character development. Hesper and Cole seem like pretty solid people with elements of their pre-existing personality waiting to burst out. David? He’s kind and considerate, but he also kinda sucks. Near the end, I wasn’t sure if he would remain as an important character in later books and I was on the edge of my seat. There’s nothing worse than a redemption story that the writer has forgotten. Luckily, it looks like my boy will make a great return in the future! Here’s hoping.
Finally, since we’re on the topic, writing men. I’ve noticed this in almost all books. Men can’t seem to write women properly, and women can’t write men either. They seem to get in about 70% right, and 30% kind of blank or off. The male characters in Tree of Life are definitely men; but it’s weird. I won’t get into it, but I’d give them 80% man, 20% tightness. There’s something tight with Cole and especially Jes; a tightness where there should be a testosteronic urge for violence. David too (sorry man) doesn’t have the underlying sex drive that men struggle with; and he’s surrounded by women! Nonetheless, this is a minor point. Moving on.
“Hope of Morning”
I’m looking forward to the rest of this series. As very vaguely mentioned above, things really heat up near the end. Even near the beginning, the novel was a very comfortable read. I’m hoping we dive deeper into Meros culture in the future, as developing Cole at least to the level of his brother, and tightening the narrative style a bit.
Hesper also needs more screen time, and hopefully some handgun training. Women learn faster and shoot better than men. She might as well take her side by Cole in whatever the future brings them.
I hope you enjoy the book more than you enjoyed my review.