This may become a trend for me because I’ve been writing this a lot in reviews lately, but the whole premise of this is summed up well enough in the synopsis that I don’t feel like it’s necessary to go into further detail, so I won’t.
I had a lot of hesitation before reading ‘A Swing at Love.’ Bliss announced all over the place that this collaboration with her wife would be FTB. My initial reaction was, ‘ok, no thanks’ because, I’ll be honest, what initially drew me to Bliss was her smut. I changed my mind for one reason and one reason only; I’ve become a Harper Bliss fan. It’s not her smut that makes me read her work anymore, though it doesn’t hurt; it’s her romances that are always just on the cusp of lurid, but somehow justified by her storytelling, that draw me in.
There is nothing lurid here, really. Both characters are single with a mere 15 year age gap. That may seem like a bit of a jump, but it is nothing in comparison to Bliss’ very controversial 21-26 year age gap love stories of women falling in love with their best friend’s daughter or the girlfriend of their deceased son. This is just a little romance with a little drama. Was it exciting? Not really. Did it give me a lot to think about? Not really. What it did do, however, was keep me reading until the end, but I’ll admit to speed reading some of it because I just wasn’t enthralled enough to take my time.
I can throw a positive in here, however, and say that I did like Diane’s character. She felt realistic to me and I could peripherally identity with her struggle of being a ‘latebian’, even though I came out at 17, because she was so well written. I have never met a latebian, but I feel like the Bliss’ did a great job of characterizing Diane, making her struggle feel genuine instead of forced, and giving her just the right amount of angst; it never felt overwhelming nor did it ever feel dramatic. This is definitely low on the drama factor.
‘A Swing at Love’ is well written in terms of plotting and development, but I felt like there were more proofing errors than I normally experience in a Bliss book. I don’t know if that’s because they were in a rush to push it out or what, but it was noticeable. To make sure I’m not crazy, I finally highlighted and copied one sentence when I had had enough and thought it was worth pointing out:
“Diane had driven past it many times, especially right after Lawrence their divorce, but she’d never been inside.”
As written when Diane was making an impromptu stop at her ex-husbands house for a little discussion of ‘your-wife-is-talking-about-me-behind-my-back.’
Anyway, I’m really not trying to be a jerk. I respect all authors who are willing to put themselves out there. It’s a tough business, especially with assholes like myself out in the world analyzing every word and then blabbing about it on the internet. I really try to be lenient with proofing mistakes, but I don’t expect it from seasoned authors like Harper Bliss.
All in all, I really don’t have a clue how to rate this. I’ve always felt like Bliss was a cut above (most of) the rest in the lesfic-pure-romance/smut world because she’s controversial and that just clicks for me, but this just felt rather generic. If this were a new author, I’d probably give them high praise and rate this 4*. Because I’m familiar with Bliss’ work and what she’s capable of, I’m less inclined to be so nice. 3*, maybe?