Courageous, A Novel of Dunkirk is a historical fiction book by Yona Zeldis McDonough. Protagonist Aidan resides on the south coast of England during World War II. His fishing boat, the Margaret, is one of his pride and joys. At the time, World War II was in full swing, and the Nazis posed a frightening threat to much of the world’s security. Aidan’s family is particularly invested in the war, because his brother George is part of the British troops. In May of 1940, the Nazis trap the British army, including George, in Northern France. Desperate, the Allies come up with a Hail Mary to get their soldiers out of France: enlist every possible boat regardless of size and sail across the channel. They call upon regular people to risk their lives to help the soldiers get home. Aidan and his best friend Sally are forbidden from taking the fishing boat across the channel, but Aidan knows George’s life may hang in the balance. Will Aidan take his boat across the channel to save George and the rest of the British troops? Read the book to find out.
While this book did a pretty good job of capturing the events at Dunkirk through fiction, I did not find it to be an enjoyable read. The writing style was very awkward and often cliché. I did not like that the entire book was written in first person with very short sentences. Even in emotional moments, such as the reunion of George and Aidan, I was not able to grasp the joy and pain of the event. The emotions were only developed on a superficial level, which severely impacted how the reader perceived them. All great books allow the reader to feel the character’s exact emotion powerfully, and this book fell short in that regard.
The other main problem with the book was how often the obvious was stated, without proper descriptions. This book did not allow the reader to make any connections and had very few visual or sensory descriptions. It was almost a list of actions, dialogue, and events, that was very hard for the reader to visualize. While there is some imagery, the book would benefit greatly from more adjectives.
I would recommend this book to any reader under the age of 12, because it is easy to understand and has a relatively interesting story line. Older readers will most likely not be satisfied by the lack of description and historical detail.
I give this book three stars because it told a decent historical fiction story but did not allow me as a reader to connect to it. The emotions, scenery, and characters were underdeveloped, and the entire book was awkward to read. The story line is a good foundation for the book, but the layers above were average at best.
Review by Anya A, age 14, Metropolitan Washington Mensa