Maya Taylor has been pining about surfer god Rick Hunter for two years, no one knows about it, but he sees her only as a friend and his great PR person. Dominic Wolfe, a clothing chain owner and fashion expert needs to revamp his brand, he was told that Maya is the best, so he books an appointment with her while she’s in Australia for the Quicksilver surf competition and watching her clients. Dominic needs her business expertise, but after talking for a while, Maya confesses about her infatuation with Rick, and Dom agrees to help her nab her man in exchange: she needs help flirting and he needs her business knowledge.
MAKING OVER MAYA started really nicely, and the romance between Dom and Maya seemed to be going in the right direction at the beginning, it was really lovely, but when Dom starts “coaching” her, it didn’t work for me anymore. A shift in the balance of power, if you will, occurred and Dom became a rather pushy dude. I had liked them both at the beginning, but as the romance progressed I liked them less and less. I felt he was exploiting the situation, and he was making her disappear even more under his “guidance”. I never quite understood either how Maya – a PR maven from California - seemed to dress like a Victorian era governess; I would expect a PR person not to wear dowdy clothes or hide behind her hair. I understand that she is inept at flirting, but isn't this sort of a requirement for her job, to charm the clients? At first, she seemed to want to learn about flirting, but later on she came across as rather clueless about sex as well. There is a difference between not being good at flirting, and not being good at relationships, and it somewhat got blurred. The more Dom and Maya became involved, the weaker Maya came across, and I feel a secondary character described her best: Maya did seem like “an accommodating little mouse”. Maya is good at her job, but I found her overall quite boring, while Dom came off as gregarious at first, but then turned into too much of a dictator to be fun anymore. And while I’m not taking this into account for my rating, since everyone – including Maya – is thrilled with “the haircut”, I would have been appalled, and furious, to be honest.
I loved the banter between Brooke and Maya, and Michele de Winton demonstrates her aptitude at being one of the best at writing quirky, colourful prose. However, there was an odd situation with the punctuation, which is not typical for Ms. de Winton: it felt as if most of the commas had been swept away by a huge wave, which made reading challenging at time. I didn’t quite understand either why Mays’s “nickname” was “B”. Her friend is named Brooke, yet Maya is “B”? I just didn’t get it. On the other hand, I really enjoyed the “shop talk”, the clothing business and PR angles, but the romance, for me, was lukewarm in spite of the sexy times.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.