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Divine
Orphaned and pushed from one foster family to the next, sassy Ava’s desires for the future should have been fairly simple – to carve a place in the world she could call home. ‘Simple’ goes out the window when she learns that not only did she inherit a manor in a sleepy town called Ravenwood, but that she has inherited a pack of wolf shifters along with it. Thrown in to a world that is hauntingly familiar but long forgotten, Ava seeks the guidance of four sexy shifters who test the emotional walls she has in place – each one awakening her in ways she had never known possible. When a new and powerful task is placed upon Ava’s shoulders her life becomes even more complicated as she catches the malicious eye of the Archigos, the largest and most powerful pack on the North American continent. Determined to solidify her place in this world, Ava must choose between her heart’s desire or risk war upon them all. Divine is book 1 of a reverse harem paranormal romance trilogy.
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First published July 31, 2018
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August 15, 2018
Needs editing
Potential but it needs developmental editing, continuity editing, and copy editing. The story starts out a little rough and there are a lot of hole in the logic. When you are dealing with supernatural stories you have to be tight with your logic and reality everywhere else. The reader will suspend disbelief and accept werewolves but have the guys magically know how she likes her coffee without ever asking or laying the ground work for noticing and it stands out. (Yes coffee was served many times but it was always served there was never a how would you like).
The relationships with the guys is forced and rushed and relies on cliches, even for paranormal and the acceptance of everything paranormal happens way too quickly as does slipping into the speech necessary of an alpha of a pack. Politics isn't innate to being a werewolf. There is an interesting twist on the origin, although readers of the Sea Side Pack series will find similarities. That happens. There are only so many creative ways to spin a book in a fiction genre.
The continuity is a little bit of an issue, like having a bruise on a jaw line suddenly move to an eye. There is also a little bit of repetitiveness. If you just said something like "the searing pain crashed through my leg" don't say "ignoring the searing pain I dashed..." a paragraph or even a page later. The descriptor need to be more varied. "I pushed past the sensation of blades slicing through my flesh as I dashed" paints a much more descriptive picture and doesn't take the reader out of the action by drawing their attention to repetitiveness.
Please for the live of God learn how to properly use ellipsis.
*They should be three dots "..." not two ".."
*If using them in the middle of a sentence...the first letter of the continuation of them sentence should not be capitalized.
*If you are trying to connotation a chance of thought it should be done in the following manner, "I couldn't believe Lucas would do this -- strike that -- this is totally a Lucas move, but I'm still pissed." I trailed off glaring out the window.
* Tell the reader the speaker is trailing off or let the though die off or mumble out (you get the idea), use ellipsis sparingly to convey this
*comma or places holders (uh, um, ah, uhm, ugh, etc.) or the repetition of words should be used to convey a pause. Ie: I looked at him, taken aback by the harsh manner in which he spoke. "Don't," a growl slipped through my lip as I sneered baring my teeth at him, don't you ever speak to me like that again." He blanched at the harshness of my tone. "I, uh, I'm sorry. I, I didn't mean, what I was trying too say. Shit, this is coming out wrong." He let out a sigh dropping his head back, his neck exposed to me as he ran a hand through his light blond hair. "I uh, I was just trying to say -- it's just, we are worried about you. After everything that's happened, and, and I don't think you should be going off on your own."
Potential but it needs developmental editing, continuity editing, and copy editing. The story starts out a little rough and there are a lot of hole in the logic. When you are dealing with supernatural stories you have to be tight with your logic and reality everywhere else. The reader will suspend disbelief and accept werewolves but have the guys magically know how she likes her coffee without ever asking or laying the ground work for noticing and it stands out. (Yes coffee was served many times but it was always served there was never a how would you like).
The relationships with the guys is forced and rushed and relies on cliches, even for paranormal and the acceptance of everything paranormal happens way too quickly as does slipping into the speech necessary of an alpha of a pack. Politics isn't innate to being a werewolf. There is an interesting twist on the origin, although readers of the Sea Side Pack series will find similarities. That happens. There are only so many creative ways to spin a book in a fiction genre.
The continuity is a little bit of an issue, like having a bruise on a jaw line suddenly move to an eye. There is also a little bit of repetitiveness. If you just said something like "the searing pain crashed through my leg" don't say "ignoring the searing pain I dashed..." a paragraph or even a page later. The descriptor need to be more varied. "I pushed past the sensation of blades slicing through my flesh as I dashed" paints a much more descriptive picture and doesn't take the reader out of the action by drawing their attention to repetitiveness.
Please for the live of God learn how to properly use ellipsis.
*They should be three dots "..." not two ".."
*If using them in the middle of a sentence...the first letter of the continuation of them sentence should not be capitalized.
*If you are trying to connotation a chance of thought it should be done in the following manner, "I couldn't believe Lucas would do this -- strike that -- this is totally a Lucas move, but I'm still pissed." I trailed off glaring out the window.
* Tell the reader the speaker is trailing off or let the though die off or mumble out (you get the idea), use ellipsis sparingly to convey this
*comma or places holders (uh, um, ah, uhm, ugh, etc.) or the repetition of words should be used to convey a pause. Ie: I looked at him, taken aback by the harsh manner in which he spoke. "Don't," a growl slipped through my lip as I sneered baring my teeth at him, don't you ever speak to me like that again." He blanched at the harshness of my tone. "I, uh, I'm sorry. I, I didn't mean, what I was trying too say. Shit, this is coming out wrong." He let out a sigh dropping his head back, his neck exposed to me as he ran a hand through his light blond hair. "I uh, I was just trying to say -- it's just, we are worried about you. After everything that's happened, and, and I don't think you should be going off on your own."
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November 30, 2018
This book was weird. The writing is just awful, the premise doesn’t really make sense, and the story has many other inconsistencies and odd moments. The characters are fine but nothing special. I’m going to be honest, I don’t know why I finished this, much less book 2, and I certainly don’t know why I’m somewhat looking forward to book 3. I can picture myself dropping book 3 if I’m not in a good mood when I start it.
This book is weird. It just is. Here’s the basic premise: The Greek goddess Persephone is the gatekeeper to the Underworld, and she is able to decide (with some limits) who lives and dies. She is apparently very invested in wolf shifters for some reason (never explained), so she creates a chosen one with shifter blood who will one day kill all the wolf-shifter men who do not change their misogynistic ways. Ooookay then. Look, I love Greek mythology, and I enjoy shifter books, but I don’t think they actually fit well together. At least, Persephone doesn’t seem to have anything to do with wolf shifters, and she’s the only aspect of Greek mythology in the story. She does, however, have a definite link to feminism. That just wasn’t enough to tie these story threads together for me. I’m definitely a feminist, so I love feminism in my books, but the “kill the misogynists” storyline just wasn’t working for me. I think part of the problem is that everything was very black and white: The bad guys were the ones who sexually harassed the MC or wanted to kill her if she refused to mate someone chosen for her and be “put in her place.” As such, all the bad guys tried to kill the MC before she had to kill them, cementing their position as the bad guys and preventing the MC from being put in the morally ambiguous position of killing people whom she’d never met but who might pose a threat. In reality, misogyny and sexism are often more subtle than what we see here, and I think it would be interesting to see if Persephone also wanted to kill, for example, the men who tell women whom they’ve never met to smile. I also thought it was super weird that Persephone was only worried about the misogyny among wolf shifters, who constitute only a very small percentage of this world’s population. She cares so much about the issue that she orchestrates a culling, but she only cares about it among a few thousand people? It doesn’t make sense. Side note, I thought it was super weird that the MC had never heard of Persephone and needed to look up her myth. Maybe I’m just a nerd, but I’ve known that story since I was a kid.
A few other story elements didn’t add up for me as well. Apparently, shifting to wolf form for the first time gives you a strong feeling of community for your back, but I experienced a sort of mental disconnect while reading about the MC’s loyalty and devotion to her pack because she had still met only four members of the pack when she was experiencing these feelings. I couldn’t engage in that loyalty or devotion because I don’t have the pack bond that the MC has, so I can’t feel what she feels. It reminded me of when authors use magic to help characters in paranormal books get to know each other, for example, by absorbing their memories. When that happens, the MC suddenly gets an entire lifetime of information whereas the readers only get a sentence or two of this information, so the MC’s relationship with the relevant character is suddenly much deeper than it was while the readers’ relationship with that character stays about as shallow as it was, creating a disconnect between the MC and the readers and preventing the readers from fully engaging in those characters’ relationship. My point is that I felt absolutely nothing for this all-important pack because 99% of the pack got 0 screen time in this book.
The story also had a few inconsistencies. For example, when the MC shifts into a wolf for the first time, she immediately describes what the fur on her back looks like. She has not seen her reflection, so she has literally no way to know this. Furthermore, during that first shift, her wolf mentally claims the guys as hers. However, the MC later wonders, “And when had I started to refer to them as mine?” It frustrated me that she would ask that question when I could pinpoint the exact moment that she started to do so because she acknowledged it to herself. And then I got annoyed all over again because the same issue came up later: “The men — my men, if I were ever so bold to call them that.” You’ve already claimed them; just move on already!
The MC was fairly average. I liked her more when she was a wolf, but when she was a human, I didn’t hate or love her. That said, the MC bordered on TSTL for me at times. She inherits some of Persephone’s death powers and decides to just casually mention them to her enemy. I guess she assumed that someone she had spared already told him, but that seemed like an extremely dangerous assumption to make, though the enemy did in fact already know. If he hadn’t already felt threatened by her, he sure would have after that! Later, someone dies, and she just sits there crying for an undisclosed period of time (that “I don’t know how much time passed, but the sun has started to come up” trick) before realizing that THE ENTIRE BOOK HAS BEEN ABOUT HER ABILITY TO INTERVENE AFTER PEOPLE DIE. That was incredibly frustrating.
I liked the guys more, and about half the harem (Lucas and Declan) were distinct characters. Graham and Rylan were just kind of there, and I pretty much differentiated them based on who was the scholar and who was the healer. I tend to prefer RH books in which the harem members were already a close group before the MC joins them, and that’s what we get here. I thought the following exchange between Declan and Lucas was cute and showed how close they are: “I ignored the fact [Lucas] was probably just agreeing with me because he knew I didn’t share my concerns or feelings very often with anyone.” I really looked forward to the chapters from the guys’ perspectives because I feel like they deepened the characterization of the guys.
Beyond all that, the writing itself was pretty bad. I’ve recently read other books with more mechanical errors, but what really bothered me was that this author repeatedly used words incorrectly. For example, she said someone was “donning” clothes instead of wearing clothes, but “to don” specifically means to put something on whereas “to wear” can mean that the clothes are already on. She also said, “‘Shifters in general aren’t overly progressive,’ he surmised,” but “surmise” does not mean “summarize” or “explain.” It means to “suppose that something is true without having evidence to confirm it,” but the speaker had plenty of evidence! He was talking about his experiences with his own culture! At one point, the narrator says, “The deep colors of autumn was always a time I had enjoyed”; the word “colors” does not refer to a time, and the verb should be “were” instead of “was.” Later, the author said, “Lucas washed his hand over his face,” though she meant “rubbed” instead of “washed,” and “I suppressed the dam of tears.” A dam is “a barrier constructed to hold back water”; suppressing the barrier makes no sense. Somewhat less offensively, the author also used “your” instead of “you’re,” “my” instead of “his,” and (consistently) “in to” instead of “into.” I also saw weird moments with verbs: for example, “someone out there had had given birth to me” and “had ever saw”; even in British English, that last one should be “had ever seen.” The author also had problems with apostrophes, either excluding them or adding them to words that should have just been plural: for example, “protect ones rank,” “his killers’ turned,” “friends face,” and “the other two packs Beta’s” instead of “the pack’s other two betas.” As if that wasn’t enough, I also saw typos, such as “squeezed more of the life form him.”
I have much more negative things than positive things to say about this book, but I finished the next book anyway. The series hasn’t gotten better so far, but I’m still somewhat looking forward to book 3.
This book is weird. It just is. Here’s the basic premise: The Greek goddess Persephone is the gatekeeper to the Underworld, and she is able to decide (with some limits) who lives and dies. She is apparently very invested in wolf shifters for some reason (never explained), so she creates a chosen one with shifter blood who will one day kill all the wolf-shifter men who do not change their misogynistic ways. Ooookay then. Look, I love Greek mythology, and I enjoy shifter books, but I don’t think they actually fit well together. At least, Persephone doesn’t seem to have anything to do with wolf shifters, and she’s the only aspect of Greek mythology in the story. She does, however, have a definite link to feminism. That just wasn’t enough to tie these story threads together for me. I’m definitely a feminist, so I love feminism in my books, but the “kill the misogynists” storyline just wasn’t working for me. I think part of the problem is that everything was very black and white: The bad guys were the ones who sexually harassed the MC or wanted to kill her if she refused to mate someone chosen for her and be “put in her place.” As such, all the bad guys tried to kill the MC before she had to kill them, cementing their position as the bad guys and preventing the MC from being put in the morally ambiguous position of killing people whom she’d never met but who might pose a threat. In reality, misogyny and sexism are often more subtle than what we see here, and I think it would be interesting to see if Persephone also wanted to kill, for example, the men who tell women whom they’ve never met to smile. I also thought it was super weird that Persephone was only worried about the misogyny among wolf shifters, who constitute only a very small percentage of this world’s population. She cares so much about the issue that she orchestrates a culling, but she only cares about it among a few thousand people? It doesn’t make sense. Side note, I thought it was super weird that the MC had never heard of Persephone and needed to look up her myth. Maybe I’m just a nerd, but I’ve known that story since I was a kid.
A few other story elements didn’t add up for me as well. Apparently, shifting to wolf form for the first time gives you a strong feeling of community for your back, but I experienced a sort of mental disconnect while reading about the MC’s loyalty and devotion to her pack because she had still met only four members of the pack when she was experiencing these feelings. I couldn’t engage in that loyalty or devotion because I don’t have the pack bond that the MC has, so I can’t feel what she feels. It reminded me of when authors use magic to help characters in paranormal books get to know each other, for example, by absorbing their memories. When that happens, the MC suddenly gets an entire lifetime of information whereas the readers only get a sentence or two of this information, so the MC’s relationship with the relevant character is suddenly much deeper than it was while the readers’ relationship with that character stays about as shallow as it was, creating a disconnect between the MC and the readers and preventing the readers from fully engaging in those characters’ relationship. My point is that I felt absolutely nothing for this all-important pack because 99% of the pack got 0 screen time in this book.
The story also had a few inconsistencies. For example, when the MC shifts into a wolf for the first time, she immediately describes what the fur on her back looks like. She has not seen her reflection, so she has literally no way to know this. Furthermore, during that first shift, her wolf mentally claims the guys as hers. However, the MC later wonders, “And when had I started to refer to them as mine?” It frustrated me that she would ask that question when I could pinpoint the exact moment that she started to do so because she acknowledged it to herself. And then I got annoyed all over again because the same issue came up later: “The men — my men, if I were ever so bold to call them that.” You’ve already claimed them; just move on already!
The MC was fairly average. I liked her more when she was a wolf, but when she was a human, I didn’t hate or love her. That said, the MC bordered on TSTL for me at times. She inherits some of Persephone’s death powers and decides to just casually mention them to her enemy. I guess she assumed that someone she had spared already told him, but that seemed like an extremely dangerous assumption to make, though the enemy did in fact already know. If he hadn’t already felt threatened by her, he sure would have after that! Later, someone dies, and she just sits there crying for an undisclosed period of time (that “I don’t know how much time passed, but the sun has started to come up” trick) before realizing that THE ENTIRE BOOK HAS BEEN ABOUT HER ABILITY TO INTERVENE AFTER PEOPLE DIE. That was incredibly frustrating.
I liked the guys more, and about half the harem (Lucas and Declan) were distinct characters. Graham and Rylan were just kind of there, and I pretty much differentiated them based on who was the scholar and who was the healer. I tend to prefer RH books in which the harem members were already a close group before the MC joins them, and that’s what we get here. I thought the following exchange between Declan and Lucas was cute and showed how close they are: “I ignored the fact [Lucas] was probably just agreeing with me because he knew I didn’t share my concerns or feelings very often with anyone.” I really looked forward to the chapters from the guys’ perspectives because I feel like they deepened the characterization of the guys.
Beyond all that, the writing itself was pretty bad. I’ve recently read other books with more mechanical errors, but what really bothered me was that this author repeatedly used words incorrectly. For example, she said someone was “donning” clothes instead of wearing clothes, but “to don” specifically means to put something on whereas “to wear” can mean that the clothes are already on. She also said, “‘Shifters in general aren’t overly progressive,’ he surmised,” but “surmise” does not mean “summarize” or “explain.” It means to “suppose that something is true without having evidence to confirm it,” but the speaker had plenty of evidence! He was talking about his experiences with his own culture! At one point, the narrator says, “The deep colors of autumn was always a time I had enjoyed”; the word “colors” does not refer to a time, and the verb should be “were” instead of “was.” Later, the author said, “Lucas washed his hand over his face,” though she meant “rubbed” instead of “washed,” and “I suppressed the dam of tears.” A dam is “a barrier constructed to hold back water”; suppressing the barrier makes no sense. Somewhat less offensively, the author also used “your” instead of “you’re,” “my” instead of “his,” and (consistently) “in to” instead of “into.” I also saw weird moments with verbs: for example, “someone out there had had given birth to me” and “had ever saw”; even in British English, that last one should be “had ever seen.” The author also had problems with apostrophes, either excluding them or adding them to words that should have just been plural: for example, “protect ones rank,” “his killers’ turned,” “friends face,” and “the other two packs Beta’s” instead of “the pack’s other two betas.” As if that wasn’t enough, I also saw typos, such as “squeezed more of the life form him.”
I have much more negative things than positive things to say about this book, but I finished the next book anyway. The series hasn’t gotten better so far, but I’m still somewhat looking forward to book 3.
September 23, 2018
3.5 stars. Ok book but not WoW. No RH elements
Somehow i got this" deja vu" feeling that i already read this book before. Maybe it has scenes that make me remind of an other book series but can't put my finger on it which book it is... Some one else having the same feeling? Or is it just me?
Somehow i got this" deja vu" feeling that i already read this book before. Maybe it has scenes that make me remind of an other book series but can't put my finger on it which book it is... Some one else having the same feeling? Or is it just me?
December 25, 2018
Great
The only thing holding this novel back is the lack of a good editor. Ava is a great character that has a convincing level of credibly. Her men are sexy and well defined and I’m looking forward to book two.
The only thing holding this novel back is the lack of a good editor. Ava is a great character that has a convincing level of credibly. Her men are sexy and well defined and I’m looking forward to book two.
September 5, 2018
3.5 stars
September 13, 2018
That was such a good start!!!
There were only a few things that I wish were different, for instance, I would have liked to have seen Ava ask for more details about why her father left, but other than a few grammatical errors the story is well written and fascinating! I really appreciate that the author didn't take half the story for the main character to accept her new reality, and she made the guys so relatable.
There were only a few things that I wish were different, for instance, I would have liked to have seen Ava ask for more details about why her father left, but other than a few grammatical errors the story is well written and fascinating! I really appreciate that the author didn't take half the story for the main character to accept her new reality, and she made the guys so relatable.
August 12, 2018
Awesome start to a series
It needs a spelling and grammar check and a little bit of editing to tighten the story up, but don't let that dissuade you from reading this great story.
I'm keen for the next book.
It needs a spelling and grammar check and a little bit of editing to tighten the story up, but don't let that dissuade you from reading this great story.
I'm keen for the next book.
July 12, 2022
Lackluster female alpa
Ava was left at the orphanage by her dad as a toddler. So, after losing her job, losing her apartment, and the otherwise crappy day she's had, hearing that he's left everything to her isn't the thrill maybe he thought it would be. But, with nowhere else to go, she goes. Now there's 4 guys telling her she's a wolf shifter? Did she bump her head on the way there?
Spoilers ahead.
Ok. This tried to be a ordinary girl becomes extraordinary but didn't make it. She shows absolutely initiative. She doesn't ask any important questions. She doesn't meet the pack. She doesn't ask what being a wolf is about. She just cuddles her cat, walks about, and exists.
*They didn't ask a meet at neutral territory when asking to meet the bad guy.
*They deferred to him in the meeting, even asking what terms they'd accept from them. Like supplicants instead of powerful wolves.
*They took the alpha and top 4 betas leaving the pack defenseless. I'm not even sure they told the pack they were leaving.
*On the way back from the meeting they decided to spend the night somewhere. Still leaving the pack unprotected. And never reported in.
*After the meeting she goes for a walk. Alone. When she's already been nearly killed and was just threatened again.
*She had a prophecy vision and didn't tell anyone. Even though it showed their deaths.
*They're wolves, they can smell she'd been with Declan but haven't said a word. She has no clue what this could do to pack dynamics and doesn't seem to care.
*She didn't use protection and hasn't asked about wolf reproduction. Is estrus a thing? Monthly cycles like a human?
*If she's descended from a goddess of spring and the underworld, does that include any powers? She doesn't ask.
*She doesn't warn the pack about the threat after they get back from the meeting. Just jumps in bed to sleep.
*She cries and bemoans a certain loss but it's not like they did more than flirt. She isn't mated to any of them. Isn't even thinking about it.
*She's the least leaderly leader ever. She has zero interaction with the pack. Doesn't even ask to meet them. But we're supposed to believe she cares enough to sacrifice herself?
*She's a foster kid so probably scrappy, sure. But even before her transformation she's suddenly a serious fighter who puts the beta in charge of training on his butt? After being a doormat at a call center for years?
It has the grounds to be a decent turnaround story from the basis. But it didn't piece it together well enough to stand out. It was rushed, contradictory and disjointed. Let us care about the characters. Give them time to fork bonds. Let us meet the pack members and worry about them. And a female alpa doesn't have to be a ball buster but don't send her into a meeting for the fate of her pack as a supplicant on her knees. And if you want readers to believe that one character cares for another they have to interact over more than a coffee cup. They're in a rural setting. Let them sit around a fire pit and talk. Movie night, game night, pack gatherings, cookouts, dates, walks in the woods, heck, just chatting during perimeter checks. Something they never did once. Even after she was attacked right after her first shift.
Ava was left at the orphanage by her dad as a toddler. So, after losing her job, losing her apartment, and the otherwise crappy day she's had, hearing that he's left everything to her isn't the thrill maybe he thought it would be. But, with nowhere else to go, she goes. Now there's 4 guys telling her she's a wolf shifter? Did she bump her head on the way there?
Spoilers ahead.
Ok. This tried to be a ordinary girl becomes extraordinary but didn't make it. She shows absolutely initiative. She doesn't ask any important questions. She doesn't meet the pack. She doesn't ask what being a wolf is about. She just cuddles her cat, walks about, and exists.
*They didn't ask a meet at neutral territory when asking to meet the bad guy.
*They deferred to him in the meeting, even asking what terms they'd accept from them. Like supplicants instead of powerful wolves.
*They took the alpha and top 4 betas leaving the pack defenseless. I'm not even sure they told the pack they were leaving.
*On the way back from the meeting they decided to spend the night somewhere. Still leaving the pack unprotected. And never reported in.
*After the meeting she goes for a walk. Alone. When she's already been nearly killed and was just threatened again.
*She had a prophecy vision and didn't tell anyone. Even though it showed their deaths.
*They're wolves, they can smell she'd been with Declan but haven't said a word. She has no clue what this could do to pack dynamics and doesn't seem to care.
*She didn't use protection and hasn't asked about wolf reproduction. Is estrus a thing? Monthly cycles like a human?
*If she's descended from a goddess of spring and the underworld, does that include any powers? She doesn't ask.
*She doesn't warn the pack about the threat after they get back from the meeting. Just jumps in bed to sleep.
*She cries and bemoans a certain loss but it's not like they did more than flirt. She isn't mated to any of them. Isn't even thinking about it.
*She's the least leaderly leader ever. She has zero interaction with the pack. Doesn't even ask to meet them. But we're supposed to believe she cares enough to sacrifice herself?
*She's a foster kid so probably scrappy, sure. But even before her transformation she's suddenly a serious fighter who puts the beta in charge of training on his butt? After being a doormat at a call center for years?
It has the grounds to be a decent turnaround story from the basis. But it didn't piece it together well enough to stand out. It was rushed, contradictory and disjointed. Let us care about the characters. Give them time to fork bonds. Let us meet the pack members and worry about them. And a female alpa doesn't have to be a ball buster but don't send her into a meeting for the fate of her pack as a supplicant on her knees. And if you want readers to believe that one character cares for another they have to interact over more than a coffee cup. They're in a rural setting. Let them sit around a fire pit and talk. Movie night, game night, pack gatherings, cookouts, dates, walks in the woods, heck, just chatting during perimeter checks. Something they never did once. Even after she was attacked right after her first shift.
August 11, 2019
I feel like I have to review this book (mainly because it’s been sitting in my kindle unlimited area and preventing me from picking up interesting books for way too long), as you can tell, I didn’t like it.
Firstly, I am a big RH fan, which is why I pride myself on trying to weed out the clichéd, when-will-this-book-end type stories.
Divine didn’t have a bad plot to begin with, and in the hands of a more experienced author I think this book could have really flourished. What really got on my nerves was the overtly simplistic language, multiple grammatical errors (Kindle Edition) and the lack of originality.
RH is a niche genre, and because of that authors have more room to experiment without copying another’s basic plot line. With this in mind, I would question why I ended up with
A) a beautiful, curvy FMC who had self-confidence issues, daddy problems, no money and no attachments (because she had trust issues)
B) some alpha males who were super hot, all managed to be different to each other, have completely different personalities and somehow still be best (childhood) friends!
And finally
C) INSTA-LUST! Like seriously! The FMC just found out (spoiler alert) that her dad didn’t abandons her because he could; she’s not going to live on the streets because she just inherited a huge mansion AND that it turns out she turns into a wolf, will have to shift (painfully I might add - because a person apparently can’t shift without excruciating pain?) into a wolf!
So instead of being freaked out the FMC starts literally clambering over the super dominant alpha male who only hours ago forced her to stay in the kitchen until she believed everything he’d told her!
Oh. I almost forgot. She’s a PRINCESS as well!
So sound advice, unless you like this type of plot (in which case I recommend you go and download the book right now) try and find a RH book that doesn’t want to make you give up reading!
Firstly, I am a big RH fan, which is why I pride myself on trying to weed out the clichéd, when-will-this-book-end type stories.
Divine didn’t have a bad plot to begin with, and in the hands of a more experienced author I think this book could have really flourished. What really got on my nerves was the overtly simplistic language, multiple grammatical errors (Kindle Edition) and the lack of originality.
RH is a niche genre, and because of that authors have more room to experiment without copying another’s basic plot line. With this in mind, I would question why I ended up with
A) a beautiful, curvy FMC who had self-confidence issues, daddy problems, no money and no attachments (because she had trust issues)
B) some alpha males who were super hot, all managed to be different to each other, have completely different personalities and somehow still be best (childhood) friends!
And finally
C) INSTA-LUST! Like seriously! The FMC just found out (spoiler alert) that her dad didn’t abandons her because he could; she’s not going to live on the streets because she just inherited a huge mansion AND that it turns out she turns into a wolf, will have to shift (painfully I might add - because a person apparently can’t shift without excruciating pain?) into a wolf!
So instead of being freaked out the FMC starts literally clambering over the super dominant alpha male who only hours ago forced her to stay in the kitchen until she believed everything he’d told her!
Oh. I almost forgot. She’s a PRINCESS as well!
So sound advice, unless you like this type of plot (in which case I recommend you go and download the book right now) try and find a RH book that doesn’t want to make you give up reading!
December 28, 2022
*Originally gave 3 stars to book 1*
It's an OK book not the best but not the worst. The author needs a thesaurus though because they constantly use the same words over and over again like why are you constantly using "washed his face" (which honestly makes no sense to me) when you could say palmed his face or wiped. Also at one point the fmc is running out to a fight when she's literally a wolf shifter but has to put on her pants first? Kinda seems redundant. Anyways it's OK I'll read the next one just to see what happens.
SLIGHT SPOILERS NEXT ->
---BOOK #2 REVIEW---
OK it seems the books are getting worse so far. For one there's no such thing as a 4 o'clock shadow only 5 o'clock shadows -.- ... secondly it straight up ticks me off when authors try to write people who are from the "streets" or the system but clearly have never been or experienced either nor had they asked someone to review it that had experienced a hard life. Most people who've been in the system or even had to grow up in the streets/hood know you can't trust no one but yourself and can only depend on your self to survive. This author clearly hasn't experienced that or she'd have created a fmc who was questioning of everyone and wouldn't allow someone who they know for a fact is below them to get away with anything and would always be on there toes this fmc is more likely to trust seemingly everyone and be a doormat. Just nope no way is it remotely even believable enough for me to put myself in the characters shoes like I like too. It sucks cuz this could of been a good series but so far its been a disappointment.
-update after reading the 3 books-
So maybe the author is a newer author or something because now that I've finished the trilogy (more like 1 book) I have to say it's very underwhelming and not really worth the read because of how boring it became and quite annoying. Also this should of been one book instead of 3 which might have brought my rating up slightly. I absolutely hate when authors draw out books because the authors trying to swindle more money out of people if they don't have KU its just annoying. Just kinda disappointed cuz it could of been good if a more experienced author wrote it. So I've decided to add this on my first review and drop it to a 2 star as a whole series instead of an individual rating. The reason for the 2 is because the plot could of been interesting if it was written well but the fmc and the writing itself just didn't work and was a let down.
It's an OK book not the best but not the worst. The author needs a thesaurus though because they constantly use the same words over and over again like why are you constantly using "washed his face" (which honestly makes no sense to me) when you could say palmed his face or wiped. Also at one point the fmc is running out to a fight when she's literally a wolf shifter but has to put on her pants first? Kinda seems redundant. Anyways it's OK I'll read the next one just to see what happens.
SLIGHT SPOILERS NEXT ->
---BOOK #2 REVIEW---
OK it seems the books are getting worse so far. For one there's no such thing as a 4 o'clock shadow only 5 o'clock shadows -.- ... secondly it straight up ticks me off when authors try to write people who are from the "streets" or the system but clearly have never been or experienced either nor had they asked someone to review it that had experienced a hard life. Most people who've been in the system or even had to grow up in the streets/hood know you can't trust no one but yourself and can only depend on your self to survive. This author clearly hasn't experienced that or she'd have created a fmc who was questioning of everyone and wouldn't allow someone who they know for a fact is below them to get away with anything and would always be on there toes this fmc is more likely to trust seemingly everyone and be a doormat. Just nope no way is it remotely even believable enough for me to put myself in the characters shoes like I like too. It sucks cuz this could of been a good series but so far its been a disappointment.
-update after reading the 3 books-
So maybe the author is a newer author or something because now that I've finished the trilogy (more like 1 book) I have to say it's very underwhelming and not really worth the read because of how boring it became and quite annoying. Also this should of been one book instead of 3 which might have brought my rating up slightly. I absolutely hate when authors draw out books because the authors trying to swindle more money out of people if they don't have KU its just annoying. Just kinda disappointed cuz it could of been good if a more experienced author wrote it. So I've decided to add this on my first review and drop it to a 2 star as a whole series instead of an individual rating. The reason for the 2 is because the plot could of been interesting if it was written well but the fmc and the writing itself just didn't work and was a let down.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 20, 2023
This was my first listen by this author and I enjoyed the storyline but the audiobook was not my favorite because of the female narrator unfortunately. So for the narration, I thought the male narrator did a great job, he is one of my favorite narrators. The female narrator was very monotone even when there was supposed to be a super emotional moment. Like I understood with one or two of the characters, their performance was supposed to be not emotional, monotone, and disconnected, but not with Ava with most of her airtime. The narration for me made me round down to 3 stars, I would have given the story 3.5, almost 4 stars.
In terms of the story, I loved the idea of Ava and how she came to be and why. I am all about women empowerment so I love female alphas. I enjoyed the guys and how different they are and we didn't get instant smut. I love spicy scenes, don’t get me wrong, but I love getting the background/backstory and falling of these characters. I will say that I was confused how Ava went from not being ok with everything and then leading and being her alpha self. I guess maybe her wolf helped but it felt a little clunky, pace/story-wise. I think that and some of the disjointed powers of hers that were randomly thrown in and not super smooth were my only major complaints about the story. I liked the growing relationships, I liked seeing Declan not being broody all the time and Luke was awesome and I was shocked at the ending, went right into listening to book 2. I am sad book 3 isn’t on audio so hopefully after 2 I have time to read book 3 so I can finish off this series. I think the other 2 guys didnt stand out to me as much, maybe they get more airtime in book 2. I also wanted to smack the baddie Alpha and his misogynistic ways. I cannot wait to see him get his karmic justice like his followers hopefully will get!
I am interested to see how things go with her mother, her learn more about her dad, the raven, and the guys. I this one laid good groundwork and will be listening to book 2 this week as well.
In terms of the story, I loved the idea of Ava and how she came to be and why. I am all about women empowerment so I love female alphas. I enjoyed the guys and how different they are and we didn't get instant smut. I love spicy scenes, don’t get me wrong, but I love getting the background/backstory and falling of these characters. I will say that I was confused how Ava went from not being ok with everything and then leading and being her alpha self. I guess maybe her wolf helped but it felt a little clunky, pace/story-wise. I think that and some of the disjointed powers of hers that were randomly thrown in and not super smooth were my only major complaints about the story. I liked the growing relationships, I liked seeing Declan not being broody all the time and Luke was awesome and I was shocked at the ending, went right into listening to book 2. I am sad book 3 isn’t on audio so hopefully after 2 I have time to read book 3 so I can finish off this series. I think the other 2 guys didnt stand out to me as much, maybe they get more airtime in book 2. I also wanted to smack the baddie Alpha and his misogynistic ways. I cannot wait to see him get his karmic justice like his followers hopefully will get!
I am interested to see how things go with her mother, her learn more about her dad, the raven, and the guys. I this one laid good groundwork and will be listening to book 2 this week as well.
April 5, 2024
This book was so hard to get through, even though it was a short book it felt like it was slow.
So many things bugged me, her “father” abandoned her when she was 2 at an orphanage (well he lived in a mansion with a limousine) and even though we find out he always had someone (watching over her) why did they not play a bigger role.
I understand they were trying to keep her safe but they could if behind the scenes helped to make sure she was adopted by a loving family rather than bouncing around her entire childhood. Or they could have helped her find a better job or place to live in secret ways to help her rather than literally watching her get evicted, unable to pay her bills or even feed herself.
That just seems so stupid!
Then she finds out she’s the alpha to a wolf pack yet she doesn’t met anyone else but the 4 hot betas. 🤦♀️
She dies on her first run and finds out she’s the daughter of goddess & now controls the gates to what? Heaven & Hell? Then she comes back from the dead.
The met a witch that gave her a prophecy, then decided to go met the Alpha of the largest pack even though she sent the guy to try and kill her. Why was that a good idea?
She doesn’t tell her guys important information, like how she has the gift of premonition and that they were going to be attacked at home… she could of prevented it or planned for it 🤦♀️
I don’t know I feel like this book could be good with the magical aspect but it really falls flat. Ava isn’t even a likeable character yet she’s just annoying.
So many things bugged me, her “father” abandoned her when she was 2 at an orphanage (well he lived in a mansion with a limousine) and even though we find out he always had someone (watching over her) why did they not play a bigger role.
I understand they were trying to keep her safe but they could if behind the scenes helped to make sure she was adopted by a loving family rather than bouncing around her entire childhood. Or they could have helped her find a better job or place to live in secret ways to help her rather than literally watching her get evicted, unable to pay her bills or even feed herself.
That just seems so stupid!
Then she finds out she’s the alpha to a wolf pack yet she doesn’t met anyone else but the 4 hot betas. 🤦♀️
She dies on her first run and finds out she’s the daughter of goddess & now controls the gates to what? Heaven & Hell? Then she comes back from the dead.
The met a witch that gave her a prophecy, then decided to go met the Alpha of the largest pack even though she sent the guy to try and kill her. Why was that a good idea?
She doesn’t tell her guys important information, like how she has the gift of premonition and that they were going to be attacked at home… she could of prevented it or planned for it 🤦♀️
I don’t know I feel like this book could be good with the magical aspect but it really falls flat. Ava isn’t even a likeable character yet she’s just annoying.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 27, 2018
The long and the short of Divine is that it reads like a first draft; ergo, it is in desperate need of editing. The premise of the plot and the characters is good but everything fell a little flat in the delivery.
Wild certainly has an imagination, and you can practically feel the excitement and energy that has gone into writing this book. The first couple of pages started out strong but by the halfway mark, I was ready for the book to be over. The majority of the book is from Ava’s POV, which works well in introducing us to the supernatural world she suddenly finds herself in as we find out things as she does. However there is some inconsistency in her thought patterns and personality. And the four guys, well apart from the fact that they’re supposedly gorgeous, they’re shifters, they each have their own title - medic, diplomatic etc.- and one of them is rather moody, I couldn’t really tell you much about them or their personalities.
This is a medium burn RH with some steamier scenes and a cliffhanger. And, while it is in dire need of editing and a bit of a tidy, I did finish it so it is enjoyable enough for the short time it takes to read. However, I will not be continuing with this series.
Wild certainly has an imagination, and you can practically feel the excitement and energy that has gone into writing this book. The first couple of pages started out strong but by the halfway mark, I was ready for the book to be over. The majority of the book is from Ava’s POV, which works well in introducing us to the supernatural world she suddenly finds herself in as we find out things as she does. However there is some inconsistency in her thought patterns and personality. And the four guys, well apart from the fact that they’re supposedly gorgeous, they’re shifters, they each have their own title - medic, diplomatic etc.- and one of them is rather moody, I couldn’t really tell you much about them or their personalities.
This is a medium burn RH with some steamier scenes and a cliffhanger. And, while it is in dire need of editing and a bit of a tidy, I did finish it so it is enjoyable enough for the short time it takes to read. However, I will not be continuing with this series.
November 1, 2018
I feel kinda mislead by the blurb, as it seems to describe the series' overall plot, rather than this specific story-- I was looking forward to the whole "a choice between her heart and war" plot, but this doesn't even arise until the last couple chapters--which, of course, end on a cliffhanger.
Overall, the novella (about 150-160 pgs) was good, but stayed close to the usual werewolf tropes and cliches--so, no surprises there (although, I'll admit to a backstory twist I didn't see coming). Lots of potential for a great series, as I liked the characters, it just dragged out for me as I was expecting a different story and there were holes in the story we didn't have explained.
Typos, punctuation, and spelling errors were pretty blatant, so grammar nerds may want to skip this one, or at least check out the Look Inside feature (Amazon's sneak peek feature) to see if it will work for you. My 3.5 rating is rounded up due to reasonable pricing and potential for the next story if it is reasonably priced and of a reasonable length...I'm not caring for serial novellas in place of a solid, full-length novel.
Overall, the novella (about 150-160 pgs) was good, but stayed close to the usual werewolf tropes and cliches--so, no surprises there (although, I'll admit to a backstory twist I didn't see coming). Lots of potential for a great series, as I liked the characters, it just dragged out for me as I was expecting a different story and there were holes in the story we didn't have explained.
Typos, punctuation, and spelling errors were pretty blatant, so grammar nerds may want to skip this one, or at least check out the Look Inside feature (Amazon's sneak peek feature) to see if it will work for you. My 3.5 rating is rounded up due to reasonable pricing and potential for the next story if it is reasonably priced and of a reasonable length...I'm not caring for serial novellas in place of a solid, full-length novel.
March 31, 2024
Good start
Right now the characters and plot are just getting developed. I don't really like Ava right now. I feel like she's kind of selfish, not because she's doing anything so awful, but she seems to focus too much on herself. She knows next to nothing about the shifter world, yet she throws around her alpha status as if she can do anything because of it. I get that her wolf won't tolerate disrespect. But, wanting to do certain things (like meet with that pack alpha) seems like a ridiculous thing to do when you know nothing about pack politics, nor are you able to fight well enough to defend yourself yet. Hopefully, she gets better physically and information wise so she doesn't continue to seem kind of dumb.
So far the guys are ok. I don't like or dislike any of them yet because not enough has happened to determine that one way or another.
The plot started to move towards the end of this book, so we'll see what happens.
Right now the characters and plot are just getting developed. I don't really like Ava right now. I feel like she's kind of selfish, not because she's doing anything so awful, but she seems to focus too much on herself. She knows next to nothing about the shifter world, yet she throws around her alpha status as if she can do anything because of it. I get that her wolf won't tolerate disrespect. But, wanting to do certain things (like meet with that pack alpha) seems like a ridiculous thing to do when you know nothing about pack politics, nor are you able to fight well enough to defend yourself yet. Hopefully, she gets better physically and information wise so she doesn't continue to seem kind of dumb.
So far the guys are ok. I don't like or dislike any of them yet because not enough has happened to determine that one way or another.
The plot started to move towards the end of this book, so we'll see what happens.
October 4, 2018
This Has So Much Potential!!😎🎉🔥
(Read using Kindle Unlimited)
I found this storyline quite gripping! I loved the dynamics between Ava, Lucas, Declan, Graham & Rylan. The absolute faith & trust they had in her was beautiful! I also loved the the twist of who her Mother is!!💥👑✨
Vincent Titus - the self appointed 'Alpha of Alpha's' is a pig!! A chauvinist, a cheat, underhand & generally vile!!😡 After what he does I hope Ava challenges him & kicks his butt HARD in #2 😂
I'll definitely be reading book #2. This has great characters, world building and an in intriguing plotline, my one criticism is it could do with another round with a proofreader, just to get those last mistakes cleared up. But thankfully they don't detract too much from the reading experience👍 This is a solid 4 Star Read 🌟
Debbie, 1970, UK
(Read using Kindle Unlimited)
I found this storyline quite gripping! I loved the dynamics between Ava, Lucas, Declan, Graham & Rylan. The absolute faith & trust they had in her was beautiful! I also loved the the twist of who her Mother is!!💥👑✨
Vincent Titus - the self appointed 'Alpha of Alpha's' is a pig!! A chauvinist, a cheat, underhand & generally vile!!😡 After what he does I hope Ava challenges him & kicks his butt HARD in #2 😂
I'll definitely be reading book #2. This has great characters, world building and an in intriguing plotline, my one criticism is it could do with another round with a proofreader, just to get those last mistakes cleared up. But thankfully they don't detract too much from the reading experience👍 This is a solid 4 Star Read 🌟
Debbie, 1970, UK
October 7, 2023
Not a review really just me keeping track!
I picked this up looking for something quick and easy to read where I didnt have to pay much attention. Also, I was looking for sex.
So having said that. The book it self, like the plot, not very good. I dont pick these books up because of the plot so I forgive them easily but if you do this might not be for you. I could literaly leer por encima and still know what was going on. The MC was kinda cringy and everything else wepretty 2D. The plot moved a lil too quickly too.
But as I said, I dont pick this up for that so idc. Ahora pal bellaqueo, the sexual tension was there, it was nice enough. Only one smutty scene it was good but I was left wanting more, since there are 4 men there... but thats just me.
I picked this up looking for something quick and easy to read where I didnt have to pay much attention. Also, I was looking for sex.
So having said that. The book it self, like the plot, not very good. I dont pick these books up because of the plot so I forgive them easily but if you do this might not be for you. I could literaly leer por encima and still know what was going on. The MC was kinda cringy and everything else wepretty 2D. The plot moved a lil too quickly too.
But as I said, I dont pick this up for that so idc. Ahora pal bellaqueo, the sexual tension was there, it was nice enough. Only one smutty scene it was good but I was left wanting more, since there are 4 men there... but thats just me.
April 16, 2025
Ava and her pack mates
What an exciting book filled with delightful characters and with an interesting storyline. Ava always believed that her father never cared for her after being left in the care of social services years before. Imagine her amazement when as she’s turning 21 she finds that she has been left a mansion in Ravenwood. What comes with this inheritance is even more amazing including four of the most gorgeous men that she has ever seen. Reading this book was great and I absolutely loved it and would thoroughly recommend it hoping that others enjoy it as much as I did. This is the first of the series so does end on a cliff hanger.
What an exciting book filled with delightful characters and with an interesting storyline. Ava always believed that her father never cared for her after being left in the care of social services years before. Imagine her amazement when as she’s turning 21 she finds that she has been left a mansion in Ravenwood. What comes with this inheritance is even more amazing including four of the most gorgeous men that she has ever seen. Reading this book was great and I absolutely loved it and would thoroughly recommend it hoping that others enjoy it as much as I did. This is the first of the series so does end on a cliff hanger.
October 30, 2022
*3.5*
I found this book a little cringe at times because of Ava being attacted to all four guys, to the point of her kissing and doing other stuff with them. It just felt wrong and weird.
But I did found the storyline intriging because of her being Persephone's daughter and therefore the gatekeeper between life and death.
But I wonder what that means in the long run?
I really hope Lucas doesn't die, because I really liked him, and I kinda see him and Ava as a couple, for now at least, so I hope Ava can safe him somehow 🤞
I found this book a little cringe at times because of Ava being attacted to all four guys, to the point of her kissing and doing other stuff with them. It just felt wrong and weird.
But I did found the storyline intriging because of her being Persephone's daughter and therefore the gatekeeper between life and death.
But I wonder what that means in the long run?
I really hope Lucas doesn't die, because I really liked him, and I kinda see him and Ava as a couple, for now at least, so I hope Ava can safe him somehow 🤞
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 10, 2018
Such an incredible read, finished it in one sitting. I loved Eva from the start - being stuck in a stark white office collecting for a law firm seemed so endless and harsh! I’m glad for her that she doesn’t have to put up with the abuse from customers any more, instead she has to navigate the complex world of the supernatural community. What a steep learning curve, can’t wait to see her continuing journey into the next book. Highly recommend
February 7, 2019
Decent story with an unexpected twist
It is a decent story with a pleasant and unexpected twist, altho right now it makes absolutely no sense, but I hope that is resolved as the story progresses. I felt the backstory and character building was lacking as was making us feel the connection between Ava and her men. Fortunately there is more to this story than just the romance and I am intrigued to see how the author will continue with the plot.
It is a decent story with a pleasant and unexpected twist, altho right now it makes absolutely no sense, but I hope that is resolved as the story progresses. I felt the backstory and character building was lacking as was making us feel the connection between Ava and her men. Fortunately there is more to this story than just the romance and I am intrigued to see how the author will continue with the plot.
August 18, 2018
A good start to a new series
I enjoyed this book and the characters, the drama and action, the romance and suspense. The only thing i can say against the book is that it had a few typos and needs one more good edit for those. Overall an interesting read and i look forward to the next book in the series.
I enjoyed this book and the characters, the drama and action, the romance and suspense. The only thing i can say against the book is that it had a few typos and needs one more good edit for those. Overall an interesting read and i look forward to the next book in the series.
September 2, 2018
I'm hooked!!!!!
Cliffhangers should be banned or forbidden because this was epic!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next book that's how much I love this series so far!!!
I started the book and I couldn't even put it down that's how good it was. This book was completely brilliant not like anything else I have ever read so far!
Cliffhangers should be banned or forbidden because this was epic!!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next book that's how much I love this series so far!!!
I started the book and I couldn't even put it down that's how good it was. This book was completely brilliant not like anything else I have ever read so far!
September 16, 2018
Can't wait for the next one.
Paranormal. Rh. Wolf shifters. 4 Betas. Multi POV. Cliffhanger. Ava grow up in foster care. So receiving info that she has inherited a house comes has a shock and a relief after losing her job and apparently. When she gets there she finds not only she gets the house but a pack too! And a destiny.
Paranormal. Rh. Wolf shifters. 4 Betas. Multi POV. Cliffhanger. Ava grow up in foster care. So receiving info that she has inherited a house comes has a shock and a relief after losing her job and apparently. When she gets there she finds not only she gets the house but a pack too! And a destiny.
October 1, 2018
Encore un livre qui se termine alors que l'intrigue s'approfondie. J'ai l'impression que je suis en plein milieu de l'histoire, au plus fort de l'intrigue, et, bang, c'est terminé!
C'est une histoire très facile à lire. Du genre compte de fée un peu plus complexe. Intéressant avec ces quatre hommes qui lui tourne autour... et qui est-elle finalement?
C'est une histoire très facile à lire. Du genre compte de fée un peu plus complexe. Intéressant avec ces quatre hommes qui lui tourne autour... et qui est-elle finalement?
November 28, 2018
Not that interesting...skip
I had a hard time with this book and getting immersed into the world the author created. There is just too much words... I kept waiting for something more interesting to happen. I started and stopped a few times before I got to 50% and then I kept skimming over it to get to the end. I will not be continuing with this series.
I had a hard time with this book and getting immersed into the world the author created. There is just too much words... I kept waiting for something more interesting to happen. I started and stopped a few times before I got to 50% and then I kept skimming over it to get to the end. I will not be continuing with this series.
November 10, 2019
4
1 Star = DNF.
2 Star = Finished. Didn’t really enjoy.
3 Star = Finished. Story was neither good nor bad.
3.5 Star = Finished. Story was neither good nor bad. Will probably pick up next in series if there is one.
4 Star = Finished. Enjoyed story & would reread.
5 Star = Stole my heart! ❤️
1 Star = DNF.
2 Star = Finished. Didn’t really enjoy.
3 Star = Finished. Story was neither good nor bad.
3.5 Star = Finished. Story was neither good nor bad. Will probably pick up next in series if there is one.
4 Star = Finished. Enjoyed story & would reread.
5 Star = Stole my heart! ❤️
November 11, 2024
Persephone
It’s not a bad read, just feel like the main female character aka Ava is a little too accepting in her new life and the way the first part of the story was dragged out before she even got to the manor.
Definitely for the younger generation, I’m hoping it gets better from here.
If you like prophecies, gods, saving the world vibes then this is for you.
It’s not a bad read, just feel like the main female character aka Ava is a little too accepting in her new life and the way the first part of the story was dragged out before she even got to the manor.
Definitely for the younger generation, I’m hoping it gets better from here.
If you like prophecies, gods, saving the world vibes then this is for you.
August 13, 2018
Wow.
What a great collection of characters and a unique twist to the story. I’m curious to see what becomes of the various packs and what being a gatekeeper truly means. Can’t wait for book two and to find out what Ava will do next.
What a great collection of characters and a unique twist to the story. I’m curious to see what becomes of the various packs and what being a gatekeeper truly means. Can’t wait for book two and to find out what Ava will do next.
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