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The Tellox #3
Brax
Ariel Bird has always been out of sync with the rest of the world. Turning eighteen with two doctorates has not helped matters. But it never mattered to her as long as she had her sisters. Only now those sisters have disappeared and strange spaceships have been seen in the night skies again.
Everyone thought the Alien threat had come and gone. They were wrong.
Ariel is about to find out what happened to her sisters.
This is the third and last book of the Tellox series. It can be read as a stand alone but is better appreciated in series order.
Everyone thought the Alien threat had come and gone. They were wrong.
Ariel is about to find out what happened to her sisters.
This is the third and last book of the Tellox series. It can be read as a stand alone but is better appreciated in series order.
114 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 31, 2018
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About the author
Kelly Lucille
33 books440 followersKelly Lucille is the author of paranormal and fantasy romance.
She has a B.A. Degree in Creative Writing and Literature from Naropa University.
Her first book "Keeping Her" published in July of 2013.
On a more personal note- I read my first romance novel: "Shanna" by Kathleen E. Woodiwiss when I was 13 years old. I still read it every year or so just to remember how amazing a really good romance novel can make you feel.
Check out more of what's coming next at kellylucille.com
She has a B.A. Degree in Creative Writing and Literature from Naropa University.
Her first book "Keeping Her" published in July of 2013.
On a more personal note- I read my first romance novel: "Shanna" by Kathleen E. Woodiwiss when I was 13 years old. I still read it every year or so just to remember how amazing a really good romance novel can make you feel.
Check out more of what's coming next at kellylucille.com
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September 4, 2018
4 1/2 stars
June 17, 2019
The final novel in The Tellox series(say it ain't so, I want more please). Creeg #1 was by far the best of the three novels but all the sister's stories contributed to making this series a very good read.
Cheers
(June 17, 2019)Please note there is exciting news.
Kelly Lucille answered my question:
Any chance you will continue The Tellox Series? Cheers
Kelly Lucille-I am happy to say I am currently working on a Tellox book and it should be out at the end of this month or early in July. :)
Colleen Farquharson-FANTASTIC!!!
Cheers
(June 17, 2019)Please note there is exciting news.
Kelly Lucille answered my question:
Any chance you will continue The Tellox Series? Cheers
Kelly Lucille-I am happy to say I am currently working on a Tellox book and it should be out at the end of this month or early in July. :)
Colleen Farquharson-FANTASTIC!!!
September 1, 2018
Sci-fi romance with typos
This is book 3 in this sci-fi romance series. Not much romance and more typos than I was expecting. Satisfying end with a possibility of a related series.
Typos include punctuation and grammar
This is book 3 in this sci-fi romance series. Not much romance and more typos than I was expecting. Satisfying end with a possibility of a related series.
Typos include punctuation and grammar
December 29, 2018
Mellow wrap up
This was a rather mellow wrap up to the series even with the fights and attempt at action. The main fight at the end between Rygan and Brax I even skimmed over pretty much all of it. It just didn’t pull the reader in and I was just concerned with who wins and did anyone get hurt. The heroine in this addition wasn’t terrible, but the ‘power’ she had was anticlimactic and opposite of the biological powers of her two older sisters. The times she used them were ehh at best. I would have preferred her being able to control energy to actually manipulate it like a weapon of some sort. In the Epilogue in book two the sisters mention getting a message from Ariel to help her. When Ariel sends the message in book 3 she didn’t tell them where to go and when she sent it she wasn’t even in the location where they ended up helping her in book 3. So this again is another of many flaws in this series. How did they know where to go? So many holes it was extremely frustrating.
Additionally after having read all three books now, I’m disappointed in these ‘alpha’ males. Morax in book two is the only decent one. Creeg in one and now Brax In this version are rough and tough with their mates and never give a crap about their feelings. They also just man handle them and roughly kiss them to shut them up. Like Brax at the end of this one just wanted to argue and couldn’t have cared less how exhausted and tired his mate was. I was thinking SHUT UP BRAX AND PUT HER TO BED. There’s being an alpha and caring for your mate and then there’s just being a bastard. And Creeg and Brax walked the bastard line very tightly. Actually Creeg is just that, a jerk. I couldn’t get into his mean stupidity in any of the books.
These books should be offered on Kindle Unlimited instead of purchase option. For the length and holes in the story lines, along with a few editing issues they just aren’t worth the cost IMO.
The sex scene was also bland. This is more of a 2.5 rating than 3. But I was feeling generous and clicked the 3rd star.
This was a rather mellow wrap up to the series even with the fights and attempt at action. The main fight at the end between Rygan and Brax I even skimmed over pretty much all of it. It just didn’t pull the reader in and I was just concerned with who wins and did anyone get hurt. The heroine in this addition wasn’t terrible, but the ‘power’ she had was anticlimactic and opposite of the biological powers of her two older sisters. The times she used them were ehh at best. I would have preferred her being able to control energy to actually manipulate it like a weapon of some sort. In the Epilogue in book two the sisters mention getting a message from Ariel to help her. When Ariel sends the message in book 3 she didn’t tell them where to go and when she sent it she wasn’t even in the location where they ended up helping her in book 3. So this again is another of many flaws in this series. How did they know where to go? So many holes it was extremely frustrating.
Additionally after having read all three books now, I’m disappointed in these ‘alpha’ males. Morax in book two is the only decent one. Creeg in one and now Brax In this version are rough and tough with their mates and never give a crap about their feelings. They also just man handle them and roughly kiss them to shut them up. Like Brax at the end of this one just wanted to argue and couldn’t have cared less how exhausted and tired his mate was. I was thinking SHUT UP BRAX AND PUT HER TO BED. There’s being an alpha and caring for your mate and then there’s just being a bastard. And Creeg and Brax walked the bastard line very tightly. Actually Creeg is just that, a jerk. I couldn’t get into his mean stupidity in any of the books.
These books should be offered on Kindle Unlimited instead of purchase option. For the length and holes in the story lines, along with a few editing issues they just aren’t worth the cost IMO.
The sex scene was also bland. This is more of a 2.5 rating than 3. But I was feeling generous and clicked the 3rd star.
September 4, 2018
Ariel's sisters have gone missing. She doesn't know where they are, but when she wakes up in a spaceship full of women who look like her and her sister, she gets some ideas. It turns out that she's been grabbed up by the mad king of the Tellox, Rygan. He wants to mate her because he met her older sister and tried to steal her from her mate, Creeg. So Rygan gives Ariel the bite and leaves her locked into his room for 3 days for her to suffer through everything. But then, Brax, Rygan's identical twin brother appears, and it turns out that she's his mate.
This was a great conclusion to the series. I'm going to be sad to not see more of the Tellox, but maybe we'll get some somehow. They really are an excellent species!
This was a great conclusion to the series. I'm going to be sad to not see more of the Tellox, but maybe we'll get some somehow. They really are an excellent species!
September 9, 2018
This can’t be the end!
I read anything Ms. Lucille writes, and don’t bother to know anything other than she is the author. As with all her stories, the Tellox were fascinating and I didn’t want it to end. Disgruntled, pouting, and Nooooo are a few words that describe my dismay when I saw this would be the last installment. The word play, as always, is amazing. The culmination was a given (Rygen was a nasty piece of work), and the Bird sisters and their mates won the day, but surely Farin deserves his own story! Throw in the rest of the Calvern, the guardians and the nameless elite guard who still lives...there are more stories that need to be told. I’m not above begging! Kelly, I need to know, so MORE please!!
I read anything Ms. Lucille writes, and don’t bother to know anything other than she is the author. As with all her stories, the Tellox were fascinating and I didn’t want it to end. Disgruntled, pouting, and Nooooo are a few words that describe my dismay when I saw this would be the last installment. The word play, as always, is amazing. The culmination was a given (Rygen was a nasty piece of work), and the Bird sisters and their mates won the day, but surely Farin deserves his own story! Throw in the rest of the Calvern, the guardians and the nameless elite guard who still lives...there are more stories that need to be told. I’m not above begging! Kelly, I need to know, so MORE please!!
August 31, 2018
SO exciting!
I’ve been longing to see Ariel’s story! Ariel and her sisters are each gifted with special attributes not found in most people on Earth. Her sisters have disappeared; Ariel is determined to find them. Her genius (two doctorates @ age 18) and other attributes serve her well when she’s kidnapped. Thus begin Ariel’s out-of-this-world adventures. I love this story! Ariel is so smart and capable in ways no one suspects. She may be smaller and not nearly as strong as those she opposes, but she finds ways to compensate. When she finds Brax, she finds her true love. Brax is strong and amazingly capable and I love seeing the two of them together. Not to be missed reading!
I’ve been longing to see Ariel’s story! Ariel and her sisters are each gifted with special attributes not found in most people on Earth. Her sisters have disappeared; Ariel is determined to find them. Her genius (two doctorates @ age 18) and other attributes serve her well when she’s kidnapped. Thus begin Ariel’s out-of-this-world adventures. I love this story! Ariel is so smart and capable in ways no one suspects. She may be smaller and not nearly as strong as those she opposes, but she finds ways to compensate. When she finds Brax, she finds her true love. Brax is strong and amazingly capable and I love seeing the two of them together. Not to be missed reading!
September 1, 2018
This is such a riverting series.
Ariel the third Bird sister found by the Tellox has stronger powers than Sarah and Megan. She is is also the youngest but is an absolutely brilliant mathematician. Over the top IQ. Stolen with other human women she is going to find it hard to escape especially from the mad King of the Tellox who wants her for his mate willing or not. But it is help from Tellox General Brax who will save the day. Ariel is trying to save Earth from being involved in a war and work out what being a mate to Tellox like Brax is a help or a hindrance. Love this series. Looking forward to finding out who will be the next Tellox to find his mate.
Ariel the third Bird sister found by the Tellox has stronger powers than Sarah and Megan. She is is also the youngest but is an absolutely brilliant mathematician. Over the top IQ. Stolen with other human women she is going to find it hard to escape especially from the mad King of the Tellox who wants her for his mate willing or not. But it is help from Tellox General Brax who will save the day. Ariel is trying to save Earth from being involved in a war and work out what being a mate to Tellox like Brax is a help or a hindrance. Love this series. Looking forward to finding out who will be the next Tellox to find his mate.
October 22, 2018
Disappointed.
I waited for Brax's story but what I read was really nothing as the other books. There was no romance or chemistry between Brax and Ariel. I expected more from the series especially with many unsolved problems and situations.
1- I don't know why human women aren't compatible with Tellox men except the three sisters?
2- What did Brax's brother do to his elite warriors to make them unemotional?
3- Can the human women have children with their mates?
4- What happened with the crystal which Ariel gave to the president?
5- What about Ariel's scientist friend and Farin?
In fact, the series shouldn't stop here or the hunt for the human women end with only these three sister.
I waited for Brax's story but what I read was really nothing as the other books. There was no romance or chemistry between Brax and Ariel. I expected more from the series especially with many unsolved problems and situations.
1- I don't know why human women aren't compatible with Tellox men except the three sisters?
2- What did Brax's brother do to his elite warriors to make them unemotional?
3- Can the human women have children with their mates?
4- What happened with the crystal which Ariel gave to the president?
5- What about Ariel's scientist friend and Farin?
In fact, the series shouldn't stop here or the hunt for the human women end with only these three sister.
October 16, 2018
I hope to see another book in this series soon.
This is simply a really good story about the evil in some and the good in others. The true love of one male and one female. And the hope of group of males that had no idea of what they were looking for and now can't wait to find it for their own. Brax and Ariel meet after Rygan bit her and tried to claim her for his own. But only Brax could be the one, the true blood bond for her and they have to find some way to destroy Rygan and live free and happy. Can they beat the unstable King and end his corrupt control over the Tellox.
This is simply a really good story about the evil in some and the good in others. The true love of one male and one female. And the hope of group of males that had no idea of what they were looking for and now can't wait to find it for their own. Brax and Ariel meet after Rygan bit her and tried to claim her for his own. But only Brax could be the one, the true blood bond for her and they have to find some way to destroy Rygan and live free and happy. Can they beat the unstable King and end his corrupt control over the Tellox.
November 8, 2019
Tellox in the
I loved this trilogy, it was too short! I wished it was longer books and more than the three books,Loved the characters the settings,with lots action and drama. I'm looking forward to the book Farin the Dark,I really would like to see some of the other characters in the first three books find their bloodmates in the coming series, I hope it's more then three books,I just loved read this books.
I loved this trilogy, it was too short! I wished it was longer books and more than the three books,Loved the characters the settings,with lots action and drama. I'm looking forward to the book Farin the Dark,I really would like to see some of the other characters in the first three books find their bloodmates in the coming series, I hope it's more then three books,I just loved read this books.
September 3, 2018
Fabulous
I loved this story. The king took females from earth to be mates for him and his mem. He was not a good man. Brax found Ariiel after she was transformed into Tellex by a bite from the king. Brad was her mate. She is a genius and makes things very interesting. Love and action!!
I loved this story. The king took females from earth to be mates for him and his mem. He was not a good man. Brax found Ariiel after she was transformed into Tellex by a bite from the king. Brad was her mate. She is a genius and makes things very interesting. Love and action!!
November 23, 2018
Really good
I was hoping for more quiet moments for Ariel and Brax. It was really good though. Brax is thought to be dead. His men are exiled. Ariel is captured by Rygan the mad king. Brax has a plan to rescue her. There are a lot of things left unexplained. It is a good read though. Hope the others find their mates as well.
I was hoping for more quiet moments for Ariel and Brax. It was really good though. Brax is thought to be dead. His men are exiled. Ariel is captured by Rygan the mad king. Brax has a plan to rescue her. There are a lot of things left unexplained. It is a good read though. Hope the others find their mates as well.
February 11, 2021
Brax
It seems the Tellox are learning and all should become more open minded. Ariel is extremely bright and that her brain welcomed the Teachers download is beyond cool. King Rygan is insane and is homed onto Ariel who he starts to brutalize before he is interrupted. Lots of action and romance.
It seems the Tellox are learning and all should become more open minded. Ariel is extremely bright and that her brain welcomed the Teachers download is beyond cool. King Rygan is insane and is homed onto Ariel who he starts to brutalize before he is interrupted. Lots of action and romance.
September 11, 2018
Okay, didn’t love it.....but liked it a lot!. I wish the author had played on the age difference more. After all, she’s 17. He’s what.....several hundreds of years old?! yeah, that could have been fun.🤔
September 16, 2019
I am beyond impressed that this author created a good story with overarching storyline and finished it in three books, allowing enough expansion to create stories for the secondary characters if she chooses to.
December 27, 2019
Each book gets better!!!
I just loved it! I love the couples the sisters the whole story is beautiful and keeps me on the edge of my seat. This is my second reading of all the books and they just get better.
I just loved it! I love the couples the sisters the whole story is beautiful and keeps me on the edge of my seat. This is my second reading of all the books and they just get better.
March 4, 2022
Según la sinopsis, este es el último libro The Tellox, pero se quedaron muchas cosas en el tintero como para unos cuantos libros más. Espero leerlos porque me gustó mucho esta serie. Los tres son cortos y se leen rápido por lo atrapantes que son.
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August 5, 2023
Not much romance
Not my favorite Lucille book. There isn't much interaction between the main characters on a daily level. I like Mary Sue characters, but most of this plot centered on how intelligent the heroine is without developing more about her.
Not my favorite Lucille book. There isn't much interaction between the main characters on a daily level. I like Mary Sue characters, but most of this plot centered on how intelligent the heroine is without developing more about her.
September 1, 2018
Good read
Like the others. Wish the h showed more of her brains. I wonder if the series will continue? Would love to see how the others find their mates.
Like the others. Wish the h showed more of her brains. I wonder if the series will continue? Would love to see how the others find their mates.
September 2, 2018
Enjoyed story line very much
Would like to read more on the Tellox warriors and their mate hunts. Especially the rest of Sara's husbands crew
Would like to read more on the Tellox warriors and their mate hunts. Especially the rest of Sara's husbands crew
September 3, 2018
Too rushed, no plot
I waited with bated breath for this last book and was so disappointed! There was no lead-up or character build-up. It was choppy, disjointed and without plot.
I waited with bated breath for this last book and was so disappointed! There was no lead-up or character build-up. It was choppy, disjointed and without plot.
September 5, 2018
The tellox series
I have just finished the last book in the series it was great as we're the first and second books would highly recommend
I have just finished the last book in the series it was great as we're the first and second books would highly recommend
September 9, 2018
Kelly writes beautifully and these books in the Tellox world and great! More please......
September 21, 2018
Good Read
Good ending to a series. Would have liked to see Farin find his mate though. The sisters reunited was great to see
Good ending to a series. Would have liked to see Farin find his mate though. The sisters reunited was great to see
September 26, 2018
Love these books
Great read...again. Hope more are coming soon!!!! Can't get enough of these 📚. Wish there were more sisters to follow!
Great read...again. Hope more are coming soon!!!! Can't get enough of these 📚. Wish there were more sisters to follow!
September 26, 2018
WTF?! The last book?!
Great series. I loved all of them. But, why is this the last book? There could be so many more.
Great series. I loved all of them. But, why is this the last book? There could be so many more.
October 21, 2018
Great book
Good storyline, great read, Tellox men are the best!
Aired gets her man and The Tellox Brax finds his mate.
Good storyline, great read, Tellox men are the best!
Aired gets her man and The Tellox Brax finds his mate.
November 8, 2018
Another great short read
I enjoyed this book. I always like the feisty women and these sister have unique skills. I hope there is another soon.
I enjoyed this book. I always like the feisty women and these sister have unique skills. I hope there is another soon.
May 11, 2019
Great conclusion
Loved the ending to this series. Hope there are more. Ariel and Brad were well matched in temperament. Totally satisfying book
Loved the ending to this series. Hope there are more. Ariel and Brad were well matched in temperament. Totally satisfying book
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