I'm fucked, plain and simple. How am I fucked, you ask? This tattooed, bearded alpha popped into my life and took it over, driving me insane.
Am I complaining? Hell no.
Do I love him? Yes, more than anything—and his daughter too.
Lane is everything to me. He came into my life when I needed him the most. I just didn’t know it at the time. He completes me. He is someone I have waited for my whole life.
Lane
I am so fucking fucked. This five-foot-two, feistier-than-shit woman came into my life and knocked me on my ass.
She brings out every protective instinct I have, and I’m ready to go nuclear if someone even looks at her.
I love two people in this world more than life itself: Amelia and my daughter, Tiffany. Someone made the biggest fucking mistake of their life by trying to take them both away.
Safe w/ exception... hero crushed on heroine in grade school. He didn't remember her at first, then realized it.
A safe MC series is almost like a unicorn. This is the start of a new series, but we have had the pleasure of meeting some of the characters in previous books.
Lane- I adored him. He had fatherhood thrust upon him and he took it in strides. He was so loving and doting to his little girl, Tiffany. He was 100% involved with her. He was a badass biker, and a hair braiding dad. He thought life was pretty good, until he met Amelia and it got even better.
Amelia- I liked her. She was independent since her family didn't have much to do with her. She was a vet and took care of herself. I loved that when she fell in love with Lane, she fell in love with Tiffany just as much. She filled the void that Tiffany was missing.
- no cheating -no om/ow drama- we didn't even have excessive in your face drama with Tiffany's mom. She was nothing to Lane and you know, without a doubt, that Amelia is his one true love - no pushing away - Amelia didn't fall at his feet, but she didn't push him away either - secondary characters- I can't even wait for the next book. Great guys who aren't manwhores. We don't have to see them screwing around with other women. No club whores hanging on them. - epilogue was fantastic. Leann always gives us amazing epilogues. She proves it's possible to give us an extended look at the couples future, without compromising the other characters stories - well done!
Premise is good, story has potential. Execution sucks. I really did not like the author’s style. The writing feels forced and stilted. I would suggest that the author take composition classes or storytelling classes, even online.
On characterization, I did not like that the heroine acted like she was badass, punching other men and women. She’s supposed to be this sweet vet who has her life together. A woman can be strong without being crass and go brawling for willy-nilly.
I’m so sad to say I’m beyond disappointed with this book. I did not expect this level of confusion, timeline, character inconsistencies - specially the h - and plot error. All thing that should have been detected and corrected upon a good Beta reading, or even upon editing (it’s inadmissible for me at this stage to have almost all pages of FINAL edition book, highlighted with mistakes of some kind) which distracted and ruined the whole storyline for me! I felt so much like with the author’s book, which was messy, but since it was her debut and I loved the premise, seemed like I could see her doing great things, after her writing matured, so I gave her a chance and she became an auto read for me. Well, sadly, my expectations are proven unfounded in this story. She had such potential... Hence my extreme disappointment, when now, with quite a few books into her writing career, I come across the same problem in Lane as LeAnn Ashers’ debut novel: good premise, but poor execution...
So, I’m sorry to say, that even with my OCD, and my deep curiosity for the other characters stories, I’m not sure I’ll be able to handle this again. I sincerely hope the author is able to evolve and develop more writing skill because she has a good creative base, but a serious need of some writing lessons, so that her execution makes her ideas shine through, and not do the opposite, like it’s happening now. Guess we’ll see. Fingers crossed...
I love every book by LeAnn Asher's and this is no exception. This is the first book in the Grim Sinners MC series and it was absolutely amazing!! Lane was a total OTT alpha male. Amelia was strong and a really great heroine. I cannot wait for Wilders book.
I don't know what bothers me more about this book, the story or that I read the whole thing. I completely suspend disbelief when reading romance. I get it - there's going to be insta-lust/love, alpha male x 1000, and other ridiculous things. But this was so over the top and challenged my basic intelligence.
The writing was weird. "I will take her to the car", "I will not do that", "I am going to do this", etc. Sentences were written out formally, no contractions. Why does that bother me? Given the way the story went, the formality made no sense.
Spoiler alert and why this book bugged me to no end!!!!
The over-topness of this story, the writing, the irritating heroine was just too much. I kept hoping it would get better because I love an alpha dad/single father who braids his daughter's hair for goodness sake. There was just too much eye rolling on my behalf. There was no filter on these people at all and it tested my patience as a reader way too many times.
A year ago, Lane's life was forever changed upon discovering he had a daughter, Tiffany. Though he missed the first seven years of her life, having not known she existed, he refuses to miss another minute. Now single-handedly raising his daughter, she is his life. When he meets Amelia, his dog's vet, he knows right away she is meant to join their family.
Amelia, a vet, adores animals and gets her fix through her job. Having lost her beloved dog recently, she knows she isn't ready to risk her heart again, so she avoids dating as well. However, when one of her patients is picked up by a man straight out of her fantasies, her self-imposed exile is over.
However, as their relationship is just beginning, outside sources are fighting against them, determined to ruin their newfound happiness.
Can Lane protect his daughter and the woman meant to be his? Is his new family safe? Who Is behind everything and why? Is a HEA possible? Would Lane allow for anything less?
One-click now and follow along as two people meet unexpectedly and realize they've found the one destined to be theirs.
**I voluntarily read and reviewed an Advanced Reader Copy of this book.**
Lane was the first book in the Grim Sinners MC series by LeAnn Ashers. It was a spin-off from the Devil Souls series.
We first met Lane, President of the MC, in book three of the Devil Souls as Shayla’s brother. He was the typical gorgeous, over the top protective alpha. He learned in that book that he had a daughter that he never knew about that was living in a horrendous environment. She was rescued and immediately ensconced into his fold with loyalty and love.
Amelia was a veterinarian. She was estranged from her family but was beautiful and loving and comfortable being alone until she found the perfect mate.
Lane and Amelia met through her veterinarian practice and they immediately connected. It was the typical Ashers insta-love over the top romance filled with over the top MC suspense. It’s a great story for those who like this style; not so much for those that don’t.
Through Lane, Ashers set the stage for the rest of the series. Wilder is next up with teasers for another over the top insta-love with suspense.
I'm a very forgiving person and if you look at my review history I don't think I've ever given 1 star I wish I could give this zero stars. First of all they meet in her clinic as he's picking up a dog but there's no mention of him owning the dog. No names are even exchanged but somehow magically they know all about each other. 3 dates later having done nothing but laugh eat and screw no talking about themselves they're professing their love for each other. The pattern of speech is not how anyone especially in an MC speaks. He just claims her as his ole lady when that's a huge honor and not to be taken lightly before she even meets his daughter. Then she just disowns her family out of freaking nowhere it was so cringe worthy I couldn't handle it. You get absolutely no background on the characters they don't even talk to each other besides to say "doll" and laugh so much for no damn reason. This story was lacking everything it's ridiculous how it jumps all over the place. Don't waste your time on this book.
Anotherrrr MC family that was decent and didn't have the manwhore men so scoreee!! And a pretty decent length.
We met Lane and little Tiffany in Torch he had found out he had a daughter after 8 years thanks to his ex woman who kept it from him... Lane is the best biker dad in the world.. HE DOES BRAIDS!! 😭😭😭 i love a man who can be a great dad.. now he's picking up a dog and there he meets Amelia the head vet and he is already sprung!! He does do some chasing for few days but she gives in and dates him.. its semi slowish but they hit it off great.. the sassyness and teasing between the two is hot..
Also this generation of biker kids lol love it.. but as much as i enjoy these ol ladies handling business they are wayyyy aggressive.. like ill punch you in the face.. heck Amelia punched a guy in the face over and over.. like it was nothing.. :/ i just want that aggressiveness to be toned down alittle.. cat fights i can deal with with those snobby rich woman..
About half way into the story she finally meets the daughter.. i was glad i wanted the two to have a bond and didn't meet right away.
Also only op drama are the ppls who stare to much or make a bad choice and flirt with their partner.. they always shut shit down.
No om drama, Ow drama (the ex baby mama shows)Drama, secondary charas, no cheating, sexy times, no virgins
Recommend- yes Cover-⭐⭐⭐⭐
Instalove/lust Slight push/pull from h (but she's teasing) Kid trafficking Torture Slight abuse 30h/30H Safe sex Hea Epilogue
I love this first book in the spinoff series, Grim Sinners. Lane is a hot, alpha male, President of the Grim Sinners MC. After finding out he had a daughter he didn't know existed, he'll now do anything to protect her. When he meets sexy veterinarian Amelia, he may just have found someone to share his family with.
Amelia. Let me just say, she was far from a weak woman. She was strong and just as protective as Lane. She needs to keep her strength when pasts haunt them. People who want to hurt her just keep coming. She can fight with the best of them, and she'll fight to protect herself and Lane's daughter.
MC books are some of my go to's. I devour them. I also love this author and her writing style. There's enough drama, but any conflicts are quickly resolved. I've been waiting for Lane's story since the end of the Devil's Souls. When his daughter was discovered I knew this was one I needed.
I loved this story line and it set up nicely for Wilder's story next. This will definitely be a series I follow closely!
Lane had no clue he was a father to a young girl until he got the call that changed his life. Now his life focuses on his little girl. When he meets Amelia, he is hooked. He wants to see where they will lead, she amazes him at every turn. However someone is out to hurt Amelia and they can't figure out who. Will he be able to protect her before it is too late?
Loved this, so much fun. What a kickoff to a wonderful series. I have read most of the books and love each one, they just keep getting better.
Wow im so totally and utterly in love with Lane. Holy hell is he not the most beautiful kind loving / scary over protective alpha male you could ever meet ?. Daaaaaaam makes me jealous and envy of Amelia. "Sigh" . I really enjoyed this book so much so im going to go one click Leannes other MC series.😍.
Lane is an amazing father not knowing that he had a daughter until the day she was rescued from a cage in a dilapidated old house . A note was left for him in the cage along with his daughter. Both of their lives changed that day and only for the better. Amelia is a veterinarian tough but loving she knows how she should be treated and won't settle for anything less. The day that Lane comes into the surgery to pick up his dog spsrks fly and the chasing game begins. I love a hot ass alpha male who knows what he wants and goes after it. Amelia was screwed from the start she had no hope .. however Amelia gets kidnapped because of her looser cousin who has a gambling problem Amelia refuses to help him any longer and he becomes abusive. He owes money to the wrong people and they take it out on Amelia. Big mistake HUGE ! Lane saves the day Amelia gets her revenge and the bad guys get dealt with. I loved the chemistry between Lane and Amelia but i loved the way Amelia took to Lanes daughter and loved her like her very own . The dynamics between Lane the dad / boyfriend to Lane the bad ass alpha biker and president of the Grimm Sinners MC is a total contrast to the man who loves beyond measure and takes care of his own . I truly loved this book and look forward to reading more from LeAnn Ashers.
I tried so hard to like this book, I love single dad romance stories. But I just couldn't I disliked the h, I might even go so far as to say I hated her. I was not a fan of the style of writing, Sentences were written out formally, no contractions. Which made it sound stilted and weird.
-Insta love -Single Dad (dates ex for 3 months, didn’t love her) -Both not virgins -H not a man whore -some OW Drama, h and H both handle it, does not cause problems within relationship -OTT alpha male -bad Ass h -LOL moments -action and suspense -HEA with epilogue
Lane is the first book in the Grim Sinners MC series and this book hits the ground running. The men of the Grim Sinners love hard and the President is no exception. The moment he sees Amelia he is knocked off his feet by this sassy woman and the chase is on. Their story will have you hopping on the back of Lane's bike and enjoying the ride as these two find their way to forever. It is action packed, gritty and seriously hot and steamy. Can't get enough of this MC so heading straight into book 2.
This is a biker series I have a lot of fun reading. It’s my feel good biker series. They are not mean F’s, but they are bad@**. Lane is the Son of Smiley, for those familiar with the series this should perk your interest. If you are new to the series, for the love of a good book-start at the beginning(you can read this as a stand-alone or out of order each book is a comprehensive story on its own.) Lane is all out sexy!!! And he’s got a DadBody. Amelia is a veterinarian, and she meets Lane in the course of treating a four legged member of the MC’s Family, a Great Dane they rescued. Yessss to big bad sexy men who rescue dogs and women in trouble. Amelia is no pushover, she’s got Krav Maga skills and a general desire to kicka**, and puts them to use when needed. This was awesome to behold. The inner thoughts of Amelia were highlight worthy and entertaining, also profound, I love how she put it down that she just wants to be important and loved by someone. Lane has a daughter, he and Amelia make a point of easing her into their relationship and ensuring the girl feels secure in their love. Some of this I found to be overly detailed, but necessary they wanted everyone to know the little girl came first and their point was delivered. The only reason I didn’t rate this book 5 stars is that the the series set the bar very high with Techy and BUTCHER(all time fave.) This book is excellent, but it does not deliver the punch that it’s predecessors did. For the record, I would read this book again. Sweet MC read. No cheating, family oriented, good amount of violence, entertaining.
HOLY MOTHER OF BOOK LOVERS! I LOVED THIS BOOK! Looks like the Grim Sinners MC series is gonna be freakin amazing. After reading the Devils Souls MC's Torch I always wondered what happened to Lane after finding out he has a daughter he knew absolutely nothing about and the way he found out about her. Lane is the epitome of the badass alpha biker. The first time he sees Amelia he knows he has to and will make her his. Amelia is strong willed and a sassy little spitfire who can totally kick ass. These two are so perfect for each other. Amelia impresses Lane's MC brother's and the ole ladies the very first time she meets them. When she stands up for Brittany I wanted to shoot my fists in the air and yell YEAH TAKE THAT BITCH! Lol! I really love MC Books because the brotherhood and loyalty that these guys form with each other and the way they become one big family warms my heart. I laughed so hard and at times I cried. Little Tiffany stole my heart. She is so adorable. This little girl is so desperate to be loved and terrified that she's gonna lose her new family and the overwhelming love they give her. The way Amelia and Tiffany have an instant connection is so heartwarming. At times the suspense got pretty intense. Several times I was almost bouncing in my seat anticipating when Jeffery was gonna crawl out of the woodwork and try to hurt Amelia. I really really love the way LeAnn incorporates both the Grim Sinners MC and the Devils Souls MC together makes it seem like they're all one big family. I can't wait for Wilder's story and I'd love to have more of the Devils Souls MC also. Maybe Ryan and Myra and little Mia will get their own story and Jean and Jack, Paisley and Liam and so on. And then we'll need Derek and Brittany's. Lol. Damn LeAnn you are gonna be very busy. Lane and Amelia definitely have quite the active sex life. WOOH! These two can't even just touch each other without it turning into a f**kfest. Lol. But hey, I'm not complaining. It was abso-freakin-lutely smokin hot. So hot my Kindle was smokin. Lol. I EXTREMELY recommend this series to everyone. Bravo LeAnn.
This book is definitely the quality of book you expect from LeAnn Ashers MC series. LeAnn has taken her MC series and completely jacked up her charecters and taken them to the next level. This book kept you guessing what is going to happen, who is doing it and all the twists and turns was brilliantly written.
The reactions between charecters was beautifully written I absolutely loved Lane and Amelia and the love they shared. I loved that all the charecters stand up for what they believe and the ones they love. I love how they show that family isn't always about blood. Tiffany was amazing I absolutely adore her she is tough and soft and totally honest with everything that comes out of her mouth. I love that you get introductions to future charecters which leaves you wanting more.
I honestly could not rave about this book and author enough and would absolutely recommend this book and author to anyone who loves suspense and alpha men and women who stand up for what they believe.
Received an ARC at no cost to author. I loved it, this is the first time I have read a book from this author, but it will definitely not be my last...sometimes I get a little wary when I read about MC biker gangs because their is cheating and lose woman, but this in not the case here and thank you for that it gets tiring sometimes. I loved Lane he was one of the best h I have read in this genre, and I absolutely enjoyed his relationship with Amelia and his daughter Tiffany. This book kept you entertained and intrigued, I can't wait for the next one. Ms Ashers you earned yourself a fan!. Enjoy!!!
I absolutely adore LeAnn Ashers and every book she comes out with. I was expecting great things from the first in the Grim Sinners MC series, and let me tell you, the woman did not disappoint.
I loved how crazy and independent Amelia was and her fierce love for Lane's daughter.
Lane, phew... New book boyfriend material! I loved how completely alpha and sweet he was.
I can't wait to read more from this series. AMAZING JOB! Thank you for a great read<3
I POSSIBLY would have given it 2.5 - 3 STARS if EVERYTHING wasn't the same for each book....
In EVERY BOOK...
- The heroine is either a virgin or hasn't had sex so long she's a "born again virgin". - The heroine has never had an orgasm from from a man, even those who aren't virgins (I think in only one book a heroine had given herself one). - The men are badasses but are always perfect gentlemen to their women. When I say perfect, I mean perfect....as in unreal. - The MC can kill, assault, torture anyone they choose (in any town or state) without the police finding out. And if the police DO find out, they are always on the side and/or in pocket of the MC. - If someone is kidnapped they are found right away without anything traumatic happening. - The heroines kinda seem helpless, but if someone threatens a friend or loved one, they become ass kicking ninjas. - The MC men are always so scary that they make every person they barely threaten piss their pants. Quite a few of them even shit themselves. The town of Raleigh is full of incontinent people. - If you even talk about raping these women, the women will come after your dick with a tazers and/or a guns. And if they don't get you, the men will. - Both MC's (The Grim Sinners and Devils Souls) each "own about 50 companies", oh brother. It would take a monstrous amount of people, time and effort to keep 50 businesses going and yet, these guys have all the free time in the world! - All of them are always shot at in their bulletproof trucks or SUVs so that they can go on and on about how smart it was that that they upgraded their vehicles and clubhouse with bulletproof glass. - The heros want to start having babies before they tell profess their love or offer any real commitment like their property patch or an engagement ring to the heroine. - Speaking of engagement ring, every heroine ends up with a gaudy diamond encrusted ROSE GOLD engagement ring - When they get married, the MC hero never let's the heroine walk down the aisle, he always meets her halfway, too impatient to kiss the hell outta her and piss the priest off.
ALSO THE AUTHOR NEEDS BETTER BETA READERS. A MOTORCYCLE TURNED INTO A TRUCK IN ONLY A FEW PARAGRAPHS.
How did it take me so long to realize this book was out already?! I knew I was excited for Lane's story but even my brain didn’t do it justice. I’ve really grown to love Leann Asher's writing. Strike that, I liked it from the beginning. She reminds me a little of Lani Lynn Vale and Kristen Ashley but not enough to where she doesn’t have her own voice. And her epilogues are epic. This one made me cry and makes me want stories on their children. So Amelia is a quirky 28 year old veterinarian that can hold her own in a fist fight. It seems she tends to strike first before thinking and that lands her in the hot seat. Good thing her boyfriend has pull with the police chief, huh? We have several kidnapping attempts, fist fights, a few different bad guys, all mixed in with a sweet relationship, a little girl to cute for her own good, and just average day to day living. No cheating, no relationship drama of any kind. Just adorable grins from Lane when he realizes that the naughty thing that he does will likely end up with him in the dog house
30 • Lane (President of MC) + 30 • Amelia’s (Vet) love story💖
Single daddy romances >>>> need I say more?! Add in some action, horrible parents + siblings and don’t forget the HEA with amazing epilogues.
Anywhoooo…
⚠️+ Info: -Instalove -Dual POV: mostly h -Both h + H are experienced and celibate before meeting -No: OWD, OMD, push/pull, cheating, separation, sharing, or 3rd act break up -Kidnapping + Attempted kidnapping -Blackmail -Gambling Addiction -Talks of: rape -Fat shaming: towards FMC + side character -Adoption -Violence -Murder -HEA: Married, w/ children: Tiffany, Christopher + the twins💖
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