𝑼𝒏𝒅𝒆𝒓𝒈𝒓𝒐𝒖𝒏𝒅 𝑫𝒓𝒖𝒊𝒅, Colin McCool/Junkyard Druid series, Book #4
by M.D. Massey
For me, it is common to find my interest in a character lagging at about book 4 or 5 of the series, and this one is no different. Don't get me wrong, I still love this series, but I found that at this point, the character was a bit stale.
Perhaps Massey felt the same way, because he loaded the second half of this book with lots of insights into not only Colin's life, but the life of other returning characters, both human and supernatural. This episode of our favorite Junkyard Druid includes several encounters with creatures living in the Underhill, a realm where old gods and the fae have taken refuge from the above-ground world of Earth. There was a lot of action, a lot of stupid, reckless action on the part of Colin, who is lucky enough to have other powerful entities to help/clean up the messes he gets them into. While the storyline leads the reader to believe that Colin will work to better his magic and his control of The Eye, once he is back above ground, there is little in the ending of the novel to follow up on that. Perhaps the next novel will reveal Colin taking a more common sense attitude toward not only his training, but his tendency to run headlong into danger with his only plan being to somehow stay alive.
Most of what I like about the techniques of writing by Massey is contained in this book. The characters are relatable and most show some growth. The plotting is good and well executed, which keeps the book rolling along steadily towards resolution of the issues. There is not much enlightenment to the main issue running through all of these books, being who should Colin trust.
Editing is good, proofing revealed a couple of perhaps picky points, such as this, found at location 1416 on my Kindle: "The smoke smelled like chronic, which made me chuckle." It didn't make me chuckle, however. Colin was visiting with another who was smoking a pipe. Did he mean the smoke smelled like the other person was a chronic smoker, or did he mean something else? Hell If I know. Then, in the area leading up to location 2205, Colin is shifting to his Formorian form. He's done this a few times prior in this particular adventure, and every time, Massey references the destruction of the clothing he is wearing, and that when he shifts back that he is either wearing shreds of those clothes or is naked. But here, it just says this:"Great. Yeah, I'll be ready by then." I shifted and focused my energies on healing my hand fully. Twenty minutes later, the task was done. "Ready as ever." There is no mention of taking clothing off, of rending clothing, and no mention of putting on clothes or even mention of shifting back to human form, which one would assume he did as it has often been reiterated that it takes a lot of energy to stay in event the half Formorian form.
But the worst thing, technically, of the writing is the almost cliffhanger ending. Not a true cliffhanger, but too damn close. Yes, the issues addressed in this episode were mostly solved, but it sure left a lot hanging over the edge of that cliff, plus opening a new issue perhaps related to the issues in the current story, but just that. Open the issue. Talk about it for a page or so and end the book. That type of ending is always shocking to me. It story simply ends, leaving so many questions unanswered or only partially answered.
As Massey usually doesn't allow proofing or writing style errors in these books, I opted for thinking that this was an aberration and didn't knock off any stars. I won't be as kind if it is repeated in the next book.