This is the third story I’ve read by this author. I open this way not because I used to open this way, but because I’ve a specific point: this is the first book I’ve read by them that was only by them.
The first story I read by them was book-length and one they co-wrote with Jae and I loved it. Wanted to find more by this author, more in that series. There was more in that series, but only a short story and only by Jae. Then I read a short story solely written by Grey and I only gave it 3.5 stars – but, eh, I’ve always held that short story writing and long-length writing are different skills, so maybe I’ll love something solely by them in long form.
Even so – it still took me longer than expected to read this book here. Mostly because it had everything going against it. I do not really like power imbalance stories, be it one involving employee-employer or cultural/financial/societal power imbalances, or whatever imbalances come with massive differences in age. And so forth and so on. Well this one had all of that in the story (except potentially the age one – some guesses were made by one character about another’s age, but I do not believe it was ever firmly established what Sherry’s age was). Toss in somewhat disagreeable characters, bitch grandmothers, and horrifying side characters and . . . I’d normally not even try this book. But still, I’d been waiting to try a solo book length work by this author.
The fact I rated this book as high as 3.5 stars is actually a testament to the author’s ability. Since they were working against so much that I loathe/dislike reading.
Right, so – Madison’s a ‘rich bitch’ who has no redeeming qualities at the start of the book. Her grandmother, who controls the family fortune (Maddie’s parents are dead, as a toss in), has always been a bitch to Madison since she, Maddie, moved in after the parents died. Maddie’s a college graduate now, but speeds her time partying and fucking random people, and the grandmother has point blank stated that she’s cut off – she’s not going to be in the will. Maddie has some money of her own but . . . ‘she can’t do that!’ or something.
A random thought goes across Maddison’s brain as she’s in a diner – what if she could show grandma that she’s all grown up and responsible and stuff? So – 1) get wife (grandma, although disliking that Maddie’s a lesbian, already knows she’s a lesbian); 2) get job; 3) xxx?; 4) profit!
Her eye wanders as she’s in the diner and spots a waitress. One that is super thin (from lack of eating – she’s poor! She cannot afford food!), and completely unlike any woman she’d ever find attractive but . . . let’s go with her! So rich bitch decides to make an offer to waitress.
Waitress, this being Sherry the other main character and POV, ‘gets away’ before Maddison can make the offer. Instead of deciding to move on to another potential ‘fake girlfriend/wife’, Madison’s mind is locked onto Sherry. And eventually runs her down. Learns she has a sickly kid. Offers to pay for everything to make kid not sickly. BUT! Must be pretend girlfriend/wife. Also some amount of money will also go to Sherry. The contract term does not have an end point beyond ‘until grandma accepts Madison’s changes, puts her in or keeps her in (depending on the state of the will) and, this part is important, dies.’ Yes, the contract is ‘until grandma dies’.
Sherry doesn’t want anything to do with it but has, like, 800 jobs that pay her pennies, lives in a very bad trailer park where the neighbor (or was that the owner?) is very very fat and ugly and grope-y, and needs to get son ‘fixed’. So . . . she takes the offer.
And so the book unfolds from there with a fake relationship. With the constant reminder that Sherry is nothing more than an employee, and Madison is the boss. Oh, and in addition to Madison assuming things about Sherry’s age which is never actually answered – Madison also assumed that Sherry is straight. Never asks. Deep deep into the story, there’s this vague idea that Sherry never liked boys, but hadn’t thought deeply about women and . . . she doesn’t really know what she is – but that’s something thought deep into the story.
Oh, and lots of angst. Another thing I do not particular love to read. Not a deal breaker, but …eh.
Madison is presented as unlikeable in beginning, never really changes (other than ‘growing up’, she’s still pretty unlikeable), but is ‘likeable’ enough to me. Sherry is presented as a down on her luck single mother . . . who had some really dislikeable opinions and thoughts revealed deep into the book. By the time everything was done, I do not think I actually liked Sherry that much. But, meh.
Rating: 3.5
March 10 2019