Let me start by saying I've never read anything from Ripley Proserpina before, but I am a huge fan of Rebecca Royce and her name is what pulled me in.
I LIKE zombie stories and I like menage stories, but this book didn't do it for me. I'm not sure how I feel about menage WITH zombies. I understand Whitney was in love with Brandon prior to his demise. But within minutes of Whitney waking up at Zero, the Uncontrolled safe haven, she is kissing him. Kissing. A. Zombie. Can I just say huge ICK factor?
I also understand that she brings him and his pals "back to life", so toward the middle and end it was not so icky, but still (shiver and stomach lurch). Perhaps if the authors had waited until the end it would have suited better? Also, Whitney AUTOMATICALLY feels drawn to not only Brandon, but ALL his buddies, Carson, Dante, Isaiah, Nick, and John. Together they discover they complete a circuit, of sorts, and via Whitney they all, very quickly, regenerate all their rotting parts, and also seem to discover they all have some sort of psychic gift.
Again, the ick factor. These guys are DEAD. They are DEAD. Yes, I know I repeated myself. But, they ARE dead. Why would kissing them and cuddling up with them be enjoyable? These are not vampires, frozen in time in their undeath. They are ROTTING. First the smell - no matter how much they wash would be atrocious. And, second... well the authors cannot have it both ways you cannot have rotting and deteriorating people not be disgusting. Again, I don't get it. The zombies are deteriorating and Dante has to replace peoples parts with skin grafts of metal. So, why aren't their brains deteriorating along with their bodies? There are SO many contradictions I am still flabbergasted.
Apparently we were only to be concerned about the 2 types of zombies, the Controlled - who are mind managed by Whitney's supposedly dead brother, Dexter. Of all names, Dexter - which I believe was a nod to the TV show, but this Dexter is even more twisted. He wants to control all the zombies. The Uncontrolled are those who have free will and are not controlled by Dexter.
I'm still trying to figure out the romance angle, which I'm sure will be "fleshed out" (ha) later on in the upcoming sequel. As it stands, at the end of book 1, all the guys are "alive" again via some Frankensteinish electrical jump start from Whitney. She has had sex with both Isiah and Brandon - in that order. For a gal whose "love of her life" is Brandon that kinda baffled me. I would at least assume Brandon would bed her first. Gah!
Anyway, despite all the contradictions and the goofy love heptagon, I kind of enjoyed this story - if only because it's so bizarrely unique. You can definitely tell where one author drops and the other picks up the story - you can tell it's not as cohesive as it could be. Hopefully the authors will tighten things up and stop contradicting themselves in the next book, or perhaps explain why they did it to begin with?