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What if #1
Fatality
Jane and Charles Scallanger constantly told Holly not to phone Jake Peter. But in this What If Novel, Holly phoned him from one of the nurses phones.
With Jake looking for her, that phone call is a blessing from above, and he discovered Holly so much sooner.
How does the story end.
Fatality is an alternative ending to Imperfect Love, but please note if I ended Imperfect Love with the Fatality version, Secret Love falls away completely.
With Jake looking for her, that phone call is a blessing from above, and he discovered Holly so much sooner.
How does the story end.
Fatality is an alternative ending to Imperfect Love, but please note if I ended Imperfect Love with the Fatality version, Secret Love falls away completely.
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Isabella White
18 books220 followersIsabella White is a USA Today Bestselling author.
She published her first novel Imperfect Love in 2015, which is finally available in audio now, with Secret Love following two years later. Endless Love the third and final part was publishing in 2018.
Her newest is From a Jack to a King, with Finding Mr. Right coming in 2019.
When she isn't writing she is listening to audios as her time is limited and found a new way of reading books. Or she spends it with her family and pets, enjoying the journey that life takes them on.
To find out more about Isabella, visit her website.
She published her first novel Imperfect Love in 2015, which is finally available in audio now, with Secret Love following two years later. Endless Love the third and final part was publishing in 2018.
Her newest is From a Jack to a King, with Finding Mr. Right coming in 2019.
When she isn't writing she is listening to audios as her time is limited and found a new way of reading books. Or she spends it with her family and pets, enjoying the journey that life takes them on.
To find out more about Isabella, visit her website.
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October 13, 2018
WOW! One heck of a Twist!
What if?, A great question with so many different outcomes that lead to three amazing twists keeping you suspended on edge enjoying each new outcome as they continue to take you in different paths making you rethink if one of these truly would have been the better outcome for the ending to this amazing series leaving you stumped and rethinking if the original should have been this alternate ending! So many amazing choices leaves me struggling undecided but in the back of my mind I already know the perfect ending for me could be that I'm greedy and am willing to accept the fate of digesting all three! An amazing must read that will have you rethinking everything you were willing to settle as the HEA from this beautifully written original ending!
What if?, A great question with so many different outcomes that lead to three amazing twists keeping you suspended on edge enjoying each new outcome as they continue to take you in different paths making you rethink if one of these truly would have been the better outcome for the ending to this amazing series leaving you stumped and rethinking if the original should have been this alternate ending! So many amazing choices leaves me struggling undecided but in the back of my mind I already know the perfect ending for me could be that I'm greedy and am willing to accept the fate of digesting all three! An amazing must read that will have you rethinking everything you were willing to settle as the HEA from this beautifully written original ending!
August 7, 2018
I got this novel when I pre-ordered Endless Love, the third part in the 4Ever series.
Oh man, this is such a sad yet so sweet novel. Jake and Holly, what more can I say. I absolutely adore the what if novels, and heard that it is going to be published into a box set soon with four new ones. At the moment Isabella only have 3 up for grabs.
Fatality, Luck and Fortuitous.
All what if versions.
You can't put them down.
Oh man, this is such a sad yet so sweet novel. Jake and Holly, what more can I say. I absolutely adore the what if novels, and heard that it is going to be published into a box set soon with four new ones. At the moment Isabella only have 3 up for grabs.
Fatality, Luck and Fortuitous.
All what if versions.
You can't put them down.
October 19, 2018
It's a what if on the book, I thought it was good.
If you wanted a different perspective, this is it,
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
If you wanted a different perspective, this is it,
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 17, 2018
Fatality: An alternative version of Imperfect Love (4Ever Series #1) (What If) https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07HB5LCSY/...
As the author stated, one must read the first book before attempting this alternative ending to Imperfect Love. I really enjoyed the happiness of this book’s ending, whereas Imperfect Love never truly had an ending, but left one expecting a HEA in a follow-up book. Imperfect Love could have continued in the way it was going, with a reunion of Jake and Holly at a later date. However, Fatality really flowed well after Holly gave birth. It’s a shame their reunion occurred just as Jake was leaving for China again. I would have enjoyed seeing them continue their relationship further. Overall, this book is a fantastic read and I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
As the author stated, one must read the first book before attempting this alternative ending to Imperfect Love. I really enjoyed the happiness of this book’s ending, whereas Imperfect Love never truly had an ending, but left one expecting a HEA in a follow-up book. Imperfect Love could have continued in the way it was going, with a reunion of Jake and Holly at a later date. However, Fatality really flowed well after Holly gave birth. It’s a shame their reunion occurred just as Jake was leaving for China again. I would have enjoyed seeing them continue their relationship further. Overall, this book is a fantastic read and I highly recommend it.
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August 7, 2018
I absolutely love all the What if Novels From Author Isabella White.
These are all short stories about the outcome of what might of happened if things worked out differently if Holly never left if she staid when they meet again and the possibility's are endless.
I always hoped that this series would never end they are such awesome books that you just cant help but fall in love with them. I am so happy I have read them all. So don't be shy go get your copy today and stop wondering about what if and actually read them.
Well done Isabella white and thank you for taking our imaginations to so many places that we can only dream about.
These are all short stories about the outcome of what might of happened if things worked out differently if Holly never left if she staid when they meet again and the possibility's are endless.
I always hoped that this series would never end they are such awesome books that you just cant help but fall in love with them. I am so happy I have read them all. So don't be shy go get your copy today and stop wondering about what if and actually read them.
Well done Isabella white and thank you for taking our imaginations to so many places that we can only dream about.
August 30, 2021
I received an ARC of this book and offered to share my thoughts on it. First off, let me start by saying it is genius to provide many alternatives to the same book. Everyone has read that story that they wish they could rewrite the ending to turn out the way they saw in their mind. This provides that. What if is answered....brilliant! Now if you haven't read the other book, this could get really confusing I can imagine, and so it is something to consider. However, I loved it and it kept me engrossed in the story and I didn't want to put it down.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 19, 2018
It's a what if on the book, I thought it was good.
If you wanted a different perspective, this is it,
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
If you wanted a different perspective, this is it,
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 21, 2020
Heartache and all here we go with what happens if. What if Jake does find Holly and Jamie, before she gets big and he gets to experience her childhood instead of meeting her when she was almost eight years old. She is so angry and depressed it is a good thing that Jake and his father Gus finds them because his family was their to help with the loving on Jamie while Holly couldn't. It was good to see how you got them back together in the end. Both of them loving each other but Jake having to suffer the brunt of all the anger and rage because of what his mother Mara did. I like reading about them again but I kinda liked the series better.
October 17, 2018
You must read the first book in the series to understand this book. It is an alternate ending to the first book. What if? It's a question we ask ourselves all of the time. What if I had said something? What if I had never gone in the first place? The author takes the reader on a journey exploring what might have happened if something changed. I admire writers who take a chance. She wrote an amazing book in the first place, but then to take it one step further and turn it on its ear, the result was intriguing, emotional and downright amazing.
October 13, 2018
What if? It's a question we ask ourselves on a regular basis and now it's asked of Holly and Jake. In this version Holly makes the call to Jake. When it all comes out Jake finds out his mother's part Jake finally gets out from under her claws. Jake now has to work to get Holly's trust but it's gonna take some serious work. It's a great alternative ending still filled with angst and pain. Plenty of laughs thanks to Janet, Tracy and Rob. Loved it
October 18, 2018
I enjoyed this story. This book is a new take on what could have happened between Holly and Jake if they had made different choices. I have not had a chance to read the first story and I look forward to trying the original series out. The characters Jake and Holly, as well as Jane and Charles, are very intriguing characters. I enjoyed taking this journey with them and I look forward to reading more great book by this author.
November 11, 2023
This story showed love conquer all things. Jake n holly went through so much drama and pain it not funny. Mara is so evil, glad Jake cut her out their lives... Love how family sticking together was a main scene in this story, and Jane finding love only thing was missing was here reaching out to meatballs . Will definitely re read this story of was that good (spoiler alert)
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I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 17, 2018
This shows a different side to the story and if things could have been different if they had chosen a different path to the one they took. Really loved this as everyone feel what if they did it differently if live would be better
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I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 18, 2018
A book about a man who is having a baby with his wife and then she disappears and can;t be found.
Can he find her and fix their relationship and get To know his own child?
A amazingly well written box with great characters.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Can he find her and fix their relationship and get To know his own child?
A amazingly well written box with great characters.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 18, 2018
This is an alternative ending to Imperfect Love. What a great idea to give the story another version. Read Imperfect Love first or you will be confused.
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I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 18, 2018
This was amazing. What a twist and great way to end it. It is well written, interesting, and smooth. It has a great storyline and great characters. This kept my interest through the whole book. I received it from booksprout and voluntarily left my review.
November 14, 2018
Format: Kindle Edition
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I loved this book. It is very well written with a great storyline and well developed characters. So interesting that I couldn't put it down until finished. A must read!
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I loved this book. It is very well written with a great storyline and well developed characters. So interesting that I couldn't put it down until finished. A must read!
October 10, 2018
I loved this what-if novel. Such a great idea to give various situations to what could have happened. Can't wait for the rest!
October 12, 2018
I enjoyed reading the alternative ending. It was well written and it gave you an ideal how things could happen. I received this book via Booksprout and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 14, 2018
These what if books are totally new to me. A pleasant change from the regular stories I usually read. You find out what might have happened. Love this concept.
October 18, 2018
I love these series so much. And what if books are awesome addition to the original ones.
October 26, 2018
This story showed love conquer all things. Jake n holly went through so much drama and pain it not funny. Mara is so evil, glad Jake cut her out their lives... Love how family sticking together was a main scene in this story, and Jane finding love only thing was missing was here reaching out to meatballs . Will definitely re read this story of was that good (spoiler alert)
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 24, 2020
This is a FanFiction
April 20, 2020
Heartache and all here we go with what happens if. What if Jake does find Holly and Jamie, before she gets big and he gets to experience her childhood instead of meeting her when she was almost eight years old. She is so angry and depressed it is a good thing that Jake and his father Gus finds them because his family was their to help with the loving on Jamie while Holly couldn't. It was good to see how you got them back together in the end. Both of them loving each other but Jake having to suffer the brunt of all the anger and rage because of what his mother Mara did. I like reading about them again but I kinda liked the series better.
October 17, 2018
I've read "Imperfect Love" and I hated it. which is why I wouldn't read the rest of the series. I hate series that continue while the characters make the same mistake over and over and are so self absorbed they risk their children because of their pride.
Fatality I loved because in her grief Holly called Jake. Because of Jake's love for her and the fear for his child, he finds Holly. To do what's best for Holly and his daughter, He finds ways to make Holly and him to be a partnership.
Fatality I loved because in her grief Holly called Jake. Because of Jake's love for her and the fear for his child, he finds Holly. To do what's best for Holly and his daughter, He finds ways to make Holly and him to be a partnership.
July 26, 2019
Great alternate version
I much preferred the alternate version. Original 4ever series particularly in the last book had way too many medical problems to consider it even realistic.
I much preferred the alternate version. Original 4ever series particularly in the last book had way too many medical problems to consider it even realistic.
June 20, 2020
What if’s can happen
I do enjoy the what if stories which shows various different ways in which Jake and Holly find each other again. Fatality happens just after Romy died, and it shows how two people that are destined to be together, will always be, even in unexpected ways.
I do enjoy the what if stories which shows various different ways in which Jake and Holly find each other again. Fatality happens just after Romy died, and it shows how two people that are destined to be together, will always be, even in unexpected ways.
February 4, 2020
Love love love Isabellas What If seris and this one definitely didnt disappoint. I wasnt able to put it down till I was all finished.
May 18, 2019
Great, Great, Great book!
I thoroughly enjoyed this book with the optional ending of Jake and Holly's story. I could read about them over and over.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book with the optional ending of Jake and Holly's story. I could read about them over and over.
October 15, 2018
its a good thing we got the what if/ alternative ending of this story but i still prefer the original ending..
its a good read though..
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
its a good read though..
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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