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Paper Bag Mask
At the same moment he catches his teacher giving illegal drugs to a student, Redmond Fairweather loses his friggin’ mind and steals Mr. Street’s prized possession—a stupid wooden sword with round edges that will never, ever cut through anything—“The Whomper.”
Redmond has no idea why he stole the Whomper. He guesses his extreme dislike (okay, hate… so much hate) of the school’s most popular teacher probably has something to do with it. To his surprise and delight, the hottest girl in school, Elodia Cruz, hates him too.
Soon, Redmond’s small band of misfit friends joins up with Elodia and the most popular kids on campus to hold the Whomper for ransom, pull off an elaborate, broad daylight heist to steal something even bigger from Mr. Street, and expose their teacher for the scumbag he really is.
Redmond has no idea why he stole the Whomper. He guesses his extreme dislike (okay, hate… so much hate) of the school’s most popular teacher probably has something to do with it. To his surprise and delight, the hottest girl in school, Elodia Cruz, hates him too.
Soon, Redmond’s small band of misfit friends joins up with Elodia and the most popular kids on campus to hold the Whomper for ransom, pull off an elaborate, broad daylight heist to steal something even bigger from Mr. Street, and expose their teacher for the scumbag he really is.
- GenresYoung Adult
330 pages, Paperback
Published October 23, 2018
About the author
Brock Heasley
19 books27 followersBrock Heasley is an author, filmmaker, and artist. He has written the novels Paper Bag Mask and The Shift; the memoir The Other Side of Fear: A True Story of Murder, Forgiveness, and the Peace Only Faith Can Bring; and a graphic novel collection of his comic, The SuperFogeys. After leaving his 15 year career as a graphic designer, Brock began his work in film. His feature film debut as Writer/Director/Producer, on the sci-fi film The Shift, was released by Angel Studios in 2023. He has a B.A. in Graphic Design from California State University, Fresno, and his work has been featured in the San Francisco Cartoon Art Museum.
Brock lives with his wife and daughters in California where they enjoy co-op video games, dancing in the living room, and eating breakfast for dinner.
Brock lives with his wife and daughters in California where they enjoy co-op video games, dancing in the living room, and eating breakfast for dinner.
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May 18, 2025
Brock has an innate ability to transport the reader smack dab in the middle of the action with an ease of prelude. Having grown up in the San Joaquin Valley myself, I was effortlessly revisiting my high school days with this group of friends. The dialogue is so vivid, you can almost hear it; the setting so familiar you feel you’re standing right there. The characters interact, support, plan, and scheme with an authentic dynamic. I felt I was a part of the shenanigans from beginning to end, and I didn’t want to leave.
May 20, 2025
Wow. Riveting. Page turner. And I loved. Loved loved. How the author wrote bout the heist. So good and so many things n lessons to think about during the boom and made its debut and meaning and purpose at the end. Wow!!!!! Go give it a read!
October 24, 2018
Full disclosure: the author of this book is my brother-in-law.
BUT that being said, this really is an enjoyable and good bit of YA fiction. The characters are relatable—either you were one of them or you knew one of them (or possibly all of them). We all had that teacher (or those teachers).
And as someone who has passed through high school and lived to tell the tale, I can also relate to the struggle against limits and boundaries, especially concerning my relationship with my parents.
There are some hard-hitting topics woven in through a fun romp through high school, which ground the story into reality and give the book’s characters depth and motivation.
Solid book. Solid story-telling. Worth the read for those who are in high school, are heading to high school, or have been through it—all for different ways in which the book will speak to varying audiences.
Overall, really enjoyed this one, and look forward to handing it over to my own kids (once they are old enough to read and appreciate it).
BUT that being said, this really is an enjoyable and good bit of YA fiction. The characters are relatable—either you were one of them or you knew one of them (or possibly all of them). We all had that teacher (or those teachers).
And as someone who has passed through high school and lived to tell the tale, I can also relate to the struggle against limits and boundaries, especially concerning my relationship with my parents.
There are some hard-hitting topics woven in through a fun romp through high school, which ground the story into reality and give the book’s characters depth and motivation.
Solid book. Solid story-telling. Worth the read for those who are in high school, are heading to high school, or have been through it—all for different ways in which the book will speak to varying audiences.
Overall, really enjoyed this one, and look forward to handing it over to my own kids (once they are old enough to read and appreciate it).
December 20, 2018
There’s so many things that go into a book to make it special. The characters. The plotline. The meaning. As a reader, I always want to somehow predict the outcome. It can be frustrating, especially if I’m right. I wasn’t in this case which just made the experience better. Paper Bag Mask has this sense of ‘chaotic good’ energy that can make a reader, such as myself, stay up to early hours of the morning reading because it honestly can’t be put down.
There’s just so much to say about this book. I’ll try to not create a jumbled mess of a review for you readers. First and foremost, I wanted to somehow reach into the virtual pages of this book and smack Redmond over the head. Not in a vicious way. It’s much like watching a puppy destroy your prized sneakers. It’s cute? But also, whyyyyyyy puppy?! Redmond is the puppy if that wasn’t super clear.
The adults in this book had me so frustrated and confused. Mainly by their odd and somewhat illegal behavior (for future readers, it’ll be what happens to Deep). However this book is so clever in it’s writing. While I won’t claim to be the expert, it has a series of internal and external voices that emerge throughout the plot. Redmond is our main character, driven by motivations that he doesn’t quite realize or won’t admit. However, throughout the book, other voices emerge such as the popular Elodia, Alice, and Mr. Street. Then you have your narrator, which can sound eerily similar to Redmond, perhaps an older version that is telling us the story. Or perhaps an altered version of the Author. Either way, the narrator can be unreliable at times and will purposely mislead you. Or maybe it was just me. The point being is you’ll be able to read the lines between the lines and discover subtle stories that the reader can and will discover. (The sentence makes more sense in my head.) Even the often hilarious asterisks placed throughout the story add an extra mixture to this memorable book. Not to mention the great art! I can easily see why this book has become so popular. Brock Heasley has a great sense of humor that can be lighthearted and dark without bringing the pacing down. It reminded me a bit of Rick Riordan’s talent of writing humor into intense scenes.
So I’ve mentioned the clever writing. Let’s talk about the characters. Each of them are interesting, are flawed, and unbearably realistic teenagers. I wasn’t too keen on teenagers even when I was one. Mainly because they can be mean, erratic, and easily say harsh things without the repercussions. Actually, that’s a complete lie and generalization that doesn’t pertain to an age group. Instead, we have Elodia, who is a popular girl and completely aware of her status and how it affects others. We also have ‘actual’ Elodia, who despite being popular, considers herself to only have one friend. She’s smart and stands up for people. She sees Red’s potential for more and is forgiving despite many things going wrong.
Alice, a girl that immediately recognized the kindness in Redmond but also the flaws. She’s creative and confident in who she is. Except when she isn’t. She’s loyal, even if that means not always standing by her friends. In short, Heasley does a great job writing characters. I was never waiting to get through a scene or to the next chapter. It was great just reading in the moment and having a laugh.
I tend to perceive an overall meaning in a book. It helps tie up my thoughts about it and I’m sure I’m not alone in this. What I took from Paper Bag Mask was forgiveness. Not just forgiveness from people that apologize but the ones that don’t. The people or events that just happen and there’s really no way to make it the way it was. Everything and everyone changes and we can get lost in the shuffle. We can feel we’re alone or invisible. Redmond calls himself invisible in the very beginning and I easily have felt that way as well. It’s forgiving the little things that get to us and can build up over time. Mistakes that we make and are made against us. Maybe not everything has to have a meaning. Not every book. But I enjoyed what Paper Bag Mask offered and I know many other readers will too.
There’s just so much to say about this book. I’ll try to not create a jumbled mess of a review for you readers. First and foremost, I wanted to somehow reach into the virtual pages of this book and smack Redmond over the head. Not in a vicious way. It’s much like watching a puppy destroy your prized sneakers. It’s cute? But also, whyyyyyyy puppy?! Redmond is the puppy if that wasn’t super clear.
The adults in this book had me so frustrated and confused. Mainly by their odd and somewhat illegal behavior (for future readers, it’ll be what happens to Deep). However this book is so clever in it’s writing. While I won’t claim to be the expert, it has a series of internal and external voices that emerge throughout the plot. Redmond is our main character, driven by motivations that he doesn’t quite realize or won’t admit. However, throughout the book, other voices emerge such as the popular Elodia, Alice, and Mr. Street. Then you have your narrator, which can sound eerily similar to Redmond, perhaps an older version that is telling us the story. Or perhaps an altered version of the Author. Either way, the narrator can be unreliable at times and will purposely mislead you. Or maybe it was just me. The point being is you’ll be able to read the lines between the lines and discover subtle stories that the reader can and will discover. (The sentence makes more sense in my head.) Even the often hilarious asterisks placed throughout the story add an extra mixture to this memorable book. Not to mention the great art! I can easily see why this book has become so popular. Brock Heasley has a great sense of humor that can be lighthearted and dark without bringing the pacing down. It reminded me a bit of Rick Riordan’s talent of writing humor into intense scenes.
So I’ve mentioned the clever writing. Let’s talk about the characters. Each of them are interesting, are flawed, and unbearably realistic teenagers. I wasn’t too keen on teenagers even when I was one. Mainly because they can be mean, erratic, and easily say harsh things without the repercussions. Actually, that’s a complete lie and generalization that doesn’t pertain to an age group. Instead, we have Elodia, who is a popular girl and completely aware of her status and how it affects others. We also have ‘actual’ Elodia, who despite being popular, considers herself to only have one friend. She’s smart and stands up for people. She sees Red’s potential for more and is forgiving despite many things going wrong.
Alice, a girl that immediately recognized the kindness in Redmond but also the flaws. She’s creative and confident in who she is. Except when she isn’t. She’s loyal, even if that means not always standing by her friends. In short, Heasley does a great job writing characters. I was never waiting to get through a scene or to the next chapter. It was great just reading in the moment and having a laugh.
I tend to perceive an overall meaning in a book. It helps tie up my thoughts about it and I’m sure I’m not alone in this. What I took from Paper Bag Mask was forgiveness. Not just forgiveness from people that apologize but the ones that don’t. The people or events that just happen and there’s really no way to make it the way it was. Everything and everyone changes and we can get lost in the shuffle. We can feel we’re alone or invisible. Redmond calls himself invisible in the very beginning and I easily have felt that way as well. It’s forgiving the little things that get to us and can build up over time. Mistakes that we make and are made against us. Maybe not everything has to have a meaning. Not every book. But I enjoyed what Paper Bag Mask offered and I know many other readers will too.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 4, 2025
"Paper Bag Mask" is Brock Heasley's novelized tale of a high school heist he and some of his friends pulled as teenagers. Reimagined as more than just a fun prank, this story combines the hijinks of "Ferris Bueller's Day Off" with the awkward teenage grime of "Napoleon Dynamite".
This novel steps forward as a witty, well-written caper that holds a lot of heart, with messages of forgiveness, being the bigger person, and the consequences of acting without thinking. Heasley's novel is masterfully told, with a delightful and slightly irreverent writing style that elevates the story from another run-of-the-mill high school slice of life story.
I very much enjoyed this book, particularly because of the writing style and fact I had no idea where the story was going. I was excited about what each chapter would bring and what problems or issues the characters would face. Heasley did a wonderful job getting the audience to care about the characters and the decisions they are making. Also, the little drawings before each chapter helped add to that mystery and intrigue, while setting the tone for the overall story.
There were two minor-ish things that keep it from a full 5-star review from me. The first is the amount of sexual innuendo. I know it is probably accurate to the modern high school experience (actually, it was probably incredibly tame), but it seemed a bit clunky in the story. The second was the fact that I felt the story was leaning a little too heavy into the "gross and grimy of being a teenager". They were all written as greasy little idiots, which I get is how a lot of teenagers view themselves, but I felt they weren't given quite enough credit in this story.
Setting aside these two things, I found this book was a delight to read. I can't emphasize enough how much I enjoyed Heasley's writing style and the way he captured the overall essence of the story. It also had a lot more heart to it than I thought a high school heist could have, wrestling with all kinds of important topics about growing up, understanding the consequences of blindly rushing into things, and difficult family dynamics. I would definitely recommend it to people who enjoy stories like the movies I mentioned above or are looking for something new to try.
*Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for a review.*
This novel steps forward as a witty, well-written caper that holds a lot of heart, with messages of forgiveness, being the bigger person, and the consequences of acting without thinking. Heasley's novel is masterfully told, with a delightful and slightly irreverent writing style that elevates the story from another run-of-the-mill high school slice of life story.
I very much enjoyed this book, particularly because of the writing style and fact I had no idea where the story was going. I was excited about what each chapter would bring and what problems or issues the characters would face. Heasley did a wonderful job getting the audience to care about the characters and the decisions they are making. Also, the little drawings before each chapter helped add to that mystery and intrigue, while setting the tone for the overall story.
There were two minor-ish things that keep it from a full 5-star review from me. The first is the amount of sexual innuendo. I know it is probably accurate to the modern high school experience (actually, it was probably incredibly tame), but it seemed a bit clunky in the story. The second was the fact that I felt the story was leaning a little too heavy into the "gross and grimy of being a teenager". They were all written as greasy little idiots, which I get is how a lot of teenagers view themselves, but I felt they weren't given quite enough credit in this story.
Setting aside these two things, I found this book was a delight to read. I can't emphasize enough how much I enjoyed Heasley's writing style and the way he captured the overall essence of the story. It also had a lot more heart to it than I thought a high school heist could have, wrestling with all kinds of important topics about growing up, understanding the consequences of blindly rushing into things, and difficult family dynamics. I would definitely recommend it to people who enjoy stories like the movies I mentioned above or are looking for something new to try.
*Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for a review.*
May 17, 2025
Paper Bag Mask, authored by Brock Heasley, will hook you after the first few paragraphs. It is very descriptive, and I felt like I was one of the characters.
The story can be a great conversation starter between parents, teenagers, and friends.
If you are a teenager, you may be trying to figure out who you are and how you fit in. You will enjoy the twists, turns, and the unlikely friendships developed between the characters. These characters come from different backgrounds. When they came together for one cause, they realized each was not so bad and had more in common than they thought.
As an adult, do you remember how you felt or how you thought others saw you when you were in high school? Were you invisible, popular, athletic, artistic, in the band, a cheerleader, insecure, didn’t know how to manage peer pressure, etc.? You may remember when reading this fun, intriguing, and can’t-put-down book. Did you think you had to act differently, dress differently, or do something out of the ordinary to get others to like you? If you did something you thought was innocent, did it go as you thought it would? Pulling a prank may have been the direction you went. Did it go well? Or did it escalate into something more serious? There were consequences you had no idea could change your life. In this story, the main character, Redmond, stole the Whomper from one of his teachers. Find out what the Whomper is and how this prank went wrong and caused problems between friends, parents, teachers, and school staff.
The bottom line is that this is a great book that everyone can enjoy!
The story can be a great conversation starter between parents, teenagers, and friends.
If you are a teenager, you may be trying to figure out who you are and how you fit in. You will enjoy the twists, turns, and the unlikely friendships developed between the characters. These characters come from different backgrounds. When they came together for one cause, they realized each was not so bad and had more in common than they thought.
As an adult, do you remember how you felt or how you thought others saw you when you were in high school? Were you invisible, popular, athletic, artistic, in the band, a cheerleader, insecure, didn’t know how to manage peer pressure, etc.? You may remember when reading this fun, intriguing, and can’t-put-down book. Did you think you had to act differently, dress differently, or do something out of the ordinary to get others to like you? If you did something you thought was innocent, did it go as you thought it would? Pulling a prank may have been the direction you went. Did it go well? Or did it escalate into something more serious? There were consequences you had no idea could change your life. In this story, the main character, Redmond, stole the Whomper from one of his teachers. Find out what the Whomper is and how this prank went wrong and caused problems between friends, parents, teachers, and school staff.
The bottom line is that this is a great book that everyone can enjoy!
May 28, 2025
"Paper Bag Mask" is a page turner! It's witty, suspenseful, funny, heartfelt, and all the good things. Heasley has a very enjoyable story-telling style, and I quickly became invested in Redmond, the whole paper bag gang, and the fate of the Whomper. It's an absolutely wild ride - based on real events (!!) - but also a heartfelt journey of self-discovery, which I think anyone who is or has ever felt like an invisible teenager can easily relate to.
The illustrations throughout are a delightful and whimsical addition to the story, and the footnotes add a fun, sometimes sardonic element. The chapters are the perfect length and have exciting enough "cliffhangers" that you'll want to "just one more" yourself into the wee hours. (I had no regrets in doing so!)
I highly recommend adding this to your TBR list (and then actually reading it asap).
The illustrations throughout are a delightful and whimsical addition to the story, and the footnotes add a fun, sometimes sardonic element. The chapters are the perfect length and have exciting enough "cliffhangers" that you'll want to "just one more" yourself into the wee hours. (I had no regrets in doing so!)
I highly recommend adding this to your TBR list (and then actually reading it asap).
May 13, 2025
This book seriously makes me smile, giggle or nod my head the entire time. I found myself saying "Oh my gosh!" over and over! It is so fun to read and takes me back to a different time. I love the heartwarming nostalgic feeling I have while reading it. Brock captured the times, the characters and the young full-of-life personalities so wonderfully! If you want to smile and laugh a lot read it. I know I'll go back to it again and again when I want to think of young mischief and all that we learn from it.
June 7, 2025
All the nostalgia without having to relive the teenage angst of high school. Characters are reminiscent of people we all probably know from our own youth. The group’s dynamic was highly entertaining and kept me wanting to see what would happen next. I don’t think I’ve laughed so much with a book as I did with this story in a LONG time. Part mystery, part adventure, the story maintained a great pace, and along with the video illustrations, it was such an enjoyable read. Thanks for pulling us readers into your adventure.
May 14, 2025
I loved this book! It's written for the younger crowd but I sailed right through it as an adult. It is very well written with a great message as well. The characters are fun to follow and though mainly light-hearted, it's got just enough suspense/intrigue to keep you up late reading so that you can find out what happens next. Great read.
May 15, 2025
Took my time reading this book due to real life never slowing down but it was a great read! Brock has been a part of my life for around 20 years. This book, being inspired by his own experience, helped me appreciate him even more. Very easy read with a great style and voice to it. Definitely worth picking up and giving it a chance
December 29, 2018
One hell of a hilarious heist! This whomper of a tale gives new meaning to the idea of misfit charm and the illustrations are com-worthy! Highly recommend for a laugh out loud experience that’s a sure for kick in the funny bone!
May 13, 2025
I am previewing the book and finding it refreshingly fun and intriguing. Stories for and about young adults have always fascinated me, but this one is unique. The plot is intricate enough to keep me guessing, the characters are well drawn and relatable.
May 13, 2025
I really can't wait to read this book!! It is a great story with many plot twists and great characters. I love Brock Heasley's writing and have read several of his books. This one comes out in September so I know what I want for one of my birthday presents!! Yay, Paper Bag Mask!! 💜💜
May 17, 2025
Highly recommended!!
The reading has an entertaining pace and the characters develop consistently.
I love the history. It reminds me of my own experiences at school. The sense of adventure, friendship and belonging.
The reading has an entertaining pace and the characters develop consistently.
I love the history. It reminds me of my own experiences at school. The sense of adventure, friendship and belonging.
May 16, 2025
This is the third book I have read by this author and I have enjoyed each one immensely.
Paper Bag Mask is a fun read. It reminded me of teen movies, full of diverse, relatable characters just trying to figure themselves out.
But then it takes off in a completely unexpected—and totally gripping—direction. The twists kept me turning the pages, but it was the emotional depth and honesty that really stayed with me.
Heasley shares with the reader all the struggles with humor and insight. Whether you’re a teen or long past high school, this story will speak to you.
Paper Bag Mask is a fun read. It reminded me of teen movies, full of diverse, relatable characters just trying to figure themselves out.
But then it takes off in a completely unexpected—and totally gripping—direction. The twists kept me turning the pages, but it was the emotional depth and honesty that really stayed with me.
Heasley shares with the reader all the struggles with humor and insight. Whether you’re a teen or long past high school, this story will speak to you.
May 3, 2025
OK, I admit I'm the person that if I'm reading something boring, I flip to the last chapter to see if it's worth my continued reading. This was NOT the case with this book. Brock Heasley is a great storyteller, and I was "hooked" from the first chapter. Mr. Heasley combines humor, suspense, and a bit of insight to the human psyche to tell a story about a kid from high school who commits an "innocent" and "not-so-innocent" prank on one of his teachers. This is more than a coming-of-age tale. It's about the young man finding out something important about how our actions can sometimes change how others view us. It teaches us that not everything is as it seems, and sometimes we need to dig deeper to find truth. The illustrations and comic strip "video", all done by Mr. Heasley, are an added bonus. Well done, Mr. Heasley! I'm looking forward to reading your next book!
May 19, 2025
The Paper Bag MASK is a fun read. Mr. Heasley uses cultural references that really make me laugh. Every so often it seems like he "breaks the fourth wall" in the way he gives us extra insight in the characters or situations. This too, makes the story more enjoyable.
December 4, 2018
Redmond, the main character in this book, is a teenage boy so flawed and awkwardly relatable that he could be any of us. I couldn’t decide if I liked him or didn’t like him, but I had to keep reading to know what was going to happen to him! I loved the humorous dialogue and narration in this book, and the interactions between the characters took me right back to high school in all its awkwardness and glory. Great story with a good moral for young adults without being corny. Highly recommend!
January 27, 2019
I received a free copy of this book to review. OMG I LOVED this book!!! This book had a very positive impact on me. The characters were all very real and I was rooting for Red the whole time. This book is a good, positive young adult book. I highly recommend it!!!
February 8, 2019
A huge thanks to Hidden Gems for providing me with a copy of this book in return for my review!
This book is about a prank. Kind of. Not really. It's complicated.
AP student Redmond Fairweather steals the whomper.
Ok, so the 'whomper' is this little wooden sword his AP History teacher, Mr. Street, uses as a prop in class. There's nothing particularly special about it - the origin is different every time Mr. Street is asked about it - but he seems strangely fond of it. And when Redmond sees Mr. Street handing a suspicious little bag full of powder to a student, he decides that Mr. Street deserves a little pain.
And then Redmond, Alice and Deep (his two best (and only) friends) are making a ransom video, wearing paper bags over their heads to disguise their identity.
He didn't plan it. He actually meant to give it back almost immediately, but then the exremely popular (and hot) Elodia Cruz confronts him about it, telling him he must not return the whomper. It turns out that Redmond isn't the only one getting weird vibes from his teacher - there are rumours of past interactions with students, not to mention how his current wife was originally a student where Mr. Street was working as a TA.
Bit by bit, Elodia and Red (as Elodia calls him now) gather a team, including members of the school's most popular band. Red and Alice start dating, Deep is clearly falling for the singer of the band, and Elodia is shocked at how much she realises she likes Red. It's all very, very exciting.
Then the plan escalates. They decide to steal the giant whomper (a paper-mache debut to the original built by a past class, measuring about ten whole feet). And then, naturally, there's another ransom video. And finally, Red tells Elodia what he saw happen between Mr. Street and Jasmine (the girl who received the bag of drugs, who also happens to be Elodia's best friend). Linked with the rumours of the 'White Whale', a teacher distributing drugs through a network of students, the gang decide to out Mr. Street. Publicly.
They post all the videos online, including a final one where they destroy the whomper for good, and out Mr. Street as the White Whale. It becomes really quite messy. There are police involved, Alice and Red's relationship is on the line, and they're even interviewed on national television. Red thinks this is it, he's finally been seen, he's liked by the other students. And then it gets worse. And worse. And worse.
This was a super enjoyable book! It was set in high school (I think the students are around 17, so that's the equivalent to Sixth Form here in the UK), so it was aimed at a slightly older audience than a lot of other YA books. It had a great sense of humour throughout, and an informal, 'chatty' kind of vibe. But there was a lot of more important stuff, deeper topics like drugs and even abuse being broached. And of course, there was the typical kid-messing-up-big-time followed by kid-finding-his-true-self aspect that pretty much all coming of age novels have.
I did notice a few tiny mistakes with grammar, simple typos and such, as well as a few instances where double punctuation has been used. This may have been purposeful, to give that whole teen voice, but I thought it just looked incorrect/immature/unprofessional.
Overall, I really did like this. I found myself feeling genuinely embarrassed on Redmond's behalf, and although I could see where he was going so wrong at times, I couldn't help but read on and see what happened. 4.5 stars!
This book is about a prank. Kind of. Not really. It's complicated.
AP student Redmond Fairweather steals the whomper.
Ok, so the 'whomper' is this little wooden sword his AP History teacher, Mr. Street, uses as a prop in class. There's nothing particularly special about it - the origin is different every time Mr. Street is asked about it - but he seems strangely fond of it. And when Redmond sees Mr. Street handing a suspicious little bag full of powder to a student, he decides that Mr. Street deserves a little pain.
And then Redmond, Alice and Deep (his two best (and only) friends) are making a ransom video, wearing paper bags over their heads to disguise their identity.
He didn't plan it. He actually meant to give it back almost immediately, but then the exremely popular (and hot) Elodia Cruz confronts him about it, telling him he must not return the whomper. It turns out that Redmond isn't the only one getting weird vibes from his teacher - there are rumours of past interactions with students, not to mention how his current wife was originally a student where Mr. Street was working as a TA.
Bit by bit, Elodia and Red (as Elodia calls him now) gather a team, including members of the school's most popular band. Red and Alice start dating, Deep is clearly falling for the singer of the band, and Elodia is shocked at how much she realises she likes Red. It's all very, very exciting.
Then the plan escalates. They decide to steal the giant whomper (a paper-mache debut to the original built by a past class, measuring about ten whole feet). And then, naturally, there's another ransom video. And finally, Red tells Elodia what he saw happen between Mr. Street and Jasmine (the girl who received the bag of drugs, who also happens to be Elodia's best friend). Linked with the rumours of the 'White Whale', a teacher distributing drugs through a network of students, the gang decide to out Mr. Street. Publicly.
They post all the videos online, including a final one where they destroy the whomper for good, and out Mr. Street as the White Whale. It becomes really quite messy. There are police involved, Alice and Red's relationship is on the line, and they're even interviewed on national television. Red thinks this is it, he's finally been seen, he's liked by the other students. And then it gets worse. And worse. And worse.
This was a super enjoyable book! It was set in high school (I think the students are around 17, so that's the equivalent to Sixth Form here in the UK), so it was aimed at a slightly older audience than a lot of other YA books. It had a great sense of humour throughout, and an informal, 'chatty' kind of vibe. But there was a lot of more important stuff, deeper topics like drugs and even abuse being broached. And of course, there was the typical kid-messing-up-big-time followed by kid-finding-his-true-self aspect that pretty much all coming of age novels have.
I did notice a few tiny mistakes with grammar, simple typos and such, as well as a few instances where double punctuation has been used. This may have been purposeful, to give that whole teen voice, but I thought it just looked incorrect/immature/unprofessional.
Overall, I really did like this. I found myself feeling genuinely embarrassed on Redmond's behalf, and although I could see where he was going so wrong at times, I couldn't help but read on and see what happened. 4.5 stars!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 13, 2025
You won't believe this is based on a true story, reality really is stranger... The best thing about reading a book by Brock Heasley, is his fun and witty writing style. If you've read his other books, you know that you won't have to wait for the set up to start enjoying the read. He guides you through the story's falls and climbs, joins you on a journey full of antics and shenanigans, but most importantly, lets you get lost in the book, my favorite place to be.
The synopsis introducing the book says it all without giving away too much. Younger readers will enjoy the fun storyline. Adult readers will get to reminisce and delight in the throw backs to older times, (not too old).
I highly recommend reading the other books too, especially The Shift. It is a sci-fi, alternate dimension, faith filled book/movie. Whether you prefer to watch the movie or read the book first, this is definitely one for your list. The Special Edition DVD has a Dark and Light version that is outstanding. It isn't your typical black and white edition; each scene is perfectly lit and enhances the film, making it more captivating. Even my 13 year old son loved every minute of it and he rarely sits through a whole movie with us. And it was his third time watching the movie.
The synopsis introducing the book says it all without giving away too much. Younger readers will enjoy the fun storyline. Adult readers will get to reminisce and delight in the throw backs to older times, (not too old).
I highly recommend reading the other books too, especially The Shift. It is a sci-fi, alternate dimension, faith filled book/movie. Whether you prefer to watch the movie or read the book first, this is definitely one for your list. The Special Edition DVD has a Dark and Light version that is outstanding. It isn't your typical black and white edition; each scene is perfectly lit and enhances the film, making it more captivating. Even my 13 year old son loved every minute of it and he rarely sits through a whole movie with us. And it was his third time watching the movie.
April 29, 2019
The story:
Redmond Fairweather is one of those high-school students no one notices. He and his only two friends, Deep and Alice, are the square pegs of the school. One day, he sees Mr. Street, a charismatic yet sketchy teacher, give what appears to be drugs to another student. To teach him a lesson, he decides to steal The Whomper – a worthless wooden sword that is Mr. Street’s prized possession.
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Redmond Fairweather is one of those high-school students no one notices. He and his only two friends, Deep and Alice, are the square pegs of the school. One day, he sees Mr. Street, a charismatic yet sketchy teacher, give what appears to be drugs to another student. To teach him a lesson, he decides to steal The Whomper – a worthless wooden sword that is Mr. Street’s prized possession.
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May 13, 2025
Brock Heasley’s latest page turner, Paper Bag Mask, has a fascinating narrative. I was hooked from Chapter One as this story took me back to high school, and teenage angst, as I was introduced to Redmond Fairweather, a smart, insecure, creative, good-hearted kid whose super power seems to be invisibility. When he’s noticed, it’s rarely in a good way. But this kid is about to quickly change his course by dumb luck and conviction.
Paper Bag Mask pulls us into the jaw-dropping events that happened in Redmond’s school and life following that pivotal moment. 40% of the story is true, as it is the author who was actually at the center of the shenanigans that went down, and the life-defining consequences.
This wild story has the vibe of some of the popular John Hughes teen movies of the 80’s, as we get to know a group of very diverse kids across the popularity spectrum, laden with quirks and family problems. They become bound together by a mission born out of Redmond’s rash act and impassioned viewpoint. The character development of these unlikely companions is a thing to behold. Whether you’re a teen or a senior, you will relate to their struggles and striving as they search for identity, meaning, and connection.
But this narrative explodes into mind boggling territory! This group of kids, as they go deeper into the plot, start to realize they could get in serious trouble. They devise a plan, under the direction of Redmond, that made me feel like they were pulling off a heist with a complexity, imagination and skill that rivals some thrilling “heist” movies I’ve seen. The storyline is absolutely riveting! I couldn’t read fast enough to keep up with my racing heart. Heasley’s writing hooked me so hard, I couldn’t put it down!
The twists and turns, shocks and stresses, in this briskly paced novel are perfectly balanced with hilarious and moving moments of kids just trying to figure out who they are and where they fit in this world. It’s youthful and vibrant, and will appeal to teens and young adults. But the rich, imaginative and intuitive writing will pull in any thoughtful reader because of Heasley’s truth-telling about our shared human journey. This mature woman not only felt her inner teenager, but related to the stings of life, feeling invisible at times and not fitting in, along with the passionate convictions and the joys of relationship, all explored here.
As Paper Bag Mask concludes, the twists and turns remain. But the author resolves it all with a depth of meaning that I am still pondering upon. At its core, this story is steeped in heart and the paradoxes of life and learning. It’s thrilling and even maddening sometimes, as Heasley pulls us into some difficult circumstances. I felt concern and sorrow right along with so much guilty pleasure as I relished this masterfully written joy ride.
So highly recommend Paper Bag Mask. Going back again for a second read. I know there is more treasure to discover here.
Paper Bag Mask pulls us into the jaw-dropping events that happened in Redmond’s school and life following that pivotal moment. 40% of the story is true, as it is the author who was actually at the center of the shenanigans that went down, and the life-defining consequences.
This wild story has the vibe of some of the popular John Hughes teen movies of the 80’s, as we get to know a group of very diverse kids across the popularity spectrum, laden with quirks and family problems. They become bound together by a mission born out of Redmond’s rash act and impassioned viewpoint. The character development of these unlikely companions is a thing to behold. Whether you’re a teen or a senior, you will relate to their struggles and striving as they search for identity, meaning, and connection.
But this narrative explodes into mind boggling territory! This group of kids, as they go deeper into the plot, start to realize they could get in serious trouble. They devise a plan, under the direction of Redmond, that made me feel like they were pulling off a heist with a complexity, imagination and skill that rivals some thrilling “heist” movies I’ve seen. The storyline is absolutely riveting! I couldn’t read fast enough to keep up with my racing heart. Heasley’s writing hooked me so hard, I couldn’t put it down!
The twists and turns, shocks and stresses, in this briskly paced novel are perfectly balanced with hilarious and moving moments of kids just trying to figure out who they are and where they fit in this world. It’s youthful and vibrant, and will appeal to teens and young adults. But the rich, imaginative and intuitive writing will pull in any thoughtful reader because of Heasley’s truth-telling about our shared human journey. This mature woman not only felt her inner teenager, but related to the stings of life, feeling invisible at times and not fitting in, along with the passionate convictions and the joys of relationship, all explored here.
As Paper Bag Mask concludes, the twists and turns remain. But the author resolves it all with a depth of meaning that I am still pondering upon. At its core, this story is steeped in heart and the paradoxes of life and learning. It’s thrilling and even maddening sometimes, as Heasley pulls us into some difficult circumstances. I felt concern and sorrow right along with so much guilty pleasure as I relished this masterfully written joy ride.
So highly recommend Paper Bag Mask. Going back again for a second read. I know there is more treasure to discover here.
May 13, 2025
Growing up can be a challenge. We’ve all experienced the awkward years at some point - and for many of us, those awkward moments are still something we deal with. However, those years spent developing friendships, learning through the results of choices made and finding out what our core values truly are all help shape us into the person we become.
Paper Bag Mask tells a coming-of-age tale as it follows the shenanigans of a misfit crew navigating their high school years. When Redmond Fairweather makes the decision to take an item of high importance from one of the school’s most popular teachers, the ripple effects become more than Redmond or anyone else thought possible. His seemingly harmless prank takes Redmond from being a relative “nobody” by the social clique's standards and catapults him onto the radar of some of the most popular kids at school and beyond.
In the process, we learn that this story has more layers than what first meets the eye.
I love the author’s writing style as he takes us along for the ride with loveable and relatable characters and a story that draws you in from the first sentence, holding your attention until the last page! I personally enjoyed the pop-culture references and bit of mystery woven throughout as well as seeing some of my own traits and quirks portrayed within the personalities of the characters.
Refreshingly, content concerns are low with infrequent, mild language and any other potentially worrisome topics being handled in a way that gets the point across without making more sensitive readers uncomfortable.
All in all, Paper Bag Mask is a clever, well-written book with a little something for everyone whether you’re still finding your way through the young adult years or young-at-heart.
Paper Bag Mask tells a coming-of-age tale as it follows the shenanigans of a misfit crew navigating their high school years. When Redmond Fairweather makes the decision to take an item of high importance from one of the school’s most popular teachers, the ripple effects become more than Redmond or anyone else thought possible. His seemingly harmless prank takes Redmond from being a relative “nobody” by the social clique's standards and catapults him onto the radar of some of the most popular kids at school and beyond.
In the process, we learn that this story has more layers than what first meets the eye.
I love the author’s writing style as he takes us along for the ride with loveable and relatable characters and a story that draws you in from the first sentence, holding your attention until the last page! I personally enjoyed the pop-culture references and bit of mystery woven throughout as well as seeing some of my own traits and quirks portrayed within the personalities of the characters.
Refreshingly, content concerns are low with infrequent, mild language and any other potentially worrisome topics being handled in a way that gets the point across without making more sensitive readers uncomfortable.
All in all, Paper Bag Mask is a clever, well-written book with a little something for everyone whether you’re still finding your way through the young adult years or young-at-heart.
June 25, 2025
From the moment I finished reading chapter one of PAPER BAG MASK, by Brock Heasley, I was hooked. By the time I had devoured the next several chapters, I realized the weekend...and beyond (thank goodness I'm a retired school teacher), would be a non-stop marathon to the finish line. I belly-laughed my way from cover-to-cover as this true life prank unfolded, mushrooming into a hilariously, suspenseful adventure. The timeless antics and emotions of each teenage character in the story was like a stroll down memory lane. My high school class didn't have a "Whomper", but we pulled off confiscating all the chalkboard erasures, much to the dismay of the entire faculty. That's why Paper Bag Mask, is so much fun to read. It's a true story that spans time, making it a delightful book that students from middle to high school are going to enjoy for many generations. As a retired teacher, this book would be an excellent choice as a read aloud too as teens today need to learn to be entertained through the arena of auditory listening, but Mr. Heasley's graphic illustrations will satisfy their visual hunger when they pop-up sporadically.
I highly recommend parents buy this book for your reluctant reader as the suspenseful, rib-tickling pace of this jammed-packed mystery adventure will have them begging you for a library card! And those kids whose nose can always be found inside a book will love it too!
I highly recommend parents buy this book for your reluctant reader as the suspenseful, rib-tickling pace of this jammed-packed mystery adventure will have them begging you for a library card! And those kids whose nose can always be found inside a book will love it too!
May 13, 2025
Paperback Mask
It is very unusual to find a book that by the end of the first chapter you don't want to put the book down until you have finished the whole book, this is one such book.
Well written showing the different interactions of teenagers in school with the insecurities of growing up and fitting in, making friends and the peer pressure to do things you know you shouldn't.
The book is about one young lad who is 'invisible' to almost everyone, who 'steals' the 'whomper' from one of the teachers and the escapades he and his 'friends' go through putting it up for ransom, taking a larger whomper and the ins and outs of how their relationship change with each other and how they see themselves and how the rest of the school sees them. A fascinating insight into how a rash moment of taking something can change the live's of so many people for both good and bad even when done as a joke.
I feel this should be a must read for all teenagers to help them understand that what they do or say can have consequences for both them and others , not just at the time but in the future.
I cannot express how much I enjoyed reading the book and hope others enjoy it as much as I did. One of the best books I have read in years. I am now going to read it again before finding another book to read. I am looking forward to seeing it adapted and delivered in a movie!!
It is very unusual to find a book that by the end of the first chapter you don't want to put the book down until you have finished the whole book, this is one such book.
Well written showing the different interactions of teenagers in school with the insecurities of growing up and fitting in, making friends and the peer pressure to do things you know you shouldn't.
The book is about one young lad who is 'invisible' to almost everyone, who 'steals' the 'whomper' from one of the teachers and the escapades he and his 'friends' go through putting it up for ransom, taking a larger whomper and the ins and outs of how their relationship change with each other and how they see themselves and how the rest of the school sees them. A fascinating insight into how a rash moment of taking something can change the live's of so many people for both good and bad even when done as a joke.
I feel this should be a must read for all teenagers to help them understand that what they do or say can have consequences for both them and others , not just at the time but in the future.
I cannot express how much I enjoyed reading the book and hope others enjoy it as much as I did. One of the best books I have read in years. I am now going to read it again before finding another book to read. I am looking forward to seeing it adapted and delivered in a movie!!
May 20, 2025
I received an ARC in return for an honest review. For context, I have three children who are riiiiight around their teen years, so I approached Heasley's story with their interests in mind.
Heasley's PAPER BACK MASK is, like any mystery paper bag, more than what it seems. In one way, it's a quirky heist by teens and for teens in protest of a teacher's strange attention on particular students. In another way, it's a coming-of-age story as protagonist Redmond Fairweather yearns for more in his high school life. And still, in another way, there are the deeper, more secretive struggles so many teens face within themselves and their families.
I enjoyed the balance Heasley brought to the storytelling with the oddball antics and more weighted emotional moments. Heasley's narrator also pulls off the shifts between character points of view with ease, and the graphic novel scenes in this novel are a delight. As a writer, my favorite aspect is Heasley's achievement in ending every chapter with a cliffhanger, making the book very, very hard to put down. A terrific read for the young teens in your life. x
Heasley's PAPER BACK MASK is, like any mystery paper bag, more than what it seems. In one way, it's a quirky heist by teens and for teens in protest of a teacher's strange attention on particular students. In another way, it's a coming-of-age story as protagonist Redmond Fairweather yearns for more in his high school life. And still, in another way, there are the deeper, more secretive struggles so many teens face within themselves and their families.
I enjoyed the balance Heasley brought to the storytelling with the oddball antics and more weighted emotional moments. Heasley's narrator also pulls off the shifts between character points of view with ease, and the graphic novel scenes in this novel are a delight. As a writer, my favorite aspect is Heasley's achievement in ending every chapter with a cliffhanger, making the book very, very hard to put down. A terrific read for the young teens in your life. x
March 15, 2019
I received a review copy from the author through #ReviewPit. This does not affect my rating or opinions.
This is a fun book, and I think for the right readers it'll be a great hit. Although the main characters are high school upperclassmen (older teenagers/upper YA), I found the themes and general vibe closer to MG/lower YA, so it may very well resonate more strongly with members/readers of that demographic. Which is not to say that it's simple (in fact, one thing I particularly enjoyed was how the narrative presents ethical dilemmas and the role of personal perspective), just that it's not really my cup of tea.
The characters are mostly likable, if rather quirky/weird; the main storyline is entertaining — though I did think the romance, including the love triangle, was a bit excessive — with several twists which you'll know are coming, because the narrative has several instances of "Little did s/he know, things would go terribly wrong later" (I found it a little tiring, but it does contribute some extra tension in case the heist/ransom scheming isn't enough for you). The ending is a little cheesy, but overall quite satisfying; I had a good time with this one.
This is a fun book, and I think for the right readers it'll be a great hit. Although the main characters are high school upperclassmen (older teenagers/upper YA), I found the themes and general vibe closer to MG/lower YA, so it may very well resonate more strongly with members/readers of that demographic. Which is not to say that it's simple (in fact, one thing I particularly enjoyed was how the narrative presents ethical dilemmas and the role of personal perspective), just that it's not really my cup of tea.
The characters are mostly likable, if rather quirky/weird; the main storyline is entertaining — though I did think the romance, including the love triangle, was a bit excessive — with several twists which you'll know are coming, because the narrative has several instances of "Little did s/he know, things would go terribly wrong later" (I found it a little tiring, but it does contribute some extra tension in case the heist/ransom scheming isn't enough for you). The ending is a little cheesy, but overall quite satisfying; I had a good time with this one.
May 26, 2025
I follow some of Brock Heasley’s writing and film making, and thoroughly enjoy everything I have seen and read so far.
Paper Bag Mask is no exception. Perfect for anyone, especially late teen readers who are in the throws of that time of life. As an older reader though too, I loved it, it was fun to read and reminisce about that time of life, friends, groups, pains, mistakes, etc. picturing scenes like cafeteria scenes and picturing my own old cafeteria.
This takes us on an adventure similar to mistakes we all have made at that age in a fun, engaging, suspenseful, witty way. Love Brock’s writing style with lots of (is it metaphors?), that make you think and say “oh that was a good one!”. It keeps your attention, leaves you hanging, loving the character eccentricities, and relating to their life situations.
Enjoyable read.
Brock is a very versatile writer. I would also highly recommend Brock’s book The Other Side of Fear as well. A true story of things that happened to his family, heartbreaking but needed to be told.
Oh and his film The Shift!
Paper Bag Mask is no exception. Perfect for anyone, especially late teen readers who are in the throws of that time of life. As an older reader though too, I loved it, it was fun to read and reminisce about that time of life, friends, groups, pains, mistakes, etc. picturing scenes like cafeteria scenes and picturing my own old cafeteria.
This takes us on an adventure similar to mistakes we all have made at that age in a fun, engaging, suspenseful, witty way. Love Brock’s writing style with lots of (is it metaphors?), that make you think and say “oh that was a good one!”. It keeps your attention, leaves you hanging, loving the character eccentricities, and relating to their life situations.
Enjoyable read.
Brock is a very versatile writer. I would also highly recommend Brock’s book The Other Side of Fear as well. A true story of things that happened to his family, heartbreaking but needed to be told.
Oh and his film The Shift!
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