> "𝙄 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙡𝙞𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝘿𝙖𝙙 𝙖𝙗𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙄 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙜𝙤𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙄 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙨𝙥𝙚𝙣𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙞𝙢𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝. 𝘼𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙥𝙞𝙙 𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙖𝙡𝙡 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙄’𝙙 𝙩𝙧𝙞𝙚𝙙 𝙩𝙤 𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙙𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙤𝙣 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙘𝙖𝙧𝙚𝙙 𝙖𝙗𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙢𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙖 𝙜𝙪𝙮 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙙𝙧𝙤𝙥𝙥𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨 𝙜𝙤𝙩 𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙙."
Now If you know me, I always give high ratings.
I didn't have high hopes for this one, but it was truly... uninteresting.
It felt like the authore 𝙠𝙣𝙚𝙬 how to write depth into characters, but she didn't know 𝒉𝒐𝒘, and it feels like she didn't feel it.
➥The result:
𝐵𝑎𝑡𝑚𝑎𝑛 𝑤𝑒𝑎𝑟𝑖𝑛𝑔 𝑎 𝑑𝑟𝑒𝑠𝑠.
It felt like the book 𝘸𝘢𝘴 𝘴𝘶𝘱𝘱𝘰𝘴𝘦𝘥 to reach inside the reader, but it just felt a bit... forced? 😭
✅Tyson was shallow.
✅Destiny was shallow.
✅The dad was shallow.
The book had so much potential to turn into something
ᴇᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴᴀʟ
ʜᴇᴀʀᴛᴡᴀʀᴍɪɴɢ
ʙᴇᴀᴜᴛɪғᴜʟ
But what the author decided? 𝙣𝙊
Tyson was shallow:-
His character had potential, through his mum issues, and through his realtionship with Cori (his lil sis) which was basically the only thing I possibly liked about the book.
But he was just a coward throughout almost the whole book, missing every chance he could to man up, being immature enough to hurt her feelings over and over by kissing, touching, or even being close to her even when he kept rejecting her OVER and OVER.
𝐈 𝐇𝐀𝐓𝐄𝐃 𝐃𝐄𝐒𝐓𝐈𝐍𝐘.
She was so immature also.
The way she was so angry at her dad and at her life was so stupid.
Her dad was doing his best as a widower, and yet all she could think of was Tyson this Tyson that.
Like gurl, he ain't no Aaron Warner 😭🙏
She had:
0 self respect
0 maturity
0 emotional intelligence
I think her plot had so much potential, a girl who grew up only with her single dad after her mum abandoned them, a teacher who likes her dad, and the girl feeling like her world is being threatened.
It could've been a beautiful story about family bonds, healing, and friendship and cute romance, but instead
I was pissed through almost the whole thing.
I couldn't feel connected to any of the characters.
I hated, disliked, or sighed almost at most characters.
Even the dad, which had the most potential amongst them all.
It felt like reading a teenage romance.
Not in a "Binding 13" kind of way.
Not in any way, actually.
I cringed so hard, even though I love reading romance.
And everyone somehow had mommy issues in this book.💀🙏
The only good thing about this book was actually it's length. I can't imagine the regret if it was longer.
I know ya all gonna be like "it's a short book, I didn't have enough time to bond with the characters.. yada yada yada"
HAVE ANY OF YOU READ GOOD SHORT BOOKS BEFORE?
THE METAMORPHOSIS?
ORBITING JUPITER?
WHITE NIGHTS?
JUPITER RISING?
These were about 𝘩𝘢𝘭𝘧 or less of this book and they actually made you cry and feel connected nevertheless.
┃This was just 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙞𝙩.
I only liked this quote and the one at the beginning of this review, so it felt only fair to share them with you:
> "𝙄 𝙡𝙚𝙩 𝙞𝙩 𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙧 𝙤𝙣 𝘿𝙖𝙙’𝙨 𝙛𝙖𝙘𝙚. 𝙍𝙚𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙖𝙣𝙜𝙚𝙧 𝙗𝙪𝙞𝙡𝙩 𝙪𝙥 𝙞𝙣 𝙢𝙮 𝙘𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙩 𝙖𝙨 𝙄 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙞𝙚𝙙 𝙝𝙞𝙢. 𝙒𝙝𝙮 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙄 𝙨𝙪𝙘𝙝 𝙖 𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙧𝙞𝙗𝙡𝙚 𝙙𝙖𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙩𝙚𝙧? 𝙄 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙧𝙞𝙙𝙞𝙘𝙪𝙡𝙤𝙪𝙨 𝙞𝙛 𝙄 𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝𝙩 𝙞𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙤𝙠𝙖𝙮 𝙩𝙤 𝙧𝙪𝙣 𝙖𝙧𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙖 𝙗𝙤𝙮 𝙗𝙚𝙝𝙞𝙣𝙙 𝘿𝙖𝙙’𝙨 𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠. 𝙃𝙚 𝙙𝙚𝙨𝙚𝙧𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙗𝙚𝙩𝙩𝙚𝙧 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩. 𝙃𝙚’𝙙 𝙖𝙡𝙬𝙖𝙮𝙨 𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙩𝙚𝙘𝙩𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙚. 𝙒𝙝𝙮 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙮 𝙙𝙞𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙣𝙩? "
2/5
★★👎❌