This could have been a promising story except for:
Punctuation problems
Inundation of misused words: as an example "were" instead of we're
Belaboring of the "I only date black men" trope
Story is supposed to be set in NYC: I don't know which NYC though. Last time I checked, except for the lakes in Central Park and Prospect Park - there ain't no damn lakes in the city.
If you are going to talk about a city, for Pete's sake get the basics right - damnit!
You cannot place a call to the airport to book a flight - that is an impossibility.