ARC audiobook provided by NetGalley and the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
“The Pale Ones” is a short book, really more of a novella, that follows the narrator, a used bookseller, as he is pulled in by a purported older bookseller, Harris, to embark on a trip north to procure more used books to sell. As their travels proceed from stop to stop, the narrator slowly becomes more and more disconcerted by strange happenings and hints of things lurking just outside of his grasp. Harris appears to transform along the way, becoming more and more unlikeable, fueling the narrator’s anger and unease, as well as giving an extra edge to the mysterious occurrences he encounters. Is there something lurking just out of sight? What exactly is the narrator experiencing? Is Harris who he says he is? How will the trip end? As the novella nears its conclusion, the questions pile up and things just get weirder and weirder. Maybe the real question is: can the reader trust the narrator?
Let me first preface my review by saying I’m a true book nerd, and the description of this novella, a book about books, drew me in. As a result, I was absolutely thrilled to get the chance to read this novella. The description had me hooked, and the author didn’t disappoint in his prose and world-building. The author’s descriptions of the environments the duo travels through are fantastic, as are his descriptions of the characters. This beautiful writing style magnetized me, keeping me engaged through to the very end.
That being said, I thought I would love this book. The fact is: I didn’t. The plot was slow and overall uneventful. The entire plot can be summed up with two questions: (1) are a few strange occurrences indicative of something not natural; or (2) are we dealing with an unreliable narrator? These two questions mixed with the author’s excellent prose could have led to a magnificent horror novella. However, the storyline only gets the reader partway into exploring and answering each of those questions. It is as if the author started down both avenues, but gave up ¼ of the way through. Add a few hundred pages, and you may just get the whole story flushed out. The author seems to attempt to wrap up the novella in a hurry at the end, but it just left me frustrated as it definitely doesn’t end on a high note.
My copy of this novella was an audiobook, so I must comment on the narrator. I do believe he did a good job. He paced the novella as best as he could given the storyline, and the voices he gave to the characters really brought them to life.
Overall, this novella just fell flat for me. It is disjointed and kind of rambling, and the plot is generally lacking. Yes, the atmosphere and prose are beautifully written; however, the storyline is simply inadequate. I’m horribly disappointed as I had such high hopes for this book. I’m honestly baffled by the high reviews some people have given this novella, as it just doesn’t hold up. Unfortunately, I just can’t recommend this novella. The only reason I gave this novella two stars is because the author did paint the atmospheric picture beautifully and had excellent prose, and the narrator did a good job. However, that just doesn’t make this novella worthwhile.