This book started out pretty good, then it into the 'why is this even necessary' territory, and then the lst third of it ws just stupid, useless crap (So stupid. Especially everything to do with C. T. 'Tarik' Jordan. He wouldn't even count as well-thought-out if he only made a cameo appearance as a stableboy let alone the leading man. And Kady just seemed to change character whenever the author needed.). I was not horrified. It wasn't as bad as some of Deveraux's other works, but it also wasn't up to par with A Knight in Shining Armor or Remembrance. Overall, a disappointment.
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YOU SHALL NOT PASS...if you don't want to read some spoilers.
If not getting shot relies on being recognized, why wear a mask? And if it's just a ploy to make the girl like you, why wear a mask that might scare the sh*t out of her? And why would you think this is a good way to make someone like you?If Ruth shut down the mines and the town, then she wouldn't have had any income, and unless were trying to imagine that the mines were gushing up silver like a white rapid, she really shouldn't have been able to live so extravagently and still had a fortune left over for her dynasty. Silver wasn't THAT highly vlued. If the timeline was altered by things with the Lost Lady Mine, doesn't that refute Kady and Ruth's whole hypothesis that everything Kady experienced in the past had already happened and was 'meant' to happen? If Ruth already knew Kady and she was the one to put away the wedding dress in the beginning, shouldn't Cole have already known Kady and have already hidden the gold?Does this mean that Gamal managed to seduce Ruth with nerly the exact same timing as he had in the original timeline? And what about her husband? Kady tells Tarik(the original) that Ruth would make a good wife for Gamal, so is she planning Mr. Jordan's demise? Do the lovers kill him off so he won't find out the latest addition to the Jordan family isn't a Jordan, at all? And if they do, why didn't they give C. T. Jordan Gamal's last name? Why did they even name him C. T. (assuming they did)? How did Tarik(the 'hero') come to be the same person when his rebellious, teenaged great-great-granddaddy didn't have his reason to be angry at his mom anymore? I mean, if Ruth wasn't grief-crazy and didn't lock him up in Denver, C. T. wouldn't have been angry. If C. T. weren't angry, he wouldn't have run away and might never have had reason to leave Colorado. If C. T. didn't go to New York as a runaway at sixteen, he wouldn't have had the same experiences and very likely wouldn't have met whatever woman he originally married. If he didn't marry that woman, they wouldn't have had Tarik's great-grandpa and he wouldn't have had Tarik's grandpa and so on and so forth. They would have married other people and had other children at other times and there would be no C. T. Jordan(the fifth?). Even if, by some miracle, they all met the right people at the right time and had just the right children, they would've had different names because there wouldn't have been a will saying that all first born sons had to be named C. T. (BTW, why did the Jordan men comply to the will or even keep it around and stalk some poor little girl in Ohio if the will wouldn't hold up in court anyway? Why write up papers to file a civil suit against Kady if you knew from the start that she never really inheritted your money?)If Kady never had her heart to heart with Ruth, she'd never have been put into the will and that dress never would've been made, let alone put inside a flour tin with all the right gewdads for timetravel. Therefore, our heroine never should have gone to New York and met C. T. Jordan (who rightfully shouldn't have existed anyway), she should have married that jerkoff Gregory and withered away into misery.
Flaws. These are either huge, gaping holes int the foundation of this story, or... no, nevermind, they're just that. There is no or. This is very disppointing.