Now, I am going to start this off by warning that in order to discuss The Martian Girl properly I will need to talk about the ending of the book and the twist that comes in the last few pages. I wouldn’t be doing this if it weren’t for the fact that it has a bearing on how I felt about the book up until then, how I then felt about the book, and whether or not I could lay all my niggling doubts about the novel to rest because of the twist.
However, I promise that I will give fair warning so, if you really don’t want to have any inkling about how The Martian Girl ends, you have the chance to stop reading well before you inadvertently catch a glimpse of something that means you now HAVE to read on because it’s too late, dammit, to unsee what has been written! So, I am thinking of writing SPOILER
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Set in London, the novel goes back and forth between the present day and 1898 and the interconnected story-lines of present-day Jean and 19th century Kate French. The link comes from Jean’s attempts to write a monologue about Kate French, a mind-reader called The Martian Girl, that she is planning to perform at a small London theatre. Jean’s work as a freelance journalist is piecemeal and poorly paid - and becoming ever more poorly paid as the print media continues to tighten its belt in order to survive. Her project is being funded by her married lover, Coates, a barrister who it turns out has quit his chambers (for reasons that become more apparent as the book progresses), but Jean is already doubting whether or not she will ever perform her monologue. As she continues to write and research what happened to the real-life character of Kate French, and her mysterious disappearance, it becomes ever clearer to Jean and to us that what she is actually doing is writing a novel.
This is clever as it enables Andrew Martin to switch easily between the present day story and that of Kate in 1898 but without us either having to read Jean ‘speaking’ her monologue or read her explanations to others about what she is going to include in her performance. Instead, we get to read about Kate through the excerpts from Jean’s burgeoning novel and what Jean discovers from old papers and articles. It also means that Martin can concentrate on each woman’s story and the building tension as it becomes clear that they are both in danger.
In 1898, Kate French, a stage performer, applies to work as the assistant of one Joseph Draper some years after his previous partner has left for Australia. From the outset, Draper appears odd and even threatening, but Kate needs regular, paid work so that she can care for her retired police officer father. Draper decides, reluctantly, to take her on and train her up in the complicated method used by stage mind readers to persuade their audiences that they are truly psychic. Martin’s impeccably researched descriptions of how different words and numbers, and the order in which they are used, denote different objects is fascinating. I came away from the book with a deep respect for the real performers back in their 19th century heyday.
Things become more mysterious when on a few occasions Kate intuits what Draper is holding before he has the chance to use their complex code to tell her. On the last occasion her description of what she sees puts her in danger leading to her disappearance - an event that is still a mystery at the time Jean begins to write about her.
In the present day, Jean is in very real danger from Coates, a violent man who has continuous conversations in his mind with a voice he believes to be his Head of Chambers. A voice which is egging him on to commit ever greater acts of violence. As the book continues we get to see Coates unravelling before our eyes while, at the same time, seeing the world as it looks and behaves according to Coates himself. We see his treatment of women (Jean, his wife, Camilla, acquaintances, sex workers) from his perspective and from those of Jean; Camilla; a private detective (and part-time shepherd!) who Camilla has employed to discover whom Coates is having an affair with; and to a lesser extent former work colleagues. Jean in particular, however, has very little inkling of Coates’ real character. Nor that his increasing paranoia has led him to believe that her novel is a thinly-veiled description of what he has done, and that Kate’s apparently genuine psychic skills in her novel are Jean’s way of attempting to blackmail him.
Martin does an excellent job of ratcheting up the suspense and fear in both settings. The increasing danger in which both Kate and Jean find themselves is cleverly done and in both cases it is added to by the two women’s lack of understanding of how their innocent actions are taken by two dangerous men.
Some other reviewers have said that they prefer the story of Kate French to that of Jean, with a few saying that they would have been happier if the entire novel had been about Kate French without the conceit of her being a character in a novel within a novel. Now, some of that might be down to their being fans of Martin’s series of Jim Stringer historical crime novels that are set in the early 20th century Edwardian England. I have to confess that I hadn’t heard of them before looking up what else Martin had written other than The Martian Girl. I am now tempted to try his Stringer series based purely on how well he captures late Victorian London.
That being said, I also thought the present day story was well written. The disorienting sensation of seeing the world through the eyes of a dangerous, deranged man was at times genuinely frightening. And I am someone who will quite cheerfully read gory crime novels late at night, while possibly eating cheese, and then fall asleep without any fear of nightmares. Now, having to fend off a cheese-mad cat on the other hand…
The final twist was an exceedingly clever one. I didn’t see it coming (and not just because I am doing my best to wean myself off the habit of reading the last few pages of a book so that if I die unexpectedly I will at least know what happens). It was a genuine surprise, but not because there was nothing to connect it with the preceding 322 pages - whenever I read that sort of ‘surprise’ ending I feel furious, and am, apparently, very grumpy for the rest of the day. A quite understandable reaction to my mind. That sort of ending just smacks of poor writing and, ultimately, a lack of belief and interest on the part of the author in their own characters.
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RIght, if you are still reading now then you have been warned! I am going to be discussing that ingenious twist. Sorry, but I have to in order to explain why I had a bit of a problem with this novel right up until I read those final three pages.
The twist is that this book is a novel within a novel within a novel. Jean, the supposed author of a potential novel about Kate French and her mysterious disappearance at the end of the 19th Century, is herself a construct created by Sally Wilkinson, a writer on the magazine edited by a woman called Camilla. It turns out that this Camilla is, ‘the model for the Camilla of her novel…[but as] far as Sally knew, the real Camilla’s husband was not going off the rails, and it would be a great surprise if he did, because he had an MBE.’ (That final remark did make me gurgle with laughter when I read it, as I believe Martin meant to happen.)
To further confuse things, as the ‘real’ Sally admits, she has also used her own name, along with the names of other work colleagues, and, in an earlier part of the novel, pretty much described word for word an actual magazine features meeting she attended. As she points out, as well as changing Camilla’s name and the names of her work colleagues, ‘She would have to begin by changing her own name, since it was bad manners to put yourself into your own fiction without at least pretending you were not doing so.’ Boom! Take that Paul Auster.
Suddenly, the reader has to go back over the whole novel and look at it from this new perspective. On top of the disorienting sensation of seeing the world through Coates’ eyes, interspersed, with seeing either the same events or Coates himself through the eyes of other (more normal) people, there is now the knowledge that as well as Jean’s novel, the whole of The Martian Girl is meant to be a first attempt at a whole novel by Sally Wilkinson. Not only are Jean, Coates, Kate, and Draper et al all characters created by Sally rather than by Andrew Martin, as it were; now, we learn, the characters of Camilla, Sally, and the other participants of the magazine’s features meeting are actually ‘real’ people who Sally has used in her novel without even changing their names. (Come on, keep up, it’s all a bit of a wibbly-wobbly, Scooby Doo, mind-fuck but it does make sense, once you get your head round it all.)
It is a brilliant twist. Yes, people have done it before, but Martin pulls it off so well that it is a genuine surprise (unless you chose to ignore my spoilers warning and kept reading). The trouble is,or at least it was for me, how well Martin captures the mistakes of many first-time authors: sudden long pieces of information that the writer couldn’t bear to cut because they spent sooo long researching all this stuff; quirky characters who came to the aspiring novelist in a flash and they don’t yet have the experience to see it was a quirk too far (part-time PI, part-time shepherd, anyone?*); the odd sentence describing someone’s thoughts using words that probably no person, in the midst of a huge emotional upheaval, would use in real life (well, except that linguistic god Stephen Fry, possibly); the sometimes flatness of emotion and lacking of one iota of self-preservation (at one stage Jean muses that Coates’ air of menace is down to his ‘maleness’ because, to date, he hasn’t killed her despite them spending quite a lot of time alone in the half-empty block of flats where she lives.); the overall sensation that within the confines of the plot the love triangle between Coates, Jean and Camilla reads as a pastiche; the fact that Jean barely talks to another woman, let alone has any apparent relationship with female friends or family.
And, here’s the problem I have. Martin’s twist is so well done, and his book is such a clever recreation of an author’s first novel (or at least first draft of a first novel) that there were moments as I was reading it when I became annoyed, a little bored, and even a couple of times contemplated giving up and not finishing it. The only thing that stopped me was the fact normal life had been upended by the Corona virus, I was self-isolating for a good long while, and was trying to eke out my books as much as possible. And, if I had given up I wouldn’t have discovered what a genius book Andrew Martin had written.
So, there we have it, a very clever novel that might have been too successful in its recreation of a new author’s errors and fixations for some of its readers to get all the way to the end. I hope that those readers are few in number, and that, at some stage, they happen to mention to someone else that they tried to read The Martian Girl and stopped partway, only for that other person to convince them that they need to go back and read the whole book (without turning to the end to read the twist first) because the pay-off will be well worth their so-doing.
*Hey, in a long-abandoned attempt at a crime novel I once had a flatulent bar-owning detective with a bizarre attachment to notelets. Eventually, I saw the light, but I did hang on to both the character and the plot for far longer than I should have done. Then, last year I began reading Mick Herron’s Slough House series, with the amazing Jackson Lamb, and saw how a great writer can create a hard-drinking, flatulent investigative genius that also seems real. Sir, I salute you.