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by Anitha Rathod

13 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 8, 2018

Reviews

[Timothy · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a story designed specifically towards the younger generations. While there are many grammatical and spelling errors, this short picture story's purpose remains true. Specifically that people should break the molds or roles that they are forced into and become their true selves.

Additionally, this story, while very short, seems to have rushed important character development to get to the climax and conclusion. The pictures while crudely drawn would potentially help children follow the story better.

Overall, I gave this story a 3/5 because of grammatical errors and the rushed plot.

**I received this as part of a goodreads giveaway.

[Melissa · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book is along the line of books like The Paper Bag Princess that aim to change the view that princesses are just for looks.

[Kelly Knapp · Rating 1 out of 5]

Such Promise, but fell flat!

This is a short story that i would have been happy to use in the classroom but for the lack of a properly proofread and edited manuscript. The number of spelling errors is minor but the missing words and serious grammar error make this story a poor example for our children. While there are practical reasons for accepting mis-spellings and grammar errors in children's writings, it is essential that only best examples be accepted for recommendation.

[Alyssa · Rating 3 out of 5]

I won this as an ebook and it took me a brief few moments to read through this. I thought it was a great story standing up for girls. It talks about how girls can be strong and brave and not be fearful in any type of situation. Although this story had some spelling mistakes, it was a good story and definitely good to read to kids or for kids to pick up and read themselves. It’s a good kids story in my opinion.

[Christy · Rating 5 out of 5]

I won this e-book through Goodreads and read it with my 7-year old niece. I enjoyed the book and thought it had a really good message and story. Here is Mia's review: I like that the princess beat up the monster. Then she became queen for her bravery. I was super interested and thought it was really cool...I loved the book.

[Vivi Alfonso · Rating 5 out of 5]

Girl power!

Love the message this book gives, it teaches girls of all ages how strong and brave we can be. And how we can’t let the Society place us in a standard box.