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The Penitent Assassin
Thirty years ago, when Mallor was a child, he was the sole survivor of genocide. Five years ago, while pursuing his revenge he was ambushed and killed. His goddess offered him a chance to return on the condition he became her assassin. Mallor agreed.
Now, he is back, in the dank city where it all began using an old identity to hunt down a list of old foes, but thirty-six hours before his revenge would be complete, he learns a couple of things; he has a daughter, she's been kidnapped by a sadistic magic abuser and the price for her release would not only ruin all of his plans but also kill his goddess.
Mallor is nobody's hero, but can he sacrifice his daughter to save his goddess, or will he forsake his faith and his need for revenge to rescue her instead? In this gritty fantasy novel where nothing is quite what it seems you won't know what Mallor will do until the bitter end.
Now, he is back, in the dank city where it all began using an old identity to hunt down a list of old foes, but thirty-six hours before his revenge would be complete, he learns a couple of things; he has a daughter, she's been kidnapped by a sadistic magic abuser and the price for her release would not only ruin all of his plans but also kill his goddess.
Mallor is nobody's hero, but can he sacrifice his daughter to save his goddess, or will he forsake his faith and his need for revenge to rescue her instead? In this gritty fantasy novel where nothing is quite what it seems you won't know what Mallor will do until the bitter end.
390 pages, Paperback
First published August 26, 2011
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About the author
Shawn Wickersheim
6 books80 followersShawn Wickersheim lives in historic Woodstock Illinois with his wife and children.
His books include: The Penitent Assassin and The Savage Nobles trilogy ("Stolen Dagger", "Stolen Justice" and "Stolen Crown" -- formerly known as The Rush of Betrayal books).
Some have called these books 'dark or grimdark fantasy', others have called them 'epic fantasy'...he'll leave it to you to decide how you want to label them while he gets back to writing/editing the next book in the series, a stand-alone sequel to both The Penitent Assassin and The Savage Nobles trilogy.
Thanks and as always, Happy Reading.
His books include: The Penitent Assassin and The Savage Nobles trilogy ("Stolen Dagger", "Stolen Justice" and "Stolen Crown" -- formerly known as The Rush of Betrayal books).
Some have called these books 'dark or grimdark fantasy', others have called them 'epic fantasy'...he'll leave it to you to decide how you want to label them while he gets back to writing/editing the next book in the series, a stand-alone sequel to both The Penitent Assassin and The Savage Nobles trilogy.
Thanks and as always, Happy Reading.
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December 13, 2017
Excellent from the start. This is a fast paced story following the culmination of the Penitent Assassin's years long mission. It is complex and political and largely based around one city which I picture as a cross between industrial, Victorian London and medieval Milan (I might be alone there?)
Brutal and action packed, The Penitent Assassin is a well written story of loss and regret, a struggle between gods and their followers and, for the most part, of revenge!
The magic is unique and fascinating, as is the setting.
I highly recommend this fast and furious tale.
Brutal and action packed, The Penitent Assassin is a well written story of loss and regret, a struggle between gods and their followers and, for the most part, of revenge!
The magic is unique and fascinating, as is the setting.
I highly recommend this fast and furious tale.
October 25, 2018
From the review on Knaak's Knoll ( https://www.facebook.com/KnaaksKnoll/ )
The Penitent Assassin by Shawn Wickersheim
This is one of two reviews long overdue (I hope to have the other before long).
The Penitent Assassin is the story of Mallor, whose skills are legendary and whose identities are many. He would like nothing more than to be free of his past, but that past has earned him enemies and rivals bent on not only their various goals, but his destruction. Worse, some see him as a tool to use first, with his daughter to key to his submission.
The Penitent Assassin is a brutal, gritty novel with a host of intriguing, albeit often vicious characters. Mallor is no saint and at times is brutal himself. Still, the reader can see how he's become that way, including the shocking secret he has been hiding.
Grimdark readers will appreciate the depths of the story. A few characters pop in and out abruptly, but otherwise, this is well-paced, dark fantasy adventure you should check out.
Follow the author on his Facebook page at: https://www.facebook.com/ShawnWickers...
https://www.amazon.com/Penitent-Assas...
The Penitent Assassin by Shawn Wickersheim
This is one of two reviews long overdue (I hope to have the other before long).
The Penitent Assassin is the story of Mallor, whose skills are legendary and whose identities are many. He would like nothing more than to be free of his past, but that past has earned him enemies and rivals bent on not only their various goals, but his destruction. Worse, some see him as a tool to use first, with his daughter to key to his submission.
The Penitent Assassin is a brutal, gritty novel with a host of intriguing, albeit often vicious characters. Mallor is no saint and at times is brutal himself. Still, the reader can see how he's become that way, including the shocking secret he has been hiding.
Grimdark readers will appreciate the depths of the story. A few characters pop in and out abruptly, but otherwise, this is well-paced, dark fantasy adventure you should check out.
Follow the author on his Facebook page at: https://www.facebook.com/ShawnWickers...
https://www.amazon.com/Penitent-Assas...
November 13, 2017
Another very enjoyable read.
This is a deliciously dark tale of magic, violence, murder, sex, addiction, love and faith, (Religion). So, pretty much everything you can think of, which makes this a very good stand-alone Grimdark novel.
Shawn Wickersheim was previously unknown to me until he befriended me via Facebook. (I am Facebook friends with a handful of fantasy authors). He made no attempt to promote his book, I simply looked him up when I saw he was an author. I am so pleased that I did.
This is quite a complicated tale that keeps you guessing all the way through as to who the bad guys really are. (If, indeed, there is any real difference between good and evil in their world).
Mallor is the main character, although, is he just Mallor? Or, is he, Malcolm Hattendorf? Or, is he Malcolm Halesy? Or, is he Mallandor? You see? complicated already. Don't let this put you off though. It is all beautifully pieced together as you read through this, hard to put down novel.
Without wishing to give away too much of the plot, I will say that the magic system is designed around the Essence of a race that has been wiped out, the Fallerians. (Or have they?) A number of different people, families, are doing deals and screwing each other over left, right and centre in this dark and depraved society. It needs someone to stand up to all these power hungry megalomaniacs! Hmm, who might that person be?
I have to admit that I laughed out loud at the dark humour at the very end of the first chapter. That wasn't the last time that I had a good laugh either.
If you like the sort of dark humour that you might find in, Mark Lawrence or Joe Abercrombie books, give Shawn Wickersheim a try. I shall be surfing Amazon for any future releases.
This is a deliciously dark tale of magic, violence, murder, sex, addiction, love and faith, (Religion). So, pretty much everything you can think of, which makes this a very good stand-alone Grimdark novel.
Shawn Wickersheim was previously unknown to me until he befriended me via Facebook. (I am Facebook friends with a handful of fantasy authors). He made no attempt to promote his book, I simply looked him up when I saw he was an author. I am so pleased that I did.
This is quite a complicated tale that keeps you guessing all the way through as to who the bad guys really are. (If, indeed, there is any real difference between good and evil in their world).
Mallor is the main character, although, is he just Mallor? Or, is he, Malcolm Hattendorf? Or, is he Malcolm Halesy? Or, is he Mallandor? You see? complicated already. Don't let this put you off though. It is all beautifully pieced together as you read through this, hard to put down novel.
Without wishing to give away too much of the plot, I will say that the magic system is designed around the Essence of a race that has been wiped out, the Fallerians. (Or have they?) A number of different people, families, are doing deals and screwing each other over left, right and centre in this dark and depraved society. It needs someone to stand up to all these power hungry megalomaniacs! Hmm, who might that person be?
I have to admit that I laughed out loud at the dark humour at the very end of the first chapter. That wasn't the last time that I had a good laugh either.
If you like the sort of dark humour that you might find in, Mark Lawrence or Joe Abercrombie books, give Shawn Wickersheim a try. I shall be surfing Amazon for any future releases.
July 30, 2015
When I first encountered The Penitent Assassin I was immediately put off by what I deemed a terrible cover. The stock image of some guy with a sword was awful to my eyes and I hope it gets replaced. Fortunately my in-house artist informed me that it wasn't that bad, so I soldiered on and gave this work a go.
Another entrant into Mark Lawrence's Self-Published Fantasy Blog Off competition, and one that fared quite well I might add. Shawn Wickersheim has been on my radar for some time now and my reading of his work is long overdue.
The Penitent Assassin is a dark fantasy right from the get-go, and almost seems to revel in its own depravity a little too much. We're presented with innumerable scenes of graphic violence told in a manner that could well put off many readers. So if you're looking for a work that isn't adhering to the new standard of being as gruesome as possible, look elsewhere.
Mallor is the central protagonist of the piece, so central in fact that the other characters seem to diminish into the foreground of the tale. He's your typical tortured and morally ambiguous lead for a book like this, with the bulk of his motivations being drawn from vengeance.
This increasingly becomes a problem as the ancillary characters needed more chapters in order to establish themselves alongside Mallor. I found myself struggling to care about their plight and felt like it was more of an intrusion into what could well have been rewritten into a first-person narrative.
While this book was released a few years ago, the reality is that there's an absolute glut of dark fantasy tales and it takes something very special to get noticed within that crowd. Fortunately for Wickersheim he incorporates a lot of interesting elements that allow the work to do precisely that.
World-building is scant in this work, and the reason for this is the confusing lack of exposition on the author's part. The tale travels at a breakneck pace throughout with no slowing and in order to do so it sacrifices depth of world for momentum. This comes back to bite the author several times as there are several head-scratching revelations that lack an appropriate amount of foreshadowing. This results in a number of seemingly deus-ex-machina events that only serve to disappoint given the realistic nature of the conflict prior to it.
That's a lot of complaints for a book that I've awarded four stars to, and the reason for my doing so is because in spite of all these issues, Shawn Wickersheim is a tremendous writer with excellent and descriptive prose reminiscent of authors like Matthew Woodring Stover. If this had been on a book shelf in a store with a shiny new cover it most certainly wouldn't have looked out of place, and that's really the bar that any self-published book should have to clear.
The reason for my not expanding much further on the plot is because to do so would spoil the tale. Things start off confusing and it does take some time to get to grips with it, but as each layer is peeled back you begin to see just how calculated every part of the tale has been. The depth of the plotting around Mallor's vengeance, while not alluded to quite enough for my liking, was particularly enjoyable to witness in the final third of the work.
I feel that the pacing could have been sacrificed a little in order to beef up the exposition and world-building elements of the work, but I disagree with those who consider this book too long already. Given the number of balls the author is attempting to juggle, I feel like if anything it should have been longer.
While the conclusion wraps things up nicely rather than setting the stage of a sequel, it didn't match the overall tone of the work. There was a real opportunity for Wickersheim to be very brave with his decisions, and instead he decided against it in the dying chapters of the work. A shame really, as it would have elevated the conclusion even further.
The Penitent Assassin, cover aside, is not without its flaws (including the odd typo). Ultimately though if you want a grisly dark fantasy work with a strong male protagonist who dominates the proceedings then I'd heartily recommend giving this a go.
Another entrant into Mark Lawrence's Self-Published Fantasy Blog Off competition, and one that fared quite well I might add. Shawn Wickersheim has been on my radar for some time now and my reading of his work is long overdue.
The Penitent Assassin is a dark fantasy right from the get-go, and almost seems to revel in its own depravity a little too much. We're presented with innumerable scenes of graphic violence told in a manner that could well put off many readers. So if you're looking for a work that isn't adhering to the new standard of being as gruesome as possible, look elsewhere.
Mallor is the central protagonist of the piece, so central in fact that the other characters seem to diminish into the foreground of the tale. He's your typical tortured and morally ambiguous lead for a book like this, with the bulk of his motivations being drawn from vengeance.
This increasingly becomes a problem as the ancillary characters needed more chapters in order to establish themselves alongside Mallor. I found myself struggling to care about their plight and felt like it was more of an intrusion into what could well have been rewritten into a first-person narrative.
While this book was released a few years ago, the reality is that there's an absolute glut of dark fantasy tales and it takes something very special to get noticed within that crowd. Fortunately for Wickersheim he incorporates a lot of interesting elements that allow the work to do precisely that.
World-building is scant in this work, and the reason for this is the confusing lack of exposition on the author's part. The tale travels at a breakneck pace throughout with no slowing and in order to do so it sacrifices depth of world for momentum. This comes back to bite the author several times as there are several head-scratching revelations that lack an appropriate amount of foreshadowing. This results in a number of seemingly deus-ex-machina events that only serve to disappoint given the realistic nature of the conflict prior to it.
That's a lot of complaints for a book that I've awarded four stars to, and the reason for my doing so is because in spite of all these issues, Shawn Wickersheim is a tremendous writer with excellent and descriptive prose reminiscent of authors like Matthew Woodring Stover. If this had been on a book shelf in a store with a shiny new cover it most certainly wouldn't have looked out of place, and that's really the bar that any self-published book should have to clear.
The reason for my not expanding much further on the plot is because to do so would spoil the tale. Things start off confusing and it does take some time to get to grips with it, but as each layer is peeled back you begin to see just how calculated every part of the tale has been. The depth of the plotting around Mallor's vengeance, while not alluded to quite enough for my liking, was particularly enjoyable to witness in the final third of the work.
I feel that the pacing could have been sacrificed a little in order to beef up the exposition and world-building elements of the work, but I disagree with those who consider this book too long already. Given the number of balls the author is attempting to juggle, I feel like if anything it should have been longer.
While the conclusion wraps things up nicely rather than setting the stage of a sequel, it didn't match the overall tone of the work. There was a real opportunity for Wickersheim to be very brave with his decisions, and instead he decided against it in the dying chapters of the work. A shame really, as it would have elevated the conclusion even further.
The Penitent Assassin, cover aside, is not without its flaws (including the odd typo). Ultimately though if you want a grisly dark fantasy work with a strong male protagonist who dominates the proceedings then I'd heartily recommend giving this a go.
September 29, 2014
I just have to start by mentioning how some novel's start you out with introducing MC's, then giving backgrounds there history and accomplishment's, Others tend to slowly draw you into city's or empire's, and other take you along a long road over maps of different land's.
This novel is ... well I just have to say at times I was puzzled with the writing,I was lost,confused did nnot quite know what was going on at different points of the novel, but the action and excellent writing style of this author had me memorized and I never wanted to leave the story thinking I might miss something important and truly lose my way.
Do not worry as the author has this all planned out, this novel is a distinctive play on chapters and POV that will have the most inexperienced ready back on track in no time , but this is a difficult read at times as you really don't know what is really going on most of the time.
This is a mystery,revenge,brutal and interesting characterized novel I have read in a long time.
I never point my review to what the novel is about , mostly just my enjoyment of reading and I will say this is one of my all-time favorite novels . it will grow with me as there is so much that the reader can experience for himself (take from that what you will)
there is (too me) a defining reference to Moorcocks Elric series that just came into fact after the novel was almost completed.
Ahh another nice point, this novel could have ended so many times, i keep looking to see how many chapters was left and pleasantly surprised about how much more to the story could there be, and always rewarded.
I wanted to get to the end but at the same time loved this world I never wanted to leave, beware this is not your regular fantasy, epic for a fact but never slows down , this frantic pace is just ones of the amazing feats this novel pulls off, and flawlessly.
even close to the end we touch the on the "god's" themselves and brings question can a god be fallible, this amazing journey start's with confusion and keeps the run until nearing the end when you think it would all settle down Its like a shot of adrenalin, and speak's of religion,faith,power corruption,deception and addiction to such an a degree I apluad this author for such fine work.
I will remember this novel forever.
There is so much more for this world and our MC, he might not be the same as in this novel but well potential is always there for redemption and sin for our penitent assassin.
Thanks Shawn Wickersheim ( I wish I didnt read so fast)'
This novel is ... well I just have to say at times I was puzzled with the writing,I was lost,confused did nnot quite know what was going on at different points of the novel, but the action and excellent writing style of this author had me memorized and I never wanted to leave the story thinking I might miss something important and truly lose my way.
Do not worry as the author has this all planned out, this novel is a distinctive play on chapters and POV that will have the most inexperienced ready back on track in no time , but this is a difficult read at times as you really don't know what is really going on most of the time.
This is a mystery,revenge,brutal and interesting characterized novel I have read in a long time.
I never point my review to what the novel is about , mostly just my enjoyment of reading and I will say this is one of my all-time favorite novels . it will grow with me as there is so much that the reader can experience for himself (take from that what you will)
there is (too me) a defining reference to Moorcocks Elric series that just came into fact after the novel was almost completed.
Ahh another nice point, this novel could have ended so many times, i keep looking to see how many chapters was left and pleasantly surprised about how much more to the story could there be, and always rewarded.
I wanted to get to the end but at the same time loved this world I never wanted to leave, beware this is not your regular fantasy, epic for a fact but never slows down , this frantic pace is just ones of the amazing feats this novel pulls off, and flawlessly.
even close to the end we touch the on the "god's" themselves and brings question can a god be fallible, this amazing journey start's with confusion and keeps the run until nearing the end when you think it would all settle down Its like a shot of adrenalin, and speak's of religion,faith,power corruption,deception and addiction to such an a degree I apluad this author for such fine work.
I will remember this novel forever.
There is so much more for this world and our MC, he might not be the same as in this novel but well potential is always there for redemption and sin for our penitent assassin.
Thanks Shawn Wickersheim ( I wish I didnt read so fast)'
March 23, 2012
I read a sample of The Penitent Assassin on Amazon and Wickersheim drew me in from the first paragraph. I enjoyed his writing style and couldn't wait to read the rest of the book.
Let me warn you now, this book is a dark fantasy. Within minutes, you'll sense this in the writing. Well, you'll see it in the scenes too. Wickersheim can be quite descriptive. We have an ongoing joke about the rose petal scene, but you'll have to read his book to find out what we're talking about.
These descriptions drew me in. You can almost feel the rain pounding on your shoulders, the musty and smoke-filled air, the dreary and slouch-shouldered citizens trudging by. I love it!
The magic system is unique. I can't describe it without telling you part of the story, but it's interesting. Where it comes from, how it's used, who can use it. I do need to point out that magic is not the basis of this story. While a big part, you won't see magicians running around spitting fireballs at each other.
The pacing was great, and I mean GREAT! I found myself wondering how the heck Mallor (the main character) could find any more trouble to get himself into. Just when Wickersheim lets you think it's time for a break, he slaps you in the face and says, "Wake up! This baby is just getting started!"
And the twist... Yes, the twist. I don't know why it threw me for such a loop. Probably because I'm usually better at figuring these things out. When I read the twist, I stopped, turned off my kindle and stared at the wall for five minutes. I ran over the previous scenes in my head to see if it fit. It did.
While I haven't read tons of Indie author books, I've read my share over the past year. This is the first Indie book I've given five stars. Not that I didn't enjoy the others. Wickersheim brought his story to life. On top of that, his book is a quality and polished product. I suggest The Penitent Assassin to any lover of urban or dark fantasy.
I asked Shawn if he planned to write a sequel. His response was that it's possible, but he's working on something a little less dark that he hopes to have out this year. So keep your eyes sharp!
Let me warn you now, this book is a dark fantasy. Within minutes, you'll sense this in the writing. Well, you'll see it in the scenes too. Wickersheim can be quite descriptive. We have an ongoing joke about the rose petal scene, but you'll have to read his book to find out what we're talking about.
These descriptions drew me in. You can almost feel the rain pounding on your shoulders, the musty and smoke-filled air, the dreary and slouch-shouldered citizens trudging by. I love it!
The magic system is unique. I can't describe it without telling you part of the story, but it's interesting. Where it comes from, how it's used, who can use it. I do need to point out that magic is not the basis of this story. While a big part, you won't see magicians running around spitting fireballs at each other.
The pacing was great, and I mean GREAT! I found myself wondering how the heck Mallor (the main character) could find any more trouble to get himself into. Just when Wickersheim lets you think it's time for a break, he slaps you in the face and says, "Wake up! This baby is just getting started!"
And the twist... Yes, the twist. I don't know why it threw me for such a loop. Probably because I'm usually better at figuring these things out. When I read the twist, I stopped, turned off my kindle and stared at the wall for five minutes. I ran over the previous scenes in my head to see if it fit. It did.
While I haven't read tons of Indie author books, I've read my share over the past year. This is the first Indie book I've given five stars. Not that I didn't enjoy the others. Wickersheim brought his story to life. On top of that, his book is a quality and polished product. I suggest The Penitent Assassin to any lover of urban or dark fantasy.
I asked Shawn if he planned to write a sequel. His response was that it's possible, but he's working on something a little less dark that he hopes to have out this year. So keep your eyes sharp!
January 5, 2015
Holy Vengeance!
Don’t let this story’s length deter you, Shawn uses every page to peel back and unfold the layers of greed and power that went into forging his dark hero into an assassin. Every character has a darkness – so much so that the very light of the city is dimmed by clouds. The only heroes are those who fight their darker nature in a herculean effort to make the world a brighter place. Everyone else is just trying to get by in a world that changed on them.
The tale begins at the end of a five-year struggle for revenge. Mallor has returned to the city where his old way of life ended in blood and betrayal. He’s not been idle, but his story kicks in as he faces off against the highest echelons of power. Unraveling the past and avenging his own murder with nothing but his memories, the blades he can carry, a promise, and sheer determination, Mallor’s an explosive fighter and tenacious foe on a mission. Every time he is beaten, bloodied, and blown up, Mallor lays low, licks his wounds and comes at them again. The action only slows down enough to allow you to catch up.
Once you have peeled back and fought through enough layers to near the endgame and realize there are more stakes than you realized, your jaw will drop.
Mine did!
I’m looking forward to more of Shawn’s work!
Don’t let this story’s length deter you, Shawn uses every page to peel back and unfold the layers of greed and power that went into forging his dark hero into an assassin. Every character has a darkness – so much so that the very light of the city is dimmed by clouds. The only heroes are those who fight their darker nature in a herculean effort to make the world a brighter place. Everyone else is just trying to get by in a world that changed on them.
The tale begins at the end of a five-year struggle for revenge. Mallor has returned to the city where his old way of life ended in blood and betrayal. He’s not been idle, but his story kicks in as he faces off against the highest echelons of power. Unraveling the past and avenging his own murder with nothing but his memories, the blades he can carry, a promise, and sheer determination, Mallor’s an explosive fighter and tenacious foe on a mission. Every time he is beaten, bloodied, and blown up, Mallor lays low, licks his wounds and comes at them again. The action only slows down enough to allow you to catch up.
Once you have peeled back and fought through enough layers to near the endgame and realize there are more stakes than you realized, your jaw will drop.
Mine did!
I’m looking forward to more of Shawn’s work!
August 29, 2012
“Mallor is nobody’s hero,” but it doesn’t make him any less likable.
The Penitent Assassin by Shawn Wickersheim has all of the elements of a great fantasy novel—superb writing, complicated twists, and unique characters. I thoroughly enjoyed the fast-paced action of this story and found it very hard to put down. Wickersheim is an author to watch out for, and I can honestly say I am a big fan. I hope there is a sequel in the plans, because I am not yet ready to say good-bye to Mallor. Bottom line, a must-read for all fans of dark and gritty fantasy. Give it a try. You will not be disappointed.
The Penitent Assassin by Shawn Wickersheim has all of the elements of a great fantasy novel—superb writing, complicated twists, and unique characters. I thoroughly enjoyed the fast-paced action of this story and found it very hard to put down. Wickersheim is an author to watch out for, and I can honestly say I am a big fan. I hope there is a sequel in the plans, because I am not yet ready to say good-bye to Mallor. Bottom line, a must-read for all fans of dark and gritty fantasy. Give it a try. You will not be disappointed.
October 23, 2015
Is it a tale of heartfelt perseverance, fortitude and human will? Does it tackle slavery in forms one might have not thought of? Does it exude a penchant for family values and keeping one’s word and honor intact? Maybe but in reality it is a story about one spectacular BAMF!!
The story of Mallor starts at a 200 km/hour pace and doesn’t slow with twist, turns and reveals along with “oh no you din’it” again and again before you get to the end. I found myself purposefully rationing my reading just so the story would last and last. The action and story line converges from a few aspects but the reader is primarily following Mallor through his path of revenge, malice and total disdain for a wrong to his people. Mallor takes nothing really personally or is that because after years of revenge he is a consummate sociopath. Probably but there are hints that his soul is not completely tarnished and beyond redemption. Mallor does ask for forgiveness quite a bit but is one searching for forgiveness if he ask it just before he slams a sword into your gut? Mmmmmm probably not, I am thinking.
Mr. Wickersheim’s prose is polished with a flow that is effortless to read and understand. Reveals do not come lightly and many are left to be pondered for quite some time as the story unfolds. This allows for the tension and understanding that any situation Mallor finds himself in is not only going to get worse but he will suffer great in trying to move past it. The MC in any novel is tantamount but I found in the Penitent Assassin the supporting characters to be full and rich not only in the parts they played but the time and development that Mr. Wickersheim put in to them. All and all I really enjoyed this book and Mr. Wickersheim’s writing, so much that I just started The Rush of Betrayal: Deception. Which is another book by Mr. Wickersheim and 10% in I am on the edge of my seat rationing my reading once again.
The story of Mallor starts at a 200 km/hour pace and doesn’t slow with twist, turns and reveals along with “oh no you din’it” again and again before you get to the end. I found myself purposefully rationing my reading just so the story would last and last. The action and story line converges from a few aspects but the reader is primarily following Mallor through his path of revenge, malice and total disdain for a wrong to his people. Mallor takes nothing really personally or is that because after years of revenge he is a consummate sociopath. Probably but there are hints that his soul is not completely tarnished and beyond redemption. Mallor does ask for forgiveness quite a bit but is one searching for forgiveness if he ask it just before he slams a sword into your gut? Mmmmmm probably not, I am thinking.
Mr. Wickersheim’s prose is polished with a flow that is effortless to read and understand. Reveals do not come lightly and many are left to be pondered for quite some time as the story unfolds. This allows for the tension and understanding that any situation Mallor finds himself in is not only going to get worse but he will suffer great in trying to move past it. The MC in any novel is tantamount but I found in the Penitent Assassin the supporting characters to be full and rich not only in the parts they played but the time and development that Mr. Wickersheim put in to them. All and all I really enjoyed this book and Mr. Wickersheim’s writing, so much that I just started The Rush of Betrayal: Deception. Which is another book by Mr. Wickersheim and 10% in I am on the edge of my seat rationing my reading once again.
June 6, 2012
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This is by far the BEST dark fantasy novel I have ever read.
The main character, Mallor, seems like the type of guy you should loathe. But I couldn't help but love him. Mr. Wickersheim developed Mallor perfectly, in that despite the character's many flaws, you just have to stand up and cheer him on. I related to the character, because of Mallor's constant internal struggle to stay off "essence", a drug. I'm a recovering alcoholic and it was wonderful to see a character make it through all the horrible events of the story and not fall prey to the temptation! I cheered out loud each time the character avoided another temptation.
The many twists and layers of the story made me gasp out loud on more than one occasion. I tried my best to figure out the clues, how the ending would go, but couldn't. Then when I got there, all the pieces fell into place. Some things I thought were trivial ended up being vital clues that I simply brushed over. I was surprised but definitely not disappointed by the ending. I'll definitely read this book again and enjoy it just as much the second time around - and even the tenth!
I look forward to reading more from Mr. Wickersheim. With his ability to craft intricate plot layers and three-dimensional characters, all while throwing in some dark humor and fabulous fight scenes, I've become a lifelong fan for sure.
This is by far the BEST dark fantasy novel I have ever read.
The main character, Mallor, seems like the type of guy you should loathe. But I couldn't help but love him. Mr. Wickersheim developed Mallor perfectly, in that despite the character's many flaws, you just have to stand up and cheer him on. I related to the character, because of Mallor's constant internal struggle to stay off "essence", a drug. I'm a recovering alcoholic and it was wonderful to see a character make it through all the horrible events of the story and not fall prey to the temptation! I cheered out loud each time the character avoided another temptation.
The many twists and layers of the story made me gasp out loud on more than one occasion. I tried my best to figure out the clues, how the ending would go, but couldn't. Then when I got there, all the pieces fell into place. Some things I thought were trivial ended up being vital clues that I simply brushed over. I was surprised but definitely not disappointed by the ending. I'll definitely read this book again and enjoy it just as much the second time around - and even the tenth!
I look forward to reading more from Mr. Wickersheim. With his ability to craft intricate plot layers and three-dimensional characters, all while throwing in some dark humor and fabulous fight scenes, I've become a lifelong fan for sure.
January 22, 2012
This is by far the BEST dark fantasy novel I have ever read.
The main character, Mallor, seems like the type of guy you should loathe. But I couldn't help but love him. Mr. Wickersheim developed Mallor perfectly, in that despite the character's many flaws, you just have to stand up and cheer him on. I related to the character, because of Mallor's constant internal struggle to stay off "essence", a drug. I'm a recovering alcoholic and it was wonderful to see a character make it through all the horrible events of the story and not fall prey to the temptation! I cheered out loud each time the character avoided another temptation.
The many twists and layers of the story made me gasp out loud on more than one occasion. I tried my best to figure out the clues, how the ending would go, but couldn't. Then when I got there, all the pieces fell into place. Some things I thought were trivial ended up being vital clues that I simply brushed over. I was surprised but definitely not disappointed by the ending. I'll definitely read this book again and enjoy it just as much the second time around - and even the tenth!
I look forward to reading more from Mr. Wickersheim. With his ability to craft intricate plot layers and three-dimensional characters, all while throwing in some dark humor and fabulous fight scenes, I've become a life long fan for sure.
The main character, Mallor, seems like the type of guy you should loathe. But I couldn't help but love him. Mr. Wickersheim developed Mallor perfectly, in that despite the character's many flaws, you just have to stand up and cheer him on. I related to the character, because of Mallor's constant internal struggle to stay off "essence", a drug. I'm a recovering alcoholic and it was wonderful to see a character make it through all the horrible events of the story and not fall prey to the temptation! I cheered out loud each time the character avoided another temptation.
The many twists and layers of the story made me gasp out loud on more than one occasion. I tried my best to figure out the clues, how the ending would go, but couldn't. Then when I got there, all the pieces fell into place. Some things I thought were trivial ended up being vital clues that I simply brushed over. I was surprised but definitely not disappointed by the ending. I'll definitely read this book again and enjoy it just as much the second time around - and even the tenth!
I look forward to reading more from Mr. Wickersheim. With his ability to craft intricate plot layers and three-dimensional characters, all while throwing in some dark humor and fabulous fight scenes, I've become a life long fan for sure.
May 30, 2014
I finished this book a couple of days ago (because once I started reading it, I couldn't stop so I finished the book within a day) but I've been pondering exactly how to write an organized review of this book without it being ten pages long.
To begin with, I really enjoyed all the characters. Wickersheim does a great job of giving his characters plenty of depth and personality. The main character had the perfect balance of good decision making and bad decision making. I felt as though he were a truly real and believable character.
The plot is excellently written. However I did get confused multiple times throughout the story. I was not prepared for as many twists and turns as there were. I didn't expect any of them. But all of my questions were answered by the end of the book, so I don't feel that any of the twists or my confusion detracted from the story line. But I do feel that I need to read it again to fully grasp every detail that the author included.
I appreciated all of the descriptive details included. I could definitely visualize the story as it played out, which makes a book great in my opinion.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and plan on reading the rest of Wickersheim's work. I highly recommend this author.
To begin with, I really enjoyed all the characters. Wickersheim does a great job of giving his characters plenty of depth and personality. The main character had the perfect balance of good decision making and bad decision making. I felt as though he were a truly real and believable character.
The plot is excellently written. However I did get confused multiple times throughout the story. I was not prepared for as many twists and turns as there were. I didn't expect any of them. But all of my questions were answered by the end of the book, so I don't feel that any of the twists or my confusion detracted from the story line. But I do feel that I need to read it again to fully grasp every detail that the author included.
I appreciated all of the descriptive details included. I could definitely visualize the story as it played out, which makes a book great in my opinion.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and plan on reading the rest of Wickersheim's work. I highly recommend this author.
May 29, 2016
Actually 4.5 stars, but that's quibbling. Towards the end I lost contact with all the secondary characters b/c there were SO many trying to kill Mallor....
Anyway, a great Grimdark fantasy with lots (and I mean LOTS) of blood and gore and intestines wondrously described in all their (sickening) glory - so if you don't like descriptive gut-churning stuff, then don't bother. If you can ignore the gore, then this is quite brilliantly good!
Slow to begin and set the world-build, but one gets attached to Mallor (and all his incarnations) in a way that you begin to think he is really GOOD and trying his best to overcome the evil in the world, but, somehow, you can't forget how EASILY he can kill !! He's out for vengeance, and FFS he relishes this!
It's intricate; it has lots of primary AND secondary character who play large parts; it's a wish to right a wrong; it's ruthless and conscienceless; and ultimately, it's quite sad.
So f*cking brilliant :)
Anyway, a great Grimdark fantasy with lots (and I mean LOTS) of blood and gore and intestines wondrously described in all their (sickening) glory - so if you don't like descriptive gut-churning stuff, then don't bother. If you can ignore the gore, then this is quite brilliantly good!
Slow to begin and set the world-build, but one gets attached to Mallor (and all his incarnations) in a way that you begin to think he is really GOOD and trying his best to overcome the evil in the world, but, somehow, you can't forget how EASILY he can kill !! He's out for vengeance, and FFS he relishes this!
It's intricate; it has lots of primary AND secondary character who play large parts; it's a wish to right a wrong; it's ruthless and conscienceless; and ultimately, it's quite sad.
So f*cking brilliant :)
May 13, 2015
A fun read! Lots of twists and turns with delightfully vile villains. Many things are not as they seem and that is a distinctively good thing. Five well-deserved stars.
June 18, 2018
I enjoyed it - a lot. I may write a Fantasy-Faction review!
May 27, 2014
Action, intrigue and drama. This book has it all. The pace starts out fast and then proceeds to a fever pitch quickly and maintains that through out the entire book. I kept waiting for the action to fall off but it never does. The characters are all likable and the plot is solid. The author is adept at showing and not telling and the string of powerful reveals really tied me to my seat when reading. I had a hard time putting this one down. The main character starts out as something of an anti-hero but there is a definite point where I found him getting to me. By the halfway point I was solidly in his corner. The climax is powerful and the author ties all the plot lines up nicely without getting cute or "clever".
Finally, the prose of the story is powerful. Mood and tone consistent and well maintained throughout. I high suggest this book if you are a fan of epic fantasy set in original worlds. Reminded me of Brandon Sanderson's work a bit in that respect.
Finally, the prose of the story is powerful. Mood and tone consistent and well maintained throughout. I high suggest this book if you are a fan of epic fantasy set in original worlds. Reminded me of Brandon Sanderson's work a bit in that respect.
December 24, 2014
Wow, this book was actually really good!! I actually had some emotional attachment to the main character! Not a bad book at all. If you are looking for something filled with action, suspense, and it nonstop roller coaster ride without much thought, this is the book for you!! Extremely greedy, and not for children!! Great read! Heck, I might even read some other of his books he is pretty good
April 12, 2014
3.5 stars. I love dark and grimdark fantasy so this book is up my alley.
I think the plot is interesting but the story could use some editing. A tightening up, cut some of the fat and the book would have rated higher for me. I just didn't feel invested in these characters and caught myself skimming during the billion action scenes. Most definitely in need of character development to take this from good to great.
I certainly don't mean to disparage this book however. The concepts are really cool and I appreciate the twists. If you like dark fantasy, this is worth reading.
I think the plot is interesting but the story could use some editing. A tightening up, cut some of the fat and the book would have rated higher for me. I just didn't feel invested in these characters and caught myself skimming during the billion action scenes. Most definitely in need of character development to take this from good to great.
I certainly don't mean to disparage this book however. The concepts are really cool and I appreciate the twists. If you like dark fantasy, this is worth reading.
November 10, 2013
Shawn is a very skilled writer. I was transported to the strange magical land he created full of danger, mayhem, and excitement. The characters are still with me after a year, which is saying a lot.
His humor, flair for creating rich backdrops, and fully developed characters added to the steamy nature of the script. I highly recommend the Penitent Assassin too everyone but the prudish or faint of heart!
His humor, flair for creating rich backdrops, and fully developed characters added to the steamy nature of the script. I highly recommend the Penitent Assassin too everyone but the prudish or faint of heart!
March 28, 2012
Highly recommended for all lovers of fantasy of all kinds. Fast-paced, gritty and surprising at every turn, this book picks you up and doesn't let you go until the rollercoaster ride is over. Solidly written, it's several cuts above the usual indie offering and easily the equal of many traditionally published books.
April 2, 2012
The Penitent Assassin is a nonstop fantasy adventure that is definitely dark and, at times, also laugh-out-loud funny. Wickersheim may be a new author but he has a wicked way with words, world building, and creating memorable lines and characters. He weaves just the right amount of magic and mayhem, as well as plenty of sex, lust, and greed.
December 19, 2017
Lots of action
Constantly on edge from one near death encounter to another, you can't help but cheer for this anti-hero. Suffering from unjust circumstances since childhood; the details slowly revealed through out the book, this fast read will keep you entertained.
Constantly on edge from one near death encounter to another, you can't help but cheer for this anti-hero. Suffering from unjust circumstances since childhood; the details slowly revealed through out the book, this fast read will keep you entertained.
April 21, 2012
What a facinating story! Filled with magic and unique characters that really keep the reader on the edge. Wickersheim really knows how to weave a great story! I highly recommend this book!
May 5, 2015
A cut above the rest. Thoughtful, good characters, lots of action, recommend.
June 2, 2015
Once I got into it, I really enjoyed it. I did struggle with new characters being introduced quite often-even at the end. But I liked the main character. And the battle at the end.
May 14, 2019
The Penitent Assassin is a wild ride, in a world like I have never encountered before. I am not usually one for dark fantasy novels, but I must say I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It is a fast paced novel, wonderfully descriptive, action packed with tons of blood and gore, magic, and dark humor(I laughed out loud quite a few times). The main character is Mallor, and you think you have him figured out as a morally ambiguous, tortured soul. But there is so much more to his story - Is he a bad guy or a saviour? Should you hate him? Should you root for him? The story has so many layers, it keeps you on the edge of your seat trying to figure out how all of the elements will fit together. And just when you think you have it figured out, well I don't want to spoil it for you. Just read it!
March 2, 2021
Great story-telling! I'm not usually a traditional fantasy reader although this is the kind of fantasy I enjoy: close enough to "real" history that the motivations and settings are all familiar. More than anything this reminded me of the Thieves World series I read way back in the 80s, although FAR more coherent than that ever was. The plot is twisty, very twisty, and gory, and sweet, and honorable, and deceptive, and all the good things a book can have. The writing is good enough that the very scary main character has the reader's sympathy despite his pretty despicable deeds.
October 31, 2025
More from the ancient freebie pile!
Lots of glowing reviews on this one, to the point where I'm wondering if all those people read a different book... Look, I like gritty grimdark fantasy with morally dubious characters, but this just did nothing for me. Just heaps of gore, unlikable characters, barely there worldbuilding, and a plot that failed to draw me in at any point.
Lots of glowing reviews on this one, to the point where I'm wondering if all those people read a different book... Look, I like gritty grimdark fantasy with morally dubious characters, but this just did nothing for me. Just heaps of gore, unlikable characters, barely there worldbuilding, and a plot that failed to draw me in at any point.
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February 5, 2013Although well written, this story is just too dark for my taste. He seems like an interesting character, so I tried to ignore the bloodshed. However, the gore just kept piling up and I had to give up on it.
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