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The Vardeshi Saga #1
Ascending
Twenty-five years ago the Vardeshi came to Earth. Then they vanished without a trace. Graduate student Avery Alcott always knew they would return. When they do, she’s the only one who can speak their language. She’s quickly recruited to join the crew of an 11-man starship on a one-year mission into the depths of space. Avery leaps at the chance to leave behind everything she’s ever known. Wearing a Vardeshi uniform, adapting to their culture, following their orders, she’s as close to being one of them as she’ll ever be. But there’s more to interstellar diplomacy than knowing the right words to say. And shedding her identity turns out to be harder than she expected. When her ship, its crew, and the fragile human-Vardeshi alliance are threatened, Avery’s humanity—the very thing putting her at risk—just might be the one thing that can save her.
486 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 22, 2018
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Meg Pechenick
2 books197 followersI'm a New England native who drifted to China and then California before realizing that I belonged on the East Coast. Ten years into my teaching career, I've finally accepted that I'm never going to work for NASA, so I've taken to writing science fiction instead. In addition to our jobs, my husband and I juggle a rambunctious Samoyed, a preschooler, and a toddler. My favorite thing in the world is hearing my children laugh. My second favorite thing is hearing from readers!
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October 2, 2019
4 strange ★★★★✩
⇝ Overall.
I can't believe how exciting this book got! As some readers have pointed out already, this story starts kinda slow but takes up pretty quickly, once Avery is on the Alien ship that's set for Vardesh Prime. The worldbuilding was excellent. From the beginning, I suspected the author possesses expertise in linguistics and anthropology. The Vardeshi seemed to be very well planned out and realistic. When I read the "About the Author" section, it turned out Margaret does, in fact, have an academic background in those exact two fields.
⇝ The only thing that actually bothered me...
is the Romance part that suddenly emerged seemingly out of nowhere towards the end of the book. In this case, I honestly believe that dramatic irony would have been a good tool to not take the reader by total and implausible surprise.
➺ What's happening.
It has been 25 years since the Vardeshi had briefly visited and then left earth. That humans finally knew for sure that there were other life-forms similar to their own out there changed the planet forever. Their short stay on earth left the people on earth wondering. They couldn't stop working with the little they had learned about them. Especially since the Vardeshi said they saw potential in that young race, but also a lot of things they didn't like. (Bruh, I can relate)
Avery's linguistic professor never stopped hoping the Vardeshi might return within his lifespan, but slowly comes to the conclusion, that he might have to hand down his legacy to the next generation. So he chooses Avery to work with the top-secret Vardeshi-language programme he built. It is far more advanced than the governmental institution he is supposed to put it together for know. Avery immerses herself into the Vardeshi language and sooner than they all suspected, the Vardeshi are back. And this time, they want to work with the humans.
The Vardeshi propose an exchange programme, where 100 humans come to Vardeshi Prime with them and they leave people of theirs behind to learn from each other. As Avery gets into the exclusive programme of people who are being considered for the exchange, she learns more and more about this cool but wise alien race and can't help but wonder what it is the Vardeshi see on planet earth that they could possibly profit from. Their technology is so far advanced, their intellect so far above the humans, it seems almost laughable.
The Vardeshi ship Pinion takes off with her on board and it turns out, not every Vardeshi is so hell-bent on the exchange as it seemed at first. To the wins outweigh the possible dangers? This list may help you:
What could possibly go wrong, you wonder? Well, a good damn lot, as it turns out.
There was one really interesting conversation that stuck to me. I will simply but it in a blockquote down here and y'all can make up your mind about it on your own
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Writing Quality + ease of reading = 4*
pace = 3* (As I said, it started out suuuuper slow)
plot development = 4*
characters = 3.5* (I would have wished for a bit more input and "on-screen-time" for most of the other Vardeshi crew)
enjoyability = 4*
insightfulness = 3*
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This eArc was given to me via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
This book is for you if…you prefer plausible science fiction scenarios to action-driven stories due to decent narratives of aliens. This story is thought through and well planned.
⇝ Overall.
I can't believe how exciting this book got! As some readers have pointed out already, this story starts kinda slow but takes up pretty quickly, once Avery is on the Alien ship that's set for Vardesh Prime. The worldbuilding was excellent. From the beginning, I suspected the author possesses expertise in linguistics and anthropology. The Vardeshi seemed to be very well planned out and realistic. When I read the "About the Author" section, it turned out Margaret does, in fact, have an academic background in those exact two fields.
⇝ The only thing that actually bothered me...
is the Romance part that suddenly emerged seemingly out of nowhere towards the end of the book. In this case, I honestly believe that dramatic irony would have been a good tool to not take the reader by total and implausible surprise.
➺ What's happening.
It has been 25 years since the Vardeshi had briefly visited and then left earth. That humans finally knew for sure that there were other life-forms similar to their own out there changed the planet forever. Their short stay on earth left the people on earth wondering. They couldn't stop working with the little they had learned about them. Especially since the Vardeshi said they saw potential in that young race, but also a lot of things they didn't like. (Bruh, I can relate)
Avery's linguistic professor never stopped hoping the Vardeshi might return within his lifespan, but slowly comes to the conclusion, that he might have to hand down his legacy to the next generation. So he chooses Avery to work with the top-secret Vardeshi-language programme he built. It is far more advanced than the governmental institution he is supposed to put it together for know. Avery immerses herself into the Vardeshi language and sooner than they all suspected, the Vardeshi are back. And this time, they want to work with the humans.
The Vardeshi propose an exchange programme, where 100 humans come to Vardeshi Prime with them and they leave people of theirs behind to learn from each other. As Avery gets into the exclusive programme of people who are being considered for the exchange, she learns more and more about this cool but wise alien race and can't help but wonder what it is the Vardeshi see on planet earth that they could possibly profit from. Their technology is so far advanced, their intellect so far above the humans, it seems almost laughable.
The Vardeshi ship Pinion takes off with her on board and it turns out, not every Vardeshi is so hell-bent on the exchange as it seemed at first. To the wins outweigh the possible dangers? This list may help you:
Con:
⇢ Alien, hostile environment
⇢ hostile aliens meet helpless
⇢ Avery is pretty much inferior because her body simply wasn't made to travel in space in a ship that is accommodating a body similar to hers, but yet so different
Pro:
⇢ adorable new bff
⇢ discovering an entirely new species
⇢ hawt alien with gorgeous hair
What could possibly go wrong, you wonder? Well, a good damn lot, as it turns out.
There was one really interesting conversation that stuck to me. I will simply but it in a blockquote down here and y'all can make up your mind about it on your own
"Most people are looking for something more. Not fireworks and rainbows, necessarily, but a partner who chooses you for who you are. Marriage is complicated enough as it is. It seems to me that to have the slightest chance of succeeding, it ought to begin with love."
"Not just with love. With passion. Infatuation."
"Yes" I said.
"And everyone expects this?"
"Im not sure 'expect' is the right word. But most of us hope for it."
She shook her head.
"You think we're crazy." I said lightly.
"Not crazy. But perhaps...you ask too much of the universe."
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Writing Quality + ease of reading = 4*
pace = 3* (As I said, it started out suuuuper slow)
plot development = 4*
characters = 3.5* (I would have wished for a bit more input and "on-screen-time" for most of the other Vardeshi crew)
enjoyability = 4*
insightfulness = 3*
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This eArc was given to me via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
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March 20, 2020In 1993, Earth made contact with aliens, the Vardeshi.
Skip up to the present, and for the first time in the very tenuous alliance, some carefully selected young people are being sent to the Vardeshi as diplomats and scientists, etc.
Avery is our first person narrator. She has been fascinated with the Vardeshi (who wouldn't be, they look kinda like elves without the ears, or like bishonen, woo!) and, after four years of mastering Mandarin, is ready to tackle the Vardeshi language, which has even more tones, not to mention alien ways of thinking. Their tech is beyond current human limitations, and they seem to have eradicated wars and personal difficulties. What's not to admire?
She is the sole human on board a ship destined to take her to the Vardeshi home planet. On the ship, she's the lowest ranking person, which means doing all the grunt work--while cooking all her own food, as the scientists are being very careful about inadvertent bio hazards going both ways.
Anyone who has ever gone to another country after studying their language for a few years, and assuming fluency, will resonate with how well the author has depicted culture shock in all its permutations, from physical to emotional.
This book starts off somewhat slowly, but I found myself engaged with the voice. Avery is a language and history nerd, but she also loves serial dramas. (Which becomes important!) Gradually the pace quickens, then speeds up to a terrific finish.
I loved the worldbuilding, the attention to detail, the development of the characters. I also really love high tech aliens who love beauty. By the end I was so involved I went straight out and bought the second one, though I have a huge TBR pile and I'd promised myself No New Books Till The Pile Is Not Threatening To Bury Me.
Well, I broke the promise, and read half the night in the second book!
Copy provided by NetGalley
Skip up to the present, and for the first time in the very tenuous alliance, some carefully selected young people are being sent to the Vardeshi as diplomats and scientists, etc.
Avery is our first person narrator. She has been fascinated with the Vardeshi (who wouldn't be, they look kinda like elves without the ears, or like bishonen, woo!) and, after four years of mastering Mandarin, is ready to tackle the Vardeshi language, which has even more tones, not to mention alien ways of thinking. Their tech is beyond current human limitations, and they seem to have eradicated wars and personal difficulties. What's not to admire?
She is the sole human on board a ship destined to take her to the Vardeshi home planet. On the ship, she's the lowest ranking person, which means doing all the grunt work--while cooking all her own food, as the scientists are being very careful about inadvertent bio hazards going both ways.
Anyone who has ever gone to another country after studying their language for a few years, and assuming fluency, will resonate with how well the author has depicted culture shock in all its permutations, from physical to emotional.
This book starts off somewhat slowly, but I found myself engaged with the voice. Avery is a language and history nerd, but she also loves serial dramas. (Which becomes important!) Gradually the pace quickens, then speeds up to a terrific finish.
I loved the worldbuilding, the attention to detail, the development of the characters. I also really love high tech aliens who love beauty. By the end I was so involved I went straight out and bought the second one, though I have a huge TBR pile and I'd promised myself No New Books Till The Pile Is Not Threatening To Bury Me.
Well, I broke the promise, and read half the night in the second book!
Copy provided by NetGalley
May 28, 2023
The description reminded me of A Memory Called Empire (read in 2019). That‘s where the similarities end though. This is not a complex or very inventive story.
”Twenty-five years ago the Vardeshi came to Earth. Then they vanished without a trace. Graduate student Avery Alcott always knew they would return. When they do, she’s the only one who can speak their language. She’s quickly recruited to join the crew of an 11-man starship on a one-year mission into the depths of space. Avery leaps at the chance to leave behind everything she’s ever known.”
Avery is a fairly naive college student, who puts up a relatively good fight against the problems she faces during that mission. First there is the language difficulties, then there is her struggle with the cultural immersion and then the problems really start. It’s pretty pretty light on the cultural immersion as well as the linguistic tangent. We are pretty light on everything. This is not hard SF, there is very little science in this fiction. It‘s an entertaining enough story, but hardcore SF readers will find it very wanting. It‘s more brain candy in space, with some very humanoid aliens.
I had some issues. Avery‘s teacher builds a language program based on a few transmission, which I find highly unlikely. I am not a linguistics expert though, so whatever.
The home planet of the Vardeshi can be reached with a Vardeshi ship in 6 months. No info about actual distance or what propulsion they are using, just that their ships are really fast.
There are all these beautiful humans and aliens with blonde hair and blue eyes. Ok, ok, there is also grey hair and grey eyes, but still… quite the fixation.
The aliens have blue blood. Why is their blood blue?
How do they generate gravity?
At one point Avery looses a lot of her provisions. In the next paragraph she cooks a lavish dinner. What? And why the heck does she have to use a camping stove?
The aliens use FTL travel (I assume, it‘s never mentioned), but don‘t have a set-up in their kitchen where a human could prepare food?
And isn‘t it kinda unusual on a ship to not have different duty watches? They all go to sleep at the same time and put the ship on autopilot or how does that work?
Ship‘s special interior decorations are mentioned once and then never again. A special sickness among the Vardeshi is explained and researched by Avery, but never makes a direct appearance in the book.
To top it all off, the book pretty much stops in the middle of the storyline. Good thing that the sequel is on Kindle Unlimited and that I currently have a subscription, otherwise I would have been very miffed. And if the next book stops in the middle of things again, I will not be happy.
If you want serious, atmospheric and believable SF, this is not it. If you are looking for a light, entertaining read with a spaceship and some pretty, fairy-like aliens, this could be it. You might have to suspend belief a few times. I am not quite sure how I talked myself into reading the sequel, I guess I need some closure to the story.
I received an advanced copy of this book from the publisher or author through NetGalley ages ago. Sorry about the very late review. All opinions are my own and I was not required to give a positive review.
”Twenty-five years ago the Vardeshi came to Earth. Then they vanished without a trace. Graduate student Avery Alcott always knew they would return. When they do, she’s the only one who can speak their language. She’s quickly recruited to join the crew of an 11-man starship on a one-year mission into the depths of space. Avery leaps at the chance to leave behind everything she’s ever known.”
Avery is a fairly naive college student, who puts up a relatively good fight against the problems she faces during that mission. First there is the language difficulties, then there is her struggle with the cultural immersion and then the problems really start. It’s pretty pretty light on the cultural immersion as well as the linguistic tangent. We are pretty light on everything. This is not hard SF, there is very little science in this fiction. It‘s an entertaining enough story, but hardcore SF readers will find it very wanting. It‘s more brain candy in space, with some very humanoid aliens.
I had some issues. Avery‘s teacher builds a language program based on a few transmission, which I find highly unlikely. I am not a linguistics expert though, so whatever.
The home planet of the Vardeshi can be reached with a Vardeshi ship in 6 months. No info about actual distance or what propulsion they are using, just that their ships are really fast.
There are all these beautiful humans and aliens with blonde hair and blue eyes. Ok, ok, there is also grey hair and grey eyes, but still… quite the fixation.
The aliens have blue blood. Why is their blood blue?
How do they generate gravity?
At one point Avery looses a lot of her provisions. In the next paragraph she cooks a lavish dinner. What? And why the heck does she have to use a camping stove?
The aliens use FTL travel (I assume, it‘s never mentioned), but don‘t have a set-up in their kitchen where a human could prepare food?
And isn‘t it kinda unusual on a ship to not have different duty watches? They all go to sleep at the same time and put the ship on autopilot or how does that work?
Ship‘s special interior decorations are mentioned once and then never again. A special sickness among the Vardeshi is explained and researched by Avery, but never makes a direct appearance in the book.
To top it all off, the book pretty much stops in the middle of the storyline. Good thing that the sequel is on Kindle Unlimited and that I currently have a subscription, otherwise I would have been very miffed. And if the next book stops in the middle of things again, I will not be happy.
If you want serious, atmospheric and believable SF, this is not it. If you are looking for a light, entertaining read with a spaceship and some pretty, fairy-like aliens, this could be it. You might have to suspend belief a few times. I am not quite sure how I talked myself into reading the sequel, I guess I need some closure to the story.
I received an advanced copy of this book from the publisher or author through NetGalley ages ago. Sorry about the very late review. All opinions are my own and I was not required to give a positive review.
August 14, 2023
4 stars. This was surprisingly good. It’s hard to describe the plot without spoiling but the worldbuilding was good while at the same time being accessible. This is the kind of book a reader who doesn’t read a lot of SF might enjoy and a reader who reads a fair amount of SF might still enjoy as well.
April 30, 2019
I found a copy of this for free on NetGalley!
If you prefer/don’t mind a hard sci-fi with minimal action scenes, this would fit the bill. It’s a drawn-out, first contact story that provides the reader a mimetic experience of learning to live with an alien race. The first quarter of the novel passes without even seeing an alien, but this restraint is a strength of the novel. We learn about the Vardeshi as Avery does.
Avery is a likeable character who makes reasonable choices. She was an interesting heroine because she’s rather bland; her normality serves to make her relatable. A brash, argumentative protagonist would have altered the course of the story, likely weakening the exploratory tone.
You’re forced to suspend your disbelief that the Vardeshi would be so human – there is no explanation regarding convergent evolution or shared DNA that explains this similarity. But, it didn’t take away from the story and likely would be less jarring to those who don’t read a lot of science fiction. I've read far too many science fictions (and played Mass Effect way too much to be healthy) to accept that aliens have to look human for us to interact with them, but I understand why it might be more palatable to some.
On a personal level I really enjoyed that this novel has a linguist main character - my second novel has a character who has studied languages (but her first contact involves sleeping with the alien haha).
Aside from the last 20%, there is not a lot of tension in the novel and the plot played out almost exactly as I expected it to, minor details aside (this did not lower my enjoyment though – there weren’t a lot of ways for it to go once it started). I found the very restrained romance intriguing. But it was obvious from the first interview that Avery had an attraction, so why it was a revelation to her confused me. I had hoped for bit more intrigue in that regard once it was introduced (cross-species illicit affairs are a favorite trope of mine, as anyone who has read my reviews knows and is probably not surprised by). Was I hoping for a little sex? Can't say I wasn't. Was I sad I was denied? No. Maybe in the next book?
Overall, it was a very enjoyable read that I couldn’t put down. The depth into the Vardeshi culture was well-developed and the story moved at an easy pace. You felt Avery’s disappointments and rallied for her successes. I look forward to the sequel.
If you prefer/don’t mind a hard sci-fi with minimal action scenes, this would fit the bill. It’s a drawn-out, first contact story that provides the reader a mimetic experience of learning to live with an alien race. The first quarter of the novel passes without even seeing an alien, but this restraint is a strength of the novel. We learn about the Vardeshi as Avery does.
Avery is a likeable character who makes reasonable choices. She was an interesting heroine because she’s rather bland; her normality serves to make her relatable. A brash, argumentative protagonist would have altered the course of the story, likely weakening the exploratory tone.
You’re forced to suspend your disbelief that the Vardeshi would be so human – there is no explanation regarding convergent evolution or shared DNA that explains this similarity. But, it didn’t take away from the story and likely would be less jarring to those who don’t read a lot of science fiction. I've read far too many science fictions (and played Mass Effect way too much to be healthy) to accept that aliens have to look human for us to interact with them, but I understand why it might be more palatable to some.
On a personal level I really enjoyed that this novel has a linguist main character - my second novel has a character who has studied languages (but her first contact involves sleeping with the alien haha).
Aside from the last 20%, there is not a lot of tension in the novel and the plot played out almost exactly as I expected it to, minor details aside (this did not lower my enjoyment though – there weren’t a lot of ways for it to go once it started). I found the very restrained romance intriguing. But it was obvious from the first interview that Avery had an attraction, so why it was a revelation to her confused me. I had hoped for bit more intrigue in that regard once it was introduced (cross-species illicit affairs are a favorite trope of mine, as anyone who has read my reviews knows and is probably not surprised by). Was I hoping for a little sex? Can't say I wasn't. Was I sad I was denied? No. Maybe in the next book?
Overall, it was a very enjoyable read that I couldn’t put down. The depth into the Vardeshi culture was well-developed and the story moved at an easy pace. You felt Avery’s disappointments and rallied for her successes. I look forward to the sequel.
July 19, 2019
*Source* Publisher
*Genre* Science Fiction
*Rating* 3-3.5
*Thoughts*
Ascending is the first installment in debut author Margaret Pechenick's The Vardeshi Saga. In 1993, a race called the Vardeshi made 1st contact with Earth. After a meeting at the UN, they got up and left saying that Earth wasn't ready for what they could offer. They considered humankind to be too young, and too angry, and too fractured. Sound familiar? The arrival of the Vardeshi led to the formation of the United Earth Council to deal with any future entanglements with alien races. Even though Earth moved leaps and bounds in technology, the Vardeshi didn't return.
*Full Review @ Gizmos Reviews*
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*Genre* Science Fiction
*Rating* 3-3.5
*Thoughts*
Ascending is the first installment in debut author Margaret Pechenick's The Vardeshi Saga. In 1993, a race called the Vardeshi made 1st contact with Earth. After a meeting at the UN, they got up and left saying that Earth wasn't ready for what they could offer. They considered humankind to be too young, and too angry, and too fractured. Sound familiar? The arrival of the Vardeshi led to the formation of the United Earth Council to deal with any future entanglements with alien races. Even though Earth moved leaps and bounds in technology, the Vardeshi didn't return.
*Full Review @ Gizmos Reviews*
https://gizmosreviews.blogspot.com/20...
June 2, 2019
A well-edited, well-written story of second contact, with an appealing, if bland, narrator/protagonist, but somewhat lacking for me in character development and worldbuilding.
I say second contact because it's set 25 years after a superior alien civilization comes to Earth, takes a good look, and decides to go away again. Shortly after the story starts, they decide to come back - a controversial decision, and subject to much debate within their own culture.
The book is narrated by a graduate student in linguistics who is the only person, apart from her elderly professor/mentor (involved in the first contact), who can speak their language, after a learning process that (with incredible convenience) ended about three weeks before the aliens unexpectedly and unpredictably returned. I'm prepared to reluctantly allow one convenient coincidence per plot, and happily there are no others. However, that's not the end of my issues with the book (which I nevertheless enjoyed overall).
One thing I've noticed about a lot of SF books being published at the moment is that the actual science is a bit dubious. I'm not talking about the genre conventions of artificial gravity and FTL travel; I mean mistakes like conducting radio communication "in real time" from "the edge of the Sol system" (wherever that is), and a pocket-sized oxygen dispenser that's good for a month (as a supplement, but still). For that matter, nine-sided dice; that isn't a number of faces that can be on a regular polyhedron.
That's one level of the issues I had. Another is that the aliens are just not that alien in a lot of ways, despite part of the point of the whole thing being that the protagonist is immersed in an alien culture. They have weeks and months, though the weeks appear to be eight days long (it's never really discussed). They'll kick a person under the table to tell them to shut up. The women wear dresses. For that matter, they're biologically very humanoid; blue blood, yes, but despite being descended from predators, they mostly eat vegetables, and their bodies are very much the same shape as humans'. They have one language (with some dialects) and effectively one culture, despite being a multiplanetary species. There's really not much about them that couldn't plausibly be part of a human culture.
They're stronger and faster than humans, with better eyesight and hearing, and are quicker to learn (everyone on the ship speaks fluent English, despite the fact that some are not at all fans of humanity). They're a largely nonviolent society. But they do have flaws. They're excessively obedient to authority, they apparently don't screen their spaceship crews very well at all, and their computer systems are hard to learn to use (which, as someone in the industry, I can tell you points to poor design).
Then, I didn't feel like the characters had a lot of depth, weight, or backstory. Not just the aliens, and the incidental humans we encounter early on, though certainly them; but Avery, the grad student narrator, herself. Even though we get the entire story through her, she never really had that much dimension for me.
She says things that make it clear that she's had boyfriends, but she doesn't talk about any of them specifically - anything she remembers about them, anything she's learned from her mistakes with them. She has parents, but they're lightly sketched in. She mentions a best friend, but unless this is the person she met briefly during training, this best friend isn't ever named and there are no reminiscences about her either. Her roommates are just a couple of names with no qualities attached. It's as if she comes into existence at the beginning of the book, with the most bland and generic background to go with her bland, generic identity as a basic middle-class white girl. She's a good student, but not outstanding; she manages to be, at one and the same time, the obvious candidate to be the first human sent to live among the aliens, and completely average and undistinguished.
Her mentor considers her to have personal qualities of humility, kindness, and patience, which is why he selects her to learn the alien language and be the potential representative of humanity, and while she doesn't show herself to not have those qualities, she didn't, for me, particularly show herself to have them to an unusual degree either.
Despite all of these reservations, I did enjoy the book, and wanted Avery to succeed. I just wish that everything had been a little richer and better developed.
I say second contact because it's set 25 years after a superior alien civilization comes to Earth, takes a good look, and decides to go away again. Shortly after the story starts, they decide to come back - a controversial decision, and subject to much debate within their own culture.
The book is narrated by a graduate student in linguistics who is the only person, apart from her elderly professor/mentor (involved in the first contact), who can speak their language, after a learning process that (with incredible convenience) ended about three weeks before the aliens unexpectedly and unpredictably returned. I'm prepared to reluctantly allow one convenient coincidence per plot, and happily there are no others. However, that's not the end of my issues with the book (which I nevertheless enjoyed overall).
One thing I've noticed about a lot of SF books being published at the moment is that the actual science is a bit dubious. I'm not talking about the genre conventions of artificial gravity and FTL travel; I mean mistakes like conducting radio communication "in real time" from "the edge of the Sol system" (wherever that is), and a pocket-sized oxygen dispenser that's good for a month (as a supplement, but still). For that matter, nine-sided dice; that isn't a number of faces that can be on a regular polyhedron.
That's one level of the issues I had. Another is that the aliens are just not that alien in a lot of ways, despite part of the point of the whole thing being that the protagonist is immersed in an alien culture. They have weeks and months, though the weeks appear to be eight days long (it's never really discussed). They'll kick a person under the table to tell them to shut up. The women wear dresses. For that matter, they're biologically very humanoid; blue blood, yes, but despite being descended from predators, they mostly eat vegetables, and their bodies are very much the same shape as humans'. They have one language (with some dialects) and effectively one culture, despite being a multiplanetary species. There's really not much about them that couldn't plausibly be part of a human culture.
They're stronger and faster than humans, with better eyesight and hearing, and are quicker to learn (everyone on the ship speaks fluent English, despite the fact that some are not at all fans of humanity). They're a largely nonviolent society. But they do have flaws. They're excessively obedient to authority, they apparently don't screen their spaceship crews very well at all, and their computer systems are hard to learn to use (which, as someone in the industry, I can tell you points to poor design).
Then, I didn't feel like the characters had a lot of depth, weight, or backstory. Not just the aliens, and the incidental humans we encounter early on, though certainly them; but Avery, the grad student narrator, herself. Even though we get the entire story through her, she never really had that much dimension for me.
She says things that make it clear that she's had boyfriends, but she doesn't talk about any of them specifically - anything she remembers about them, anything she's learned from her mistakes with them. She has parents, but they're lightly sketched in. She mentions a best friend, but unless this is the person she met briefly during training, this best friend isn't ever named and there are no reminiscences about her either. Her roommates are just a couple of names with no qualities attached. It's as if she comes into existence at the beginning of the book, with the most bland and generic background to go with her bland, generic identity as a basic middle-class white girl. She's a good student, but not outstanding; she manages to be, at one and the same time, the obvious candidate to be the first human sent to live among the aliens, and completely average and undistinguished.
Her mentor considers her to have personal qualities of humility, kindness, and patience, which is why he selects her to learn the alien language and be the potential representative of humanity, and while she doesn't show herself to not have those qualities, she didn't, for me, particularly show herself to have them to an unusual degree either.
Despite all of these reservations, I did enjoy the book, and wanted Avery to succeed. I just wish that everything had been a little richer and better developed.
October 3, 2019
I usually enjoy first contact stories and this was no exception. It’s not a fast-paced action-packed tale, but I became so invested in the characters and engrossed in the narrative that I stayed up far too late to read just a bit more. After finishing this first book, I’m immediately going to dive into the second.
That says it all.
That says it all.
October 12, 2019
When an alien race returns after 25 years to earth, Avery is ready. She has spend her life learning the language, and now she is the only person fluent in it, granting her a place one one of the alien ships in an inter-racial student exchange.
This was great, 5 stars, no fights but social life between human and alien, interesting gadgets and such. I even forgive that the aliens are so similar to humans.
While there is limited action it is a great first contact story. Love it, wished Book 2 would be already available!
This was great, 5 stars, no fights but social life between human and alien, interesting gadgets and such. I even forgive that the aliens are so similar to humans.
While there is limited action it is a great first contact story. Love it, wished Book 2 would be already available!
October 27, 2021
Love love love this series. I think it's the best thing I've read this year. I can't find who recommended it but thank-you thank-you. It starts a little slow, but that just lets you get to know the main character. The author really gives you a full picture of her inner thoughts. I jumped right into book two after this and it is even better than the first.
December 1, 2019
What if you were the only person on a spaceship with an alien race? You were the person groomed to speak an alien language and take part in an intercultural exchange between planets? You would want to do it in the first place? If you did, how you feel about it? Excited? Optimistic? Groundbreaking? Or would you feel scared? Alone? Unsure what made you reach that kind of decision?
Those questions I just mentioned in the prior paragraph are the questions that Avery Alcott, the protagonist of Ascending by Meg Pechenick has to deal with in this excellent first-contact story. The last first contact story I’ve read was The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell. Ascending has some similarities to The Sparrow in terms of linguistics and how does an individual assimilate into an alien culture. However, The Sparrow has a religious perspective (Catholicism) that Ascending does not. Both novels have done an excellent job of detailing the highs and lows of such an intercultural exchange.
The Vardeshi visited Earth and did not like what they saw from our planet. They vowed to never return. However, they came back twenty-five years later after their initial visit. This time, the Vardeshi agreed to accept an Earthling onto their ship to learn more about humankind. They chose Avery Alcott to be the sole representative from Earth for a year long mission to become a member on their ship headed into space.
Avery transitioned onto the Vardeshi spaceship well in the beginning but as the time passed, the conflicts and issues between cultures clashed. Pechenick does an excellent job with Avery showing realistic issues in this scenario. Also, she reveals Avery’s inner thoughts that go from eagerness to despair in a believable fashion.
I enjoyed reading Ascending and Avery Alcott was a compelling protagonist. However, I thought the reveal of a romance later in the novel did not set right with me. The hints were there earlier in the novel, but I did not feel convinced about the romance. It seemed out of place between those characters. That quibble should not stop readers from reading this excellent novel. I highly recommend Ascending and it continues my recent string of novels that have become my favorite reads of 2019.
Those questions I just mentioned in the prior paragraph are the questions that Avery Alcott, the protagonist of Ascending by Meg Pechenick has to deal with in this excellent first-contact story. The last first contact story I’ve read was The Sparrow by Mary Doria Russell. Ascending has some similarities to The Sparrow in terms of linguistics and how does an individual assimilate into an alien culture. However, The Sparrow has a religious perspective (Catholicism) that Ascending does not. Both novels have done an excellent job of detailing the highs and lows of such an intercultural exchange.
The Vardeshi visited Earth and did not like what they saw from our planet. They vowed to never return. However, they came back twenty-five years later after their initial visit. This time, the Vardeshi agreed to accept an Earthling onto their ship to learn more about humankind. They chose Avery Alcott to be the sole representative from Earth for a year long mission to become a member on their ship headed into space.
Avery transitioned onto the Vardeshi spaceship well in the beginning but as the time passed, the conflicts and issues between cultures clashed. Pechenick does an excellent job with Avery showing realistic issues in this scenario. Also, she reveals Avery’s inner thoughts that go from eagerness to despair in a believable fashion.
I enjoyed reading Ascending and Avery Alcott was a compelling protagonist. However, I thought the reveal of a romance later in the novel did not set right with me. The hints were there earlier in the novel, but I did not feel convinced about the romance. It seemed out of place between those characters. That quibble should not stop readers from reading this excellent novel. I highly recommend Ascending and it continues my recent string of novels that have become my favorite reads of 2019.
August 10, 2023
After reading book 2 I’ve amended my review from 4 stars to 5.
I loved this book. The pacing is slow and considered- normally this is a turn off for me but I appreciated it here. It’s a much more “real” account of what meeting aliens someday might be like and as such it is deeply compelling.
This book is human and messy and compelling and well written. I picked up book 2 immediately upon finishing book 1.
Review for Bright Shards (Book 2)
5 stars
I will think about this book for a long time. I am so sad it’s over and I really really really hope Meg publishes book 3 sooner than later.
Despite wanting so much more of this story, the end of book two left me satisfied. These books are so well written it would have been hard not to. It’s been a long time since I have read any Annie Dillard but parts of this book reminded me of her— not in the writing style but in Meg’s appreciation and understanding of the material spaces our selves exist within.
Again this book moves more slowly than most of the science fiction I’ve read, but this is to its benefit. The incredible drama of being a human among aliens is remarkably compelling even beyond the trials and tribulations the crew go through together.
It seems weird to say it about a series with only one human MC , but this is maybe the most grounding and human book I’ve ever read.
I deeply hope Meg Pechenick is able to make a career of writing or is at least afforded the time and space to continue what she has started because her prose is a gift and refreshment for weary travellers.
I loved this book. The pacing is slow and considered- normally this is a turn off for me but I appreciated it here. It’s a much more “real” account of what meeting aliens someday might be like and as such it is deeply compelling.
This book is human and messy and compelling and well written. I picked up book 2 immediately upon finishing book 1.
Review for Bright Shards (Book 2)
5 stars
I will think about this book for a long time. I am so sad it’s over and I really really really hope Meg publishes book 3 sooner than later.
Despite wanting so much more of this story, the end of book two left me satisfied. These books are so well written it would have been hard not to. It’s been a long time since I have read any Annie Dillard but parts of this book reminded me of her— not in the writing style but in Meg’s appreciation and understanding of the material spaces our selves exist within.
Again this book moves more slowly than most of the science fiction I’ve read, but this is to its benefit. The incredible drama of being a human among aliens is remarkably compelling even beyond the trials and tribulations the crew go through together.
It seems weird to say it about a series with only one human MC , but this is maybe the most grounding and human book I’ve ever read.
I deeply hope Meg Pechenick is able to make a career of writing or is at least afforded the time and space to continue what she has started because her prose is a gift and refreshment for weary travellers.
November 19, 2019
DNF 45%
I'm sorry, I tried but I just couldn't continue with this book. I contemplated dnfing this after the first chapter, but I like to give books a decent chance and always try to read a good 50-100 pages. I kept telling myself it would all be okay once we got to space (yay! space!) , so I plodded on thinking it couldn't be that much further. Alas, it took 80 pages to finally reach the launch to space and unfortunately it wasn't worth the wait and I didn't stay there long.
I just couldn't handle any more of our narrator, Avery. I found her arrogant, whiny and just so very dull. She was extremely irritating and made the most bizarre observations like, "My Mandarin-trained eye saw at a glace that no two designs were the same." Huh? I'm sure an 'untrained' eye would be equally as observant. Also, how hard is it to remember how to do a salute style greeting? Very apparently. The aliens also didn't do anything for me, they were too human-like for my taste.
I'm sorry this wasn't for me but I'm happy to see I am in the minority. I wish this series all the best of luck.
I'm sorry, I tried but I just couldn't continue with this book. I contemplated dnfing this after the first chapter, but I like to give books a decent chance and always try to read a good 50-100 pages. I kept telling myself it would all be okay once we got to space (yay! space!) , so I plodded on thinking it couldn't be that much further. Alas, it took 80 pages to finally reach the launch to space and unfortunately it wasn't worth the wait and I didn't stay there long.
I just couldn't handle any more of our narrator, Avery. I found her arrogant, whiny and just so very dull. She was extremely irritating and made the most bizarre observations like, "My Mandarin-trained eye saw at a glace that no two designs were the same." Huh? I'm sure an 'untrained' eye would be equally as observant. Also, how hard is it to remember how to do a salute style greeting? Very apparently. The aliens also didn't do anything for me, they were too human-like for my taste.
I'm sorry this wasn't for me but I'm happy to see I am in the minority. I wish this series all the best of luck.
October 8, 2018
A crisp and cleanly written fish-out-of-water story that explores the nuances of cultural immersion. While the expected conflicts are present, alongside rivalries and culture shock, no driving plot really emerges until well past the middle of the book, when a brief episode of treachery emerges in order to shape the ending. There is certainly potential here for the rest of the series, namely a hope that there will be answers to the book’s most glaring questions. Why are the Vardeshi so similar to humans? As an advanced species, why are they so prone to ignorance and pettiness? What is happening politically among the Vardehsi that would make someone voyage all the way across the galaxy just to frame a human for terrorism? There could be interesting answers to these questions, and they could certainly enrich an already intriguing idea. I’ll be watching for the sequel.
May 31, 2019
The Vardeshi are an alien race, far more sophisticated than the human race, who came to earth about 25 years ago, but after the first contact with humans, they decided the time wasn't right and left again. Dr. Sawyer, one of Avery's teachers and a linguist, designs a program to learn Vardeshi, based on the fragments of Vardeshi spoken the first time they came to earth. With the help of his own experience and the program he teaches Avery Vardeshi, so if they would return to earth, there would be two people who speak their language. Shortly after Avery masters the language, the Vardeshi do return, and a captivating story about human - Vardeshi contact begins, with both races wanting to get to know each other better. Avery, being the only person on earth speaking Vardeshi (except for Dr. Sawyer) is being offered the chance to join the crew on a Vardeshi ship to travel to their homeworld in order of a cultural exchange.
First of all, I want to say that I really enjoyed this story. It was very well written, a fascinating storyline about getting to know an alien race, and the author manages to write about the characters in a way that makes you think you know them as well as the main character does, which I really liked. The story keeps surprising you, there is never a dull moment where you think, okay, this was something I saw coming from way ahead.
Sometimes something would happen completely out of the blue, and I was like, whoa, where did that come from, because it seemed a little bit random. This is one of the only things that I liked a little less about the story, together with the fact that the Vardeshi return 3 weeks after Avery learnt their languages, it's hard to believe this timing after 25 years of radio silence.
Like mentioned before, most of the time when something happened, I didn't see it coming, but in a good way, because it fitted perfectly into the story. It makes the story very captivating, it will never bore you.
It is also very nice to see how Avery gets to know the Vardeshi, and how the crew gets to know her. Even with all the differences, the characters begin building friendships you know will last. It was also kinda funny when you see how the Vardeshi react on some things that are so normal for us, humans, but unbelievable and weird for them,
So even though they may be way ahead of us, I think both humans and Vardeshi can learn a lot about each other, and I can't wait for Bright Shards to come out to see how the story continues.
First of all, I want to say that I really enjoyed this story. It was very well written, a fascinating storyline about getting to know an alien race, and the author manages to write about the characters in a way that makes you think you know them as well as the main character does, which I really liked. The story keeps surprising you, there is never a dull moment where you think, okay, this was something I saw coming from way ahead.
Sometimes something would happen completely out of the blue, and I was like, whoa, where did that come from, because it seemed a little bit random. This is one of the only things that I liked a little less about the story, together with the fact that the Vardeshi return 3 weeks after Avery learnt their languages, it's hard to believe this timing after 25 years of radio silence.
Like mentioned before, most of the time when something happened, I didn't see it coming, but in a good way, because it fitted perfectly into the story. It makes the story very captivating, it will never bore you.
It is also very nice to see how Avery gets to know the Vardeshi, and how the crew gets to know her. Even with all the differences, the characters begin building friendships you know will last. It was also kinda funny when you see how the Vardeshi react on some things that are so normal for us, humans, but unbelievable and weird for them,
So even though they may be way ahead of us, I think both humans and Vardeshi can learn a lot about each other, and I can't wait for Bright Shards to come out to see how the story continues.
August 12, 2020
Twenty five years ago earth received contact with aliens from another world, Vardesh Prime. The aliens, known as the Vardeshi decided that humanity was not ready for them and backed away from an interplanetary exchange. Then 25 years later they're back. In the meantime Avery Alcott's linguistics professor has been teaching her the Vardeshi language in hopes of their return. Avery finds herself the first person chosen for the interplanetary exchange program along with 99 other humans who have dubbed themselves the Strangers. Her immersion into Vardeshi culture is taxing mentally, emotionally, and physically. Yet she wouldn't give it up for anything. Avery learns that the Vardeshi have many skills and abilities that weren't known or obvious at first and could possibly be harmful to her. Also, there are those who are against this cultural exchange, both on earth and throughout the Vardeshi world, and would do anything to prevent it from happening.
I highly recommend this book if you are a sci-fi fan. I can tell that this is going to be an epic series. The world building, attention to detail, and the character development were amazing. This book is definitely for language, history, and culture nerds.
You can find a really awesome review of this book on Goodreads by NAT.orious reads.
I have a huge book hangover caused by my new favorite author Meg Pechenick. I just read, back to back her first two books in The Vardeshi Saga, "Ascending" and "Bright Shards". Meg is an indie author and just broke into the business in 2018. I am blown away at the quality of writing for this young, new author. She reminds me of how dark romance author, Pam Godwin came along with a bang.
This story is sci-fi romance. You won't "see" any of the romance until the end of book two. And you won't find a smutty sex fest either, which I'm more prone to read. The first two books are classic sci-fi. The aliens are humanoid like you would find on Star Trek. They could almost pass for human. The author has a degree in anthropology, and also in linguistics which the main character in the story has. They always say to write what you know. That's what makes this story so good. The linguistics aspect of the story reminded me of the movie "Arrival".
I highly recommend this book if you are a sci-fi fan. I can tell that this is going to be an epic series. The world building, attention to detail, and the character development were amazing. This book is definitely for language, history, and culture nerds.
You can find a really awesome review of this book on Goodreads by NAT.orious reads.
I have a huge book hangover caused by my new favorite author Meg Pechenick. I just read, back to back her first two books in The Vardeshi Saga, "Ascending" and "Bright Shards". Meg is an indie author and just broke into the business in 2018. I am blown away at the quality of writing for this young, new author. She reminds me of how dark romance author, Pam Godwin came along with a bang.
This story is sci-fi romance. You won't "see" any of the romance until the end of book two. And you won't find a smutty sex fest either, which I'm more prone to read. The first two books are classic sci-fi. The aliens are humanoid like you would find on Star Trek. They could almost pass for human. The author has a degree in anthropology, and also in linguistics which the main character in the story has. They always say to write what you know. That's what makes this story so good. The linguistics aspect of the story reminded me of the movie "Arrival".
September 6, 2019
Ascending caught my eye because it seemed to have a similar theme to the movie Arrival – peaceful aliens, linguist as the main character. I was pulled into the story from the first paragraph.
The linguistics part was really well done. Even though I don’t know what tonals are; the jump from 3 in Mandarin to 8 for the alien language implies a high but not unattainable language learning curve. Introducing the concept in the first chapter sets the stage for how complex yet similar the aliens will be. Breaking the story into Earth (Signals and Silence) and Space (Adrift in the Dark) provides an easy contrasting of cultures. Enough time was given to each part of the story; learning the language, the return of the Vardeshi, preparing to go to space and space travel. Character development ensured continuity while maintaining pacing. Avery is an enjoyable main character; ethical without being moralizing. Making Avery a crew member added an immersive element.
It was refreshing to read a book where the aliens are as conflicted as humans about making contact. The main narrative is about friendship building but the conflict is a natural outcome of two cultures suspicious of the motivations. The twist and resolution is plausible and well written. If I have one complaint it’s the introduction of a romantic element as part of the conflict resolution but at this point it helped round out the character.
I received an advance review copy for free through BookSirens, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The linguistics part was really well done. Even though I don’t know what tonals are; the jump from 3 in Mandarin to 8 for the alien language implies a high but not unattainable language learning curve. Introducing the concept in the first chapter sets the stage for how complex yet similar the aliens will be. Breaking the story into Earth (Signals and Silence) and Space (Adrift in the Dark) provides an easy contrasting of cultures. Enough time was given to each part of the story; learning the language, the return of the Vardeshi, preparing to go to space and space travel. Character development ensured continuity while maintaining pacing. Avery is an enjoyable main character; ethical without being moralizing. Making Avery a crew member added an immersive element.
It was refreshing to read a book where the aliens are as conflicted as humans about making contact. The main narrative is about friendship building but the conflict is a natural outcome of two cultures suspicious of the motivations. The twist and resolution is plausible and well written. If I have one complaint it’s the introduction of a romantic element as part of the conflict resolution but at this point it helped round out the character.
I received an advance review copy for free through BookSirens, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
August 19, 2022
I was searching for a book version of Jupiter Ascending and Amazon served me up a book by Meg Pechenick called Ascending and I really cannot put it down. It's Kindle Unlimited and I am 93% through it and will keep on consuming all of her books in the series as this is The Vardeshi Saga Book 1. So, if you like down-to-earth, linguistics-obsessed, sci-fi, then you should surely give this a try. I don't want to spoil it but:
"Twenty-five years ago the Vardeshi came to Earth. Then they vanished without a trace. Graduate student Avery Alcott always knew they would return. When they do, she’s the only one who can speak their language. She’s quickly recruited to join the crew of an 11-man starship on a one-year mission into the depths of space. Avery leaps at the chance to leave behind everything she’s ever known. Wearing a Vardeshi uniform, adapting to their culture, following their orders, she’s as close to being one of them as she’ll ever be. But there’s more to interstellar diplomacy than knowing the right words to say. And shedding her identity turns out to be harder than she expected. When her ship, its crew, and the fragile human-Vardeshi alliance are threatened, Avery’s humanity—the very thing putting her at risk—just might be the one thing that can save her."
"Twenty-five years ago the Vardeshi came to Earth. Then they vanished without a trace. Graduate student Avery Alcott always knew they would return. When they do, she’s the only one who can speak their language. She’s quickly recruited to join the crew of an 11-man starship on a one-year mission into the depths of space. Avery leaps at the chance to leave behind everything she’s ever known. Wearing a Vardeshi uniform, adapting to their culture, following their orders, she’s as close to being one of them as she’ll ever be. But there’s more to interstellar diplomacy than knowing the right words to say. And shedding her identity turns out to be harder than she expected. When her ship, its crew, and the fragile human-Vardeshi alliance are threatened, Avery’s humanity—the very thing putting her at risk—just might be the one thing that can save her."
June 6, 2023
So good! Within a few chapters I was extremely excited. I knew there was no way I was putting it down until I finished. Halfway through I was dreading finding out that the sequel isn’t released yet. But it is! I’m so happy!😭
January 30, 2020
To boldly go...
Avery is a linguistics student in college. Before she was born Earth was visited by an alien race, the Vardeshi. Looking much like pale humans, albeit slightly blue tinted, they possessed much greater technology. They declared the humans not ready for true contact and said they wouldn't be back. Yet, 25yrs later, a year after Avery had been learning the language from a professor who shared the same fascination for the species, they returned. The mystery baffled human leaders, but the chance to form an alliance and access to tech and medical advances was enough to have them agree to a trial exchange: 99 humans posted on various ships traveling to starbases and 1 lucky human to visit the home planet, for 100 Vardeshi sent to Earth. Avery, being ahead of the curve on their language, made the selection for the home planet. Six months there, however long her stay, and then 6 months back home. A year is a long time to be the only human on a ship of aliens, let alone the only human on a planet.
Spoilers ahead.
I loved that the author didn't pose this as a snatch and run. It isn't a Mars Needs Women. It takes itself rather seriously. Preparations are made for her extended trip. Everything from situational awareness, basic defense, dietary needs when there's no way to store fresh food, medical needs, communication allowances, everything gets scrutinized and mentioned. She's sent with epi pens, analgesics, coffee, home pics, you name it. The human angle of this is readily understood and waxed upon. The Vardeshi, that's the mystery. Why would such an advanced race be interested in humans? Technologically we're centuries behind. We still have wars. We still allow weapons on the hands of civilians. Crime is rampant. So...why? What can they learn from us? What could we provide? That isn't really said. All of this is from Avery's POV. I do have questions about some things, though:
*Why only English? It's mentioned that Mandarin is similar in tonal qualities. Even if they landed in US, all world leaders would have been notified. They had 25 years to learn more about Earth and people were selected from all over the globe for this exchange. Even as linguists, it wouldn't make sense for only English.
*Why so human? The Vardeshi are described as basically short, pale, very lightly blue shades humans. Everything is blue/grey toned. Even blood. Our blood is red because of oxygen transferred by iron. If in all other ways, appearance, oxygen breathing, they appear human, why the blue blood? Is it an inside joke because they're more advanced than us? Blue bloods, like nobility?
*They had access to some samples of Vardeshi food while they were on Earth. Why didn't they run some basic tests to see if it was human compatible? If nothing else, to be able to integrate it slowly to Avery?
*To test for allergies, humans do a "prick test". Literally, small punctures dabbed with possible irritants to see if they get a reaction. One would assume that the Vardeshi would be beyond that. Even not understanding human biology, they had weeks to confer with human doctors, though, while on Earth. They could have narrowed things down to "maybes", "okays" and "nopes".
*The Vardeshi almost come off as Vulcans. They don't go for exuberant displays, are calm and follow a strict chain of command. Arranged marriages and everything else seems par for the course. The book starts off as simply exploratory, very Trekkie.
*The last third/quarter it circles an almost romance feel. The shift is very sudden and I'm not sure why the tone change. Neither were bad, the beginning nor the end, just more like the author changed stances towards the end and the readers get dragged along. Not everyone enjoys both genres.
I liked the book and will be starting book 2 as soon as I finish this review. I'm curious where the author will go, both in exploration (as Avery hasn't made it to the home world yet) and if this is going to focus on that or the romance angle. I'm not one for forbidden romances, and he's already got a fiancee (arranged, but still) plus there's a ban on relationships beyond friendship till both sides see where this alliance is going. I'm hoping it focuses more on exploration.
Avery is a linguistics student in college. Before she was born Earth was visited by an alien race, the Vardeshi. Looking much like pale humans, albeit slightly blue tinted, they possessed much greater technology. They declared the humans not ready for true contact and said they wouldn't be back. Yet, 25yrs later, a year after Avery had been learning the language from a professor who shared the same fascination for the species, they returned. The mystery baffled human leaders, but the chance to form an alliance and access to tech and medical advances was enough to have them agree to a trial exchange: 99 humans posted on various ships traveling to starbases and 1 lucky human to visit the home planet, for 100 Vardeshi sent to Earth. Avery, being ahead of the curve on their language, made the selection for the home planet. Six months there, however long her stay, and then 6 months back home. A year is a long time to be the only human on a ship of aliens, let alone the only human on a planet.
Spoilers ahead.
I loved that the author didn't pose this as a snatch and run. It isn't a Mars Needs Women. It takes itself rather seriously. Preparations are made for her extended trip. Everything from situational awareness, basic defense, dietary needs when there's no way to store fresh food, medical needs, communication allowances, everything gets scrutinized and mentioned. She's sent with epi pens, analgesics, coffee, home pics, you name it. The human angle of this is readily understood and waxed upon. The Vardeshi, that's the mystery. Why would such an advanced race be interested in humans? Technologically we're centuries behind. We still have wars. We still allow weapons on the hands of civilians. Crime is rampant. So...why? What can they learn from us? What could we provide? That isn't really said. All of this is from Avery's POV. I do have questions about some things, though:
*Why only English? It's mentioned that Mandarin is similar in tonal qualities. Even if they landed in US, all world leaders would have been notified. They had 25 years to learn more about Earth and people were selected from all over the globe for this exchange. Even as linguists, it wouldn't make sense for only English.
*Why so human? The Vardeshi are described as basically short, pale, very lightly blue shades humans. Everything is blue/grey toned. Even blood. Our blood is red because of oxygen transferred by iron. If in all other ways, appearance, oxygen breathing, they appear human, why the blue blood? Is it an inside joke because they're more advanced than us? Blue bloods, like nobility?
*They had access to some samples of Vardeshi food while they were on Earth. Why didn't they run some basic tests to see if it was human compatible? If nothing else, to be able to integrate it slowly to Avery?
*To test for allergies, humans do a "prick test". Literally, small punctures dabbed with possible irritants to see if they get a reaction. One would assume that the Vardeshi would be beyond that. Even not understanding human biology, they had weeks to confer with human doctors, though, while on Earth. They could have narrowed things down to "maybes", "okays" and "nopes".
*The Vardeshi almost come off as Vulcans. They don't go for exuberant displays, are calm and follow a strict chain of command. Arranged marriages and everything else seems par for the course. The book starts off as simply exploratory, very Trekkie.
*The last third/quarter it circles an almost romance feel. The shift is very sudden and I'm not sure why the tone change. Neither were bad, the beginning nor the end, just more like the author changed stances towards the end and the readers get dragged along. Not everyone enjoys both genres.
I liked the book and will be starting book 2 as soon as I finish this review. I'm curious where the author will go, both in exploration (as Avery hasn't made it to the home world yet) and if this is going to focus on that or the romance angle. I'm not one for forbidden romances, and he's already got a fiancee (arranged, but still) plus there's a ban on relationships beyond friendship till both sides see where this alliance is going. I'm hoping it focuses more on exploration.
May 5, 2022
4.5? Maybe 5? We'll see; I generally don't give out 5 stars on the first readthrough. Definitely one of my favorite reads of the year so far, though. Read most of it in basically one sitting; couldn't put it down.
A linguistic adventure, a slow-paced narrative, a gradually unfolding world. A venture into the unknown, with all the preparations and concerns modern scientists would have about that. A book that values wonder and alienation and emotions over mystery or plot, although it delivers some of both.
Unfortunately aliens are of the Star Trek kind, very humanoid in both appearance and culture - I'd believe they and humans had a common ancestor - but if you suspend disbelief, it ends up working fairly well. (It's also slightly America-centric and doesn't pay very much attention to cultural diversity on Earth, but that's only a slight quibble.)
A linguistic adventure, a slow-paced narrative, a gradually unfolding world. A venture into the unknown, with all the preparations and concerns modern scientists would have about that. A book that values wonder and alienation and emotions over mystery or plot, although it delivers some of both.
Unfortunately aliens are of the Star Trek kind, very humanoid in both appearance and culture - I'd believe they and humans had a common ancestor - but if you suspend disbelief, it ends up working fairly well. (It's also slightly America-centric and doesn't pay very much attention to cultural diversity on Earth, but that's only a slight quibble.)
January 25, 2022
I really enjoyed this thoughtful, linguistically-focused science fiction tale. The Vardeshi come to Earth and decide Earth needs to get its house a little more in order before real contact is made. In the time before that return visit, a program of the Vardeshi language is created, and Avery is the first person to test drive it and learn the language, making her a prime candidate to connect with the Vardeshi. Pechenick sets out a lot of information in the first half of the book, and I felt occasionally weighed down with exposition - however, it all played well as the plot progressed, making use of what we've learned in an effective way. And, given that Pechenick has a whole new species/language/transport to layout, some of that may be unavoidable.
I like that Avery is fairly unremarkable, apart from her clear talent in language, this made it easy to sympathize with her situations in a way I (personally) might not have if she were a super-solider or a science genius. I also appreciated who the Vardeshi are - that these aliens are quite humanoid made me think a lot about how we humans connect with other humans who are different from us - how we try to communicate as best we can, through often fractured means. There's a lot to (enjoyably) ponder in this book!
Ascending moved quickly and engagingly, and I appreciated that (even though it's book 1) it wraps up this part of the story in a satisfying way. For me, a late-in-the-game "reveal" felt somewhat superfluous, but it might have been because it came in one of the more plot-heavy moments, and I wasn't as interested in something that took me away from my primary focus in that moment. Other reviews don't seem bothered by that, so I'll chalk that up to me!
I'll look forward to seeing what happens in book 2!
I like that Avery is fairly unremarkable, apart from her clear talent in language, this made it easy to sympathize with her situations in a way I (personally) might not have if she were a super-solider or a science genius. I also appreciated who the Vardeshi are - that these aliens are quite humanoid made me think a lot about how we humans connect with other humans who are different from us - how we try to communicate as best we can, through often fractured means. There's a lot to (enjoyably) ponder in this book!
Ascending moved quickly and engagingly, and I appreciated that (even though it's book 1) it wraps up this part of the story in a satisfying way. For me, a late-in-the-game "reveal" felt somewhat superfluous, but it might have been because it came in one of the more plot-heavy moments, and I wasn't as interested in something that took me away from my primary focus in that moment. Other reviews don't seem bothered by that, so I'll chalk that up to me!
I'll look forward to seeing what happens in book 2!
October 3, 2019
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for a free copy of this book.
Wow. This book was fantastic! I think part of the reason I enjoyed it so much was that it didn't require me to utterly suspend disbelief; this story is something that could plausibly happen (assuming that aliens wanted to contact us, of course!)
We get to know Avery, a linguistics prodigy, who is secretly learning an Vardeshi from one of few humans to interact with the aliens during their first visit. Due to these secret lessons, Avery is selected as a first ambassador to travel with the Vardeshi to their home planet, Vardesh Prime. I really enjoyed getting to know Avery and her crewmates, even if her personality drove me nuts sometimes (but to be honest, it's probably because I recognized so much of my self in her). Avery is a really great main character, who is decidedly average aside from her gift in linguistics. Watching her grow and evolve as she gets to know the Vardeshi crew was fascinating. The Vardeshi are fleshed out really well, with a rich culture that Pechenick clearly took her time to develop. The book only follows a portion of Avery's journey to Vardesh Prime, but the events that unfold are fascinating and horrific. I am really looking forward to more of this series!
Wow. This book was fantastic! I think part of the reason I enjoyed it so much was that it didn't require me to utterly suspend disbelief; this story is something that could plausibly happen (assuming that aliens wanted to contact us, of course!)
We get to know Avery, a linguistics prodigy, who is secretly learning an Vardeshi from one of few humans to interact with the aliens during their first visit. Due to these secret lessons, Avery is selected as a first ambassador to travel with the Vardeshi to their home planet, Vardesh Prime. I really enjoyed getting to know Avery and her crewmates, even if her personality drove me nuts sometimes (but to be honest, it's probably because I recognized so much of my self in her). Avery is a really great main character, who is decidedly average aside from her gift in linguistics. Watching her grow and evolve as she gets to know the Vardeshi crew was fascinating. The Vardeshi are fleshed out really well, with a rich culture that Pechenick clearly took her time to develop. The book only follows a portion of Avery's journey to Vardesh Prime, but the events that unfold are fascinating and horrific. I am really looking forward to more of this series!
January 6, 2025
UPDATED REVIEW JANUARY 2025
I love this series. So much so that I read it again every January. Not many books hold up to multiple readings and yet the love for them stays the same or even grows. For me, this is one of those rare books.
ORIGINAL REVIEW JANUARY 2023
This is not a space opera as I typically would think of one. There is no action, chasing, fighting, space craft chase scenes etc. Rather, this is a slow but steady account of what challenges are faced when humans and aliens try and interact for the first time. The story sucked me in, got me emotionally involved. I totally fell in love with these characters. The only thing about the whole book that annoyed me was the main character thinking she was in love with someone when they had never had a real conversation, spent any time together, bonded in any way. Just because you are always aware if they are nearby and you are self conscious around them and want to be your best around them- that isn’t love. It could be attraction, but not love. You need to know a person and spend time growing in your feelings to love them. That aside, I was thoroughly addicted to this book and happy that I can read the sequel straight away.
I love this series. So much so that I read it again every January. Not many books hold up to multiple readings and yet the love for them stays the same or even grows. For me, this is one of those rare books.
ORIGINAL REVIEW JANUARY 2023
This is not a space opera as I typically would think of one. There is no action, chasing, fighting, space craft chase scenes etc. Rather, this is a slow but steady account of what challenges are faced when humans and aliens try and interact for the first time. The story sucked me in, got me emotionally involved. I totally fell in love with these characters. The only thing about the whole book that annoyed me was the main character thinking she was in love with someone when they had never had a real conversation, spent any time together, bonded in any way. Just because you are always aware if they are nearby and you are self conscious around them and want to be your best around them- that isn’t love. It could be attraction, but not love. You need to know a person and spend time growing in your feelings to love them. That aside, I was thoroughly addicted to this book and happy that I can read the sequel straight away.
October 4, 2019
Speechless
I saw a recommendation for this book by an author (Sherwood Smith) whose work I tremendously enjoy, and whose opinions I find intriguing and of a depth and breadth which make me wish I were a deeper thinker. So, I got this book. And it is _so_ good. I’ve read tons of space travel and first contact books - none have captured me quite like this one. The protagonist and her experiences are painted with such crispness, depth - the submersible effect is amazing. If I could give this more stars I would.
I saw a recommendation for this book by an author (Sherwood Smith) whose work I tremendously enjoy, and whose opinions I find intriguing and of a depth and breadth which make me wish I were a deeper thinker. So, I got this book. And it is _so_ good. I’ve read tons of space travel and first contact books - none have captured me quite like this one. The protagonist and her experiences are painted with such crispness, depth - the submersible effect is amazing. If I could give this more stars I would.
January 27, 2022
am a big fan of first contact books. Unlike many, this book focuses on the initial contact by an advanced alien society who reaches out to earth and offers an exchange program to expand contact and develop their relationship with earth. It follows a young linguist as she joins the crew of an alien vessel on journey to their home world. It is a thoughtful, sensitive examination of the intricacies involved. For those who look for military sci-fi, this is not for them.
This is a good book but not as good as the next one in the series. Enjoy
This is a good book but not as good as the next one in the series. Enjoy
October 8, 2020
A beautiful and well developed science fiction tale about a linguist chosen to be a human ambassador to an alien planet. This is a complex, character-driven story full of memorable moments. I liken this story to Radiance by Grace Draven where the main characters are understated, imperfect people but who shine with an inner light and prove their strength of character in difficult circumstances. Great read. Read both books in the series in 2 days. Looking forward to the third installment.
January 30, 2019
This is quite a discovery. At first, the pace is slow but then you begin to see how precise the author is to imagine a trip with a foreign species. Attention to details is paying as the tale becomes more and more gripping as you go.
I haven't finished yet, but I'm very happy with the discovery !!! Thanks
I haven't finished yet, but I'm very happy with the discovery !!! Thanks
October 15, 2019
Excellent, innovative and just darn good!
I read extensively, especially sci fi. This book was just so refreshingly different, unique and totally engrossing. Such an amazing story, well developed characters and plot. Cannot wait to read the next book.
I read extensively, especially sci fi. This book was just so refreshingly different, unique and totally engrossing. Such an amazing story, well developed characters and plot. Cannot wait to read the next book.
January 5, 2020
Wonderful book!
This book...no the story is beautiful. The details are abundant without being tedious or hard to follow. You really get to know the characters. I really like the absence of the normal or cliche trope. Well done!
This book...no the story is beautiful. The details are abundant without being tedious or hard to follow. You really get to know the characters. I really like the absence of the normal or cliche trope. Well done!
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