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The Elite Trials #1
Reactive
AN INESCAPABLE CITY. THREE DEADLY TRIALS. ONE WAY OUT.
Lune Tatum, adopted daughter of the Supreme Elite, has lived within her father’s walled city for eleven years.
But she wants out.
Except she can’t leave, and not because of the clans and mutated beasts that roam beyond the impenetrable, electrified walls protecting her life. Her plan has always been to win the Elite Trials and earn Title of Choice—her only chance at freedom. And the only way to return home to her mother.
Then a boy from her past arrives on her eighteenth birthday. His presence threatens Lune's carefully laid plans and exposes memories she's desperate to forget. He can’t be trusted. Especially as he possesses dangerous secrets. And what he reveals could ruin the chance at freedom she’s willing to die for.
Perfect for fans of the Hunger Games, Divergent, and Shatter Me series, THE ELITE TRIALS trilogy is the gripping story of Lune Tatum as she fights for freedom in a futuristic dystopian world plagued by danger, secrets, and betrayal. An emotional, action-packed journey of resilience, second chances, and fierce love.
Lune Tatum, adopted daughter of the Supreme Elite, has lived within her father’s walled city for eleven years.
But she wants out.
Except she can’t leave, and not because of the clans and mutated beasts that roam beyond the impenetrable, electrified walls protecting her life. Her plan has always been to win the Elite Trials and earn Title of Choice—her only chance at freedom. And the only way to return home to her mother.
Then a boy from her past arrives on her eighteenth birthday. His presence threatens Lune's carefully laid plans and exposes memories she's desperate to forget. He can’t be trusted. Especially as he possesses dangerous secrets. And what he reveals could ruin the chance at freedom she’s willing to die for.
Perfect for fans of the Hunger Games, Divergent, and Shatter Me series, THE ELITE TRIALS trilogy is the gripping story of Lune Tatum as she fights for freedom in a futuristic dystopian world plagued by danger, secrets, and betrayal. An emotional, action-packed journey of resilience, second chances, and fierce love.
383 pages, ebook
First published September 5, 2018
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Becky Moynihan
16 books374 followersBecky Moynihan is a bestselling, award-winning author of paranormal romance and urban fantasy. Her books include the A Touch of Vampire series, Wolves of Midnight series, The Elite Trials series, and the co-written Genesis Crystal Saga.
Becky's stories contain feisty heroines and protective males who often toe the morally gray line. When she's not writing, you can find Becky curled up on the couch in her North Carolina home, binge-watching shows and sipping Mountain Dew.
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Becky's stories contain feisty heroines and protective males who often toe the morally gray line. When she's not writing, you can find Becky curled up on the couch in her North Carolina home, binge-watching shows and sipping Mountain Dew.
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January 17, 2021
1.5 Stars
CW:
Oh dear.
How disappointing. This was an angsty enemies to lovers story for the majority of the book. There were some little snippets of good action but, horror of all horrors, the supposedly kick butt heroine is repeatedly rescued by the love interest! Moreover, he materialises out of nowhere! Lune's backstory is good and the premise interesting but the author chose to focus on developing the romance. A missed opportunity.
CW:
Oh dear.
How disappointing. This was an angsty enemies to lovers story for the majority of the book. There were some little snippets of good action but, horror of all horrors, the supposedly kick butt heroine is repeatedly rescued by the love interest! Moreover, he materialises out of nowhere! Lune's backstory is good and the premise interesting but the author chose to focus on developing the romance. A missed opportunity.
October 22, 2018
I had the privilege of beta reading this book in an early stage, and it was honestly a 5 star read back then...but holy crap, it only got better.
I am a huge dystopian fan, so I've read a lot of good and a lot of bad. This book is definitely one of the better ones. I've been more into fantasy lately, but Reactive had this almost fantastical, medieval quality to it despite the futuristic setting that was perfect for a fantasy-lover like me. The setting depicted is a city run like a fiefdom, with the antagonist acting like a feudal lord. Amidst high-tech combat and trial scenes, there's also balls and pretty dresses. There's politics, romance, mutated monsters, and even a supernatural undertone going on. If you're looking for that blend of fantasy and SciFi, I definitely recommend this!
One of the main selling points for on this book is the romance. As much as I love YA, I've been getting a little tired of seeing the same old relationships play out again and again. However, the romance depicted in Reactive is exactly what I needed. It's the perfect blend of tropey and fresh, somehow both swoon-worthy and angsty while remaining healthy. If you make it past the first page and don't already love the protagonist, Lune, then you'll definitely fall for her love interest, Bren. These two are so perfect together, and I absolutely adored watching their story unfold. I don't want to say too much, you just have to read it for yourself.
Read this book if you like: a kickass & relateable heroine, a love story to swoon over, high-stakes trial sequences, excellent fight scenes, horses!, an antagonist that will give you CHILLS, blood....like lots of blood, futuristic dystopian settings, mutant monsters, LOL moments intermixed with heartbreak, more heartbreak, and snark. All the snark.
Don't read this book: if you are looking for something light-hearted and fluffy, if you want something more than pg13 rated, if you don't like having your heart split into pieces, if you want a standalone.
Overall, this book is more than deserving of all its stars. This author has a wonderful writing voice full of snark, attitude, but also really tender, beautiful prose. There are quite a few quotable moments. This book is the setup for a series so there were some loose ends, but I am excited to read more from this talented writer. Now go read it!!
I am a huge dystopian fan, so I've read a lot of good and a lot of bad. This book is definitely one of the better ones. I've been more into fantasy lately, but Reactive had this almost fantastical, medieval quality to it despite the futuristic setting that was perfect for a fantasy-lover like me. The setting depicted is a city run like a fiefdom, with the antagonist acting like a feudal lord. Amidst high-tech combat and trial scenes, there's also balls and pretty dresses. There's politics, romance, mutated monsters, and even a supernatural undertone going on. If you're looking for that blend of fantasy and SciFi, I definitely recommend this!
One of the main selling points for on this book is the romance. As much as I love YA, I've been getting a little tired of seeing the same old relationships play out again and again. However, the romance depicted in Reactive is exactly what I needed. It's the perfect blend of tropey and fresh, somehow both swoon-worthy and angsty while remaining healthy. If you make it past the first page and don't already love the protagonist, Lune, then you'll definitely fall for her love interest, Bren. These two are so perfect together, and I absolutely adored watching their story unfold. I don't want to say too much, you just have to read it for yourself.
Read this book if you like: a kickass & relateable heroine, a love story to swoon over, high-stakes trial sequences, excellent fight scenes, horses!, an antagonist that will give you CHILLS, blood....like lots of blood, futuristic dystopian settings, mutant monsters, LOL moments intermixed with heartbreak, more heartbreak, and snark. All the snark.
Don't read this book: if you are looking for something light-hearted and fluffy, if you want something more than pg13 rated, if you don't like having your heart split into pieces, if you want a standalone.
Overall, this book is more than deserving of all its stars. This author has a wonderful writing voice full of snark, attitude, but also really tender, beautiful prose. There are quite a few quotable moments. This book is the setup for a series so there were some loose ends, but I am excited to read more from this talented writer. Now go read it!!
May 2, 2019
I don’t read much dystopian—I’m not sure why, but overall it’s not a genre I tend to gravitate toward. Still, the concept of Reactive sparked my curiosity and I just had to give it a shot when I was asked to beta read.
No. Regrets.
I literally could not put Reactive down. The entire time I was on the edge of my seat wondering what could possibly happen next, and trailing the development of a very feelsy romance. I absolutely devoured this story and its fantastic cast of characters.
Lune is a strong, sassy character with a distinct voice and a lot of personality. Her fight for freedom and survival is admirable, and I think there are some beautiful lessons to be learned about finding one’s own strength.
Bren is sweet and his banter with Lune is A+. He definitely seems to have his secrets though, so I’m excited to see how his character progresses. >.>
Both main characters have very relatable quirks that made me fall in love with them all that much more. But don't think Reactive lacks side characters--a certain stable hand is one of my absolute favorites. ;)
And the horses! Can we talk about the horses? Probably not, without spoilers… But let’s just say that even despite their less-charming feature, I want one. Or five.
I literally don’t have the words to tell you guys how much I love this book. So check it out. This does not feel like a debut novel. <3
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TL;DR:
Packed with first-rate action, delightfully snarky characters, and a swoon-worthy romance, Reactive won't release you until you've read every word!
No. Regrets.
I literally could not put Reactive down. The entire time I was on the edge of my seat wondering what could possibly happen next, and trailing the development of a very feelsy romance. I absolutely devoured this story and its fantastic cast of characters.
Lune is a strong, sassy character with a distinct voice and a lot of personality. Her fight for freedom and survival is admirable, and I think there are some beautiful lessons to be learned about finding one’s own strength.
Bren is sweet and his banter with Lune is A+. He definitely seems to have his secrets though, so I’m excited to see how his character progresses. >.>
Both main characters have very relatable quirks that made me fall in love with them all that much more. But don't think Reactive lacks side characters--a certain stable hand is one of my absolute favorites. ;)
And the horses! Can we talk about the horses? Probably not, without spoilers… But let’s just say that even despite their less-charming feature, I want one. Or five.
I literally don’t have the words to tell you guys how much I love this book. So check it out. This does not feel like a debut novel. <3
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TL;DR:
Packed with first-rate action, delightfully snarky characters, and a swoon-worthy romance, Reactive won't release you until you've read every word!
August 9, 2019
I am not the biggest reader of dystopian novels, or at least, pure dystopian. It’s been a hot minute since I’ve read anything in the genre mainly because I haven’t seen a lot of exciting things done in it. But, behold! Allow me to introduce you to “Reactive” and Tatum City! The world our MC, Lune, occupies has been destroyed—nuclear fallout is kind of what is alluded to but I'm not sure. Strange beasts roam the wilds, and safety can only be found in the walled cities. But some cities are far from safe. Lune is kidnapped from her loving mother, and given to the leader of Tatum City where she is constantly beaten, as everyone around her tries to break her spirit. But that never stops Lune from going for the one thing she wants more than anything else: to be reunited with her mother who she hasn’t seen for 11 years. The only way to do that is to win the three deadly Trials. Winning just one Trial means you get the right to have a better job, and additional benefits for your family, but winning all three means you are given a boon of your choosing, and Lune would do anything to win and choose her freedom. Well, almost anything.
Here’s the thing, if you really liked the Hunger Games or even Divergent (I’ll confess, I didn’t love Divergent), this is going to be 100% your jam. There are so many flavors of the Hunger Games in Moynihan’s book with the deadly game-like atmosphere of the Trials, the brutality of the cities ruler, the fact that almost everyone who competes is pretty much a kid, the societal structure... I know that can really throw off some people to have those similarities, but I found there to be enough difference where it didn’t bother me. Like, for instance, the amazing carnivorous Chargers!—they’re essentially horses, but they eat meat and their hair is razor sharp. How cool is that? Plus the sarcastic, sometimes dry, humor that Lune and Bren—our leading man—have is a lot of fun. Bren and Lune’s romance can feel a little insta-love at times, especially given Bren’s history, but Bren is such a delicious cinnamon roll that it’s easy to be swept away by his devotion to Lune and how he always supports her goals.
That was another thing I liked a lot: how Lune needs Bren in so, so many ways. He’s just as formidable of a force as she is, which adds a lot of wonderful tension and complications as both Lune and Bren try to achieve the same goal. There’s a lot of mystery around why Bren is in the city, and why he can’t talk about it, that is really intriguing, too. Unfortunately it doesn’t really get settled in this installment of the trilogy, but it was a fascinating development when it did get cleared up a tiny little bit.
I guess that’s my one issue with the story. I am a sucker for the elaborate world building you find in fantasies. The world building in “Reactive” is fine, it’s pretty on course with what you’d expect in a dystopian because the primary focus is on the action—which is portrayed really well, I might add, it’s a serious page turner when Lune and Bren start the Trials! But I never had a clear picture of what Tatum City looked like, or how it was physically laid out with the different Trail courses, where the village was, and therefore how big it was. There was also a fair amount of little secrets that are hinted at but aren’t necessarily answered—like how Lune developed a very specific phobia, why books are banned but there’s a lot of high tech defenses, or WHY her “father” wanted her to begin with. Which is good for the most part! Most of them make me excited for the next book, but I feel like I needed a little bit more explored so I could get a better sense of the characters and the challenges they’d have to face outside of the Trials. I needed a bit more as to why Bren was in Tatum City to begin with in order for me to 100% believe that Lune 1. Forgave him and 2. Genuinely cared for him given his past. It would have helped me understand why Bren was so taken with Lune from the get go when she’s pretty mean to him early on (for good reason, but still). But a lot of that is forgiven with HOW this first book ended. I can’t say more because of spoilers, but oh my stars!
Lune is a damaged, flawed character, and I love that. She wants to be seen as strong, and fiercely independent, but in many ways she’s still just that scared little girl who was ripped away from her mother. It was an interesting contrast that made for very real character development. The book ends with some seriously high stakes that Lune is going to be facing in the sequel (out now, thank goodness!) and I am DYING to know what will happen next for Iris, and what complication the mysterious Ryker may pose to Lune and Bren—I’m honestly really drawn to Ryker, I don’t even know why but I feel like it’s going to destroy me. This is a wonderful debut from a very talented writer and a solid 4 star read! I can’t wait to see what happens next in the trilogy!
Here’s the thing, if you really liked the Hunger Games or even Divergent (I’ll confess, I didn’t love Divergent), this is going to be 100% your jam. There are so many flavors of the Hunger Games in Moynihan’s book with the deadly game-like atmosphere of the Trials, the brutality of the cities ruler, the fact that almost everyone who competes is pretty much a kid, the societal structure... I know that can really throw off some people to have those similarities, but I found there to be enough difference where it didn’t bother me. Like, for instance, the amazing carnivorous Chargers!—they’re essentially horses, but they eat meat and their hair is razor sharp. How cool is that? Plus the sarcastic, sometimes dry, humor that Lune and Bren—our leading man—have is a lot of fun. Bren and Lune’s romance can feel a little insta-love at times, especially given Bren’s history, but Bren is such a delicious cinnamon roll that it’s easy to be swept away by his devotion to Lune and how he always supports her goals.
That was another thing I liked a lot: how Lune needs Bren in so, so many ways. He’s just as formidable of a force as she is, which adds a lot of wonderful tension and complications as both Lune and Bren try to achieve the same goal. There’s a lot of mystery around why Bren is in the city, and why he can’t talk about it, that is really intriguing, too. Unfortunately it doesn’t really get settled in this installment of the trilogy, but it was a fascinating development when it did get cleared up a tiny little bit.
I guess that’s my one issue with the story. I am a sucker for the elaborate world building you find in fantasies. The world building in “Reactive” is fine, it’s pretty on course with what you’d expect in a dystopian because the primary focus is on the action—which is portrayed really well, I might add, it’s a serious page turner when Lune and Bren start the Trials! But I never had a clear picture of what Tatum City looked like, or how it was physically laid out with the different Trail courses, where the village was, and therefore how big it was. There was also a fair amount of little secrets that are hinted at but aren’t necessarily answered—like how Lune developed a very specific phobia, why books are banned but there’s a lot of high tech defenses, or WHY her “father” wanted her to begin with. Which is good for the most part! Most of them make me excited for the next book, but I feel like I needed a little bit more explored so I could get a better sense of the characters and the challenges they’d have to face outside of the Trials. I needed a bit more as to why Bren was in Tatum City to begin with in order for me to 100% believe that Lune 1. Forgave him and 2. Genuinely cared for him given his past. It would have helped me understand why Bren was so taken with Lune from the get go when she’s pretty mean to him early on (for good reason, but still). But a lot of that is forgiven with HOW this first book ended. I can’t say more because of spoilers, but oh my stars!
Lune is a damaged, flawed character, and I love that. She wants to be seen as strong, and fiercely independent, but in many ways she’s still just that scared little girl who was ripped away from her mother. It was an interesting contrast that made for very real character development. The book ends with some seriously high stakes that Lune is going to be facing in the sequel (out now, thank goodness!) and I am DYING to know what will happen next for Iris, and what complication the mysterious Ryker may pose to Lune and Bren—I’m honestly really drawn to Ryker, I don’t even know why but I feel like it’s going to destroy me. This is a wonderful debut from a very talented writer and a solid 4 star read! I can’t wait to see what happens next in the trilogy!
September 26, 2018
5/5 stars!
Dystopian isn't my go-to genre by any means (like, I haven't even read The Hunger Games) but once I started Reactive I could not put it down!
The plot was so interesting, and the three trials the contestants have to go through are all so unique. Although there is still much to be revealed about the overarching plot and the setting (it's only book one, after all!) I loved seeing the world--well, the city--that main character Lune is forced to live in. It's both a beautiful city and a city that is deadly and full of malice, and I really love how the author shows this.
Lune Tatum is everything I wanted in a protagonist! She is strong as hell, but is still in touch with her emotions. She cries, she laughs, she fears...she's relatable, and I can't wait to see where her story goes!
Bren is the main love interest--as well as being a solid, interesting character in his own right. He has lots of secrets, but they're hinted at just enough to give the reader some potential clues as to what might be secretly going on! His character is earnest and kind while being incredibly tough and a little "rough around the edges," since he grew up in wilderness outside the city. I honestly adored him and am 10000% rooting for Lune and Bren to make it to the end.
All in all, I LOVED reading Reactive and can't wait for book 2! I'd definitely recommend this to fans of dystopian, or just action-packed, banter-filled books in general!
Dystopian isn't my go-to genre by any means (like, I haven't even read The Hunger Games) but once I started Reactive I could not put it down!
The plot was so interesting, and the three trials the contestants have to go through are all so unique. Although there is still much to be revealed about the overarching plot and the setting (it's only book one, after all!) I loved seeing the world--well, the city--that main character Lune is forced to live in. It's both a beautiful city and a city that is deadly and full of malice, and I really love how the author shows this.
Lune Tatum is everything I wanted in a protagonist! She is strong as hell, but is still in touch with her emotions. She cries, she laughs, she fears...she's relatable, and I can't wait to see where her story goes!
Bren is the main love interest--as well as being a solid, interesting character in his own right. He has lots of secrets, but they're hinted at just enough to give the reader some potential clues as to what might be secretly going on! His character is earnest and kind while being incredibly tough and a little "rough around the edges," since he grew up in wilderness outside the city. I honestly adored him and am 10000% rooting for Lune and Bren to make it to the end.
All in all, I LOVED reading Reactive and can't wait for book 2! I'd definitely recommend this to fans of dystopian, or just action-packed, banter-filled books in general!
July 30, 2019
If you are remotely at all interested in dystopian stories, this series is for you. It is a cross between Hunger Games and Shatter Me and will leave you dying for the next book in the series.
Lune Tatum is stuck in a city she wants no part of. The worst part, it's run by her adoptive father who is as cruel as they come. In order to escape she has to win. Winning was never a problem until Bren shows up and turns her whole world upside down. Now Lune must chose between being free and ultimately trapping Bren.
The character development and pace of the book is nothing short of awesome. Becky does an incredible job of sucking you in and making you attached to the characters and their well being. the sarcastic banter and sass from Lune will leave you cheering her on throughout the entire book. Not only do you want her to succeed you want her relationships to as well. While Bren is basically as perfect as they come, I found myself drawn to Ryker. He doesn't make much of an appearance in this book but I am hoping that changes later in the series.
Warning, (although the next book is out so you can just start it immediately), it leaves on a cliffhanger. One that will make you want to start reading the next book immediately! So you should go do that.
Lune Tatum is stuck in a city she wants no part of. The worst part, it's run by her adoptive father who is as cruel as they come. In order to escape she has to win. Winning was never a problem until Bren shows up and turns her whole world upside down. Now Lune must chose between being free and ultimately trapping Bren.
The character development and pace of the book is nothing short of awesome. Becky does an incredible job of sucking you in and making you attached to the characters and their well being. the sarcastic banter and sass from Lune will leave you cheering her on throughout the entire book. Not only do you want her to succeed you want her relationships to as well. While Bren is basically as perfect as they come, I found myself drawn to Ryker. He doesn't make much of an appearance in this book but I am hoping that changes later in the series.
Warning, (although the next book is out so you can just start it immediately), it leaves on a cliffhanger. One that will make you want to start reading the next book immediately! So you should go do that.
July 17, 2019
Luna Tatum is trapped between her father’s city walls and she wants out, but the only way to be free is by competing in three trials and becoming the champion. She spends her days training with only one goal on her mind until a boy from her past comes back. Can she trust him though?
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Reactive is a YA Dystopian perfect for fans of The Hunger Games and Divergent.It is fast paced and a page-turner.
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There are a lot of things that I enjoyed about this book: the world, the yummy boys, the horrible villains, did I say the yummy boys?… but I think what made this book special is Lune. Her situation inside the city walls is horrible and she has to endure both physical and psychological pain. She is very strong but we also see her vulnerable and scared side, and I think this is what made her real.
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The whole story is from Lune’s POV and this worked really well. We actually find things out at the same time as she does which makes everything more suspenseful. And Bren,dreamy Bren, he’s just a sweetheart healing from his own trauma. Their banter is hilarious and had me nervously smiling at times.
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I was not expecting that ending and now I need to read Adaptive asap!
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Reactive is a YA Dystopian perfect for fans of The Hunger Games and Divergent.It is fast paced and a page-turner.
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There are a lot of things that I enjoyed about this book: the world, the yummy boys, the horrible villains, did I say the yummy boys?… but I think what made this book special is Lune. Her situation inside the city walls is horrible and she has to endure both physical and psychological pain. She is very strong but we also see her vulnerable and scared side, and I think this is what made her real.
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The whole story is from Lune’s POV and this worked really well. We actually find things out at the same time as she does which makes everything more suspenseful. And Bren,dreamy Bren, he’s just a sweetheart healing from his own trauma. Their banter is hilarious and had me nervously smiling at times.
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I was not expecting that ending and now I need to read Adaptive asap!
February 26, 2020
First of all, let me admit to one truth.. I am a sucker for dystopian novels. And it is not the hardest truth to admit that I am also a sucker for romance novels. But wait what if we add those two genres together and top it with great writing style, it adds up to one word, REACTIVE.
Reactive is the first book in the series highly anticipated by me. It revolves around a badass character, named Luna who strives to get her freedom through the Elite Trials hosted by her adoptive tyrant of a stepfather and earn Title of Choice. Her meticulously contracted plan of freedom gets a unexpected dent when a mysterious figure from her past makes his appearance. Nothing will be the same for Luna Tatum.
Even going through the premise, gives me chills as I in desperate need to reread this book and relive those heart-shuddering moments and all those swoony encounters between two main characters.
Luna was a wonderful character to look at the story. She had tough unapologetic attitude and was ready to grab the life by its b**ls. She also was a character with so much vulnerability that you couldn't help but to root for.
I am not even going to start about Bren. That boy captured my heart and made me fall in love with him just as certain someone. The moments with him were my favorite. His character was so beautifully done with so much depth. Those golden eyes will haunt me forever.
The story was a nicely paced and the events were unfolding greatly. There were some twists and turns that made a great impact on the story. The trials were very action packed and beautifully constructed. I could actually clearly see the action scenes in my head.
Overall, the book was such a great addition to my favorites. I cannot wait for the second book and I am praying that nothing bad happens to my favorite characters.
Thank you lovely Becky Moynihan for creating such a great story and sharing it with us.
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March 9, 2020DANG IT! I had so much more to say right when I finished this book. But I didn't have time to write my review yet, and now I can't remember many thoughts or reactions! BLEGH! I'll do my best...
Reminder that these opinions are expressed from a place of my personal reading preferences, and are not to be taken too seriously. I am not an authority on anything; just a fellow reader. If you disagree with me completely, you have that right.
I had the privilege of reading this book when it was in the beta stage, and I enjoyed it so much. It's always refreshing to read indie writing that doesn't make you wanna pull your hair out, lol (I LOVE indie books, but not all are created equal). Picking this up again as a finished book was fun in that I got to see what had and hadn't changed, and what parts had become more developed, etc. It was cool to go back into this world with Lune, and especially to spend time with my boi Bren, who is a darling piece of gummy candy with a melty sweet center! As for everything else, here comes my content rating breakdown:
Scores rank from 0-10. For craft, 0 is "I can't get those hours of my life back", 10 is best of the best. For Prudie™ wholesome ratings, the scores are backward: 10 is atomic bomb, 0 is non-existent.
Craft ratings:
-> Writing: 6/10
Becky is a strong writer, and there is no doubt about that. But I could tell how far she's come since this debut. We're taught as writers to "show, don't tell", but there are times when telling is perfectly appropriate, and too much showing slows down the pace. This was one of my only issues with the book: action and movement interrupted by extraneous emotive reaction, like held breaths and rolling eyes and snorts and chuckles and on and on. This lightens up toward the end of the book, but I can't pretend it doesn't weigh down the pace. (I'm betting that if Becky had written this now instead of years ago, she'd edit that stuff out, easy-peasy, because she's a hoss.) Anyway, other than that, the writing has much going for it! It's atmospheric, evocative, attentive, and knowledgable, and draws on your favorite dystopian vibes.
-> Plot: 7/10
Lots of feels similar to Divergent or Hunger Games, with survival being superimposed into the main motivations of the story. The last few chapters had some surprises, which I really appreciated, making the ending my favorite part because it was compulsively readable. And while there are numerous parts of this book that are exciting and action-packed, if you don't like romance, I caution you, lol. The romance between MC Lune and her dreamy counterpart is almost as primary as the plotline of the Trials (the namesake event of the series). Also, it could be argued that not much happens outside of a few key scenes--but I think that is probably something you'd hear from readers who don't care for the romance, lol. If you're on the opposite side of the line and ARE into romance, though, you have a treat in store! Lastly, I REALLY needed to know more about the more supernatural-seeming secrets going on with some of the characters, but those were not explored in this book, making them almost irrelevant.
-> Characterization: 8/10
This is the part that I think Becky treated with the utmost care, and you can really see that in the way each character is written. Lune is well-rounded and has lots of layers to her. I will say that she's a bit juvenile in her sense of humor, but I seem to be the only one who thinks that, so I'm gonna chalk it up to personal preference, lol. Bren is a lovely cinnamon roll, but I refuse to examine him too closely because he may be a little too perfect, kinda like Gilbert Blythe (ANOTHER THAT I REFUSE TO EXAMINE TOO CLOSELY). We'll see where the next book takes him, because I do sense trouble on the horizon. And the villain...well, he's undeniably a scumbag, but I found myself yawning at him this go-around UNTIL the last few chapters. It was then that he made me sit up and pay attention, because he finally proved to be more conniving than I'd been shown thus far in the story. And as far as the characterization of the city goes, I didn't get as much world building as I wanted, making it hard to fully picture the setting (except in the woods; that was always clear), and even sometimes to orient myself in a scene. I'm all for not getting bogged down by Tolkien-esque description, but like, I need to have a clear picture of where I am and what the world is like. Any time I was confused in the story, it was almost always because I couldn't get oriented within the setting.
Wholesome ratings:
-> Language: 0/10
No profanity, yayyy!
-> Steaminess: 4/10
It's kind of amazing how steamy this book is when there is zero sex, lol! There's barely even kissing! But Lune and Bren have such sizzling chemistry, man...it's serious. They can burn each other up with just a look!
-> Positive theme(s): 9/10
One of the biggest strengths of this book was in the thematic material. No spoilers, but I'll just say that Becky brought lots of raw insight, and it was well-placed in the story.
-> Political correctness: 1/10
A few baddy boss ladies! Which I loved.
-> Violence: 7/10
If I had to compare this to another dystopian with the violence, I'd say more Divergent than Hunger Games?? Probably. I think??? XD There's plenty in the way of blood, and Lord knows poor Lune gets the crap beat out of her on a constant loop. And I seem to recall one instance of someone dying a particularly gruesome death to the point that I audibly went, "ICK!" Overall suitable for YA, but violence is a recurring theme (though, I mean...if you read the description, shouldn't that be obvious? lol).
All in all, a fascinating start to a series that does show much promise. I've started on the second book, and intend to read through the last book. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes, because I honestly have no idea, lol!
**Star ratings withheld from indie books. Just my personal choice as an indie author.**
Reminder that these opinions are expressed from a place of my personal reading preferences, and are not to be taken too seriously. I am not an authority on anything; just a fellow reader. If you disagree with me completely, you have that right.
I had the privilege of reading this book when it was in the beta stage, and I enjoyed it so much. It's always refreshing to read indie writing that doesn't make you wanna pull your hair out, lol (I LOVE indie books, but not all are created equal). Picking this up again as a finished book was fun in that I got to see what had and hadn't changed, and what parts had become more developed, etc. It was cool to go back into this world with Lune, and especially to spend time with my boi Bren, who is a darling piece of gummy candy with a melty sweet center! As for everything else, here comes my content rating breakdown:
Scores rank from 0-10. For craft, 0 is "I can't get those hours of my life back", 10 is best of the best. For Prudie™ wholesome ratings, the scores are backward: 10 is atomic bomb, 0 is non-existent.
Craft ratings:
-> Writing: 6/10
Becky is a strong writer, and there is no doubt about that. But I could tell how far she's come since this debut. We're taught as writers to "show, don't tell", but there are times when telling is perfectly appropriate, and too much showing slows down the pace. This was one of my only issues with the book: action and movement interrupted by extraneous emotive reaction, like held breaths and rolling eyes and snorts and chuckles and on and on. This lightens up toward the end of the book, but I can't pretend it doesn't weigh down the pace. (I'm betting that if Becky had written this now instead of years ago, she'd edit that stuff out, easy-peasy, because she's a hoss.) Anyway, other than that, the writing has much going for it! It's atmospheric, evocative, attentive, and knowledgable, and draws on your favorite dystopian vibes.
-> Plot: 7/10
Lots of feels similar to Divergent or Hunger Games, with survival being superimposed into the main motivations of the story. The last few chapters had some surprises, which I really appreciated, making the ending my favorite part because it was compulsively readable. And while there are numerous parts of this book that are exciting and action-packed, if you don't like romance, I caution you, lol. The romance between MC Lune and her dreamy counterpart is almost as primary as the plotline of the Trials (the namesake event of the series). Also, it could be argued that not much happens outside of a few key scenes--but I think that is probably something you'd hear from readers who don't care for the romance, lol. If you're on the opposite side of the line and ARE into romance, though, you have a treat in store! Lastly, I REALLY needed to know more about the more supernatural-seeming secrets going on with some of the characters, but those were not explored in this book, making them almost irrelevant.
-> Characterization: 8/10
This is the part that I think Becky treated with the utmost care, and you can really see that in the way each character is written. Lune is well-rounded and has lots of layers to her. I will say that she's a bit juvenile in her sense of humor, but I seem to be the only one who thinks that, so I'm gonna chalk it up to personal preference, lol. Bren is a lovely cinnamon roll, but I refuse to examine him too closely because he may be a little too perfect, kinda like Gilbert Blythe (ANOTHER THAT I REFUSE TO EXAMINE TOO CLOSELY). We'll see where the next book takes him, because I do sense trouble on the horizon. And the villain...well, he's undeniably a scumbag, but I found myself yawning at him this go-around UNTIL the last few chapters. It was then that he made me sit up and pay attention, because he finally proved to be more conniving than I'd been shown thus far in the story. And as far as the characterization of the city goes, I didn't get as much world building as I wanted, making it hard to fully picture the setting (except in the woods; that was always clear), and even sometimes to orient myself in a scene. I'm all for not getting bogged down by Tolkien-esque description, but like, I need to have a clear picture of where I am and what the world is like. Any time I was confused in the story, it was almost always because I couldn't get oriented within the setting.
Wholesome ratings:
-> Language: 0/10
No profanity, yayyy!
-> Steaminess: 4/10
It's kind of amazing how steamy this book is when there is zero sex, lol! There's barely even kissing! But Lune and Bren have such sizzling chemistry, man...it's serious. They can burn each other up with just a look!
-> Positive theme(s): 9/10
One of the biggest strengths of this book was in the thematic material. No spoilers, but I'll just say that Becky brought lots of raw insight, and it was well-placed in the story.
-> Political correctness: 1/10
A few baddy boss ladies! Which I loved.
-> Violence: 7/10
If I had to compare this to another dystopian with the violence, I'd say more Divergent than Hunger Games?? Probably. I think??? XD There's plenty in the way of blood, and Lord knows poor Lune gets the crap beat out of her on a constant loop. And I seem to recall one instance of someone dying a particularly gruesome death to the point that I audibly went, "ICK!" Overall suitable for YA, but violence is a recurring theme (though, I mean...if you read the description, shouldn't that be obvious? lol).
All in all, a fascinating start to a series that does show much promise. I've started on the second book, and intend to read through the last book. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes, because I honestly have no idea, lol!
**Star ratings withheld from indie books. Just my personal choice as an indie author.**
September 10, 2018
*I've received an ARC from the author in return for a honest review*
THAT WAS AMAZING. Honestly, I didn't go into this one with high expectations. I've read so many dystopias and they are the genre that tends to disappoint me the most. But this one is different.
I guess the key here is the characters and the narration. The first person POV works so well, which is a rarity these days. There are so many emotions, so many things that can (and do) go wrong, and the well-written narration makes you care (or, in my case, almost cry (in a park) at one point). That's the thing that makes or brakes the book. If you don't care what happens to the character, it doesn't matter how high the stakes are. Worry not, Becky Moynihan will make you care about Lune all right.
We only get some hints about how the world is built and normally it would bother me, but somehow, it makes it even better. Just like Lune, we don't really understand what we are facing, and it makes it a whole lot more terrifying. All we have is a tease as to what I'm sure is to come in the next book.
Also, I was completely smitten by Brendon, which, once again, doesn't happen all that often anymore.
I'm definitely waiting for the sequels.
THAT WAS AMAZING. Honestly, I didn't go into this one with high expectations. I've read so many dystopias and they are the genre that tends to disappoint me the most. But this one is different.
I guess the key here is the characters and the narration. The first person POV works so well, which is a rarity these days. There are so many emotions, so many things that can (and do) go wrong, and the well-written narration makes you care (or, in my case, almost cry (in a park) at one point). That's the thing that makes or brakes the book. If you don't care what happens to the character, it doesn't matter how high the stakes are. Worry not, Becky Moynihan will make you care about Lune all right.
We only get some hints about how the world is built and normally it would bother me, but somehow, it makes it even better. Just like Lune, we don't really understand what we are facing, and it makes it a whole lot more terrifying. All we have is a tease as to what I'm sure is to come in the next book.
Also, I was completely smitten by Brendon, which, once again, doesn't happen all that often anymore.
I'm definitely waiting for the sequels.
October 2, 2018
This book is a stunning read. Hunger Games meets Divergent and makes something even better. I’m fairly certain this is the author’s first book but you would never know it. It’s story and characters are compelling and devastating. It’s a fairly long read but it’s worth it. Congratulations to a job well done!!! Must read YA!!
December 20, 2019
Incredible
I don't feel as if I can do this book justice with my review. There was so much hope and heartbreak in this beautiful written story. Please read it for yourself, definitely a must read series.
I don't feel as if I can do this book justice with my review. There was so much hope and heartbreak in this beautiful written story. Please read it for yourself, definitely a must read series.
September 1, 2018
First of all - I was lucky enough to be among the few who got a chance to beta read for this book, and while I'm not a huge fan of dystopian (barring hunger games) I COULD NOT put this book down! After every line you read, you wanna read some more for Lune Tatum's snark comments and her sense of humor. She is one of those heroes who deals with her inner turmoils as well making her very relatable.
Now, Bren is a whole another story. There's an air of mystery built around him, that will leave you wondering.
In a nutshell, it's a neatly wrapped, well written book with just one edge left undone to make sure you stick around.
Now, Bren is a whole another story. There's an air of mystery built around him, that will leave you wondering.
In a nutshell, it's a neatly wrapped, well written book with just one edge left undone to make sure you stick around.
September 10, 2018
I received a free copy for an honest review. I don't like many dystopian novels but this one struck my fancy. I liked Lune immediately from the very first page. However, one thing that I didn't like about her was that she didn't ask the questions that she wanted to ask Bren until around the middle of the story. I get why she was hesitant and I know she had every right to be, but that would have been the first thing I would have asked him the moment we were alone. I, like Lune, was weary of Bren from the beginning, but I quickly grew attached to him. I can't wait for the next book because I still have so many questions.
November 28, 2019
Boring read..
Loved the cover and I thought the storyline will show a strong mc. There is nothing great about this book except the cover. It is boring, lots of abuse, showing a pathetic mc living a prison life, and the worst is I couldn't stand the love interest. I mean here we have a beaten up imprisoned mc and throw in the love interest as the caused of her imprisonment just didn't make sense. Hated the plot and the repetitive abuse. I don't care for books with a beaten up mc with nothing going for her. Boring and too much abuse. Can't recommend this book.
Loved the cover and I thought the storyline will show a strong mc. There is nothing great about this book except the cover. It is boring, lots of abuse, showing a pathetic mc living a prison life, and the worst is I couldn't stand the love interest. I mean here we have a beaten up imprisoned mc and throw in the love interest as the caused of her imprisonment just didn't make sense. Hated the plot and the repetitive abuse. I don't care for books with a beaten up mc with nothing going for her. Boring and too much abuse. Can't recommend this book.
September 17, 2018
Holy smokes! This book is absolutely incredible! Everything about it is utter perfection. The writing, the world building, the characters, the drama and suspense... Everything was so real, as if I’d been completely immersed into the book, and was in Lune’s shoes. I can’t remember the last time a book has done this to me, but man, what an adventure. I’m super hyped for the rest of the books and need them STAT.
July 24, 2019
If you love a fast-paced, strong female lead, twist and turns kind of story, YOU MUST READ REACTIVE!
Lune Tatum/Avery is a fierce, brave, and headstrong female lead and is every bit the girl I’d hope to be if I were in her situation. She is groomed and trained by the Elites.
That all changes when Bren comes to the city and she is tasked with training him. Can she stay loyal to the trials or will the boy she’s supposed to hate cause her to falter off course?
Lune Tatum/Avery is a fierce, brave, and headstrong female lead and is every bit the girl I’d hope to be if I were in her situation. She is groomed and trained by the Elites.
That all changes when Bren comes to the city and she is tasked with training him. Can she stay loyal to the trials or will the boy she’s supposed to hate cause her to falter off course?
November 23, 2020
Holy smokes AMAZING!!!!
Wait I need a minute because that was intense
This is hunger games meets divergent in a fast page tense heart breaking YA dystopian thriller
Luna Tatum was kidnapped at a young age and brought to Tatum city to live with her adopted parents
Preparing for the trials and one chance of freedom until a pair of amber eyes derails her plans and her life,
Amber eyes she’s only seen once before, amber eyes that belonged to her kidnapper
Wait I need a minute because that was intense
This is hunger games meets divergent in a fast page tense heart breaking YA dystopian thriller
Luna Tatum was kidnapped at a young age and brought to Tatum city to live with her adopted parents
Preparing for the trials and one chance of freedom until a pair of amber eyes derails her plans and her life,
Amber eyes she’s only seen once before, amber eyes that belonged to her kidnapper
March 1, 2020
I loved the book. It keeps you hooked on to find what happens next. There a little mystery to the events along with a bit of love and romance. Just an overflow of all the emotions at once. Reactive indeed 😊
November 22, 2021
This is a Young Adult/New Adult Dystopian/Romance novel book 1.
Book Cover: 4* - I like seeing the main character on book covers. Full bodied or half bodied, nothing less, showing me who they are or might become. I'm giving this category 4 stars because setting wise it didn't really tell me anything about the story. It's just a green sky with a silhouette of a forest behind her. It's still a cool, well done, and bad ass cover none the less.
Summary/Tagline: 4* - I REALLY like the tagline for this book. "You always have a choice." To me it's like a punch in the face to all the fictional characters who say, "I didn't have a choice.", and the main character tries to live by that for the most part. Now as for the summary, I like it, but it didn't grab me like the tagline did. I was curious about why the main character wants out of the city she lives in. I also figured that the boy mentioned in the summary was going to become a love interest, regardless of whatever he may have done in the past. You'll find out what I mean in the next category.
Characters: 3.5* - The character we follow throughout the book is Lune Tatum/Avery, adoptive daughter to the Supreme Elite/leader/caretaker of Tatum city where she lives. I do like Lune, but there are a few issues I have with her character. I like that she is determined and dedicated, but largely flawed(in a good way). Because of this society, she doesn't trust anyone, finds weakness to be a problem, has no friends(except for Asher, which I wish I got to see more of to better form an opinion on, because he was a sweet character). Sadly, like myself, she keeps everything bottled up inside until it explodes out like a raging inferno, which I don't like. Lune's other problem for me is when things don't go her way, she blames everyone else but herself, Brendan especially. She also has a bad habit of reminding the reader of how tall and handsome her love interest is, which started to grind on me really fast. I really hope Lune gets better with expressing herself more healthily and will be capable of trusting people in future books. Brendan Bearon, her trainee, her past kidnapper, and love interest, actually wants to and tries to be her friend, asks her to open up to him so he can help her, even though it seems he doesn't/hasn't fully grasped what kind of society he is in. Brendan is also my fave character in this book. He's sweet, caring, and the s*** that comes out of his mouth, *MUAH!* is pure gold. He has a lot of great quotes that I wrote down lol. Now for Antagonists, we have Lune's adoptive father, Renold Tatum, and his blood daughter, Rose Tatum. Both are horrendous people. We don't actually see much of them in this book, but when we do I just want Lune to take her gold daggers and stick the blades right in their necks(Intended hate for antagonists achieved) . . . too graphic? Lol, anyway, I don't fully understand these 2 and their motives towards Lune. Renold has an obsession of loyalty and controlling people and Rose just seems to hate Lune. I'm sure we will get more of Renold's motives in later books, but I was just getting frustrated at the many questions I kept asking when Lune is alone with the a** but never got answers. Why Lune? Why only be strict and punish her in torturing manners? Why not also treat your daughter the same way? I have a guess that Renold actually doesn't pay that much attention to Rose and I feel like he only sees her as a nuisance, though this is never stated, at least from what I read. I think his negligence of Rose goats her into taking out her jealousy on Lune, which causes Lune to attack her. Rose then happily reports Lune's aggression to Renold which causes Lune to be punished, violently. Again, I'm sure it will be explained more in later books, but I wanted those answers sooner than later. There are other characters, some vile and one curious case, but nothing noteworthy enough to mention at the moment.
World Building: 2* - Now this is a dystopian novel, so something big must've happened to bring down society to what Lune is living in now. What is it? I have no idea. All I know is that something silent and deadly swept over the world, which I believe was 3+ generations ago. There are now monstrous creatures and/or mutated version of normal animals in the world. One I never thought I'd want one of my own is a charger, which is a carnivorous horse. Yeah, you read that right, carnivorous horses, how cool is that? Tatum City history is not well established in my opinion. There is no religion, yet words like Hell, God, Angels, and Demons are thrown around as if Christianity/Catholicism is a thing, which I don't think it is. My other issue is that books are banned/illegal in this society. Why? It does insinuate that it will spark inspiration, dream, and rebellion, which, yeah okay I can get behind that logic, problem is, NO books are allowed. So I can’t help but wonder how this society knows how to make paper for contracts or how people know how to read and write. There also exists crazy high-tech stuff like a massive electric wall and machines that imitate the mutated monsters residing outside of Tatum city. Without books I don’t see how they are able to build and maintain such tech, but I figured this sort of thing is a staple of Dystopian stories, so I went with it. Many things are purposely kept buried by the Supreme Elite so that people will obey and never question their way of life. This is fine, but I feel like it would have made more sense if specific books were approved by the Supreme Elite and made available to the people, but that doesn't seem to be the case. Lune is supposed to be in the same boat as everyone else in regard to knowledge, but she knows what outside things like mermaids and pirates are with no explanation? She could have heard these things from her mom, but it just wasn’t clarified. There is a thing called the Elite Trials, which are 3 different trials that, if won, will place you in great standing in society, which is something people strive to achieve. Attempting to win at least one of these trials will earn you a title and the status of Elite. Basically, Elites are the rich and the poor are the village people. I like the idea and all, but it feels a little reminiscent of The Hunger Games. It seems like the only purpose in life is to either serve the Elites or train for years until you are ready to attempt to win the trials. It just feels a little unrealistic or black and white. I’d like to think humans wouldn’t be that easy to subjugate.
Story: 3.5* - The story is very focused. Light spoilers for the first few chapters follow. Lune is basically forced by her adoptive father to become an Instructor, instead of earning the position properly by winning a Trial. She trains a man, Brendan, for the Elite Trials who she suspects aided in her kidnapping 11 years ago, before the story starts. The trials will take place in 4 to 6 months(Time flies). Brendan is contracted to do all 3 trials like her, making him her competition. Lune starts out hating/despising him, but as time goes by, she ends up liking him, begrudgingly lol. A slow romance ensues, but there were times it really wore on me. “I can't do this, I shouldn't. I won't trust him, I can't.” Lune repeats this process a lot, and I get it to an extent. With this society and what she suspects him of doing, she shouldn't like nor trust him. My problem is that aside from her suspicion, Brendan shows her no cause not to trust him, and clearly wants to tell her things, but something prevents him from doing so. Lune refuses to see it which grated on me at times. The two training together was some of my favorite scenes throughout the entire book. They are corny, witty, and just down right funny, until they get deep which caused really sweet moments. Throughout this story we also learn that the other trainees alongside Lune hate her, vehemently, and it’s made worse by Renold when he makes her an instructor prematurely. We come to learn why, in a way, I just found it weird that she never gains a SINGLE friend in the Training Facility, not one. Lune, throughout this story has a massive target on her back because of her adoptive father.
Over All: 4* - All in all, I give this 4 stars. I like the characters and the story, I just want answers and Lune to be a better person in the next book, I think I really need her to be. There is also something else I left out in the story category, but that is because I wasn't sure if it should go in there. I think, like with the animals, that humans are also evolving with powers? Why? How? That is purposely left a mystery I'm sure. To know what I mean, just pick up the book. I'm sure we aren't meant to know until a later book, probably(hopefully) the 2nd one I'm assuming. I look forward to finding out that part. Also, this is probably the cleanest dystopian story I have ever read. Yes there is blood in this book, but it isn't gory, and the closest we ever get to cursing is Lune replacing every curse word with the word “stars”. I think that is weird but cute lol. Well, although the main character is 18 years old, I think teenagers will have fun reading this book and enjoy it. I suggest picking this up and giving it a try, especially if you are a fan of The Hunger Games.
Book Cover: 4* - I like seeing the main character on book covers. Full bodied or half bodied, nothing less, showing me who they are or might become. I'm giving this category 4 stars because setting wise it didn't really tell me anything about the story. It's just a green sky with a silhouette of a forest behind her. It's still a cool, well done, and bad ass cover none the less.
Summary/Tagline: 4* - I REALLY like the tagline for this book. "You always have a choice." To me it's like a punch in the face to all the fictional characters who say, "I didn't have a choice.", and the main character tries to live by that for the most part. Now as for the summary, I like it, but it didn't grab me like the tagline did. I was curious about why the main character wants out of the city she lives in. I also figured that the boy mentioned in the summary was going to become a love interest, regardless of whatever he may have done in the past. You'll find out what I mean in the next category.
Characters: 3.5* - The character we follow throughout the book is Lune Tatum/Avery, adoptive daughter to the Supreme Elite/leader/caretaker of Tatum city where she lives. I do like Lune, but there are a few issues I have with her character. I like that she is determined and dedicated, but largely flawed(in a good way). Because of this society, she doesn't trust anyone, finds weakness to be a problem, has no friends(except for Asher, which I wish I got to see more of to better form an opinion on, because he was a sweet character). Sadly, like myself, she keeps everything bottled up inside until it explodes out like a raging inferno, which I don't like. Lune's other problem for me is when things don't go her way, she blames everyone else but herself, Brendan especially. She also has a bad habit of reminding the reader of how tall and handsome her love interest is, which started to grind on me really fast. I really hope Lune gets better with expressing herself more healthily and will be capable of trusting people in future books. Brendan Bearon, her trainee, her past kidnapper, and love interest, actually wants to and tries to be her friend, asks her to open up to him so he can help her, even though it seems he doesn't/hasn't fully grasped what kind of society he is in. Brendan is also my fave character in this book. He's sweet, caring, and the s*** that comes out of his mouth, *MUAH!* is pure gold. He has a lot of great quotes that I wrote down lol. Now for Antagonists, we have Lune's adoptive father, Renold Tatum, and his blood daughter, Rose Tatum. Both are horrendous people. We don't actually see much of them in this book, but when we do I just want Lune to take her gold daggers and stick the blades right in their necks(Intended hate for antagonists achieved) . . . too graphic? Lol, anyway, I don't fully understand these 2 and their motives towards Lune. Renold has an obsession of loyalty and controlling people and Rose just seems to hate Lune. I'm sure we will get more of Renold's motives in later books, but I was just getting frustrated at the many questions I kept asking when Lune is alone with the a** but never got answers. Why Lune? Why only be strict and punish her in torturing manners? Why not also treat your daughter the same way? I have a guess that Renold actually doesn't pay that much attention to Rose and I feel like he only sees her as a nuisance, though this is never stated, at least from what I read. I think his negligence of Rose goats her into taking out her jealousy on Lune, which causes Lune to attack her. Rose then happily reports Lune's aggression to Renold which causes Lune to be punished, violently. Again, I'm sure it will be explained more in later books, but I wanted those answers sooner than later. There are other characters, some vile and one curious case, but nothing noteworthy enough to mention at the moment.
World Building: 2* - Now this is a dystopian novel, so something big must've happened to bring down society to what Lune is living in now. What is it? I have no idea. All I know is that something silent and deadly swept over the world, which I believe was 3+ generations ago. There are now monstrous creatures and/or mutated version of normal animals in the world. One I never thought I'd want one of my own is a charger, which is a carnivorous horse. Yeah, you read that right, carnivorous horses, how cool is that? Tatum City history is not well established in my opinion. There is no religion, yet words like Hell, God, Angels, and Demons are thrown around as if Christianity/Catholicism is a thing, which I don't think it is. My other issue is that books are banned/illegal in this society. Why? It does insinuate that it will spark inspiration, dream, and rebellion, which, yeah okay I can get behind that logic, problem is, NO books are allowed. So I can’t help but wonder how this society knows how to make paper for contracts or how people know how to read and write. There also exists crazy high-tech stuff like a massive electric wall and machines that imitate the mutated monsters residing outside of Tatum city. Without books I don’t see how they are able to build and maintain such tech, but I figured this sort of thing is a staple of Dystopian stories, so I went with it. Many things are purposely kept buried by the Supreme Elite so that people will obey and never question their way of life. This is fine, but I feel like it would have made more sense if specific books were approved by the Supreme Elite and made available to the people, but that doesn't seem to be the case. Lune is supposed to be in the same boat as everyone else in regard to knowledge, but she knows what outside things like mermaids and pirates are with no explanation? She could have heard these things from her mom, but it just wasn’t clarified. There is a thing called the Elite Trials, which are 3 different trials that, if won, will place you in great standing in society, which is something people strive to achieve. Attempting to win at least one of these trials will earn you a title and the status of Elite. Basically, Elites are the rich and the poor are the village people. I like the idea and all, but it feels a little reminiscent of The Hunger Games. It seems like the only purpose in life is to either serve the Elites or train for years until you are ready to attempt to win the trials. It just feels a little unrealistic or black and white. I’d like to think humans wouldn’t be that easy to subjugate.
Story: 3.5* - The story is very focused. Light spoilers for the first few chapters follow. Lune is basically forced by her adoptive father to become an Instructor, instead of earning the position properly by winning a Trial. She trains a man, Brendan, for the Elite Trials who she suspects aided in her kidnapping 11 years ago, before the story starts. The trials will take place in 4 to 6 months(Time flies). Brendan is contracted to do all 3 trials like her, making him her competition. Lune starts out hating/despising him, but as time goes by, she ends up liking him, begrudgingly lol. A slow romance ensues, but there were times it really wore on me. “I can't do this, I shouldn't. I won't trust him, I can't.” Lune repeats this process a lot, and I get it to an extent. With this society and what she suspects him of doing, she shouldn't like nor trust him. My problem is that aside from her suspicion, Brendan shows her no cause not to trust him, and clearly wants to tell her things, but something prevents him from doing so. Lune refuses to see it which grated on me at times. The two training together was some of my favorite scenes throughout the entire book. They are corny, witty, and just down right funny, until they get deep which caused really sweet moments. Throughout this story we also learn that the other trainees alongside Lune hate her, vehemently, and it’s made worse by Renold when he makes her an instructor prematurely. We come to learn why, in a way, I just found it weird that she never gains a SINGLE friend in the Training Facility, not one. Lune, throughout this story has a massive target on her back because of her adoptive father.
Over All: 4* - All in all, I give this 4 stars. I like the characters and the story, I just want answers and Lune to be a better person in the next book, I think I really need her to be. There is also something else I left out in the story category, but that is because I wasn't sure if it should go in there. I think, like with the animals, that humans are also evolving with powers? Why? How? That is purposely left a mystery I'm sure. To know what I mean, just pick up the book. I'm sure we aren't meant to know until a later book, probably(hopefully) the 2nd one I'm assuming. I look forward to finding out that part. Also, this is probably the cleanest dystopian story I have ever read. Yes there is blood in this book, but it isn't gory, and the closest we ever get to cursing is Lune replacing every curse word with the word “stars”. I think that is weird but cute lol. Well, although the main character is 18 years old, I think teenagers will have fun reading this book and enjoy it. I suggest picking this up and giving it a try, especially if you are a fan of The Hunger Games.
December 31, 2018
This is the first book by Becky Moynihan that I’ve read, and I was not disappointed. This is largely a fast-paced read that had me turning the pages faster than I could read them.
The worldbuilding of this book is something that’s especially well done. I recently read Whisper by Lynette Noni, and the opening of Reactive particularly struck me as similar. But whereas, for me, Whisper lost its pace and tension in the next chapters (and ultimately became a book I did not finish), Reactive was the complete opposite. This is the story I was looking for.
Lune is a great protagonist. Her voice and personality shone through the writing. As a character, she felt authentic. She was strong-minded, yet hesitant at times, and I really liked this as it made her human and really relatable. And we definitely discover more about her as she faces the trials, which was something I really liked.
There were a couple chapters that had slight pacing issues, but this doesn’t really detract from my overall feelings on the book. This is a solid dystopian.
Thank you to the author for providing me with a free review copy.
The worldbuilding of this book is something that’s especially well done. I recently read Whisper by Lynette Noni, and the opening of Reactive particularly struck me as similar. But whereas, for me, Whisper lost its pace and tension in the next chapters (and ultimately became a book I did not finish), Reactive was the complete opposite. This is the story I was looking for.
Lune is a great protagonist. Her voice and personality shone through the writing. As a character, she felt authentic. She was strong-minded, yet hesitant at times, and I really liked this as it made her human and really relatable. And we definitely discover more about her as she faces the trials, which was something I really liked.
There were a couple chapters that had slight pacing issues, but this doesn’t really detract from my overall feelings on the book. This is a solid dystopian.
Thank you to the author for providing me with a free review copy.
January 12, 2021
EXCEPTIONAL !!! 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 FIVE STARS AREN'T ENOUGH, THIS IS A MUST READ SERIES !!
I haven't read a book this intense since DIVERGENT & THE HUNGER GAMES !! But there's something extra special about this book (SERIES) I found myself lost in this world that Becky Moynihan created.. I found myself crying without realizing I was crying , these characters are so real and you feel everything they experience, whether it's sorrow, loss, extreme bravery to live and get through each day and every trial they endure... You never know what's coming next. There is no foreshadowing in this book, because once you think you've figured it out, your knocked down to your knees, wondering, did that REALLY just happen ?? You'll fall in love with these characters and devour each word and chapter, with hunger for more, more information that you need , or REALLY the characters need to endure each new unexpected journey, and questions they need answers to, just to survive another trial, fighting, SURVIVING wanting only , needing only one thing, FREEDOM !!!
I haven't read a book this intense since DIVERGENT & THE HUNGER GAMES !! But there's something extra special about this book (SERIES) I found myself lost in this world that Becky Moynihan created.. I found myself crying without realizing I was crying , these characters are so real and you feel everything they experience, whether it's sorrow, loss, extreme bravery to live and get through each day and every trial they endure... You never know what's coming next. There is no foreshadowing in this book, because once you think you've figured it out, your knocked down to your knees, wondering, did that REALLY just happen ?? You'll fall in love with these characters and devour each word and chapter, with hunger for more, more information that you need , or REALLY the characters need to endure each new unexpected journey, and questions they need answers to, just to survive another trial, fighting, SURVIVING wanting only , needing only one thing, FREEDOM !!!
October 11, 2018
Book Review: Reactive
Author: Becky Moynihan
Four Stars
A dystopian young adult story.
This book has a similar feel to it as books like The Hunger Games and Divergent. But yet at the same time it is different. It is has a good story line with very strong characters and the twists are great. Some of the chapters get quite wordy and lead to really no where. There needs to be some further proof reading and or editing as there are a couple places where the words are off.
I read through this book in one afternoon and I am anticipating the next book in this series. It is a pretty good story of strength and survival.
Hopefully we can find out where this is going to lead in the next book.
Kelli Harper
Author: Becky Moynihan
Four Stars
A dystopian young adult story.
This book has a similar feel to it as books like The Hunger Games and Divergent. But yet at the same time it is different. It is has a good story line with very strong characters and the twists are great. Some of the chapters get quite wordy and lead to really no where. There needs to be some further proof reading and or editing as there are a couple places where the words are off.
I read through this book in one afternoon and I am anticipating the next book in this series. It is a pretty good story of strength and survival.
Hopefully we can find out where this is going to lead in the next book.
Kelli Harper
October 30, 2020
Great book
Do not let the comparison to hunger games stop you if you are like me I do not read books normally that compare themselves to another series I feel like its a copycat and it always falls flat or just seems boring because the author is following the same plot for this reason I overlooked this book for a long time finally I gave it a try and WOW it is amazing the story line the characters the world building it kept me turning the page I could not put it down this series is so much and since the description compares itself to the hunger games I just want to say this book is SO MUCH MORE then the hunger games do not hesitate to read this book it is amazing
Do not let the comparison to hunger games stop you if you are like me I do not read books normally that compare themselves to another series I feel like its a copycat and it always falls flat or just seems boring because the author is following the same plot for this reason I overlooked this book for a long time finally I gave it a try and WOW it is amazing the story line the characters the world building it kept me turning the page I could not put it down this series is so much and since the description compares itself to the hunger games I just want to say this book is SO MUCH MORE then the hunger games do not hesitate to read this book it is amazing
August 2, 2019
I enjoyed this book SO much. I had trouble setting it down and ripped through it so fast that if I hadn't read on my Kindle, I probably would have torn a page. Lune is a great character--she's tough and funny, but all those spikes conceal true vulnerability. She's easy to root for, in a world that wants to tear her to shreds. (Kind of like the pages of my poor book.) Can't wait to pick up Adaptive!
April 1, 2020
Wow, what a ride. This story was fast paced and lots of fun. I loved the world building and character back story.
A lot of reviews mentioned it was a cross between Divergent and Hunger Games... and it was but only in all the best ways. Definitely a dystopian but I am also getting Paranormal/fantasy vibes. I CAN'T WAIT FOR BOOK 2.
Also, I loved Bren so much but I am definitely intrigued by Ryker. Okay on to book 2. Let's do this!
A lot of reviews mentioned it was a cross between Divergent and Hunger Games... and it was but only in all the best ways. Definitely a dystopian but I am also getting Paranormal/fantasy vibes. I CAN'T WAIT FOR BOOK 2.
Also, I loved Bren so much but I am definitely intrigued by Ryker. Okay on to book 2. Let's do this!
February 21, 2021
Amazing!!!
Oh my god this book was so good!! A fast paced and action packed YA dystopian fantasy, think hunger games and divergent. The trials kept me gripped, honestly the tension at times had me almost holding my breath. The main characters are likeable and relatable with others being the kind you love to hate. The hint of romance, while not the main focus of the story, gave me all the feels. I loved everything about this book and will be diving straight into book 2
Oh my god this book was so good!! A fast paced and action packed YA dystopian fantasy, think hunger games and divergent. The trials kept me gripped, honestly the tension at times had me almost holding my breath. The main characters are likeable and relatable with others being the kind you love to hate. The hint of romance, while not the main focus of the story, gave me all the feels. I loved everything about this book and will be diving straight into book 2
September 1, 2020
I really enjoyed this book. I felt for the main character and was intrigued by the character development of her and of the others in the book. I appreciated the world building as well - I felt like I could see that crazy world in which they live. The book was descriptive and yet left a lot of mystery to uncover. Had to jump into the next book right away.
June 9, 2021
What a thrill!
Unusual story with a twisted plot line that keeps you guessing and packed with characters you love and characters you hate - never read anything like it - I’m definitely reading the next one!
Unusual story with a twisted plot line that keeps you guessing and packed with characters you love and characters you hate - never read anything like it - I’m definitely reading the next one!
January 29, 2019
What a wild ride. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, and look forward to seeing what happens next in the sequel. Great for dystopian fans everywhere!
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