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435 pages, Hardcover
First published June 4, 2019



“I have seen how we look side by side and it has changed how I imagine my life. With you, I see a wider world.”
“You have the power to choose. Set your course and trim your sails, Seneschal-elect. And whatever your heading, keep your eyes ahead.”
"But now. You form. A plan."
I shook her off. "Your plan fell apart," I pointed out.
"I wove another plan. I made it through, one day at a time...If you're one step ahead of them, they still haven't caught you."

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Sigh, this is going to be tough.
Just to start, do not be deceived by the blurb and think this is an Odyssey retelling. It is not. Let it be known that this book has nothing in common with the legendary Odyssey, unless a ship, a royal heir, and the sea are your words to describe it.
The novel starts with a rejected proposal (not a spoiler), and a Kingdom that for the life of me I could not understand. Is it fictional?Is it present day Europe? Who knows? The main character, a young Royal Princess of Potomac, Selah, has been waiting to get married and live her happily ever after. However, she is rejected by the only man she’s ever truly loved. Her misfortune is her stepmother’s fortune as she decides to send Selah away in search of a husband. So, the stepmother organises an entire cruise (?), and at each stop Selah would meet a potential suitor. The deal is that Selah can only come back once she finds a suitor/husband. There are other fun bits, right out of a fairytale, like Selah’s good father slowly withering away into nothingness even though he is King, the Stepmother/Queen being pregnant, the Stepmother taking over the counsel as the King is very sick.
"Bharat's revolt had meant the begining of the end of the British Empire - and, for a time, of all empires."
I mean, I am really tired of YA fantasy portraying polarizing views of good versus evil, can we at least get some back-story for the character before we deem her as evil?
Anyway, back to the book. One would think that after being rejected, Selah would learn her lesson and harden up – unfortunately not. Apart from having the absolutely worst world building – which I could not understand a bit – the book’s main character is unbearably dull and naive. Not only does she act as a subservient chamber maid in front of the Captain, but she doesn’t even protest to this whole scheme that her stepmother has laid for her. There are attempts within the book to make her seem very feminist, and ‘woke’, but those just seem dumb because this was the ,early 1800s, 19th century, so how about we play a little with time, but don’t entirely change the customs. And even if the author does want to change certain things, it would be a good idea to provide a basic idea of what the world is like. Due to the unclear world building, I just had to rip it off of our, real world in the 19th century. I’ll be very honest, after the 200 page mark I had started skim reading. It was extremely difficult for me to understand which part of the world they were in, and what were the fantastical aspects.
"'Yes, and don't go poking around', Lang said sharply. I stared at him, and he hesitated.
'Fine' I crossed my arms a bit taken aback."
Finally, the biggest qualm I have about the novel were the love interests. Initially I thought it could be Captain Lang, and that kept me going. However, I was so disappointed with the main character’s love choices and choices in general. I won’t say much on the topic, in case I give away something but honestly, there could not have been a duller, more lack-lustre female character in the whole of my fantasy reading years. And the first person perspective just made her more infuriating. The other characters too were like props, of no significant value. And to top it all off; the writing. I get it debut writers would use a bit of tropes and some other clichés as they are just starting out, but the writing style was not my cup of tea. It made me actually want to sit with a pencil and start changing paragraphs, and fleshing-out characters. Literally, the only character I liked was Godmother Alethea.
So final verdict: no. I was waiting for sirens, and Gods, or maybe even Pegasus; but what I got instead was a boring female character, absolutely horrendous world building, and a narrative that put me to sleep.


