I *so* wanted to love this one, and it started off really promising, but it ultimately didn't work for me.
This was a bit longer than most of the other shorts, and plot-wise, it defintiely felt more developed. Unfortunately, the relationship aspect was not great. It started off wonderfully, but then, instead of just letting the story be about two blokes who just met, have insane chemsitry, and decide to date and have sex, the author thinks that what we really need is for them both to declare their love for one another, despite the fact that they've known each other for two weeks. It was insta-love at it's worst, TBH, and was SO unnecessary! You can have a HEA without marriage and being in love! The promise that they're dating and will fall in love after, you know, knowing each other longer than two weeks, is enough to satisfy readers. So instead of an enjoyable read, I was WTFing so hard and the random love confessions that I couldn't take the rest of the book seriously.
UGH AND A HALF.