First thing to note, is that this version is a collection for three books, So in my review I’ll review each instalment separately. I’m also a huge Kingdom Hearts lover. Birth By Sleep was for the longest of time my favorite KH game and I’ve wanted a manga of this story for so long. I read 1-2 chapters a week of this book with my best friend Luna (make sure to check out her review), who’s also a huge KH nerd. It was the only way I could finish this book because I would abounded it after book one if I read it alone.
BOOK ONE: 2 Stars.
The prologue was shit, and terribly explained for anyone who hasn’t played the game. If I had not know how a dive to the heart looks, I would just assume they were in a dark room, or the beach the talked about earlier. Chapter 1 was actually pretty good and I had hope. Then the rest of the book happened. One of the stupidest decisions was not following one character’s story from start to finish. Instead we get to follow everyone at the same time, and each world is one chapter. At first glance this doest not seem so terrible. But after spending more than two seconds considering that choice, I realized what a mess this would be.
First world in the book was Dwarf’s Woodlands. It’s Ventus first World, Terra’s second world and Aqua’s third.
The second chapter takes place in Castle of Dreams. Which is Ventus Second World, Terra’s third world and Aqua’s first word.
The Enchanted Dominion is Ventus third world, Terra’s first and Aqua’s second.
To keep track of where everyone, the Castle of Dreams chapter literally starts with: “After Ven had left the Dwarf’s Woodlands, but before he set down in the Enchanted Dominion, he was traveling trough the Lanes Between on top of his Keyblade Gilder”. Terra’s Enchanted Dominion’s chapter is technically just him in Dwarf’s Woodlands staring at a lake and thinking about what happened in the world before. This gets confusing real fast, you should not need a time line chart to keep track of where everyone is. (Note, you can’t use the nifty time line chart you get by completing the game either to keep track, because they do not visit the words in that order)
What bothers me the most is the OP meta knowledge everyone randomly have. Yes, we as they audience knows who Scrooge McDuck is, because Ventus met him a couple of pages earlier. That does not explain how Aqua knows who he is unless she developed unexplained and unmentioned psychic abilities. This happens multiple times. This problem is even worse in ‘Dwarf’s Woodlands’ where Ventus magically knows Doc, Grumpy, Happy, Sleepy, Bashful, Sneezy and Dopey’s names without them introducing themselves. Ventus was the first character to interact with the dwarfs too, so the audience shouldn’t know who these people are without having meta knowledge about Disney.
The chapters felt incredibly rushed, to a point where characters just summon their keyblades, hits the enemies a couple of times and then it’s over. In Terra’s case while thinking about stuff he could have prevented if he chilled for like 5 minutes and talked to his ‘friends’. Epic proportion boss fights are dealt with in just half a page, and you barely know what they’re fighting. They’re just referred to ‘unversed’. Apparently one looked like a maestro, and one looked like a pumpkin. Other than that, we get no real description of what they’re fighting. They’re just ‘unversed’.
I’m aware that this book is a translation. Unless there’s tons of details the translator did not translate, then the descriptions are lacking. At points it felt like I was reading the Beta version and not a finished product I PAID for.
BOOK TWO: 1 Star
Same problems as the first book. Only this managed to be worse. So we get a tiny amount more descriptions of scenery, but nothing of real substance. They haven’t really fixed the issue with the chapter structures. I was a mixture between bored and annoyed while reading this. It all felt like meaningless filler. Especially since because of the structure the books starts with Terra learning in Disney Town that power aren’t everything and no matter what his friends will always be there. The issue with this? Despite being the first chapter in the book, it’s the third world he visit. This means we see how he learns from his mistakes, but then are thrown back to a couple of chapters where he’s in a state where he still looks for power, and question his friendship.
They also reference things that not yet happened in the story, which made me pause for a second to wonder if I blacked out while reading a paragraph. That was a common thought actually. Did I forget what I just read or did nothing happen?Turns out nothing happened, there were just odd ‘time skips’.
Yes, there were parts I did kind of enjoy in this book. But it was mostly Aqua’s part in ‘Olympus Coliseum’ and ‘Neverland’. However I did not think these few moments would be enough to give book two another star.
BOOK THREE: 2.8 (Yes, I did that 😏) Stars
There’s nothing this book of collections could do to save what was left of this story. Still with that said, I actually did like the chapters Contrast and Dark Memory very much. They’re actually well written, and we finally get a breather to get to know the characters. I adored seeing new aspects of Aqua’s interests outside battles. She’s honestly a queen for the amount of research, training, baking she does and still she managed to find time to make cute trinkets for her friends.
Personally I would loved it if Contrast, Dark Memory and Land Of Departure (chapter 1 in book 1) would have accompanied the special edition of the game. It would been wonderful as a short hardcover meant to pandering for the fans. I would very much adore it myself and that little fan service book would have been a 5/5 experience.
But we also got chapters like ‘X-Blade’, that barely added anything to the story and was just an uninspired retelling of a cut scene, and ‘Coda’, which could easily been cut out of this book since it was mostly about Sora and vague hints about events that happened in Kingdom Hearts II. Coda weren’t by any means worse than ‘Dwarf’s Woodlands’ or the whole book 2 but it was still a weak way to end the book. Especially after the Chapter ‘Final Episode’ wrapped it up so neatly.
We (kind of) got a description of how unversed looked like. Still two whole books too late, at the description was definitely lacking. I tried to imagine what the book actually said, and all I saw was a creepy doll with black hair and red eyes.
Overall this book had the most potential and there were moments I really liked. With a few edits and cutting out unnecessary filler, I could easily eaten this book up as fan service and eagerly rated it 5/5.
At the current moment I wouldn’t say book three was good enough to suffer through book one or two, and I wouldn’t recommend anyone to buy this book just to read book three, that I just thought was overall decent.
General Thoughts:
So there were some ‘extra’ material sprinkled in to the book but not nearly enough for it to warrant a whole book. We got a few scenes with Vanitas, that was actually good, but they’re few and very far between.
The writing style was close to: and then this happened, and then this, this happened and then this. It was more about retelling what happened on screen without adding anything.
Sometimes it was hard to figure out which scenes were supposed to be flashbacks and which happened in current time.
Ventus part works wonderfully in a game. A perfect way to integrate old players to the game mechanics. It did not work in this book since you barely had a world to explore. He came across as a child galavanting around the worlds for no real reason at all. I had to make my own fan theory about what Ven was doing through out his travels, since he lost his goal of following Terra in less than 100 pages. Some things that a revealed in the third book, might worked better in the first book to make Ven’s motivation a bit more stable.
At times it felt like I was reading a badly written fanfiction. I’m not genuinely a person who throw around the word fanfiction as an insult. It’s fanfiction in the sense where the writer just assume things are common knowledge. I understand that there are limitations to what you can do with a canon work. But I ask myself, who is this book for? Picking it up I assumed it would be a way for people who not played or could not play BBS, a chance to experience the story. But I hope my review have pointed out just how lost they would be.
Since this book was so close to the game, with little to no change, I could just boot up my old PSP or replayed the game on my PS4. Or I could just watched all the cut scenes on YouTube. I did however have a blast reading this book with my friend. Mostly because it fell into the ‘so bad it’s good’ category, and it was nice to have someone to discuss my very negative feelings with.
TL:DR bad writing/translation that you need a timeline map to follow. Character have meta knowledge they should not have. Only buy if you love terrible books or want to complete a collection.