Okay, so here's the thing--I've been trying desperately to get into fall-themed romance books, and luckily, many are free on Kindle Unlimited right now. The issue I'm finding is that many of those books are things I wouldn't typically pick up, and for a number of reasons. This is probably one of those, but I pushed through.
Basically we have Sierra, who decides to move home after a disastrous proposal that led to her losing her job in Florida. Now she's back in the mountains with her family, and looking to mend a relationship with her sister.... And maybe possibly fall in love?
Unfortunately, this one fell a bit flat for me, though I did see what the author was going for. Since this is a short books, I'll just give the positives and negatives.
The Good:
- A cozy cafe
- Mountain town vibes
- A few geology puns that were cute
- Epilogue was nice
- No unnecessary smut that I've come to associate with KU romances
The Bad:
- Inconsistencies in the story (at one point, the dad says he's sorry they never visited Sierra in Florida, then a few chapters later the mom recounts visiting her in Florida)
- A weird shift between first and third person in a lot of chapters that kind of disrupted the flow of the story
- Info-dump quotes. This was probably my biggest issue, honestly. If the author broke these up more, I would've enjoyed the story a lot more. But there were quotes that were full of random thoughts/run-on sentences, and would have worked better if they were broken up with dialogue from another person. Or if the characters thought things instead of saying them. (Example 1: "I loved the cafe. It was my escape from the awkwardness that was my life back then. Having braces for what felt like a decade, being in the band playing the flute, and preferring to spend Saturday nights baking with mom rather than hanging out at the old mill with most everyone else from high school." - Sierra said this all TO HER FATHER. I get it was meant to provide insight into her background, but no one talks to their parents like this, especially not when it comes to shared life experiences. Example 2: "I'm not sure, Dad. I'm kind of summered out these days. The appeal changes when you live in a tropical city for several years. You start to miss the seasons. I know I'm loving the weather since my arrival. I usually make it home for Christmas and in the summer. I've made more trips home while Mom was sick, but my only focus was on her during those visits. I finally feel like I can breathe and not be on a schedule. I'm not sure how long I'm staying, but I'm going to enjoy every moment while I am here." Again, WHY RECOUNT ALL THESE SHARED EXPERIENCES TO YOUR FATHER AND IN FRONT OF SOME RANDOM STRANGER??)
- The constant mention of Virginia Tech playing a "top rival." Please just name a school. I'm begging.
- Some weird child dialogue.... ("Bwownie," "Spwinkles.") No thank you.
All of that being said, this was cute and cozy. I think with some workshopping on the quotes, I would've enjoyed this a bit more. I like the family dynamic, I liked the setting, and the story was just fun and fluffy. I would give this author another shot once she develops her writing, because I can see the vision.
1.5ish stars