Slow Start, New Twist
This book starts off a bit slow and predictable, building up to the seemingly inevitable unjustified accusations of treason.
Aron was shown to be a responsible trusted leader.
The subplots with the spy and spymaster added some variety to the story.
The twist, where the game world exists as a fantasy world within a fantasy world, was a nice fresh perspective. Magic lets you suspend a lot of disbelief and go with it. Convenient to see it all through the eyes of the rare citizen, Aron, who had never paid attention and so wasn't familiar with any of the rules or characteristics, allowing everything to be conveniently explained to the reader.
A lot of echoes of Hunger Games in some aspects, but plenty of new as well.
The secondary characters were revealed slowly and there was ample time spent for their personalities to be revealed and develop as they got to know Aron. Well done. Bart the stalwart dwarves captain, Hera the aloof and alluring mage, Lily the Archer with more talents then she would usually get credit for, and Fa'ara the Czezaris sorceress.
The conflict with Sasha Sands was interesting, and resolved in an unexpected way.
I liked the twist on the Czezari, first painted as heartless murderers, then later in the book redeemed as misunderstood victims.