There was only one small scene that bothered me, but because it bothered me so much, I'm going to mention it here for whoever cares to read it.
So, random woman has dragonkin watch her baby while she helps sick elderly neighbor (the human gave me her hatchling!) Eventually human woman comes back, gets her baby, thanks dragonkin. Dragon kin ask about neighbor's health, woman replied: "He's fine, it was only a seizure'. Uh... wuht? 'ONLY' a seizure? I don't think I've ever heard anyone say anything like that! On him? He's just having a seizure, he's fine... Seriously... a fainting spell or something would have been more believable.