As other reviews have commented this book is quite poorly edited with all sorts of continuity errors that really jar when you are reading, especially if like me, you’ve read books 1 & 2 back to back so book 1 was clearly fresher in my mind than the author who seemed to have forgotten half of what was written in the first book. Some are small details but others are fairly major like Rae’s relationship with Jenny who it appears she hasn’t seen since school whereas in Book 1 they met 2 or 3 times after Rae left school. And Logan’s references to “all those times we talked at school” when in Book 1 they had only had one evening together as before that she thought he was an annoying jock and they weren’t friends. It even irked me that in book 1 she refers to her mum being friends with Logan’s mum but when she finds out who Peter is makes no reference to this.
However, these discrepancies aside, the second half of the book did pick up and hooked me back in after the very slow start, and now my main frustration is what on earth has happened to book 3 #Source as this has been removed from Amazon and is no where to be found online. I hope that it is re-released soon (perhaps it’s been withdrawn to be properly edited!!).