A good story in need of refinement.
I read Blackout by Chris Ryan last year and really enjoyed it. It was a fast paced and well written thriller. I’ll have more of the same please. So seeing three of Chris Ryan’s thrillers being offered for a bargain price was an offer not to be missed.
I liked the sound of the heroes John Porter and John (Jock) Bald and the promise of plenty of action. Sure, this wasn’t going to be a literary masterpiece but I didn’t want that. Give me tough guys I can believe and sympathise with and a story with some pace that keeps me turning those pages.
Now I may not be as successful or accomplished an author as Chris Ryan, but I have read a hell of a lot of action thrillers and have a feel for what makes them an enjoyable read – at least for me – and Global Strike is a book with a number of issues.
I’ll deal with my criticisms first and then move on to what parts of the book I thought was good, as I’d like to finish the review on a more positive note.
Some authors seem to have ‘go to’ words or phrases that keep cropping up in their work to the point it becomes a distraction. This is something that a good editor should pick up on and feed back to the author so they can address them. Unfortunately this does not seem to have happened here. I’ll single out ‘mucker’ here being used instead of pal, friend, colleague, buddy, mate. There are other words in there too – the talk of ‘slotting’ folks – but ‘mucker’ is the one that had me clenching my jaw each time I read it, and that distracts you from the story.
Another issue is the overuse of military acronyms, some of them being only two letters long, which aren’t given enough explanation or variety of use. It gets a bit like being in an SAS briefing (I guess) rather than being immersed in the tense build-up to situations. Again, when you have to pause to work out what the author is on about you lose involvement in the story.
Some of the action scenes are pretty damn good and written with style and pace. Others fall a bit flat. It is rare I’ll put a book down before going to sleep in the middle of an action sequence like a fire-fight, but it happened with this book and that is quite telling.
Another point is I also thought there was a lot of unnecessary swearing in the book. I’m no prude – far from it – and will pepper my prose with profanity if it needs that flavour. But maybe it was a bit overdone here as it became tedious.
Okay, I did promise I had some positive points to make so let’s finish with those.
The story itself is really good, perhaps the strongest part of the book, and that’s no mean feat.
There are a couple of unexpected twists in the plot that are also excellent and plausible. Okay there is one twist you can see coming way before the heroes but we’ll let that one slide. It’s no big deal.
What this book needs is revisiting for some judicious editing and refinement. I think that would make a huge difference, because as it stands now can’t really recommend Global Strike as being worth reading and that is a shame.
However I am aware that Chris Ryan’s Strike Back – the first in the series with these heroes – was made into a Sky1 series with Richard Armitage as John Porter. It is a programme I want to watch, especially as Jed Mercurio, writer of Line of Duty, also wrote some of the episodes.
I am also aware – at least now – that I have read this book out of order as there is a sequence to the series. One of Chris Ryan’s other books I bought was Deathlist, number two in the series, whereas Global Strike is either number three or four depending on your sources!
Of course I’ll still read it at some point but I don’t think my expectations will be quite as high.
JM - May 2021