DNF at 45%
Long story short, I decided to give this author another try. I have previously read part of one of her other books "The Reluctant Billionaire." When she liked my (I'll admit, rather negative) review, I thought for sure some kind of mistake had been made. Then, hysterically, I thought that this must be some of that "love your enemies" way of thinking. Feeling badly that I could have judged her harshly, I decided to give this book a try.
I'm sorry in advance, but this is definitely going to become another rather negative review. Please take nothing personally, and know that this is simply my opinion. (And please, for the love of, idk, carrots or something, don't feel like you need to like this review.)
First, I fail to understand who this book is for. It claims it's for Young Adults (Christians in particular, I believe), but then carries on to have a sentence like "Paul had a fetish for Corvettes in particular." And is focused on Halloween, frightening movies, and Christmas (and, weirdly, some kind of Santa Halloween combination that was, frankly, just uncomfortable).
On top of having, potentially, more "interesting" words that may or may not be what someone else would be comfortable having their children read, this book has the most insane fusion of the most immature FL and story possible, while starring more mature and unique words than one would expect. While "indecipherable" and "plethora" aren't incredibly rare, I saw "portentous" and sat back wondering why a book on a one dimensional, annoying highschooler with more problems than exist on the back on a wonder drug advertisement, would have such verbosity. It's just so weird to me.
Moving onto things that don't make sense story wise, our very interesting FL is very scared and traumatized, to the point of having a stomach ache and paranoia, over a rubber mask covered in dirt and live worms. (Paranoia to the point where she thinks that her life is in actual danger.) And, all the while, this sentence is written: "She loved Halloween. The scary fun, the costumes, the music, all of it was exciting, entertaining, harmless." Does that sound like someone who would be scared over a piece of rubber?
I mean, apparently the mask was so scary that her dad decided to get them together for a group prayer for her safety. OVER A MASK. Some light bullying. I mean HOLY SH*T. A classmate had the audacity to call her "loser," and it's like the whole world ended. It almost feels offensive when you realize how bad bullying can actually get, while this book makes such a big deal out of something that, in comparison, hardly actually compares.
The rest of the plot is so see-through and uninspiring that I just couldn't force myself to finish it. We all know who is ending up with who, and it's just not worth the struggle to get to such an obvious ending.
I, personally, would not recommend this to any young adults I know (Christian or otherwise.)