A decent read. We follow along with Jake Mahegan as he tries to stop a terrorist attack on American soil and free his captured comrades while trying to avoid an overtly obsessed agent hell-bent on capturing/killing him for a triple murder he was framed for. The story moves at a good pace, has a few twists and turns (though many of these are pretty telegraphed), but does have a few faults.
For one, the stretch of coincidences and chain of events really pulls thin to try holding up this story. It all centers around Alex's revenge. She just happens to be a Syrian immigrant (unsure if smuggled to the US or brought through a refugee program), daughter of a ruling family, who happens to have been separated from her sister during a coup which murdered her parents, the sister eventually happens to fall in love and absolutely has to be married in their home town despite the danger and history. At the same time Alex just happens to have climbed the military ranks, an orphan who happens to join the US military as a career choice and happens to be in the JSOC unit with Savage and Mahegan and happens to be the target validation agent on the strike against a wanted terrorist which happens to be a trick/invalid intel and so she validates the strike on what turns out to be a wedding party convoy that just happens to be her sister's wedding party, killing everyone, which triggers her revenge. It's such a thin string and I honestly am not sure if this was planned by the terrorists or not. If they knew killing her sister would unlock this split-personality crazy side that would, on her own, coordinate and plan this savage attack on the US. Not to mention, no one could figure out the coming events after the wedding party mistake. I mean, don't they perform background checks on people who are gaining access to classified info? Wouldn't they know Alex is a Syrian refugee and the history of the family? Wouldn't they know it was her sister killed in the invalid wedding party strike? Do they not follow up on details like that? Or was it a fire-and-forget mission, in a manner of speaking? I mean, wouldn't at the very least General Savage understand the psychological ramifications of Alex validating a strike that killed her last remaining family member, and thus keep a very close eye on her? It just seems like a very loooong stretch for her to be able to lead this double life in the midst of a special ops team coordinating /spearheading such an attack as this one.
And then there's the flashback exposition dumps. So many backstories are dumped on the reader to help build the character stories, and often in such jarring places in the story. Oh, while Jake is in the middle of a firefight let's take a ten minute pause to reminisce on this little memory of the Operation Groomsmen clusterfuck, or while running from a missile-laden drone attack let's take fifteen minutes to recall Cassie's tense relationship with her father and her ascension in Ranger training. It's backstory filler that comes off as info dumps, a tour through each character's history so that the current events and ties can be explained. Rather than letting such ties be made through the story, it's dropped in our lap with expositional campfire stories. I understand that sometimes it's necessary for one or two of these flashback histories, but there are so many and many come right in the middle of an action scene that it's a bit jarring.
Lastly, the overall ease at which the terrorist plot unfolds. That the terrorists could be so well-armed (a drone with a fully-automatic gun and rockets, stinger missiles, RPGs, ect.). I mean, these aren't things you can simply buy from street hustlers and gang bangers. Wouldn't the military notice a few stinger missiles missing? And the absolute ease they were able to ambush and steal a tactical nuke. The troops guarding it? No problem for this terror team. And apparently the military has no one keeping tabs on a convoy hauling a tactical nuke along US highways and thus is super-slow to react to the fact that it's gone. Yes, the terrorists launched this massive vehicle shut-down cyber attack that would obviously distract many higher-ups, but someone would still have the responsibility of tracking that nuke's progress to its destination, and the fact that it vanishes during a terrorist cyber attack would send up red flags to any competent individual. But no, a missing nuke is set aside for the bigger trouble of stalled cars. No squad of top-tier soldiers is sent to the nuke's last known location, no lockdown of the surrounding area, no urgent bulletin sent to the big-wigs (not until waaaaay later). Civilians and the transport team all gunned down in the middle of the highway? Nope, no response. I guess they assumed it must have been a bad case of road rage. Even an anti-aircraft attack of stinger missiles fired at a chopper isn't enough to prompt investigation. Nope, Jake has gotta do it himself.
Overall, the characters are interesting. Oxendine is a bit one-dimensional and over-the-top. His drive to capture/kill Jake just because both he and Jake are Native American and Jake is "making their people look bad" he has this overzealous desire to kill Jake, to the point of law-breaking and literal backstabbing. Alex's split personality seems a little bit much as well, the fact that it's so bad she has to repress it with some injected drug yet none of her closest companions detect this inner battle is mystifying. Aren't these guys trained to notice details and be acutely aware of their surrounding situations? She may be good at hiding it, but she's not CIA black ops super-spy good. And especially around people that know her personally. She's able to grant the terrorists access to the classified Zebra app, coordinates the intel on the nuke transport, arrange (I assume) the high-end weaponry - I mean, it's mostly military-grade hardware and she's the leader of this little plot, so I'm guessing that's how the terrorists got access to such goodies as stinger rockets and fully automatic weapons (including the chain gun and rockets mounted to the drone). Part of the problem with the characters is that we're not given much time to know them outside of the Alex/Jake/Cassie trio. Everyone else gets an exposition background info dump and that's it. Cassie's parents, the ones she's trying to save? I think he has maybe two lines of dialogue in one brief scene. Yves Dupree? Backstory dump and then left mostly unattended, eventually captured offscreen. Zakir, the terrorist leader? He's pretty much a cardboard cutout bad guy who has no real place aside from a terrorist face leading this attack. Gavril the superhacker terrorist? Forgotten about after the cyberattack auto shutdown. The siphoning of millions off the Bank of America banking system? Forgotten about as well. Don't know who or what happened to that since Zakir and Alex are killed and Yves is captured. Guess that money is like coins in the sofa cushions. So many little things shoved in to make the story more exciting and then left on the side of the road come climax time.
All in all, it was a decent read, but doesn't have the crisp detail and flow. Outside of the main trio, the cast was a bit one-dimensional, from the terrorists to the teammates. Details are forgotten about, like the bank account heist. The fact that Zakir was so obsessed with having enough of his A-squad terror team yet in the end did he even need any of them? He talked so much of accomplishing his mission, yet he was just a diversion that needed nothing more than bodies to complete the facade. How Alex could shoot both a secure gate guard and then a short time later shoot a soldier on a military base and all of it go unnoticed? No one heard the gunshots? No one came to the secure inner gate at the high-level inner compound, an area of high-ranking officials and covert operational gear with an access gate with only a lone guard? How a group of terrorists could hijack a nuke transport, fire anti-aircraft missiles on US soil at a government helicopter, attack using a rocket-carrying drone, and garner not an ounce of scrutiny from any authority? Guess we're all gun-toting rednecks here in America and shooting up civilians on a highway or firing AR-15s like fireworks and blasting mountainsides with missiles is just par for a typical afternoon. Yee-haw!
Overall, an interesting story. But I'm not sure if I'll sign up for any more Jake Mahegan adventures. I came under Direct Fire, and unfortunately for them they missed the mark.