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The Ruin of Elizabeth Bennet: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
After the deaths of their parents and the public disgrace of their youngest sister, the Bennet ladies are alone in the world. It falls upon Elizabeth to navigate their way, a nearly impossible task given their meager funds. When she becomes reacquainted with Mr. Darcy, she hopes she has found her salvation. But it is ruin he offers her. This book contains dark themes and scenes of a sensual nature. Reader discretion is advised.
263 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 27, 2018
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November 23, 2018
There's a VERY different backstory for this intriguing book: Lydia eloped with Mr. Wickham and, with no intervention from Mr. Darcy, he abandoned her. She refused to marry the respectable man Mr. Bennet found to save her reputation. Instead, she chose to become a courtesan; she's currently the flamboyant mistress of Viscount Bancroft after having inherited a home in Town from her previous lover. Her chosen lifestyle has ruined the entire Bennet family in the eyes of society.
Lydia's elopement was only the first in a series of devastating blows. Over the four years since then, Mr. Bennet, Mr. Gardiner and, most recently, Mrs. Bennet have all died. The remaining Bennet sisters are making the best of things, now living in London in genteel poverty. (Think of Miss Bates and Mrs. Bates from Emma, only in London rather than the country and without the support of the Knightleys or Woodhouses.) Elizabeth tries to buoy up the spirits of her sisters and manages their meager finances. Unfortunately, Mary and Kitty chafe against what they believe to be Elizabeth's stinginess about spending money, while Jane is frequently ill; the apothecary will not see her again until his bills from treating Mrs. Bennet during her terminal illness are paid.
Elizabeth has a chance encounter with Mr. Darcy. He is well aware of Lydia's notoriety and can't bring himself to face the inevitable scandal he--and especially Georgiana--would suffer if he marries the sister of the infamous courtesan. He's already been the subject of malicious gossip himself and can't imagine adding more fuel to the nasty rumors. However, he can't let go of the woman he loves, either. Much of the first half of the book explores the self-loathing both feel as a result of their untenable situation when Elizabeth agrees to be his mistress. She is convinced that what Darcy believes is love is merely lust, and she is determined to protect her heart from getting too attached to him before he inevitably releases her.
While some may consider the subject matter dark, I'd color it more as a gray in a shade that's sometimes darker and sometimes lighter. It strikes me as a more realistic depiction of the desperate choices that people of this era had to make in order to survive. Contemporary authors usually avoid such authenticity when they present Jane Austen's fictional world. The conversations between Darcy and Elizabeth sound very natural and make it obvious to the reader that they're perfect for each other. While there is some bedroom content, it's this back-and-forth bantering that makes their love for each other most palpable, and that's the source for most of the lighter gray in this section--as it clearly is in these characters' lives.
As the story develops, it leads to more and more more familiar fare with many society events in the second half of the book. The tone lightens from gray to almost a giddy light yellow, starting with the increased presence of Darcy's aunt, Miranda Fitzwilliam/Lady Matlock. She's a pistol! Lord Matlock and Lady Catherine prove to be major thorns in Darcy's side. Fortunately, Lady Matlock is able to lead her husband around by the nose--most of the time, at least. Lady Celia makes for a suitably hateful high society witch who has her sights set on Darcy. Colonel Fitzwilliam proves himself to be more like a brother than cousin to Darcy. Miss Tully and Miss Madigan are two wonderful scene-stealers. Elizabeth and Darcy aren't the only ones who get some great lines. There's a marvelous series of almost slapstick-type events leading to rumors that Darcy has had an orgy in his room during a house party. Things briefly turn serious with a kidnapping, and I LOVE the unexpected plot twist very near the end which makes the already accomplished HEA even happier.
I found a lot of distracting errors, most of which should have been caught by a good editor. There is probably too much of a contrast between the grayness of the first half and the brightness of the second half of the book. It's almost as though it starts out as Oliver Twist and then ends as The History of Tom Jones, a Foundling.
Despite those reservations, I really enjoyed the whole book. It's more thoughtful than most JAFF I've come across with an interesting mix of realism, lovely romance, great dialogue and upbeat humor. I recommend it.
Lydia's elopement was only the first in a series of devastating blows. Over the four years since then, Mr. Bennet, Mr. Gardiner and, most recently, Mrs. Bennet have all died. The remaining Bennet sisters are making the best of things, now living in London in genteel poverty. (Think of Miss Bates and Mrs. Bates from Emma, only in London rather than the country and without the support of the Knightleys or Woodhouses.) Elizabeth tries to buoy up the spirits of her sisters and manages their meager finances. Unfortunately, Mary and Kitty chafe against what they believe to be Elizabeth's stinginess about spending money, while Jane is frequently ill; the apothecary will not see her again until his bills from treating Mrs. Bennet during her terminal illness are paid.
Elizabeth has a chance encounter with Mr. Darcy. He is well aware of Lydia's notoriety and can't bring himself to face the inevitable scandal he--and especially Georgiana--would suffer if he marries the sister of the infamous courtesan. He's already been the subject of malicious gossip himself and can't imagine adding more fuel to the nasty rumors. However, he can't let go of the woman he loves, either. Much of the first half of the book explores the self-loathing both feel as a result of their untenable situation when Elizabeth agrees to be his mistress. She is convinced that what Darcy believes is love is merely lust, and she is determined to protect her heart from getting too attached to him before he inevitably releases her.
While some may consider the subject matter dark, I'd color it more as a gray in a shade that's sometimes darker and sometimes lighter. It strikes me as a more realistic depiction of the desperate choices that people of this era had to make in order to survive. Contemporary authors usually avoid such authenticity when they present Jane Austen's fictional world. The conversations between Darcy and Elizabeth sound very natural and make it obvious to the reader that they're perfect for each other. While there is some bedroom content, it's this back-and-forth bantering that makes their love for each other most palpable, and that's the source for most of the lighter gray in this section--as it clearly is in these characters' lives.
As the story develops, it leads to more and more more familiar fare with many society events in the second half of the book. The tone lightens from gray to almost a giddy light yellow, starting with the increased presence of Darcy's aunt, Miranda Fitzwilliam/Lady Matlock. She's a pistol! Lord Matlock and Lady Catherine prove to be major thorns in Darcy's side. Fortunately, Lady Matlock is able to lead her husband around by the nose--most of the time, at least. Lady Celia makes for a suitably hateful high society witch who has her sights set on Darcy. Colonel Fitzwilliam proves himself to be more like a brother than cousin to Darcy. Miss Tully and Miss Madigan are two wonderful scene-stealers. Elizabeth and Darcy aren't the only ones who get some great lines. There's a marvelous series of almost slapstick-type events leading to rumors that Darcy has had an orgy in his room during a house party. Things briefly turn serious with a kidnapping, and I LOVE the unexpected plot twist very near the end which makes the already accomplished HEA even happier.
I found a lot of distracting errors, most of which should have been caught by a good editor. There is probably too much of a contrast between the grayness of the first half and the brightness of the second half of the book. It's almost as though it starts out as Oliver Twist and then ends as The History of Tom Jones, a Foundling.
Despite those reservations, I really enjoyed the whole book. It's more thoughtful than most JAFF I've come across with an interesting mix of realism, lovely romance, great dialogue and upbeat humor. I recommend it.
December 19, 2018
This is a book that surprised me over and over. This is a story with adult themes involving extra martial relations, some violence and just general unpleasantness. There is some explicit language and sexual detail. But that really isn't the point of the story. There is a deep sort of honesty throughout every interaction in the story. But if you are sensitive, a P&P purist or easily offended this isn't a book for you.
Set in what can only be described as a P&P alternate universe, Lydia was permanently ruined by refusing to marry Wickham and becoming a courtesan. Mr. Bennet died, Mrs. Bennet and the remaining Bennet daughters moved to London and after struggling to squeeze in with the Gardiners they move to a tiny set of rooms in a dicey neighborhood.
Meanwhile Darcy ends up married to and widower to Anne deBourgh. Lady C is still a termagant and for her own reasons won't leave Darcy house. Almost 4 years after the disastrous proposal Darcy and Lizzy run into one another in a London park. This meeting will lead them on the road to ruin. Now just to point out something, Lizzy is a woman of 24 who is making her decisions as an adult who has lived in genteel poverty and is sick and tired of being sick and tired. While Darcy still has all of his misconceptions and prejudices firmly in place. He takes the blame for literally everything ( I wonder if there is a diagnostic code for this).
Georgiana is on her third season and has failed to take. Lady Catherine is super evil and super annoying, the Earl is super manipulative and Col. Fitzwilliam is a broken man; mentally & physically. Col's mom is a gem.
Were this just a story about sex I would have stopped reading but it isn't it is a story about character and personality. And I loved it.
Set in what can only be described as a P&P alternate universe, Lydia was permanently ruined by refusing to marry Wickham and becoming a courtesan. Mr. Bennet died, Mrs. Bennet and the remaining Bennet daughters moved to London and after struggling to squeeze in with the Gardiners they move to a tiny set of rooms in a dicey neighborhood.
Meanwhile Darcy ends up married to and widower to Anne deBourgh. Lady C is still a termagant and for her own reasons won't leave Darcy house. Almost 4 years after the disastrous proposal Darcy and Lizzy run into one another in a London park. This meeting will lead them on the road to ruin. Now just to point out something, Lizzy is a woman of 24 who is making her decisions as an adult who has lived in genteel poverty and is sick and tired of being sick and tired. While Darcy still has all of his misconceptions and prejudices firmly in place. He takes the blame for literally everything ( I wonder if there is a diagnostic code for this).
Georgiana is on her third season and has failed to take. Lady Catherine is super evil and super annoying, the Earl is super manipulative and Col. Fitzwilliam is a broken man; mentally & physically. Col's mom is a gem.
Were this just a story about sex I would have stopped reading but it isn't it is a story about character and personality. And I loved it.
October 2, 2022
Don't Hesitate just read it!
I was hesitant to read a JAFF with our Dear Lizzy reduced to a mistress and our galant gentlemen Darcy in a position where he would corrupt her. I saw the reviews were positive and thus I made the gamble and boy am I glad I did!
The entire time I was reading this it made me think of Community and Abed declaring,
"This is the Darkest timeline"
We are taken down the very probable and realistic scenario where Darcy never return to Longburn after the Hunsford proposal which left him heartbroken and bitter, neither does Bingley, thus Wickham ruins Lydia but doesn't marry her. Mr. Bennet soon after dies, presumably from the grief and shame and Mrs. Bennet's long envisioned hedge groves meet her. Mr. Gardiner dies from a complication of an injury at his long awaited trip to the lakes so the Bennet women are forced to live in decidedly reduced circumstances off Mrs. Bennets 5 thousand pounds. Lydia decides to become a courtesan which ruins all her sisters removing any possibility of a respectable marriage for them. Mrs. Bennet dies not long after (her nerves finally prevailed). Jane fragile from London smog becomes sickly and they haven't the money to properly treat her.
We flash forward 4 years later where a bitter Darcy recently widowed by his cousin Anne and left with her bastard is angry with life when he spots Lizzy who bolts at the sight of him and he chases her down. He is still very obsessed with her, and knows about her misfortune but the old drum of duty has kept him away as well as his knowing she never cared for him. He also holds a grudge against her blaming her for not accepting his hand and leading to this dark timeline.
Darcy after chatting with her sees that she is the same happy, bright eyed Lizzy, her circumstances have not broken her, unlike him. After some walks in the park Darcy decides he cant keep meeting with the sister of the infamous Courtesan Lydia Bennet.
Darcy cant bear this, gets foxed and writes her a billet doux with a P.S. that is anything but doux, a most indecent proposal, "Become my mistress!" (Oh and he doesn't mean Mistress of Pemberley!).
Lizzy at first feeling a stirring in the heart at the beginning of the letter, becomes reasonably angry with the proposal at the end. However her sister is sick, and her only other option is to marry an old guy in trade. At least she can have smart conversations with Darcy so she begrudgingly accepts.
This dialogue is engaging, and at times funny and angsty. Colonel Fitzwilliam is hilarious and endearing as is his courtship with a charming OC. Jane also gets a happy side plot with her doctor. Lizzy and Darcy remain on character and its not a gross Darcy trying to get his rocks off, he is the same hopelessly in love Darcy who cant see any other way to be with Lizzy, the only good thing in his miserable life.
The story has HEA and is extremely entertaining, sweet. and well written. This is my first story with this author but I will say it is in my personal top 5 best JAFF's i've read thus far and it's reread worthy.
P.S. I saw some mentions warning there was gratuitous Anti Semitism in the book and I must say that is incorrect, Georgina has a romance with a Jewish gentlemen who is not accepted as a suitable match by the usual suspects (Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock) though Darcy is not opposed. I actually thought it was refreshing to see some mention of the darker side of the Regency era or Austen's time. Jews, blacks and non christians would not be accepted in society and had and have to still endure censure. As a Jewish person I was not offended and thought it was a realistic sub plot and was handled well. Not to mention a Jewish man would also be expected not to marry a gentile so both families were opposed to the match.
P.S.S. Surprisingly refreshing take on Lydia towards the end, made me feel bad for always censuring her.
I was hesitant to read a JAFF with our Dear Lizzy reduced to a mistress and our galant gentlemen Darcy in a position where he would corrupt her. I saw the reviews were positive and thus I made the gamble and boy am I glad I did!
The entire time I was reading this it made me think of Community and Abed declaring,
"This is the Darkest timeline"
We are taken down the very probable and realistic scenario where Darcy never return to Longburn after the Hunsford proposal which left him heartbroken and bitter, neither does Bingley, thus Wickham ruins Lydia but doesn't marry her. Mr. Bennet soon after dies, presumably from the grief and shame and Mrs. Bennet's long envisioned hedge groves meet her. Mr. Gardiner dies from a complication of an injury at his long awaited trip to the lakes so the Bennet women are forced to live in decidedly reduced circumstances off Mrs. Bennets 5 thousand pounds. Lydia decides to become a courtesan which ruins all her sisters removing any possibility of a respectable marriage for them. Mrs. Bennet dies not long after (her nerves finally prevailed). Jane fragile from London smog becomes sickly and they haven't the money to properly treat her.
We flash forward 4 years later where a bitter Darcy recently widowed by his cousin Anne and left with her bastard is angry with life when he spots Lizzy who bolts at the sight of him and he chases her down. He is still very obsessed with her, and knows about her misfortune but the old drum of duty has kept him away as well as his knowing she never cared for him. He also holds a grudge against her blaming her for not accepting his hand and leading to this dark timeline.
Darcy after chatting with her sees that she is the same happy, bright eyed Lizzy, her circumstances have not broken her, unlike him. After some walks in the park Darcy decides he cant keep meeting with the sister of the infamous Courtesan Lydia Bennet.
Darcy cant bear this, gets foxed and writes her a billet doux with a P.S. that is anything but doux, a most indecent proposal, "Become my mistress!" (Oh and he doesn't mean Mistress of Pemberley!).
Lizzy at first feeling a stirring in the heart at the beginning of the letter, becomes reasonably angry with the proposal at the end. However her sister is sick, and her only other option is to marry an old guy in trade. At least she can have smart conversations with Darcy so she begrudgingly accepts.
This dialogue is engaging, and at times funny and angsty. Colonel Fitzwilliam is hilarious and endearing as is his courtship with a charming OC. Jane also gets a happy side plot with her doctor. Lizzy and Darcy remain on character and its not a gross Darcy trying to get his rocks off, he is the same hopelessly in love Darcy who cant see any other way to be with Lizzy, the only good thing in his miserable life.
The story has HEA and is extremely entertaining, sweet. and well written. This is my first story with this author but I will say it is in my personal top 5 best JAFF's i've read thus far and it's reread worthy.
P.S. I saw some mentions warning there was gratuitous Anti Semitism in the book and I must say that is incorrect, Georgina has a romance with a Jewish gentlemen who is not accepted as a suitable match by the usual suspects (Lady Catherine and Lord Matlock) though Darcy is not opposed. I actually thought it was refreshing to see some mention of the darker side of the Regency era or Austen's time. Jews, blacks and non christians would not be accepted in society and had and have to still endure censure. As a Jewish person I was not offended and thought it was a realistic sub plot and was handled well. Not to mention a Jewish man would also be expected not to marry a gentile so both families were opposed to the match.
P.S.S. Surprisingly refreshing take on Lydia towards the end, made me feel bad for always censuring her.
August 25, 2025
Very Good Debut Novel
4.5* rating
I first read this book in May 2019. My original Amazon review is below. I read Darcie Rochester’s new release this week and I was reminded of this book and decided to read it again. I think it’s actually the third time I’ve read it. The first time, I was new to the Jane Austen fan fiction genre. Having Elizabeth become a mistress was something I found difficult to accept. Since then, and now having read hundreds of variations, I am much more open to accepting any story an author wishes to convey. Yes—fan fiction. I love it all as long as it is well-written.
My original review left out how much I enjoyed the dialogue in this book which is very good, and always the most important thing for me in a good story. Even the third time around, I couldn’t stop turning the pages. Originally read on Kindle Unlimited, I bought the book earlier this year to add to my permanent Kindle library.
This book contains mature themes. I’ve upgraded my review by 1/2 star. The only thing that kept me from five are the proofreading misses.
4 stars
Reviewed in Canada on May 2, 2019
This is certainly a different variation. I have to say that Elizabeth (spoiler alert, so stop now if you don’t want to know) becoming Darcy’s mistress was sad to me. I’ve read so many variations now, and while I appreciated the author’s story, I just felt sad for ODC. I actually teared up at their first joining. I guess I could feel their turmoil. Some grammatical errors should be given more attention. Otherwise, well written. Hope to see more from this author.
4.5* rating
I first read this book in May 2019. My original Amazon review is below. I read Darcie Rochester’s new release this week and I was reminded of this book and decided to read it again. I think it’s actually the third time I’ve read it. The first time, I was new to the Jane Austen fan fiction genre. Having Elizabeth become a mistress was something I found difficult to accept. Since then, and now having read hundreds of variations, I am much more open to accepting any story an author wishes to convey. Yes—fan fiction. I love it all as long as it is well-written.
My original review left out how much I enjoyed the dialogue in this book which is very good, and always the most important thing for me in a good story. Even the third time around, I couldn’t stop turning the pages. Originally read on Kindle Unlimited, I bought the book earlier this year to add to my permanent Kindle library.
This book contains mature themes. I’ve upgraded my review by 1/2 star. The only thing that kept me from five are the proofreading misses.
4 stars
Reviewed in Canada on May 2, 2019
This is certainly a different variation. I have to say that Elizabeth (spoiler alert, so stop now if you don’t want to know) becoming Darcy’s mistress was sad to me. I’ve read so many variations now, and while I appreciated the author’s story, I just felt sad for ODC. I actually teared up at their first joining. I guess I could feel their turmoil. Some grammatical errors should be given more attention. Otherwise, well written. Hope to see more from this author.
October 1, 2018
Not as dark a tale as the book's description stated
I didn't think I would like this story because the book description said that it had dark themes and a sensual nature. There were dark themes, such as Lydia running off with Mr. Wickham and the death of Mr. and Mrs. Bennett. There were a few other deaths that occurred in the story as well. The way the author wrote the story made the dark times not feel quite as dark, and even though Lizzy became Mr. Darcy's mistress, even that didn't seem as bad as it could have been. I commend this author on a job well done, and I will be watching for future writings of hers.
P.S.: There are sensual themes in the book as stated, so I wouldn't recommend this book for kids.
I didn't think I would like this story because the book description said that it had dark themes and a sensual nature. There were dark themes, such as Lydia running off with Mr. Wickham and the death of Mr. and Mrs. Bennett. There were a few other deaths that occurred in the story as well. The way the author wrote the story made the dark times not feel quite as dark, and even though Lizzy became Mr. Darcy's mistress, even that didn't seem as bad as it could have been. I commend this author on a job well done, and I will be watching for future writings of hers.
P.S.: There are sensual themes in the book as stated, so I wouldn't recommend this book for kids.
October 10, 2018
I am so torn on this book which is why it has taken me forever to write a review. The first half of the book was 5 stars for me and then it sort of fell apart after that. In a moment of weakness while intoxicated Darcy writes a letter to Elizabeth asking her to be his mistress. He is caught up in his duty to his family and knows he can’t marry her. Elizabeth shockingly (or not so shockingly) agrees so that she can support her family. Mr. and Mrs. Bennett are both gone, Lydia has ruined the family by becoming a courtesan and Jane is sick and needs medical care. I loved that Elizabeth was at her fiercest in supporting her family. Her and Darcy’s taboo relationship was wonderfully done and their intimacy felt real and wonderful. This book is definitely not for those who don’t default from cannon as the sex was plentiful and descriptive. Things went south for me midway at his proposal and Elizabeth’s need for him to own his part in the affair. It felt as if a different writer had finished the book from this point. The kidnapping seemed pointless and there were plots introduced that never really went anywhere (the whole carriage accident and going to Lydia’s home). A solid 5 stars for the beginning but 3 for the end and rounded to a 4 however based on the beginning half I will definitely be looking for this author again.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 16, 2018
I didn't know if I could make it through the book at first but I carried on and found that I loved it more as it went by. Very clever, funny, and thoughtful.
October 5, 2018
I really enjoyed this book, it is definitely a reimagining rather than a variation, but what a reimagining it is! Mr and Mrs Bennet are dead. The Bennet sisters are ruined as Lydia eloped with Wickham but did not marry him and instead became a very famous courtesan! The remaining Bennets are living a very quiet, difficult life in an undesirable part of London when Elizabeth meets Mr Darcy by chance. He still loves her, but if circumstances were bad before, they are impossible now. In a moment of drunken madness, or maybe clarity, he realises he can't live without her and asks Elizabeth to be his mistress. To her great surprise, she agrees. Now, while this may seem like a spoiler, I assure you this is the summary of the first few chapters! I couldn't put this book down.
In many ways this, certainly starts, as a very sad tale. All our favourite characters are so jaded by responsibility, hardship and disappointment. It's a very good look into society as it would have been then - the approval of the ton was everything - despite it being completely ridiculous! But our favourite characters also have their very true personalities so it always seems that hope is on the horizon. As frustrating as it is for us to understand now, this book deals well with issues of society at the time, attitudes to women, religion, and the varying social circles of society.... however, it was so skilfully done that the reader can feel the oppression without it being overwhelming.
There are some great characters in this book. Along with those we know, there is quite a large cast we don't and I enjoyed all of them! Even the ones I didn't like! The humour is just lovely with some real laugh out loud moments. There is some sexual content in the book - as you might expect- but is not the focus of the story nor so graphic that it could only be described as an erotic or sensual variation.
There is only one real complaint I have about this book... about half way the story fast forwards but the reader gets no warning this has happened. Although we get the back story as we go, for a while I was convinced I was a few chapters missing!
I think I should also say, although I usually hate Epilogues, the one in this book was just lovely and left me with a stupid grin on my face! I would definitely recommend this book !
In many ways this, certainly starts, as a very sad tale. All our favourite characters are so jaded by responsibility, hardship and disappointment. It's a very good look into society as it would have been then - the approval of the ton was everything - despite it being completely ridiculous! But our favourite characters also have their very true personalities so it always seems that hope is on the horizon. As frustrating as it is for us to understand now, this book deals well with issues of society at the time, attitudes to women, religion, and the varying social circles of society.... however, it was so skilfully done that the reader can feel the oppression without it being overwhelming.
There are some great characters in this book. Along with those we know, there is quite a large cast we don't and I enjoyed all of them! Even the ones I didn't like! The humour is just lovely with some real laugh out loud moments. There is some sexual content in the book - as you might expect- but is not the focus of the story nor so graphic that it could only be described as an erotic or sensual variation.
There is only one real complaint I have about this book... about half way the story fast forwards but the reader gets no warning this has happened. Although we get the back story as we go, for a while I was convinced I was a few chapters missing!
I think I should also say, although I usually hate Epilogues, the one in this book was just lovely and left me with a stupid grin on my face! I would definitely recommend this book !
September 29, 2018
Different tone than most variations
A racy story. A sad story. A novel HEA for ODC. This world is believable, more so than most variations, in a dark manner. I didn’t enjoy it much but I like my stories more positive. I can see where most people MIGHT enjoy this one.
I’m going to add some spoilers below for those of you who would like more details.
———————- SPOILERS FOLLOW ———————
Mr. Bennet and uncle Gardiner are dead early on.
Lydia runs away with Wickham, they don’t marry, and she becomes a very successful courtesan.
Everyone else lives in London in an barely ok situation.
Lizzie becomes Darcy mistress because they need some more money.
Darcy marries Anne
Anne gets pregnant by a Duke’s son. She dies after the birth.
Darcys uncle the Earl and Lady Catherine want Darcy to remarry “well” and hate Lizzie.
There is an unexpected HEA
Quite a bit of detailed sex happens in the story.
A racy story. A sad story. A novel HEA for ODC. This world is believable, more so than most variations, in a dark manner. I didn’t enjoy it much but I like my stories more positive. I can see where most people MIGHT enjoy this one.
I’m going to add some spoilers below for those of you who would like more details.
———————- SPOILERS FOLLOW ———————
Mr. Bennet and uncle Gardiner are dead early on.
Lydia runs away with Wickham, they don’t marry, and she becomes a very successful courtesan.
Everyone else lives in London in an barely ok situation.
Lizzie becomes Darcy mistress because they need some more money.
Darcy marries Anne
Anne gets pregnant by a Duke’s son. She dies after the birth.
Darcys uncle the Earl and Lady Catherine want Darcy to remarry “well” and hate Lizzie.
There is an unexpected HEA
Quite a bit of detailed sex happens in the story.
October 25, 2018
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Lydia has ruined the family by leaving with Wickham and has become courtesan. Elizabeth becomes Darcy's mistress - almost on a dare. He meant to ask her something else, but it all came out wrong and she accepted. She would do anything to help her sisters as her parents are both deceased. Darcy loves Elizabeth but has to prove it. Once they find their love, they have to prove to others that theirs is a love worth fighting for.
FYI This book is mature reading
FYI This book is mature reading
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August 23, 2022DNF @ 38%
October 31, 2018
I am torn on how to rate this book.
On one hand it was different than usual P&P variances and intrigued me. There were some plot points that seemed hastily put in that could have been left out and some grammatical errors, but for the most part it kept me interested enough to complete it.
On the other hand - the rampant antisemitism really threw me for a loop. I have NEVER read that in any P&P variances before. Historical accuracy or not, that whole part of the story could have been anything else. You could have made that suitor not a proper choice because he was in trade, like all the other P&P books do. I know that P&P is set in the early 1800s but this book was published in 2018 and that was not something I wanted to read when I’m already trying to escape the horrors of our own world and the widespread antisemitism seen on a daily basis. That ruined what otherwise would have been a rather decent variance.
On one hand it was different than usual P&P variances and intrigued me. There were some plot points that seemed hastily put in that could have been left out and some grammatical errors, but for the most part it kept me interested enough to complete it.
On the other hand - the rampant antisemitism really threw me for a loop. I have NEVER read that in any P&P variances before. Historical accuracy or not, that whole part of the story could have been anything else. You could have made that suitor not a proper choice because he was in trade, like all the other P&P books do. I know that P&P is set in the early 1800s but this book was published in 2018 and that was not something I wanted to read when I’m already trying to escape the horrors of our own world and the widespread antisemitism seen on a daily basis. That ruined what otherwise would have been a rather decent variance.
October 6, 2018
A Different Variation
This is a very different, but very interesting variation. It starts with Lydia's history, and what happened to her family after. It then continues with Lizzie and Darcy's story, which certainly does not follow the normal route. Thete are some grammatical errors and strange sentence formations, but overall they do not detract from the story. I enjoyed this variation, and will be reading it again.
This is a very different, but very interesting variation. It starts with Lydia's history, and what happened to her family after. It then continues with Lizzie and Darcy's story, which certainly does not follow the normal route. Thete are some grammatical errors and strange sentence formations, but overall they do not detract from the story. I enjoyed this variation, and will be reading it again.
October 10, 2018
Really Romantic Ruination
As varied a variation as they get. I loved this story. Yes, it's a grown-up tale so if sweetness is your style, steer clear and don't sully the comment ratings. I found this mature version filled with reasonable twists, a great deal of sillyness, mostly intentional, and a tremendous volume of tenderness. Plausible ruination leading to HEA.
As varied a variation as they get. I loved this story. Yes, it's a grown-up tale so if sweetness is your style, steer clear and don't sully the comment ratings. I found this mature version filled with reasonable twists, a great deal of sillyness, mostly intentional, and a tremendous volume of tenderness. Plausible ruination leading to HEA.
May 4, 2020
I fluctuate between 3.5 to 4 stars on this. Very angsty! While I have no problem reading P&P variations that do not follow canon, (and I read the blurb before reading so I knew what to expect) The characterization of the main icons were very far from canon. Of course they had to be, otherwise there would be no story. Just not sure I enjoyed it. Some stuff was delved into for far too many pages and other scenes were brushed over as if filler.
October 23, 2018
Listen, you’re going to know from the jump whether this is a Pride and Prejudice variation you want to read, but I found it to be really well written and surprisingly nuanced in its treatment of all the characters, and I enjoyed how even minor characters were given depth and motivations of their own, even the supposed villains of the story.
November 12, 2018
Poorly edited
The premise completely disgusts me. Would Elizabeth truly lower herself so? Perhaps, to save Jane. Al in all, there is enough ridiculousness to almost forgive the premise. I will give it points for originality, I just wish it could have been done without the utter compromise. And with better editing, sigh. 2.5 pts
The premise completely disgusts me. Would Elizabeth truly lower herself so? Perhaps, to save Jane. Al in all, there is enough ridiculousness to almost forgive the premise. I will give it points for originality, I just wish it could have been done without the utter compromise. And with better editing, sigh. 2.5 pts
October 25, 2018
Avid Reader
Although there were several grammatical errors, they didn't detract from the book. I have read several versions where Elizabeth becomes Mr. Darcy 's mistress and this one was comparable. Lady Catherine was ridiculous once again and along with her brother, ruined her relationship with Darcy. Nice touch at the end with the Darcys becoming a duke and duchess.
Although there were several grammatical errors, they didn't detract from the book. I have read several versions where Elizabeth becomes Mr. Darcy 's mistress and this one was comparable. Lady Catherine was ridiculous once again and along with her brother, ruined her relationship with Darcy. Nice touch at the end with the Darcys becoming a duke and duchess.
July 18, 2019
In some ways very realistic and in some ways almost fantasy like story of HEA.:))
December 2, 2018
3 1/2 Stars Rounded Up
The story is very good. Unfortunately, the editing is middling at best. Some sentences are so botched, one can only guess at the true intent.
OTOH the storyline is sometimes humorous, sometimes sad, and always riveting. What would draw the ever dutiful Fitzwilliam Darcy to even offer the ignoble position of mistress to the love of his life? And how low must Elizabeth have sunk to accept it? Those questions, as well as several others, are answered quite well in this variation. And how will they go from secrecy and ignominy to happily ever after? It is a wild and twisted ride but well worth taking, if you enjoy your love story with some titillation that is. The title is truly apt.
These are older, more desperate, people who are trying to stay outwardly respectable, while accepting their inner demons and foolish hearts as guides. Ms Rochester does an excellent job untwisting the road to their happy ending.
The story is very good. Unfortunately, the editing is middling at best. Some sentences are so botched, one can only guess at the true intent.
OTOH the storyline is sometimes humorous, sometimes sad, and always riveting. What would draw the ever dutiful Fitzwilliam Darcy to even offer the ignoble position of mistress to the love of his life? And how low must Elizabeth have sunk to accept it? Those questions, as well as several others, are answered quite well in this variation. And how will they go from secrecy and ignominy to happily ever after? It is a wild and twisted ride but well worth taking, if you enjoy your love story with some titillation that is. The title is truly apt.
These are older, more desperate, people who are trying to stay outwardly respectable, while accepting their inner demons and foolish hearts as guides. Ms Rochester does an excellent job untwisting the road to their happy ending.
November 19, 2018
New take on P&P favorites
Total different JAFF which makes for a good read. Elizabeth’s circumstances changed her path, leading to an interesting story. Check it out
Total different JAFF which makes for a good read. Elizabeth’s circumstances changed her path, leading to an interesting story. Check it out
November 14, 2018
Nice Story, But...
This is a nice story but not really a regency romance and not really a good representation of the characters of the original Pride & Prejudice (P & P) story. The sexual scenes are a long way from the implied passion of the original P & P. Mr Darcy’s knowledge of sexual activity is really unrealistic. He was not portrayed, in the original story, as a man who had had a lot of experience with women. The inept way he proposed in the original story says clearly, I don’t know how to interact with or court a member of the opposite sex. Finally, Elizabeth Bennet’s character would most definitively have refused Mr. Darcy’s request to become his mistress. She was portrayed as a very bright woman, and would have recognized the fact that she would not have been able to marry anyone else. The remainder of her life would have been spent as Mr. Darcy’s or another man’s mistress. I think she was too smart for this. At that time a woman, who had no family name to protect her, took a gigantic risk if she became a mistress. I just can’t imagine her character would stoop so low. It would also have given her nemesis, Caroline Bingley, a huge social advantage and a tremendous reason to look down on her.
Despite this, the story was interesting but still had deficits. The idea that a young lady would risk being caught in a man’s bed with the hope he would then agree to marry her, is ridiculous. If the man refused, her social life would be horrible. His reputation would survive without a blemish. This is a frequent story line in P & P variations and is overused. In addition, Elizabeth’s reason for needing Darcy’s financial help is flimsy. I think her remaining family would have been able to help her.
There are other issues with the ending of the story. Elizabeth is placed at risk of physical harm and Darcy’s social elevation. The story is overall romantic but somewhat contrived. It’s really a new story using the Pride & Prejudice story as a backdrop.
This is a nice story but not really a regency romance and not really a good representation of the characters of the original Pride & Prejudice (P & P) story. The sexual scenes are a long way from the implied passion of the original P & P. Mr Darcy’s knowledge of sexual activity is really unrealistic. He was not portrayed, in the original story, as a man who had had a lot of experience with women. The inept way he proposed in the original story says clearly, I don’t know how to interact with or court a member of the opposite sex. Finally, Elizabeth Bennet’s character would most definitively have refused Mr. Darcy’s request to become his mistress. She was portrayed as a very bright woman, and would have recognized the fact that she would not have been able to marry anyone else. The remainder of her life would have been spent as Mr. Darcy’s or another man’s mistress. I think she was too smart for this. At that time a woman, who had no family name to protect her, took a gigantic risk if she became a mistress. I just can’t imagine her character would stoop so low. It would also have given her nemesis, Caroline Bingley, a huge social advantage and a tremendous reason to look down on her.
Despite this, the story was interesting but still had deficits. The idea that a young lady would risk being caught in a man’s bed with the hope he would then agree to marry her, is ridiculous. If the man refused, her social life would be horrible. His reputation would survive without a blemish. This is a frequent story line in P & P variations and is overused. In addition, Elizabeth’s reason for needing Darcy’s financial help is flimsy. I think her remaining family would have been able to help her.
There are other issues with the ending of the story. Elizabeth is placed at risk of physical harm and Darcy’s social elevation. The story is overall romantic but somewhat contrived. It’s really a new story using the Pride & Prejudice story as a backdrop.
February 27, 2024
I didn’t like this self righteous I AM MARTYR Elizabeth. At all. She was like, “alright Darcy, I’ll be your mistress; but I will make you feel guilty & miserable. Woe is me; I’ll let you know I’m suffering & that you have ruined me every single day.” BLAH. I couldn’t even make myself hate-finish this one.
November 7, 2018
Witty dialogue
Five stars for character development and clever repartee, in spite of too many ridiculous spelling errors - this is a book worth reading.
I love how dry the author’s tone was.
Five stars for character development and clever repartee, in spite of too many ridiculous spelling errors - this is a book worth reading.
I love how dry the author’s tone was.
August 14, 2024
E se depois que a Lizzy tivesse rejeitado Darcy pela primeira vez, tudo tivesse sido diferente? E se Jane nunca tivesse se resolvido com o Bingley? E se Lydia tivesse fugido com o Wickham, sido abandonada e virasse uma cortesã? E se o senhor e a senhora Bennet tivessem praticamente morrido de desgosto por conta de Lydia? E se as irmãs Bennets fossem excluídas da sociedade por associação e vivessem uma vida completamente diferente do que elas viveram em Orgulho & Preconceito?
The Ruin of Elizabeth Bennet responde todas essas pergunta sem nunca descaracterizar os personagens imortalizados por Jane Austen e com um enredo bastante plausível. Darcie aborda temas um pouco mais pesados, mas amei que mesmo assim ela manteve aquela leveza e a astúcia da obra original.
Posso dizer com tranquilidade que essa foi a melhor releitura/fanfic NC-17 AU de P&P que já tive o prazer de ler!!!
P. S. Só pra constar, chamar de "fanfic" não é desvalorizar a releitura de Darcie ou qualquer outra releitura.
P. P. S. Reli, e continua excelente!! Descobri que tem OUTRA fanfic da autora disponível no KU e vou ler HAHAHAHA
The Ruin of Elizabeth Bennet responde todas essas pergunta sem nunca descaracterizar os personagens imortalizados por Jane Austen e com um enredo bastante plausível. Darcie aborda temas um pouco mais pesados, mas amei que mesmo assim ela manteve aquela leveza e a astúcia da obra original.
Posso dizer com tranquilidade que essa foi a melhor releitura/fanfic NC-17 AU de P&P que já tive o prazer de ler!!!
P. S. Só pra constar, chamar de "fanfic" não é desvalorizar a releitura de Darcie ou qualquer outra releitura.
P. P. S. Reli, e continua excelente!! Descobri que tem OUTRA fanfic da autora disponível no KU e vou ler HAHAHAHA
September 29, 2022
4.5
Very good fanfic, though it would benefit from improved editing for spelling mistakes and anachronisms (and a few more commas).
It is more romantic than the blurb indicates, and quite humorous. In homage to Austen this author also manages to convey a lot in few words, making it a quick and easy read but with surprising depth (especially considering the topic).
I liked that while there were a number of perhaps implausible occurrences, everyone met them very much in character. Darcy, for example, feels very guilty but can’t quite help himself. Lizzy is powered by anger even as she strives to be happy. The glimpses of Lydia and Wickham were excellent. There are many lines and sentiments peppered throughout which show the author understands the psychology of the characters, both Austen’s & her own, and has fully considered how they might behave. It’s this understanding which makes this book so good.
I also enjoyed the inclusion of ‘odd’ characters - ie those who didn’t quite subscribe to society’s demands. And the fact that despite it all what people think doesn’t really matter.
Very good fanfic, though it would benefit from improved editing for spelling mistakes and anachronisms (and a few more commas).
It is more romantic than the blurb indicates, and quite humorous. In homage to Austen this author also manages to convey a lot in few words, making it a quick and easy read but with surprising depth (especially considering the topic).
I liked that while there were a number of perhaps implausible occurrences, everyone met them very much in character. Darcy, for example, feels very guilty but can’t quite help himself. Lizzy is powered by anger even as she strives to be happy. The glimpses of Lydia and Wickham were excellent. There are many lines and sentiments peppered throughout which show the author understands the psychology of the characters, both Austen’s & her own, and has fully considered how they might behave. It’s this understanding which makes this book so good.
I also enjoyed the inclusion of ‘odd’ characters - ie those who didn’t quite subscribe to society’s demands. And the fact that despite it all what people think doesn’t really matter.
October 19, 2018
I have to say that I was surprised to find that I was really enjoying this book. I did not want to put it down! After reading the description, warning of sexual content and dark themes, I thought the writing might be weak and all flash for the sexual content. But, as I like the JAFF variations that are filled with angst and dark themes where life hasn't been so perfect for our feeling duo, I wanted to at least give it a try. I am so glad that I did. While the story between Darcy and Elizabeth takes a different direction, there is another story going on in the background with Richard. I loved his character in this retelling. His wit is flawlessly delivered in such a way that I was laughing out loud and reading his comments to my husband! I would love to see this writer tell Richard's story! Can't wait to see something else from this author!!
January 18, 2024
Okay due to my love for Pride and prejudice i could not put down this variation of the story. Beisdes the death of several people like the Benents parents the dark themes are not that evident.
It was quite interesting to see the ruination of Elizabeth, I was shocked that Darcy could do that to her ie make her his mistress but looking at the context of all that had happened i could see why there was no other way. Also just having a look at what would have happened to Lydia if she had not married Wickham was quite interesting.
I also enjoyed the other love stories regarding Darcy's cousin.
Its just a shame that i didnt realy see much of kitty in the book, wish her story could have been more developed.
It was quite interesting to see the ruination of Elizabeth, I was shocked that Darcy could do that to her ie make her his mistress but looking at the context of all that had happened i could see why there was no other way. Also just having a look at what would have happened to Lydia if she had not married Wickham was quite interesting.
I also enjoyed the other love stories regarding Darcy's cousin.
Its just a shame that i didnt realy see much of kitty in the book, wish her story could have been more developed.
June 13, 2022
Definitely Different
Be warned: many spoilers but definitely worth reading. Lizzy agrees to be Darcy’s mistress and I wasn’t repulsed by this arrangement in the least. That he does desperately still wanted to marry her and she constantly refused was also well received. Lydia becoming a sought after courtesan made absolute sense given her curious, unrestrained tendencies. Although he engaged Lizzy as his concubine, I think I may like this Darcy more than many characterizations of other authors. As a man, he seemed more human than fantastical. Mr and Mrs Bennet are dead at start of this variation; the absence of the extended Bennet family, the harpy Bingley sisters and neighboring Herefordshire characters was refreshing as there’s only so many angles to their characters. Jane refuses Bingley’s marriage offer after years of heartache then marries a surgeon who works for Darcy. The humorous interplay between Col Fitzwilliam and his fiancé was a great addition. Anne deB finding herself pregnant, giving birth to a son then leaving him for Darcy to raise offered a new perspective into her character. While there was no Caroline there was definitely still Lady Cat deB and the scheming Lady Celia who wanted Col Fitz to pine for her while she married Darcy for his mien and social status.
Be warned: many spoilers but definitely worth reading. Lizzy agrees to be Darcy’s mistress and I wasn’t repulsed by this arrangement in the least. That he does desperately still wanted to marry her and she constantly refused was also well received. Lydia becoming a sought after courtesan made absolute sense given her curious, unrestrained tendencies. Although he engaged Lizzy as his concubine, I think I may like this Darcy more than many characterizations of other authors. As a man, he seemed more human than fantastical. Mr and Mrs Bennet are dead at start of this variation; the absence of the extended Bennet family, the harpy Bingley sisters and neighboring Herefordshire characters was refreshing as there’s only so many angles to their characters. Jane refuses Bingley’s marriage offer after years of heartache then marries a surgeon who works for Darcy. The humorous interplay between Col Fitzwilliam and his fiancé was a great addition. Anne deB finding herself pregnant, giving birth to a son then leaving him for Darcy to raise offered a new perspective into her character. While there was no Caroline there was definitely still Lady Cat deB and the scheming Lady Celia who wanted Col Fitz to pine for her while she married Darcy for his mien and social status.
December 12, 2018
A diamond in the rough
I'm so glad I took the chance with this book. After reading the synopsis and some of the reviews, the idea of Darcy ruining Elizabeth struck me as sordid and not in keeping with the character traits of ODC. Somehow this author has built a lovely story with lots of romance and heartache, but also a good deal of humor and charm. The ability to infuse everything, both happy and sad, with wit and humor is an incredible skill. Once involved in the storyline it was difficult to put the book down. The variation in events following the proposal at Hunsford results in circumstances so horrendous that it's impossible to imagine a happy resolution. But because the author gives the characters so much extra personality, you can't help but trust that they will find their ways. There is a great deal of rough language and rough circumstances, but it was an enjoyable read.
One star is deducted for editing. Lots of missing words, spelling errors and grammar mistakes. I hope this author will write another JAFF story, but have more care for proof reading.
I'm so glad I took the chance with this book. After reading the synopsis and some of the reviews, the idea of Darcy ruining Elizabeth struck me as sordid and not in keeping with the character traits of ODC. Somehow this author has built a lovely story with lots of romance and heartache, but also a good deal of humor and charm. The ability to infuse everything, both happy and sad, with wit and humor is an incredible skill. Once involved in the storyline it was difficult to put the book down. The variation in events following the proposal at Hunsford results in circumstances so horrendous that it's impossible to imagine a happy resolution. But because the author gives the characters so much extra personality, you can't help but trust that they will find their ways. There is a great deal of rough language and rough circumstances, but it was an enjoyable read.
One star is deducted for editing. Lots of missing words, spelling errors and grammar mistakes. I hope this author will write another JAFF story, but have more care for proof reading.
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