So disappointed!!! But great ideas of a story...
First time reading this author and after I read the synopsis I was so ready to tear into this serie as fast as my eyes would read the words, but was I disappointed... I mean, the story is great, the ideas were great, the characters were great (on some) but the narrating was awful. So awful that I couldn't bring myself to give it the 5 stars that it needed and it killed me to give it the 3 stars. In truth this was mor like a 1 or 1/2 star.
Authors it's very annoying when you start a chapter or a section and you have to keep going back to the beginning to make sure of who is talking, thinking and acting. It's like reading a story that has no break, no comas, no period and simply paragraphs.
That said, where do you get these people???
Kruz is bae and a no nonsense kind of guy. Very loyal, protector and ruthless. Alpha, thug, boss man and he is THAT MAN. He takes loyalty to a different level and won't tolerate anyone, not even his mama for not being loyal to him.
Rithym is a very guarded woman, also very loyal, protective and direct. He does her thing and that's it.
Kenron "Jamaica" is the other Kruz and more his beta than anything. He is extremely loyal, fiercely protective and also deranged like Kruz, but when they love, they love hard and strong and deep.
Kalila is the sweetheart, protective, lovable, understanding, loyal and see good in people.
Zhara, don't know when karma will rend her a visit, but she needed to come quick if not now. She is just too much and too messy. And Kommon, can't wait to hear your part
Now and see who you are...
Kandy need you to have the same visit s zhara.
Now, I hope it will improve so I could properly give this the rating it deserves.