I might bump this book up to five stars but I need to sit on it for a little. I read this book so slowly to let it sink in, but I'm already dying for a sequel. The main thing I take away from this book is that the writing is just so goddamn PERFECT. Tahereh has such an unprecented use of metaphor that the colors and the scenery in this book were the most vividly described experiences I have ever read. Transitioning from a series with little world building, I ADORED Ferenwood. It was like Diagon Alley on cocaine (I will be using this comparison a lot. Stay tuned.) Dare I say the writing is better than Shatter Me, but it definitely rivals the series. One thing I adored about this writing is that it utilizes SECOND PERSON!!!!!!!! Tahereh would use little asides addressing the reader, and it absolutely made my day to be referred to as "dear friend." I felt like I was curled up in her lap as she was telling me a bedtime story, it was such an interesting style of narration.
ALICE!!!! Oh my god, I ADORED Alice. If you put down Shatter Me because you thought Juliette was weak, Alice will blow your mind. The sass and the confidence packed into this twelve year old is so admirable, I fell in love with her immediately. She's like book 3 Juliette on crack (told you). Sometimes she took this confidence a little too far and it made her a bit impulsive, which I'll touch on later. And I was fully expecting to love Oliver just as much. Any character with a Y chromosome written by Tahereh Mafi, no matter what age, I was expecting to fall deeply in love with. And being honest, Oliver fell flat to me. He was sorta a jerk. I mean, I did have a mini panic session when he was described as pristine and clean (!!! LIKE !!!! SOMEONE! !! !! ELSE!! !!!!!), but he was not a good match for Alice. He was rude and expected so much of her without giving her instructions, and all this caused a really irritating rivalry between them. Perhaps I was let down because my expectations were high, but regardless, as a character he was still really fleshed-out and the dialogue between them had me in fits of grinning.
Now let's talk world building. I already mentioned how much I loved Ferenwood. Take The Capitol mixed with Diagon Alley, and there you have it. The imagery is UNREAL everything is so vivid. But although the town was described very nicely, I wish we had more explanation of the magic system. I feel like toward the end of the book you get a clearer explanation of talents and the magical coins that contain power, but at the beginning (when it matters most), I was very confused. Some things just needed to be explicitly explained up front, like how Oliver's talent of lying works and how the money/magic is used. One last complaint about the world-- I was having a hard time not comparing it too closely to Harry Potter. It seemed very similar, and knowing how much Tahereh loves the series, I was noticing that the two books came out a bit similar. A town's own currency, a street with magic shops, and just little things like that which I could draw a parallel. Surely J.K. Rowling doesn't have a trademark on any of these things, but the fact that I could stop and think "Hmmm that kind of reminds me of Harry Potter" was a bit concerning.
Onto Furthermore. I gotta say, I wasn't too impressed. This is partially my own fault because somehow when I read the synopsis I missed the part that literally described Futhermore as "dangerous," so I was expecting a light and happy trip through fields of flowers on the way to find her father. And this book was much, MUCH darker than I had anticipated. And sadly, I felt as if it could have been described a lot better. Coming from Ferenwood which was so bright and lovely and well-described, Furthermore seemed so bleak that I literally couldn't imagine it. It seemed like Oliver and Alice were just walking through blank, black landscape for half the book. I would say that this book needs some type of illustration or map, but even that might be impossible because there's no coherent left, right, up, or down inside Furthermore. And this is the root of one of my main issues with the book-- because the reader doesn't know what to expect as far as what sorts of magic can be expected in Furthermore, we're kinda just dragged along blindly and experience everything as the characters do. This goes back to I wish we had been explained things more explicitly, and I wish that Oliver could have given Alice a debriefing on what to expect, or just something to prepare the reader for what Furthermore is like, because I'm still a bit confused on all the different villages they visited and how all those different realms are sewn together.
Going back to Alice acting impulsively: if this was any other author, it would probably annoy me. But since it's Tahereh, I reconciled it with myself and couldn't help thinking IT HAS A MORAL!!! HER MISTAKES SERVE A PURPOSE!!!! But even then, and I'm not sure if it's because this is middle grade, Alice had a tendency to think stupidly sometimes, which was frustrating. And that's a sentence I found myself saying a lot. "But it's middle grade." I was very hesitant going into this just because of that fact. And yeah, I think maybe some facets of the book were simplified for the sake of the genre, but it was still well-done. One aspect of it's middle-gradeness, if you will, was that it implemented some made-up words and "childish explanations." I'm gonna compare it to Rick Riordan using his lame jokes in the Percy Jackson series; I adored it because I'm a fan of Tahereh and literally anything she has to say, but I can see how others might take it as annoying. It just depends on what kind of reader you are, and how much you can handle whimsy and silly metaphors.
In the end, I think this just wrapped up too conveniently. The ending was very rushed, sort of like in Ignite Me when things fall together seamlessly and a bit anti-climactically, and I would have liked to see a slower resolution that was explained better. It irritated me that the characters found such an easy way out after struggling for so long, how they made stupid decisions after being careful for so long.
I'm not sure if the problems I had with this book are because it was middle grade, or if some necessary details were just omitted. But I was absolutely sure I would be giving this five stars, and I'm left a little confused even though in the end, the main feeling that sticks with me is contentment. I would recommend this if you like REALLY whimsical books, if you like Tahereh's writing, or you just want an enchanting tale about a ridiculously sassy heroine going on a strange, dark adventure. And of course, I can't wait to get my hands on the sequel ;)
2/1/2016
tHE COV ER !!!! OHD YM GOD@!!!!!! THE FOX!!!! ALICE !!!! OLLIIEEE!!!!! !OH YM GO OH MY GOD OH MY GOD AND SHE WEARS HER BRACELETS LIKE TAHEREH DOES AND OLLIE LOOKS LIKE A BABY ROWAN AND NOW SHE'S SO DEVOID OF COLOR SHE DON'T KNOW WHAT IT MEANS AND I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS BOOK OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD
1/15/2016
The lengths I am going through to draft a good email and convince Penguin to send me one of these ARCs is so nerve-wracking I want to cry because THE BOOK NOW EXISTS IN PAPER FORM AND I DON' HAVE IT IN MY HANDS!!!!1 THIS IS A TRAGEDY!!!!!!!!!!
1/3/2016
WE HAVE AN OFFICIAL UNOFFICIAL COVER!!!!!! I AM SO READY!!!!!!! DO U SEE THAT WHIMSICAL FONT!!!!!!! @THEVOID I'M READY TAKE ME
12/21/2015
I want this book so badly it hurts... I literally check once a week to see if any new info has come out or if the cover is on its way. I WILL BE HARASSING THE ENTIRE INTERNET FOR AN ARC ONCE THIS BOOK SEES THE LIGHT OF DAY! I CAN'T WAIT OH MY GOD !!!!!! august 30th can't come soon enough. i hope oliver fucks me up as much as warner did
8/5/2014
SCREAMINF
WANt
BRENDAN PARALLELS
FAV CHARACTER
DO WANT
MUCH ADVENTURE
VERY SASS
JSNEJSKWND NEED