A short, sweet story about an unlikely couple who are arranged to marry for their convenience, but find themselves inextricably attracted.
Dylan Banks, veteran, amputee, needs to marry to keep living on the ranch he maintains to help wounded soldiers. Maggie Shaw, soft-hearted, suddenly former veterinary technician, is evicted for having too many dogs, which she rescued from euthanasia for losing health or limbs. The two are brought together by their counselor/pastor.
It’s surprising when a romance story doesn’t have premarital kissing at all, but they did get married on the fourth day after meeting each other!
Clean.
Contains: Lustful thoughts, mentions of PTSD, physical scars, amputations.
Several editing issues, some small, some confusing:
“It had no one to stick up for him and now it would be put down permanently.” Gender fluid dog, perhaps?
“The sunglasses cast the dark man on the steed in a full shadow.” I’m trying to figure out if he’s of African origin, and exactly how large these sunglasses are.
“One by one, Maggie piled the dogs into the back of her truck. She had to put the dogs in crates while she drove so that they wouldn't injure themselves any further. Soldier, the Chihuahua, Star, the Pug, and Spin went into the back. Spin was not at all happy about being confined and immediately began to cry. Maggie took a moment to soothe him with a chew toy, then she piled Sugar, the retriever, into the back front seat and guided Stevie, her partially blind Rottweiler, into the back. With the gang all loaded up, she started the car and headed to the only place she could think of.” Ok, three crates in the bed of a truck… or, wait, no, it’s a car… or maybe an SUV? What’s a “back front seat?” It seems Maggie would be more careful than to “pile” the retriever in a seat.
“Spin came up to her leg, wheel coming to a halt…” What about the other wheel?
“…two wheels acted as legs that the little dog used to propel himself onward.” The wheels in dog wheelchairs are not used for propulsion.
“…per say,” Per se, perhaps?
“…a divorced kid…” Is that what they’re calling kids of divorced parents these days?
“the Patels were very happy [in their arranged marriage], with a large family of adult children—some of whom were matched in the same light.” Light?
“He pulled out a pan from the cupboard, sprayed, and laid out the food.” Sprayed what, now?
“We were all a part of that mission. The entire squad didn't make it. Those of us that did … we all lost something that day.” If the entire squad didn’t make it, how are they still here?
“The paper crumpled from his hand.” As if his hand was keeping the paper flat?
“Sean slid into the door.” With a bang?
“The men made simpering sounds…” A simper is a kind of coy smile. It doesn’t seem it would have a sound.
“He knew the dog couldn't swim with the apparatus on its leg.” Dog wheelchairs do not go on a leg.
“the tiny Chihuahua, Soldier, who’d lost his front left arm,” Front left arm? Not a back arm?