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Things are quiet in the morning, especially in an unassuming town like Aledale. When sixteen-year-old Jan (often referred to as "Jinx") and her best friend Shelley attempt to catch low tide early in the morning at the local cove, Jan uncovers a little box with a mermaid carved into the lid, adorned with shining emerald eyes and a mysterious message and locket inside. After putting the necklace on, Jan begins to experience painful and unsettling episodes that leave her floundering for an explanation. Accompanied with the unrelenting desire to keep the locket close, Jan drags Shelley on a search for clues as to whom the necklace and box belong to. As they fall further into the intricate web spun by the people trying to get back what they claim is theirs, Jan and Shelley learn about a peculiar legend and why what they found needs to fall into the right hands. But not all hands are the right ones, and not all secrets can be kept. After all, some things are predestined to be jinxed.
344 pages, Paperback
First published August 23, 2018
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Melissa K. Magner
3 books78 followersMelissa K. Magner began writing as a child and never stopped. Inspired by her late grandmother, Patricia M. Kaspar, she writes fantasy novels infused with elements of science fiction, horror, and mystery. She has found freedom in the indie world, crafting unconventional stories about heroines who come into their own power and find love through family, friendship, and self-discovery. Her work has received critical acclaim from IndieReader, Readers’ Favorite, and the BookLife Prize by Publishers Weekly.
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April 3, 2022
OK, I devoured this one front to back in a day.what stood out was the classic nostalgia of the 70s that transformed into a finale straight outta heathers + hints of higher and dark fantasy. I cherished the female friendship with Jan and Shelley, beginning to end it was so consistent and made my heart happy. A mesmerizing and subversive mix of seaside mystery, supernatural thriller, and spine-chilling fantasy.
November 16, 2022
Jinx by Melissa Magner is a thrilling mystery with the history of legends ans myths closely intertwined. It follows the story of Jan (also known as Jinx) and her friend Shelley as they seek to uncover the secrets behind a found necklace and the mysterious history behind it. I liked the foreword that notes this book was started by the authors grandmother but finished by the author - it's a touching tribute.
Jinx was a fun character throughout, full of spirit and curiosity, and I liked her personality reflected the journey she went on while knowing of the dangers. Shelley was a great companion, adding some light to the increasingly dark events. The tone of this book quickly changes, as do the characters and their goals and motivations, and the mystery quickly becomes much deeper than the two envisaged.
The plot is great and well paced, slowly ramping up to a finale that was surprising as it was unique. The writing is clean and crisp and has a very professional feel to it. I loved some of the descriptions and how the lore and history was drip fed to the reader in a way that eased understanding.
Jinx is a stand out book in the mystery and thriller genre, and with its supernatural elements and focus on legend I really enjoyed my time with it.
Jinx was a fun character throughout, full of spirit and curiosity, and I liked her personality reflected the journey she went on while knowing of the dangers. Shelley was a great companion, adding some light to the increasingly dark events. The tone of this book quickly changes, as do the characters and their goals and motivations, and the mystery quickly becomes much deeper than the two envisaged.
The plot is great and well paced, slowly ramping up to a finale that was surprising as it was unique. The writing is clean and crisp and has a very professional feel to it. I loved some of the descriptions and how the lore and history was drip fed to the reader in a way that eased understanding.
Jinx is a stand out book in the mystery and thriller genre, and with its supernatural elements and focus on legend I really enjoyed my time with it.
July 7, 2025
I loved Jinx’s retro vibes, nostalgic setting and slow creepy tension, but best of all were the characters. Jan and Shelley, the leading girls, have the best friendship and they’re so easy to root for. Jan is spunky and fun and Shelley compliments her really nicely. The villain blends in early on and takes you by surprise but he’s well developed, heavy on the male fragility, spoiled rich kid mad at the world. He gets what he deserves imho.
I was swept away by the vibes and hooked by the story and characters, deepened with really pretty interior illustrations here and there. I wish more books had those!
I was swept away by the vibes and hooked by the story and characters, deepened with really pretty interior illustrations here and there. I wish more books had those!
January 2, 2025
4 stars
I greatly enjoyed “Jinx”! The genres (mystery + fantasy) feel seamless and integrated which is a feat since they have the potential to feel different especially when set in our real world. However, it was written as though the genre change mirrored Jan and Shelley losing their naivety from the beginning and realizing who to trust which was a good set up. I would have to say I liked the second half more than the first because of how well the Fun Zone climatic scenes were written, especially the feud between the Aimsworths and how all comes together at the Fun Zone, and of course the twist. The dialogue between the brothers and the realizations that unfold, plus the mystery of which brother is telling the truth, ramps up the suspense. I had no idea who to trust and was so shocked. However I also liked the cozy feeling of the beginning. Jan and Shelley’s relationship was the highlight across the book and the ending was neatly tied up but retained some mystery which felt just right.
I greatly enjoyed “Jinx”! The genres (mystery + fantasy) feel seamless and integrated which is a feat since they have the potential to feel different especially when set in our real world. However, it was written as though the genre change mirrored Jan and Shelley losing their naivety from the beginning and realizing who to trust which was a good set up. I would have to say I liked the second half more than the first because of how well the Fun Zone climatic scenes were written, especially the feud between the Aimsworths and how all comes together at the Fun Zone, and of course the twist. The dialogue between the brothers and the realizations that unfold, plus the mystery of which brother is telling the truth, ramps up the suspense. I had no idea who to trust and was so shocked. However I also liked the cozy feeling of the beginning. Jan and Shelley’s relationship was the highlight across the book and the ending was neatly tied up but retained some mystery which felt just right.
December 11, 2021
I'm late on writing this review, but I wanted to say how exciting, haunting, and chilling this book is! a mix of mystery, ya, fantasy, and thriller, and its all done in a very original way. My favorite part was undeniably legit a crazy mix of teen mystery, psycho-triller, and dark fantasy.
December 23, 2022
“Jinx” by Melissa K. Magner is an interesting tale of contrasts. This is apparent because as the author notes, she picked up this story from her grandmother and continued the tale that was started in the 70s or 80s, adding her own characters and flair. The end result is one that is always readable, but doesn’t always gel.
Primarily about the friendship between two girlfriends known as Jan aka. Jinx and Shelley one summer in the seaside town known as Aledale. Of note are side characters Owen, Nolan, Aiden, Gabriel, and Jan’s car – the seldom-reliable mustang known as the Blue Bomber. It took me a few tries to get into the story, as it harkens back to a different time in its writing style at the outset. The gentle friendship and interactions with the townsfolk of Aledale, along with the discovery of the cursed mermaid box in the cover, reminded me of those old Hardy Boys or Nancy Drew stories I used to read as a kid. While simple in their setup, the intrigue to “Jinx” builds steadily and keeps you hooked. While one might think this is a story about smugglers or treasure initially, “Jinx” takes a more interesting turn when Jan starts experiencing physical and psychological symptoms the more time she spends wearing the necklace she finds inside the box. This element was neatly woven into the narrative.
The town of Aledale and its inhabitants make for a cozy locale. I found myself greatly enjoying spending time there with Jan and Shelly, who make for a likeable pair with a realistic and engaging friendship. I could have continued reading about their outings in Aledale for a few more books. While it is reminiscent of the older style of young adult books, there’s an undeniable appeal to their wholesome adventures. Kudos to the authors for making their relationship the best part of the story.
The introduction of shady characters such as Owen, Nolan, Aiden, and their corresponding plot about retrieving the necklace keeps us on our toes as we don’t know who to trust. Jan’s eventual conflict with Shelley over the necklace is also well-written and believable.
Where things took a turn for me is when the villain is revealed. I remember it distinctly because the writing style took a sharp turn into modern YA. While I saw what the author was going for, it clashed with what came before and -for me- not in a good way. While I will acknowledge that the villain’s motivations were sound, I thought their actions and eventual comeuppance were overblown. I remember thinking that they sounded like an over-the-top anime villain and unfortunately, this greatly impacted my final impression of “Jinx”.
So, in the end, this turned out to be a story of contrasts and I enjoyed one side more than the other. If you’re into cozy mysteries with a throwback style, then “Jinx” is for you. If you’re into violent YA thrillers with a supernatural spin, then the last 25% of “Jinx” will appeal.
Primarily about the friendship between two girlfriends known as Jan aka. Jinx and Shelley one summer in the seaside town known as Aledale. Of note are side characters Owen, Nolan, Aiden, Gabriel, and Jan’s car – the seldom-reliable mustang known as the Blue Bomber. It took me a few tries to get into the story, as it harkens back to a different time in its writing style at the outset. The gentle friendship and interactions with the townsfolk of Aledale, along with the discovery of the cursed mermaid box in the cover, reminded me of those old Hardy Boys or Nancy Drew stories I used to read as a kid. While simple in their setup, the intrigue to “Jinx” builds steadily and keeps you hooked. While one might think this is a story about smugglers or treasure initially, “Jinx” takes a more interesting turn when Jan starts experiencing physical and psychological symptoms the more time she spends wearing the necklace she finds inside the box. This element was neatly woven into the narrative.
The town of Aledale and its inhabitants make for a cozy locale. I found myself greatly enjoying spending time there with Jan and Shelly, who make for a likeable pair with a realistic and engaging friendship. I could have continued reading about their outings in Aledale for a few more books. While it is reminiscent of the older style of young adult books, there’s an undeniable appeal to their wholesome adventures. Kudos to the authors for making their relationship the best part of the story.
The introduction of shady characters such as Owen, Nolan, Aiden, and their corresponding plot about retrieving the necklace keeps us on our toes as we don’t know who to trust. Jan’s eventual conflict with Shelley over the necklace is also well-written and believable.
Where things took a turn for me is when the villain is revealed. I remember it distinctly because the writing style took a sharp turn into modern YA. While I saw what the author was going for, it clashed with what came before and -for me- not in a good way. While I will acknowledge that the villain’s motivations were sound, I thought their actions and eventual comeuppance were overblown. I remember thinking that they sounded like an over-the-top anime villain and unfortunately, this greatly impacted my final impression of “Jinx”.
So, in the end, this turned out to be a story of contrasts and I enjoyed one side more than the other. If you’re into cozy mysteries with a throwback style, then “Jinx” is for you. If you’re into violent YA thrillers with a supernatural spin, then the last 25% of “Jinx” will appeal.
September 6, 2022
First of all, this book has a lovely cover and lovely internal black and white illustrations. Normally I'm only a fan of internal artwork if it's an ekphrastic piece, but I thought in this case the black and white sketches complimented the story well and aided the scene setting. Story-wise, Jinx gets off to a slow start as the titular character Jan, who is otherwise known as Jinx, and her friend Shelley find a mysterious box under the sea while diving, decorated with a strange skull-faced mermaid and containing a locket necklace. They learn that it's associated with a Celtic legend of a sea-witch who can bestow powers on those who open it. The story picks up pace as the girls both try to find out more about mystery men who appear in a boat at the site where they found the box, adding a sinister element to the story: why do they want the box? Tension increases as one of the men begins following the girls and there's an element of Harry Potter horcruxes as Jan begins wearing the locket necklace for safekeeping, which is burdensome because of her emotional attachment to it. The girls are likeable and make smart decisions when trying to evade the strange man pursuing them and in uncovering the mystery of the box, although were sometimes not the best judges of character when it came to sussing the villains - realistic for sixteen year old girls. After the excitement of the girls being pursued, there's another lull in the pacing as the girls discuss how to open the locket to wield its power, whilst not yet opening it - by the halfway stage of the book, I would've liked the 'tease' of the locket to be over and some real fantasy action to be taking place. My interest resurged in the latter half of the book as tension with the Chief of police and his brother increased in a power struggle over the magic box. All this builds to an exciting climax with a powerful threat against the girls, and indeed town, at the local Fun zone. I liked that there was real peril and consequences, which I admit I wasn't expecting since the book is aimed at a YA audience; but a decision on the author's part that enhanced the story. Overall, I think this was an entertaining read, but the plot pacing was inconsistent at times although the payoff at the end made it worth it.
December 21, 2022
Dark magic and danger surround the discovery of a strange box in the ocean in this enjoyable YA mystery with fantasy and horror elements. Two teenage girls, Jan (nicknamed “Jinx”) and her best friend Shelley, chance upon the ornate little treasure box while they’re diving for shells during the long summer vacation. The only item inside it is a locket—not much of a find, until Jan starts to experience the sinister effect it has on anyone who wears it.
As they research the history of the box, Jan and Shelley find themselves the target of malign forces: strange men are following them, and echoes of local folklore bring disturbing revelations. What began as an idyllic seaside holiday turns into a nightmare as the two girls pit their wits against dangerous adversaries.
Ms. Magner is an adept storyteller with a keen sense of pace, plot and character. She rarely puts a foot wrong here; the story unfolds like clockwork, with a couple of twists thrown in that pull the rug out from under our spunky young heroine, Jan. The tone of the tale evolves well, from the breezy YA hangout scenes of the opening few chapters to the crossover into outright horror territory toward the end. That transition could have been jarring, but the author layers in enough unsettling hints and warnings throughout the story to prime the reader for a heavy dose of Stephen King.
Descriptions are succinct and often charming, such as the jalopy Jan drives around in being referred to as “the Blue Bomb”. The friendship between the two girls, and the differences between them, are natural and believable. Some of the dialogue is a little stiff and perfunctory, especially from the brothers. I like that the story doesn’t lean too heavily into the fantasy elements—some things are better left unexplained. The illustrations sprinkled throughout the book are apt and impressive.
Overall, I can recommend Jinx to anyone intrigued by the premise. A wholesome YA mystery that grows darker and more deadly as it goes on, Ms. Magner’s book delivers exactly what it promises, and I was entertained the whole way through.
As they research the history of the box, Jan and Shelley find themselves the target of malign forces: strange men are following them, and echoes of local folklore bring disturbing revelations. What began as an idyllic seaside holiday turns into a nightmare as the two girls pit their wits against dangerous adversaries.
Ms. Magner is an adept storyteller with a keen sense of pace, plot and character. She rarely puts a foot wrong here; the story unfolds like clockwork, with a couple of twists thrown in that pull the rug out from under our spunky young heroine, Jan. The tone of the tale evolves well, from the breezy YA hangout scenes of the opening few chapters to the crossover into outright horror territory toward the end. That transition could have been jarring, but the author layers in enough unsettling hints and warnings throughout the story to prime the reader for a heavy dose of Stephen King.
Descriptions are succinct and often charming, such as the jalopy Jan drives around in being referred to as “the Blue Bomb”. The friendship between the two girls, and the differences between them, are natural and believable. Some of the dialogue is a little stiff and perfunctory, especially from the brothers. I like that the story doesn’t lean too heavily into the fantasy elements—some things are better left unexplained. The illustrations sprinkled throughout the book are apt and impressive.
Overall, I can recommend Jinx to anyone intrigued by the premise. A wholesome YA mystery that grows darker and more deadly as it goes on, Ms. Magner’s book delivers exactly what it promises, and I was entertained the whole way through.
September 27, 2022
Three things drew me to this book. The cover is attractive and alluring; there is a reference to Scotland, Celtic legends and ancient curses, and the fact that the author picked up the story that her grandmother had begun to write many years before. It starts off as an innocent adventure for two sixteen-year-old girls in a coastal town in America, who have the whole summer ahead of them. Jan, also known as Jinx, comes to stay with friend Shelley and her widowed police officer father while her family have returned to their native Scotland for a holiday. Despite Shelley’s father laying down the rules of the house, he is very busy with his work and the girls are mostly left to their own devices. They decide to visit a tiny bay, Azuline Cove, to collect driftwood and shells to sell to a local gift shop owner. Through the early morning fog they hear two voices, presumably men in a boat, which sets the scene for a mystery to unfold. To add to the excitement, they find a small silver box with a secret message carved on it. Little did they know the thrilling mystery that lay ahead of them. The characters are likeable, the settings vividly described and the pacing was good. You could feel the urgency in phrases like ‘fighting against the current’ as she dived down to grab the shiny object, and you can hear the waves lapping against the shore as the girls frolicked on the beach. While it starts out as a girls own adventure, the fun and lightness give way to dark scenes that make the reader feel a little uneasy as the girls attempt to unravel a trail of lies and deceit. The author says she doesn’t categorise her book as falling into any particular genre. I would call it a well-written thrilling mystery.
January 5, 2023
This story is timeless and I would jump to recommend to anyone who wants a YA fantasy that feels like a breath of fresh air. Though it harkens back to the early seventies with a breezy, mysterious tone, it expertly escalates to a climax that reminded me of Heathers (1988) (bonus because of the inclusion of magic)
Adventurous, optimistic, and full-of-life Jan and her easygoing but more prudent friend Shelley start their summer with goals to collect shells, but fall into a darkly fantastical mystery with a wealthy family. The end is where the story reminded me of Heathers, as not only did the villain remind me of 'JD' (a hotheaded, dramatic, spoiled young man who feels scorned by the world), but his defeat is undeniably “explosive".
But I think my favorite part of the book is how it does not hold back from dealing with darkness. It is still purely YA in terms of age range, but it acknowledges teens' ability to handle violence, trauma in a mature, realistic way - something not all YA books do, which makes it hard for me to suspend my disbelief sometimes. But Jinx includes this violence without undermining the toll it can take on the psyche, exploring the guilt and fear that comes after just as much as when it happens in the moment. It is raw and dark, but also handled realistically and bravely, and Jan and Shelley are more than heroic enough to stand strong despite being constantly underestimated by the antagonist(s). I loved this nod to the strength of teens and the fact that they have the power to be heroes in their own stories.
I received a free copy from VRO. The opinions expressed in this review are solely my own.
Adventurous, optimistic, and full-of-life Jan and her easygoing but more prudent friend Shelley start their summer with goals to collect shells, but fall into a darkly fantastical mystery with a wealthy family. The end is where the story reminded me of Heathers, as not only did the villain remind me of 'JD' (a hotheaded, dramatic, spoiled young man who feels scorned by the world), but his defeat is undeniably “explosive".
But I think my favorite part of the book is how it does not hold back from dealing with darkness. It is still purely YA in terms of age range, but it acknowledges teens' ability to handle violence, trauma in a mature, realistic way - something not all YA books do, which makes it hard for me to suspend my disbelief sometimes. But Jinx includes this violence without undermining the toll it can take on the psyche, exploring the guilt and fear that comes after just as much as when it happens in the moment. It is raw and dark, but also handled realistically and bravely, and Jan and Shelley are more than heroic enough to stand strong despite being constantly underestimated by the antagonist(s). I loved this nod to the strength of teens and the fact that they have the power to be heroes in their own stories.
I received a free copy from VRO. The opinions expressed in this review are solely my own.
October 3, 2023
“Jinx” is an urban dark fantasy for teens and young adults. The mains are very cute best friends, named Jan and Shelley, who are different from each other but fit together well. They’re high schoolers on summer vacation in 1972 when they find an old box in the ocean with a locket that Jan starts wearing. After that, a series of creepy events happen, including strange men following them and periods where Jan starts to grow delusionally attached to the necklace.
I was a little bored during the beginning. It felt like a mild mystery. Even Jan/Shelley’s relationship or the hints of magic wasn’t enough to keep me one hundred percent invested. But after the boat incident, I was so glad I kept reading because the book got incredible (boat incident and everything after is 5/5). The reveal of the villain actually threw me for a loop but made so much sense in hindsight and was built up to really well. I also loved the relationship between the brothers and their final stand off. I loved how the villain was portrayed and how he accurately depicts the type of wealthy, usually male ego of someone who at their core is a spoiled, isolated young man with a victim complex. He hangs with a perpetual yes-man then self-isolates with his wealth and mulls over his hatred for everyone, especially his family. He is one hundred percent that kid who would have take a g*n to school and then rant about "society" when he got in trouble 😂
This book was a fun read, but the beginning was a little mild for me which caused me some boredom until the middle. However I was a fan of the ending (or really the middle onwards) and the characters.
I was a little bored during the beginning. It felt like a mild mystery. Even Jan/Shelley’s relationship or the hints of magic wasn’t enough to keep me one hundred percent invested. But after the boat incident, I was so glad I kept reading because the book got incredible (boat incident and everything after is 5/5). The reveal of the villain actually threw me for a loop but made so much sense in hindsight and was built up to really well. I also loved the relationship between the brothers and their final stand off. I loved how the villain was portrayed and how he accurately depicts the type of wealthy, usually male ego of someone who at their core is a spoiled, isolated young man with a victim complex. He hangs with a perpetual yes-man then self-isolates with his wealth and mulls over his hatred for everyone, especially his family. He is one hundred percent that kid who would have take a g*n to school and then rant about "society" when he got in trouble 😂
This book was a fun read, but the beginning was a little mild for me which caused me some boredom until the middle. However I was a fan of the ending (or really the middle onwards) and the characters.
October 29, 2023
A deviously dark fantasy mystery. Jinx has a timeless feel rooted in blissful teen naivety, which shatters at the climax and forces bold, theatrical Jan and her laidback best friend Shelley to adjust their world view and trust. The story starts out innocent, but it doesn’t stay that way. The beginning has an achingly nostalgic feel: best friends searching for summer fun, exploring coves and boardwalks… then finding themselves in a mess they never dreamed of. The magic’s origin is left largely up to the reader. We don’t know what or who actually created the box and what the intention was, which makes the sea witch legend chillingly creepy. I’m already scared of the ocean, so I don’t need more nightmares about dark ancient magic it stirs up. It’s been a while since I’ve read this author but this is just as dark and mysterious as I remember her writing to be. It’s also hard to forget the beautiful illustrations in her books. They remind me how much I’d like to see illustrations in other novels, young adult or otherwise. The way the characters are drawn supplement the descriptions and the different elements come together sublimely. Gimme more!
Bonus, this is a debut. I get giddy reading debuts and this one was special because of the afterword. On the whole, a grand read. I may not be the target audience age, but hey, I enjoy me some teen young adult books, especially darker ones. There weren’t many parts I got impatient at. The wake of the boat incident could have been a little shorter, but eh, that’s persnickety. Given what it leads to, let’s just say it was well worth the wait… and next time I set off any firecrackers, I’ll stay a mile away from gasoline.
Bonus, this is a debut. I get giddy reading debuts and this one was special because of the afterword. On the whole, a grand read. I may not be the target audience age, but hey, I enjoy me some teen young adult books, especially darker ones. There weren’t many parts I got impatient at. The wake of the boat incident could have been a little shorter, but eh, that’s persnickety. Given what it leads to, let’s just say it was well worth the wait… and next time I set off any firecrackers, I’ll stay a mile away from gasoline.
February 3, 2023
Well, this was an unexpected read!
Jan (Jinx) and best friend, Shelley, are planning a great summer together. With Jan's parents vacationing away in Scotland, she has the opportunity to live with Shelley and of course, the girls are excited to hang out and have fun. The summer had barely even begun when, during a trip to Azuline Cove, they find a mysterious box with a mermaid carved onto the top, and a locket inside. The girls are immediately curious, but it is Jan who is drawn to the piece of jewellery. Unfortunately, the more she wears it, the more attention is drawn her way and along with it, more danger than either girls could ever imagine.
I enjoyed this book! There are many parts of Jinx that worked really well. Jan and Shelley were a great pair of mains and I thought their relationship was pretty accurate for a pair of teenaged girls. Generally, I found the plot well done. I was pretty engaged right from the beginning and despite it dragging a little in the middle, there was more than enough action to make up for it. Personally, I wasn't a fan of the illustrations, but I can see how that gives the book something extra for the readers. I was a little surprised at the end - it was darker than I expected, but I'm not complaining about that! Overall, an absolutely solid read!
Thank you Voracious Readers and Melissa Magner for my copy! I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Jan (Jinx) and best friend, Shelley, are planning a great summer together. With Jan's parents vacationing away in Scotland, she has the opportunity to live with Shelley and of course, the girls are excited to hang out and have fun. The summer had barely even begun when, during a trip to Azuline Cove, they find a mysterious box with a mermaid carved onto the top, and a locket inside. The girls are immediately curious, but it is Jan who is drawn to the piece of jewellery. Unfortunately, the more she wears it, the more attention is drawn her way and along with it, more danger than either girls could ever imagine.
I enjoyed this book! There are many parts of Jinx that worked really well. Jan and Shelley were a great pair of mains and I thought their relationship was pretty accurate for a pair of teenaged girls. Generally, I found the plot well done. I was pretty engaged right from the beginning and despite it dragging a little in the middle, there was more than enough action to make up for it. Personally, I wasn't a fan of the illustrations, but I can see how that gives the book something extra for the readers. I was a little surprised at the end - it was darker than I expected, but I'm not complaining about that! Overall, an absolutely solid read!
Thank you Voracious Readers and Melissa Magner for my copy! I received an ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
May 22, 2025
Overall solid, engaging read. While it took me a little while to get into, as the beginning is slower and more grounded in mystery than action—more like a quiet seaside adventure between two best friends—I was hooked by the midpoint.
The ending delivers. Jan and Shelley’s bravery, the truth about the locket, the standoff with the brothers, it all came together beautifully. It was easily my favorite part of the book and made the journey worth it.
The characters are where this really shines. Jan and Shelley felt real and grounded: Jan was witty, confident, but sometimes brash, and Shelley was levelheaded yet had her own small rebellious streak, and they spoke like normal, realistic teens would. Best of all, the villain caught me completely off guard in the best way. That was my favorite part.
I also appreciated that this story is age-appropriate for teens while still dealing with serious, dark themes. It’s not lighthearted and there is violence near the end, but nothing that teen readers would be unfamiliar with. A thoughtful blend of genres with a strong emotional core. Even more special is the 70s feel of the book, which I imagine comes from the fact it was initially started by the author’s grandmother. Really cool blend, not just of genre, but of eras. Yet it all worked to form a cohesive voice.
Though fast-paced readers might be wanting to get to the action, it’s worth it to stick around with these characters.
The ending delivers. Jan and Shelley’s bravery, the truth about the locket, the standoff with the brothers, it all came together beautifully. It was easily my favorite part of the book and made the journey worth it.
The characters are where this really shines. Jan and Shelley felt real and grounded: Jan was witty, confident, but sometimes brash, and Shelley was levelheaded yet had her own small rebellious streak, and they spoke like normal, realistic teens would. Best of all, the villain caught me completely off guard in the best way. That was my favorite part.
I also appreciated that this story is age-appropriate for teens while still dealing with serious, dark themes. It’s not lighthearted and there is violence near the end, but nothing that teen readers would be unfamiliar with. A thoughtful blend of genres with a strong emotional core. Even more special is the 70s feel of the book, which I imagine comes from the fact it was initially started by the author’s grandmother. Really cool blend, not just of genre, but of eras. Yet it all worked to form a cohesive voice.
Though fast-paced readers might be wanting to get to the action, it’s worth it to stick around with these characters.
January 14, 2022
This book reads like a classic Nancy Drew mystery...until it doesn’t. And wow, was that shift in tone done well! It follows two best friends, Jan and Shelley, who find a small box in the ocean with a locket inside. When Jan (the MC) starts to wear the necklace, she experiences all sorts of weird episodes, and the two friends end up caught in one family’s battle over dark magic contained within the locket. I really love how Magner uses tonal shifts to convey the creeping horror and realization that comes to its peak at the climax of the book. And wowow was the villain done well. I don’t want to give anything away because there’s a few twists, but if you want to be guessing throughout the novel only to get hit with that “oh NO” moment, this is your book. The only critique I have is that the novel takes a while to get going. There’s still things going on, but it isn’t until later in the book that the horror aspect really comes to life. Overall, this was a crazy fun read, I felt my heart racing at those parts near the end. The characters were layered and Jan was a great example of an unreliable narrator (but was also a very fierce and likable character). This book kept my attention all the way through (especially near the end) Consensus: 4/5
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January 3, 2023
I enjoyed this book, but I'm weird.
I'm having a little trouble classifying it, though. When I review a book, I try to think about who the book is for. I don't like genres overly, because most of my favorite books don't fit into them, but different people, have different needs and preferences, in a general sort of way.
This book has a rich voice, but a simple narrative, beautiful illustrations, but an unflinching dark side, magic, but also a small but solid real setting. I'm charmed, but confused.
The simplicity of the narrative is almost YA. The narrator suggests things might work out a certain way, and then it just does. However, the heart breaking darkness makes it hard for me to suggest it to anyone with an unstable emotional framework.
The magic is interesting, but it's spectrum is small, and the reality is very solid and unwavering, so I wouldn't recommend it to my serious escapist friends, plus the romance is fleeting and juvenile.
The descriptions of the setting are rich, and tactile, but the setting is small, which isn't a failing in the book, it is sufficient without slowing the narrative, but limits the wonder, despite the magic.
I just don't know. I liked it, but I'm weird. Read it, if you like strange curses in small towns. It's charming.
I received a free copy of this book through Voracious Readers Only.
I'm having a little trouble classifying it, though. When I review a book, I try to think about who the book is for. I don't like genres overly, because most of my favorite books don't fit into them, but different people, have different needs and preferences, in a general sort of way.
This book has a rich voice, but a simple narrative, beautiful illustrations, but an unflinching dark side, magic, but also a small but solid real setting. I'm charmed, but confused.
The simplicity of the narrative is almost YA. The narrator suggests things might work out a certain way, and then it just does. However, the heart breaking darkness makes it hard for me to suggest it to anyone with an unstable emotional framework.
The magic is interesting, but it's spectrum is small, and the reality is very solid and unwavering, so I wouldn't recommend it to my serious escapist friends, plus the romance is fleeting and juvenile.
The descriptions of the setting are rich, and tactile, but the setting is small, which isn't a failing in the book, it is sufficient without slowing the narrative, but limits the wonder, despite the magic.
I just don't know. I liked it, but I'm weird. Read it, if you like strange curses in small towns. It's charming.
I received a free copy of this book through Voracious Readers Only.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 23, 2022
I liked the reference to Scotland, Celtic legends and ancient curses, and lets not forget the striking cover! Jinx depicts the adventure of two sixteen-year-old girls living on the coast who are hanging out and enjoying the summer. Jan, AKA Jinx goes to stay with her friend Shelley and her father while her family visit their folks back in Scotland. Shelley’s father gives the girls strict instructions on what they should and should not do when home alone, but he is flat out at work (he is a police officer) and therefore the girls have the freedom to do as they please. The girls end up visiting a small bay, Azuline Cove, to collect driftwood and shells to do trade with the local gift shop. One foggy morning they overhear the voices of a couple of men in a boat, and this is where the story takes a mysterious turn. Then the girls come across a small silver box with a message carved on it, and the mystery deepens further. I quickly became invested in the characters , the descriptive writing, and the overall tension. What starts out as an innocent girls adventure, quickly takes a more sinister and dark turn that make the reader feel the teenagers angst as they discover that all is not as it seems. This thriller/mystery is thought provoking, original and well written - bravo!
January 18, 2023
I love mystery stories and this one promised to have it. The story of two girls who find a mysterious box. I was sucked in by the image on the front cover and the summary.
The story is of 2 friends who find a mysterious box with a necklace in it. One of the girls wears the necklace and finds it has mystical and sinister properties. The story starts out like any light, like any likable YA story but soon turns dark. The girls encounter in the dark forces that surround the necklace, and with colourful characters who appear, hell-bent on having the box.
It was a little different with the drawings thrown into the book, but I liked them. They weren’t overdone and helped get a good visual. The two girls are written well. They are both instantly likable and believable. The plot moves at a good pace through most of the book. There are a few places where the action lulled a bit but the intrigue woven into the story kept me interested.
Not your average YA story, there is a good mix of fantasy, suspense, mysticism, and danger. Aimed at a YA audience, it can be a little dark in some places, but overall, I think it will do well with teens and older.
The story is of 2 friends who find a mysterious box with a necklace in it. One of the girls wears the necklace and finds it has mystical and sinister properties. The story starts out like any light, like any likable YA story but soon turns dark. The girls encounter in the dark forces that surround the necklace, and with colourful characters who appear, hell-bent on having the box.
It was a little different with the drawings thrown into the book, but I liked them. They weren’t overdone and helped get a good visual. The two girls are written well. They are both instantly likable and believable. The plot moves at a good pace through most of the book. There are a few places where the action lulled a bit but the intrigue woven into the story kept me interested.
Not your average YA story, there is a good mix of fantasy, suspense, mysticism, and danger. Aimed at a YA audience, it can be a little dark in some places, but overall, I think it will do well with teens and older.
September 18, 2023
I love mystery stories and this one promised to have it. The story of two girls who find a mysterious box. I was sucked in by the image on the front cover and the summary.
The story is of 2 friends who find a mysterious box with a necklace in it. One of the girls wears the necklace and finds it has mystical and sinister properties. The story starts out like any light, like any likable YA story but soon turns dark. The girls encounter in the dark forces that surround the necklace, and with colourful characters who appear, hell-bent on having the box.
It was a little different with the drawings thrown into the book, but I liked them. They weren’t overdone and helped get a good visual. The two girls are written well. They are both instantly likable and believable. The plot moves at a good pace through most of the book. There are a few places where the action lulled a bit but the intrigue woven into the story kept me interested.
Not your average YA story, there is a good mix of fantasy, suspense, mysticism, and danger. Aimed at a YA audience, it can be a little dark in some places, but overall, I think it will do well with teens and older.
The story is of 2 friends who find a mysterious box with a necklace in it. One of the girls wears the necklace and finds it has mystical and sinister properties. The story starts out like any light, like any likable YA story but soon turns dark. The girls encounter in the dark forces that surround the necklace, and with colourful characters who appear, hell-bent on having the box.
It was a little different with the drawings thrown into the book, but I liked them. They weren’t overdone and helped get a good visual. The two girls are written well. They are both instantly likable and believable. The plot moves at a good pace through most of the book. There are a few places where the action lulled a bit but the intrigue woven into the story kept me interested.
Not your average YA story, there is a good mix of fantasy, suspense, mysticism, and danger. Aimed at a YA audience, it can be a little dark in some places, but overall, I think it will do well with teens and older.
April 11, 2024
Captivating story. Beautiful easy to read writing. An ideal summer turns into a nightmare after the discovery of something that may be better left undiscovered…
I knew from the beginning the book was going to be different because, despite being published in the current century it rang of mystery books published in the 1900s. Jan and Shelley felt like real teens from the 70s and it was nice to read a teen novel without texting conversations or references to social media.
Little by little, the charming treasure turns into something the mains could never have imagined. My first guess about the twist was off! The villain was done well and the climatic scenes and the ending felt believable. I enjoyed that the mystery about the “treasure’s” origins remains that way. It made everything about it feel like something “beyond” us which was a good contrast to the humans who interact with the sea witch’s treasure.
It's a debut novel, which makes it even more of a pleasant surprise. Original, highly entertaining. I received an eARC but this does not impact my review. All opinions are genuine and my own.
I knew from the beginning the book was going to be different because, despite being published in the current century it rang of mystery books published in the 1900s. Jan and Shelley felt like real teens from the 70s and it was nice to read a teen novel without texting conversations or references to social media.
Little by little, the charming treasure turns into something the mains could never have imagined. My first guess about the twist was off! The villain was done well and the climatic scenes and the ending felt believable. I enjoyed that the mystery about the “treasure’s” origins remains that way. It made everything about it feel like something “beyond” us which was a good contrast to the humans who interact with the sea witch’s treasure.
It's a debut novel, which makes it even more of a pleasant surprise. Original, highly entertaining. I received an eARC but this does not impact my review. All opinions are genuine and my own.
June 5, 2022
Hidden depths! Hidden Secrets!
Jinx begins as an easily accessible book. Written for the mainly young female adult market, it is set in a coastal town in the USA. The main characters are Jinx, real name Jan, and Shelley. The two sixteen-year-old girls were expecting an enjoyable holiday from school, but things turned out to be very different. Jan’s parents are away and so she is staying with Shelley and her father, a police officer.
Things turn sinister with the discovery of a metal box and inside a necklace. Jinx wears the necklace, and this leads to a schism forming between the girls. Supernatural forces, possession, an old legend, and danger make this an enjoyable tale where villains become heroes and the good guys become villains, and nothing is as it seems. The book was started by the author’s grandmother, Patricia M. Kasper, and was completed by Melissa. There is a definite change as the story becomes brutal, violent and edges on horror.
Personally, I felt this was a much more satisfying read than I expected, and it is an enjoyable YA horror/fantasy.
Jinx begins as an easily accessible book. Written for the mainly young female adult market, it is set in a coastal town in the USA. The main characters are Jinx, real name Jan, and Shelley. The two sixteen-year-old girls were expecting an enjoyable holiday from school, but things turned out to be very different. Jan’s parents are away and so she is staying with Shelley and her father, a police officer.
Things turn sinister with the discovery of a metal box and inside a necklace. Jinx wears the necklace, and this leads to a schism forming between the girls. Supernatural forces, possession, an old legend, and danger make this an enjoyable tale where villains become heroes and the good guys become villains, and nothing is as it seems. The book was started by the author’s grandmother, Patricia M. Kasper, and was completed by Melissa. There is a definite change as the story becomes brutal, violent and edges on horror.
Personally, I felt this was a much more satisfying read than I expected, and it is an enjoyable YA horror/fantasy.
May 6, 2023
This was an endearing, mysterious, but also dark and dramatic coming of age story. It’s about maturing, trust, deception, and the lengths some people will go to when they’re motivated by revenge or the need for power over people. But mostly it’s about friendship and the way love for friends can push people to be brave and overcome adversity.
Certain parts were very cute, especially the friendship between the two main characters, but the book also didn’t avoid touching on darker truths and themes. What kind of person is the sea witch’s power made for? How do those people blend into society or use wealth, charisma, lies to hide in plain sight? All such good questions. I loved even more how the sea witch was never confirmed to be a real thing, leaving it up to the reader to wonder what kind of force plays on the dark side some humans possess. For a book ranging between middle-grade and young-adult, these are hefty questions! But that was what made it so good. Saying I liked this book would be an understatement.
Certain parts were very cute, especially the friendship between the two main characters, but the book also didn’t avoid touching on darker truths and themes. What kind of person is the sea witch’s power made for? How do those people blend into society or use wealth, charisma, lies to hide in plain sight? All such good questions. I loved even more how the sea witch was never confirmed to be a real thing, leaving it up to the reader to wonder what kind of force plays on the dark side some humans possess. For a book ranging between middle-grade and young-adult, these are hefty questions! But that was what made it so good. Saying I liked this book would be an understatement.
July 8, 2023
Charming, Suspenseful, and Mysterious
I listened to the audiobook format of this novel. The literature is beautifully penned, and the voice actor skillfully tells the story with so much charm and grace. Two sixteen-year-old friends are thrilled to spend the summer together while Jan’s parents are out of the country. The ocean setting, scenes of carnivals, marinas and sky’s-the-limit summer fun is all set in the year 1972 long before cell phones and social media. The girls decide to collect ocean shells and silver dollars to sell at a gift shop when they witness a strange boat with two men throwing something overboard. The girls wait until the boat leaves and dive for the hidden treasure and are elated when they find a mysterious box containing a necklace. The language reflects an earlier more innocent era, although the author does bring some thrilling scenes and even horror into the mix as the mysterious necklace proves to be more than what they could have ever dreamed of. The story is well written and well performed.
I listened to the audiobook format of this novel. The literature is beautifully penned, and the voice actor skillfully tells the story with so much charm and grace. Two sixteen-year-old friends are thrilled to spend the summer together while Jan’s parents are out of the country. The ocean setting, scenes of carnivals, marinas and sky’s-the-limit summer fun is all set in the year 1972 long before cell phones and social media. The girls decide to collect ocean shells and silver dollars to sell at a gift shop when they witness a strange boat with two men throwing something overboard. The girls wait until the boat leaves and dive for the hidden treasure and are elated when they find a mysterious box containing a necklace. The language reflects an earlier more innocent era, although the author does bring some thrilling scenes and even horror into the mix as the mysterious necklace proves to be more than what they could have ever dreamed of. The story is well written and well performed.
May 18, 2024
"Jinx" is the story about two 16 year old girls who are best friends. Jan (Jinx) is going to spend the summer with her friend, Shelley, while her parents are visiting family in Scotland. While searching for shells to sell to the gift shop, they discover a magical box in the bottom of the cove. Inside is a locket that has dark powers.
According to the author notes, this book was started in the 1970s or 80s by the author's grandmother and finished just recently by the author. That created a bit of a disconnect for me. The first part clearly is written in the style of a Nancy Drew book, but the end, or last fourth, has a more modern, super villian flavor.
There were several things to like about the book, especially the character development and the tension that built up in the last part. I was sad that that two girls, especially Shelley, used such bad language. The name of God was taken in vain repeatedly, and other swear words were used frequently by the two girls.
This book would appeal to teens who enjoy dark fantasy and mystery.
According to the author notes, this book was started in the 1970s or 80s by the author's grandmother and finished just recently by the author. That created a bit of a disconnect for me. The first part clearly is written in the style of a Nancy Drew book, but the end, or last fourth, has a more modern, super villian flavor.
There were several things to like about the book, especially the character development and the tension that built up in the last part. I was sad that that two girls, especially Shelley, used such bad language. The name of God was taken in vain repeatedly, and other swear words were used frequently by the two girls.
This book would appeal to teens who enjoy dark fantasy and mystery.
April 5, 2019
Love, love, love this book! Great young adult novel with a good twist and a satisfying but also bittersweet ending. I loved the banter between Shelley and Jan; their friendship is realistic and endearing, and it changes throughout the novel to end with something even stronger.
Something that really stood out to me about this young adult novel is the lack of romance; I find it tedious that sooo many YA novels have the "love triangle" cliche ... of course, there's some high-school crushes (namely, Shelley and Gabriel) going on, but Jan strikes me as such an independent girl, which makes her an admirable and refreshing protagonist (unsure if this counts as a spoiler, but better safe than sorry!). YA novels cover a wide range in my experience reading them, and this novel had me laughing at some parts, crying at others, and biting my nails near the end. Good read for teens or those in their twenties (like me)!
Something that really stood out to me about this young adult novel is the lack of romance; I find it tedious that sooo many YA novels have the "love triangle" cliche ... of course, there's some high-school crushes (namely, Shelley and Gabriel) going on, but Jan strikes me as such an independent girl, which makes her an admirable and refreshing protagonist (unsure if this counts as a spoiler, but better safe than sorry!). YA novels cover a wide range in my experience reading them, and this novel had me laughing at some parts, crying at others, and biting my nails near the end. Good read for teens or those in their twenties (like me)!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 6, 2022
I often read Young Adult, and I really enjoyed this book despite it being a bit long for the genre—346 pages.
The title 'Jinx' was what first attracted me to read this book- I love the play on words.
After a rather long start (it took a couple of chapters for me to get into the book) the story chugged along nicely to the end, despite more places where the story slowed down. Maybe, I'm an impatient reader, but I was eager to know where the story was going.
As well as witty Shelley and Jan (Jinx), the author introduces us to a nice bunch of characters who all come over as believable. I liked the way older characters were woven into the story, as old Ms Johnson, and of course Mr. Brown. And that magic necklace—eerie!
I had my ideas on how the story would finish, and I'm glad it ended how it did.
A good afternoon read with just the right dose of fantasy, suspense, and magic. Well done!
The title 'Jinx' was what first attracted me to read this book- I love the play on words.
After a rather long start (it took a couple of chapters for me to get into the book) the story chugged along nicely to the end, despite more places where the story slowed down. Maybe, I'm an impatient reader, but I was eager to know where the story was going.
As well as witty Shelley and Jan (Jinx), the author introduces us to a nice bunch of characters who all come over as believable. I liked the way older characters were woven into the story, as old Ms Johnson, and of course Mr. Brown. And that magic necklace—eerie!
I had my ideas on how the story would finish, and I'm glad it ended how it did.
A good afternoon read with just the right dose of fantasy, suspense, and magic. Well done!
January 3, 2023
3.5 rounded up
I love the origins of this story with the author taking a story started by their grandmother and giving it new life. It’s more of a middle-school/young adult story, though there is some violence. Setting it in 1972 seems pointless as it mainly feels contemporary except for lack of internet/cell phones. On the other hand, it’s not really dated, so it does feel fairly contemporary, at least as someone who grew up without cell/internet.
The story is actually quite interesting and the magical element is good, though a little more background as to why there’s a dark side might have been useful. The author shows a lot of promise and I think their grandmother would be proud. It’s not a must-read, but it’s absolutely worth a read if you want a good story about friendship and some exploration of the pros and cons of magic with a bit of mystery.
I received a free copy from Voracious Readers Only in exchange for an honest review.
I love the origins of this story with the author taking a story started by their grandmother and giving it new life. It’s more of a middle-school/young adult story, though there is some violence. Setting it in 1972 seems pointless as it mainly feels contemporary except for lack of internet/cell phones. On the other hand, it’s not really dated, so it does feel fairly contemporary, at least as someone who grew up without cell/internet.
The story is actually quite interesting and the magical element is good, though a little more background as to why there’s a dark side might have been useful. The author shows a lot of promise and I think their grandmother would be proud. It’s not a must-read, but it’s absolutely worth a read if you want a good story about friendship and some exploration of the pros and cons of magic with a bit of mystery.
I received a free copy from Voracious Readers Only in exchange for an honest review.
June 1, 2023
Wow, this one’s a goodie! It’s a mix of old school mystery (very “Nancy Drew”) that turns carnival-slasher-horror (but with dark magic and ancient curses). Mix in small town folklore and some twists and turns too. Also, what a mastery of chekohv’s gun! The firecrackers, the cactus, the car…none of it goes unused, and everything comes full circle. The relationship between the two main girls is cute and witty. They feel like very believable high school best friends and I fell in love with them from the moment they were introduced. I absolutely believed their reactions to everything and I was just as taken aback as they were when the events of the Fun Zone happened. Like “The Underground Moon,” “Jinx”’s build up is careful and intricate but ends with a bang (maybe even more intense this time, but it’s hard to compare). I’d wanted to read this before my Goodreads hiatus but didn’t find the time…well, I finally did, and what a way to get back into the swing of things.
May 16, 2024
Jinx tells the story of sixteen year old Jan, or Jinx as she's known to by some. She mostly hangs out with Shelley, her best friend and true connection. They adore nature, and thrive off morning walks on the beaches, catching the low-tide on a sunny day. On one innocuous wonder, Jan uncovers a mysterious box, engraved with a mermaid, containing a note and most importantly, a locket. This is where Jan's troubles start, as physical problems arise owing to the necklace. But curiosity takes over, and Jan summons Shelly on a quest to further understand this strange finding of theirs.
Thoroughly enjoyed Jinx. I think the length was just right, allowing for detail during each part of their adventure. The author does a good job depicting the visual aspects of the story, adding layers to this beyond your standard YA tale. Highly recommend giving Jinx a chance, I'll be looking out for Melissa's future work.
Thoroughly enjoyed Jinx. I think the length was just right, allowing for detail during each part of their adventure. The author does a good job depicting the visual aspects of the story, adding layers to this beyond your standard YA tale. Highly recommend giving Jinx a chance, I'll be looking out for Melissa's future work.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 28, 2024
I struggled to rate this 2 or 3 stars but ultimately I went with 2 because I got bored in the middle. Maybe it's closer to 2.25. I liked the beginning and I liked the end. It was the middle that lagged and that was because some explanations felt overwritten. It's not that the writing is bad, in fact for the most part I enjoyed the voice of this author and found her style pleasant to read. The pacing is what I did not like, there were too many scenes before the exciting climatic scene where the girls were acquiring information and it felt like it dragged on. When I was thinking of doing 3 stars it was because the information led up to a good twist and made everything come together. The problem was I felt those chapters leading up could be shorter because I was losing interest in sections on and off. This is when I wish goodreads had half stars because the writing deserves stars if only the pacing was quicker because the action at the end was exciting.
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