Reading this was the equivalent of watching a 5 hour long Naruto filler episode where a random side character chased around a bug the entire time until the last 20 minutes, where the character gets involved in the actual (but subpar) plot. I was going to give this book 1 star until the last three chapters or so, but I feel as if 2 stars is still generous, as have all my ratings for this series been. The entire story was dry, and was part of the reason for my reading burn out. Before, I was more sympathetic to the long build up and the grande finale, but the formula has been used so extraneously in this case that I cannot forgive it. It’s the same old thing as the last book, go to new location on the map, meet new people, spread the word of the revolution, blah, blah, blah. At least the first book mixed it up a bit with the way the down time and action was balanced.
Also, the romance? It’s weird. Naia and Amri (the protagonist of this instalment) have the same pacing in their romance as the plot does. They have little (but barely noticeable) moments throughout that are the equivalent of tasting the hint of lime in a La Croix drink, then have more obvious moments of their interest at the end. It feels very forced and strange, as if the writer is unweaving the romance built between Naia and Kylan, and restitching haphazardly it with an obnoxious neon green. In addition, Naia and Amri have very much a younger brother and older sister dynamic, whereas Kylan and Naia have a two parents that balance eachother and work together like clockwork. It feels…uncomfy to read. Technically Naia and Amri aren’t related, but it feels incestuous all the same. I think a wiser and more appealing option for Naia’s love interest would have been Kylan.
One final thing, while Amri’s development is mildly interesting, he is very annoying to read about. He often acts out of character too, in fun and new annoying ways unimaginable to his already annoying character.
P.S these were some of the main issues, but not all of them. Just to list a few: uninteresting characters, unintelligible descriptions of environment, uninteresting plot developments, assuming the reader knows this world better than master cartographer who’s lived in the world for decades, conflict in certain details (the deck of Onica’s ship for example), and out of character actions throughout by previously developed characters.