Despite Morris' self deprecating forward, The Winter Tree was pretty good. The plot was solid (right up until the end) and the cast of characters were pretty sympathetic. If I had been an editor and gotten this manuscript, I would have had three bits of advice: cut 100 pages, lose the police and journalist centric storylines, and focus on the teenage protagonists. The story belonged to the boys, it was their fight, they released the demon, they needed to put it back. The police storyline and the investigative journalist storyline were mostly for pacing, to slow down the action, and they did. They drug. Aside from that the ending was a total deus ex machina (which he admits in the forward.) If the boys had found a way to seal the demon away again, it would have brought the story full circle, but they didn't. Seriously, how hard was it to have one of them stab the thing with a piece of the original tree?