Good Story, But A Bunch of Errors Once Again!
Story was good and entertaining like the last, I’ll give the author that. However, there’s alwaysssss sooooo many ERRORS, whether it be spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, incomplete sentences, misuse of words, etc.
It’s annoying, lol. Like, with this not being the first book that the author has written, one would think that these errors would reduce, if not cease to exist.
I also really wish that she would use better descriptive words instead of always saying “dumbly,” “grumpily” and “softly.” I can’t count how many times I read “I let out softly” or “I laughed softly” or “I smiled softly.” Like, omg. 😂 And the constant misuse of the commas drove me INSAAAANE, along with the constant describing Shiloh’s “low” eyes and the triplets “hazel” eyes. We GET it! Find another way to describe them, lol.
Something else I didn’t really care for was the whole “midnight hoe” thing and jokes about skin color they did w/Amari. I know that colorism is real, but the author did it in The Carter Boys book w/Jade. We get it already, they’re dark-skinned.
The Olivia + Andrew storyline was annoying, too. I could have done without it.
If the shoe were on the other foot, a woman would’ve pressed charges for the way that she constantly overstepped her boundaries and forced herself onto him. 🙄
But I noticed that a lot of the Carter characters kinda forced their way into a relationship b/c of their inability to take no for an answer: Trent w/Levii, Shiloh w/Amari, Olivia w/Andrew, Elijah w/Jordyn in the first book. It’s ridiculous, smh.