Good Book, Like The Rest. Still Lots of Errors, Though.
Like the rest of the Carter books, this one was really good.
There were some things that were never spoken on that I would’ve liked to be addressed, such as the picture under the bathroom stall that Amari’s friend took when Amari noticed two pairs of men’s shoes. I felt like it was Anthony, but I never got clarification.
I’m glad that there was less Olivia in this book because she’s really annoying to me sometimes, lol.
The Trent + Levii storyline was super pointless, like the author could’ve kept that. For real. He did all that chasing her, only to break up with her because he was going through family issues. That was a valid reason, but I don’t like that he flipped the switch and made it seem like it was because Levii was closed off. Could’ve done without it.
I hate how everyone in this story falls in love sooo quickly and I hate how the women get dogged out and disrespected (except Willow), only to go RIGHT BACK to the guy. The way Anthony did Joy at the club after they slept together the first time? Oh, no baby.
The evolution of Shiloh’s character was another thing I hated. I like him w/Amari, but I liked him better when he was quiet. He was my favorite at one point, but he eventually started doing too much.
As far as the errors, it’s pretty much still the same ones from the other books. Grammatical, punctuation, spelling, inconsistency, etc.
Elijah went from being called “Jodie” to “Jody” and from “JaJa” (by Jordyn) to “Jah Jah.”
The constant misuse of the word CURVE when referring to the parking of cars when it should be CURB. I’ve never heard anyone call it a CURVE. So, that was annoying. 🙄
From old cordless phone ringing to “swiped to answer.” How do you swiped to answer a cordless phone?
Constantly used in the story:
Bright hazel eyes (like we get it, lol). EYES LOW, EYES WIDE, EYES GREW WIDE. Smiled SOFTLY, laughed SOFTLY, muttered SOFTLY, said SOFTLY. Please find more descriptive words to use. It got to a point where I started counting how many times I read “eyes wide” or “softly” on a single page.
Other than that, good book!