This was definitely not as bad as I was afraid of. I was prepared for this to be another white-authored Asian fantasy where people are constantly talking about honor and such and there is a little bit of that, but it's overall a very entertaining political novel from someone who has clearly watched a LOT of Mando/K palace dramas. Which is fine, I like them too. I am not 100% sure why it couldn't have been set in Joseon Korea or Qing/Tang/Ming China which is clearly where they are getting a ton of their influences.
Also, this is a period that I know a fair amount about so the rest of this review is going to be extremely nerdy. You have been warned.
Some of the things that frustrated me: the author feels the need to make up lots of words that are just very clearly analogues for real life things here and is very very lazy about the names. It's fine to be lazy about worldbuilding, there is already a world that is here that you can use. But this really takes the cake:
rai/raipaper=IT'S RICE, JUST CALL IT RICE. There is an interesting academic question if Asia would have been less er "Asian flavoured" if the southern parts of it had not cultivated an extremely water and labour consumptive grain, but this is really not the book for it. We get it, this is Asia, it's ok to just have rice.
babu-IT'S BAMBOO, you keep saying it's segmented, again just call it that.
Zhaon An= AKA Chang'an, the name for the imperial capital of the Tang (among others). Strong Tang influence also with the standard of beauty being for plump beauties with round faces and dresses to be low cut. Also the power of women at court although weirdly Emmett is very conservative on this in comparison with the historical record. Queens and princesses weren't just consorts who attempted to interfere, they really ruled. (The Li royal family was descended from a hybrid Northern Dynasty elite, which, in early years had not yet thrown off some of their non-Han influences so this being a purely N vs. S thing is also weirdly simplistic).
Far Nihon=.....Nihon for those playing at home, simply a word for actual real life Japan in Japanese...woooo...
I mean, these things just seem so lazy that it makes me wonder if the author just didn't really want to learn what things are called in an actual language and so tried to disguise this as "another land in a galaxy far far away" but like I don't know, you could just translate the word or...get a dictionary.
This was by far less annoying, but perhaps more conceptually troubling. Khir, the land to the north, seems to be a bizarre mashup of the Xiongnu (Tang China's big bad nomadic neighbor to the north), Japan, and possibly the Jurchen (Song China's semi big, not nomadic neighbor to the north), and the Mongols (Ming China's big bad, nomadic neighbor to the north). Their noble women have a small blade that they use to defend themselves against rape (samurai class women in Edo Japan), but they have a Great Rider (Khan) and love horses and riding (Xiongnu and Mongols), but somehow their land is also very small (I guess maybe Jurchen). I guess it's fine, but the other aspects of this Khir society, women are very oppressed and stay in the home and make babies and don't own property or get involved in politics and also they have giant fortresses and stuff is really antithetical to most nomadic Northern Asian societies. There is something kind of twisted about putting a lot of stereotypical sedentary Asian society ills (Asians=bad for women) on a nomadic society where from what we know women had a great deal of parity within the society and much power was institutionally granted to noblewomen within for example Mongol society. The not owning property, being at home, not learning to read, is extremely characteristic of the very urban and settled Song and late imperial China, most specifically the Southern Song and Ming-Qing. I was not reading this and expecting to encounter anti-nomadic, anti-Mongol propaganda, and yet life is full of surprises. Han supremacy from a white author caught me a bit off guard but perhaps this is an indictment of the kind of books that the author consulted or the broad assumptions about Northern Asian nomads that are out there.
While I think some of this can be seen as attitudes of the characters, there is a lot of "broad peasant face" "dull peasant eyes" etc etc that is...pretty classist. Like if Princess Mahara's face is full and beautiful, why is a peasant's face broad? This is just kind of classism.
Things I was basically neutral on:
Garan Tamuron the reigning emperor seem to be based more on Zhu Yuanzhang (founder of the Ming) or perhaps most closely Liu Bang (founder of the Han) in that he was a commoner who rose to become emperor. Perhaps the main way in which they differ is that from what we know both Zhu and Liu were really not fun people to be around and they killed A LOT of people. They would probably have eaten Tamuron alive because he actually occasionally has a feeling and people like him. I do rather wonder if there is a Joseon king that he resembles more, I am less familiar with premodern Korean history.
The intrigue between the brothers. At least to me, this seems very congruent with the bloody disputes that arose during the late reign of the Qing emperor Kangxi, who crowned a favorite son Crown Prince and then things got complicated with two factions forming around two princes.
There are a lot of mean Asian dads, to an extent that their kids all think they hate them, and I guess that's fine, but it seems a little unbelievable to be honest.
Things I liked
I enjoyed the characters for the most part. I do think it a little unlikely that Yala immediately has every important man who is not married in love with her even though she is not a plump beauty but in fact Too Thin, and she is not like the other girls and is smart. It does end up being Yala and lots of men and the women are often sort of side characters and not that interesting. This seems highly unlikely. Part of me does wonder if there is a little bit of a Hong Taiji vs. Dorgon thing going on here. For those of you who know, you know.
The underlying political plot that is realized in this book seems entirely original and is quite interesting and smart for that reason. I enjoyed this. Unlike similar fantasies where you're like oh yes, this is that battle from Chinese history therefore I know exactly what happens, this did keep me on my toes and I liked that.
I felt the author was pretty fair to all the characters, showing them all some compassion. The part where Garan Tamuron is the emperor but also feeling very very ill was particularly good.
I will definitely be reading on to see what happens in the next book, but a bit worried that given the real Han supremacy in here that the appearance of Khublai (Khubilai) er excuse me "Khubai Khan" and the Golden er excuse me "Pale Horde", heavily suggested that I am going to be rolling around on the floor due to really bad Mongol stereotypes.