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Temple of Cocidius #2
Temple of Cocidius: A Monster Girl Harem Adventure: Installment Two
Good News: Things Only Get Worse From Here
Two more relics await bonding before the Zenith, the mid point between the northern and southern chambers. If Tamlir fails now, he loses the battle-beauties he's fought for, and his family's chance at his vengeance.
And losing is much closer than he realizes...
Part two of a weekly serial harem fiction. Don't be put off by the length! It's girthy, I promise.
Two more relics await bonding before the Zenith, the mid point between the northern and southern chambers. If Tamlir fails now, he loses the battle-beauties he's fought for, and his family's chance at his vengeance.
And losing is much closer than he realizes...
Part two of a weekly serial harem fiction. Don't be put off by the length! It's girthy, I promise.
79 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 11, 2018
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August 28, 2019
For my review of the whole story please read the (very long) review I made for:
"Temple of Cocidius: The Complete Adventure: A Monster Girl Harem Adventure"
This book is a very amazing part of an adventure best experienced as a whole! Five Stars!
Buy it! Read it! Love it!
Cheers!
"Temple of Cocidius: The Complete Adventure: A Monster Girl Harem Adventure"
This book is a very amazing part of an adventure best experienced as a whole! Five Stars!
Buy it! Read it! Love it!
Cheers!
October 23, 2018
Great
This was great.The author is very descriptive and the story feels unique. Most harem book mc's don't have to work as hard as this one. I look forward to the next one.
This was great.The author is very descriptive and the story feels unique. Most harem book mc's don't have to work as hard as this one. I look forward to the next one.
October 19, 2018
Nice to see a sequel just as good as first book
And that pretty much sums it up lol, I like where the series is headed. The MC is on point the challenges are imaginative, the ladies world class, keep writing maxx, I'm pretty impressed so far.
And that pretty much sums it up lol, I like where the series is headed. The MC is on point the challenges are imaginative, the ladies world class, keep writing maxx, I'm pretty impressed so far.
April 23, 2019
Still Good
So, the story continues, our main character engages in two more trials, same formula as book 1.
What I liked is that Max Whittaker demonstrates a talent for fantasy writing, many of the characters, trials and descriptions of this fantasy world are top notch.
The bad is that these books are criminally short and character development suffers.
It’s looking like a repeated storyline establishing itself. But, for right now, the story is worth continuing.
So, the story continues, our main character engages in two more trials, same formula as book 1.
What I liked is that Max Whittaker demonstrates a talent for fantasy writing, many of the characters, trials and descriptions of this fantasy world are top notch.
The bad is that these books are criminally short and character development suffers.
It’s looking like a repeated storyline establishing itself. But, for right now, the story is worth continuing.
January 1, 2019
And the mistakes continue
This and the first book are peppered with simple mistakes, the kind any halfway decent proofreader would likely have found. I have an error threshold and this story is pushing it. I like the setups and characters, but the grammar and conflicting uses of context ruin the ride before I can really get into it
This and the first book are peppered with simple mistakes, the kind any halfway decent proofreader would likely have found. I have an error threshold and this story is pushing it. I like the setups and characters, but the grammar and conflicting uses of context ruin the ride before I can really get into it
October 31, 2018
Interesting book
Or whatever you want to call it. I like the story. The premise is interesting and I want to see where it takes Lir and the ladies. There is action, suspense, a hero to cheer for, and sex - what else do you need in a good book?
Or whatever you want to call it. I like the story. The premise is interesting and I want to see where it takes Lir and the ladies. There is action, suspense, a hero to cheer for, and sex - what else do you need in a good book?
February 10, 2019
Proofread
I really am enjoying the story line. The amount of silly little mistakes drives me nuts! Get someone else to proofread your work before you publish! Reading your own work you see what you meant to say, not what you actually wrote.
I really am enjoying the story line. The amount of silly little mistakes drives me nuts! Get someone else to proofread your work before you publish! Reading your own work you see what you meant to say, not what you actually wrote.
April 25, 2019
Interesting
I thought that the book was decent but I wanted more depth to the MC. The author has started to give us some of the backstory on the MC and I look forward to reading more about him. The ladies are starting k but fairly simple on development.
I thought that the book was decent but I wanted more depth to the MC. The author has started to give us some of the backstory on the MC and I look forward to reading more about him. The ladies are starting k but fairly simple on development.
November 2, 2018
This series just gets better and better. Loved it.
November 22, 2018
NICE!
Very nicely done. A lot better than I was expecting. The wording had me right there doing what the characters are doing.
Very nicely done. A lot better than I was expecting. The wording had me right there doing what the characters are doing.
December 18, 2018
A GREAT STORY
Great sex scenes, interesting developments and good characters and fun banter. Very interested in what this author comes up with next!
Great sex scenes, interesting developments and good characters and fun banter. Very interested in what this author comes up with next!
January 23, 2019
Fun romp deuce
Mass Whittaker takes us back to his fun harem set in the temple of Cocidius. Really enjoyed this one and am diving into the next one.
Mass Whittaker takes us back to his fun harem set in the temple of Cocidius. Really enjoyed this one and am diving into the next one.
January 30, 2019
Great 👍
Yep two is better than one, three provides confusion and four the story is getting great. Three more books and then what awaits our hero.
Yep two is better than one, three provides confusion and four the story is getting great. Three more books and then what awaits our hero.
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