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This is sort of just a day in the life of a man and his family. There wasn't much tension or drama, but there's a spattering of humor. The dialogue is a little odd with double dashes placed randomly in words in almost every sentence. I'm not sure if this is because I'm supposed to be reading it that way or what, but it kept taking me out of the story because it's almost like the sentence come to a full stop. That is meant to show an interruption in speech and when it shows up several times in one sentence, it's a little jarring.
I do think the story shows promise and could perhaps be expanded on to add a little drama to it. The issues with the double dashes are easily fixable should the author wish to. It was a nice little short story, but I think I just wanted a little more