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The Bathala #1
Enlightenment
When Dorothy meets the mysterious Adrian with his alluring knowledge of Filipino folklore, she senses he's not being completely truthful. She's right. He's a vampire warrior from the Philippines sent to Vegas to protect her and her best friend Stella from unseen vampire enemies. As the truth becomes exposed, the three are on the brink of a new enlightenment that changes them forever.
Enlightenment, Book One of The Bathala Series is a vampires series through the perspectives of characters representing the diverse Filipino diaspora and introduces an alternate perspective to vampire lore.
SCHOOL LIBRARY JOURNAL REVIEW
by Kristyn Dorfman of The Nightingale-Bamford School, New York City
March 01, 2019
Dorothy Dizon is a Filipina American living in Las Vegas focused mostly on her graduation and her mother's liver cancer diagnoses. All of that changes after a night out when a man gets too close and she is stronger than expected. Her surge of power lets supernatural beings in the Philippines know that she must be protected and brought to their ancestral land. This is a readable and unique series opener. Filipino history, culture and mythology is woven throughout. This narrative is told in alternating perspectives between Dorothy and her Timawa protector, Adrian. There are many footnotes, some necessary for readers unfamiliar with Filipino culture, but sometimes they distract from the narrative flow. The "Terms of Consequence" at the beginning of the book serve as a better reference. A mix of Tagalog, Visayan, and English is peppered throughout, adding authenticity to the storytelling. The plot moves quickly and will keep readers engaged, but the dialogue feels unnatural and the relationship between characters forced. The female perspective also feels less natural than the male voice at certain points in the story. Brandi name dropping feels over detailed and unnecessary, taking away more from the characters and story than it adds. There are also some mild discrepancies toward the end. However, the author's cultural connection to the story resonates, making this tale more compelling.
VERDICT A general purchase for most, but a first purchase for collections lacking Filipino or Asian mythology-based fiction.
Enlightenment, Book One of The Bathala Series is a vampires series through the perspectives of characters representing the diverse Filipino diaspora and introduces an alternate perspective to vampire lore.
SCHOOL LIBRARY JOURNAL REVIEW
by Kristyn Dorfman of The Nightingale-Bamford School, New York City
March 01, 2019
Dorothy Dizon is a Filipina American living in Las Vegas focused mostly on her graduation and her mother's liver cancer diagnoses. All of that changes after a night out when a man gets too close and she is stronger than expected. Her surge of power lets supernatural beings in the Philippines know that she must be protected and brought to their ancestral land. This is a readable and unique series opener. Filipino history, culture and mythology is woven throughout. This narrative is told in alternating perspectives between Dorothy and her Timawa protector, Adrian. There are many footnotes, some necessary for readers unfamiliar with Filipino culture, but sometimes they distract from the narrative flow. The "Terms of Consequence" at the beginning of the book serve as a better reference. A mix of Tagalog, Visayan, and English is peppered throughout, adding authenticity to the storytelling. The plot moves quickly and will keep readers engaged, but the dialogue feels unnatural and the relationship between characters forced. The female perspective also feels less natural than the male voice at certain points in the story. Brandi name dropping feels over detailed and unnecessary, taking away more from the characters and story than it adds. There are also some mild discrepancies toward the end. However, the author's cultural connection to the story resonates, making this tale more compelling.
VERDICT A general purchase for most, but a first purchase for collections lacking Filipino or Asian mythology-based fiction.
294 pages, Paperback
First published March 14, 2019
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Reno Ursal
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My debut novel "Enlightenment" is a fantasy vampire novel set in Vegas and inspired by the beautiful folklore, myths and legends of my motherland, the Philippines.
Enlightenment: Book 1 of The Bathala Series
Dorothy's senior year takes a turn when transfer student Adrian helps investigate the mystery behind her family history in the Philippines. Little does she know he's protecting her from her ancestors biggest archenemy.
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My debut novel "Enlightenment" is a fantasy vampire novel set in Vegas and inspired by the beautiful folklore, myths and legends of my motherland, the Philippines.
Enlightenment: Book 1 of The Bathala Series
Dorothy's senior year takes a turn when transfer student Adrian helps investigate the mystery behind her family history in the Philippines. Little does she know he's protecting her from her ancestors biggest archenemy.
Enlightenment Reviews
School Library Journal, March 1 2019.
Kirkus Reviews, March 14 2019.
Everyone is welcome to add my title to your bookshelf and feel free to subscribe to my Author Email List for the latest news, events and offerings!
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December 31, 2018
↳ I received an ARC from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. The expected publication date for Enlightenment: Book One of the Bathala Series is March 14, 2019 by Pacific Boulevard.
This book was an easy read, nonetheless. The alternating perspectives are extremely easy to follow and the use of first person was the best call on which way to tell this story from. The writing wasn't bland or simple, but it was comprehensible and straightforward in a way that helped to give the story some depth. Considering the author originally had a 600-page plus manuscript, according to Pacific Boulevard Media, I believe they did a nice job condensing the information, although, I am not aware what information was taken out/altered in the final print vs the manuscript. Also, this book is apart of a series so that leaves a lot of room for the important information that was left out or glossed over to have a spot to shine as it deserves.
The main thing I appreciated was the diversity that is expressed in this novel. The use of Filipino history to set the scene for a love story didn't seem redundant or forced, which I appreciated as it sucks to see authors who use diversity as a way to gain their books extra hype. Ursal is Filipino himself, which definitely shined through his knowledge on Filipinos as well as the Philippines itself.
I was able to feel the connection between Dorothy and Adrian in a way I hadn't been able to feel from a YA novel in a very, very long time. They felt real in a way I hadn't experienced prior, or at least not to this extent.
I will without a doubt be rereading this one once it is published, but for now, I would highly recommend this story as it is one that will help you feel and connect with your deep emotions, and those of the characters, but will also give a source of relief and joy, but also pain and struggle. A little contradicting, I know, but trust me, you will NOT want to miss the release of this one, that I can guarantee!
This book was an easy read, nonetheless. The alternating perspectives are extremely easy to follow and the use of first person was the best call on which way to tell this story from. The writing wasn't bland or simple, but it was comprehensible and straightforward in a way that helped to give the story some depth. Considering the author originally had a 600-page plus manuscript, according to Pacific Boulevard Media, I believe they did a nice job condensing the information, although, I am not aware what information was taken out/altered in the final print vs the manuscript. Also, this book is apart of a series so that leaves a lot of room for the important information that was left out or glossed over to have a spot to shine as it deserves.
The main thing I appreciated was the diversity that is expressed in this novel. The use of Filipino history to set the scene for a love story didn't seem redundant or forced, which I appreciated as it sucks to see authors who use diversity as a way to gain their books extra hype. Ursal is Filipino himself, which definitely shined through his knowledge on Filipinos as well as the Philippines itself.
I was able to feel the connection between Dorothy and Adrian in a way I hadn't been able to feel from a YA novel in a very, very long time. They felt real in a way I hadn't experienced prior, or at least not to this extent.
I will without a doubt be rereading this one once it is published, but for now, I would highly recommend this story as it is one that will help you feel and connect with your deep emotions, and those of the characters, but will also give a source of relief and joy, but also pain and struggle. A little contradicting, I know, but trust me, you will NOT want to miss the release of this one, that I can guarantee!
January 11, 2019
Title provided in exchange for honest review via Net Galley
Huge plus and draw to me is the diversity. I harp so much about the cultural diversity in books. It sucks that a majority focus on white/caucasian characters. I really appreciate the expansion definitely of more Black, Hispanic, and Asian cultures.
That being said onto the actual story. I was surprised that this was a vampire story. It's usually associated with a different character demographic. So to see that woven into the story was rather interesting because it's just something different.
I'm not a fan of the new style of multiple point of views. I feel like authors need to make their characters really dynamic and unique to pull off a multiple perspective story. Just saying the opposite character in one pov and doing it in reserve in the other doesn't pull for a good dual pov title.
It's the culture of the story that makes this worth the read. The writing isn't spectacular and could use some refinement in style, but bringing something new and fresh is a lot in the reading world.
Huge plus and draw to me is the diversity. I harp so much about the cultural diversity in books. It sucks that a majority focus on white/caucasian characters. I really appreciate the expansion definitely of more Black, Hispanic, and Asian cultures.
That being said onto the actual story. I was surprised that this was a vampire story. It's usually associated with a different character demographic. So to see that woven into the story was rather interesting because it's just something different.
I'm not a fan of the new style of multiple point of views. I feel like authors need to make their characters really dynamic and unique to pull off a multiple perspective story. Just saying the opposite character in one pov and doing it in reserve in the other doesn't pull for a good dual pov title.
It's the culture of the story that makes this worth the read. The writing isn't spectacular and could use some refinement in style, but bringing something new and fresh is a lot in the reading world.
December 9, 2018
ARC Review: Received for free via Netgalley for an honest review
CW: ableist slurs
Okay, I will say that this is an enjoyable read, I did like it and at times could get lost in the story, but it had issues that could not be ignored.
1. Sometimes I had no idea what was going on. Like I'd be reading along and then something would happen and I'd be so confused about what was going. Like, I don't know if I wasn't concentrating enough or what, but there were times where I'd have to reread a section because I felt like I missed something important.
2. Some things were explained enough. Like the communication thing between kindred, is it like a Skype thing or what, like I couldn't understand it. And how is Adrian connected to his Vegas family? Like how do they know each other.
3. Some things were over explained. Like clothing, too much explaining went into clothing. And celebrity name dropping, too much celebrity and brand name dropping. Describing something like “my DKNY luggage” is not necessary, and describing every song that's being played, and the details of every item of clothing, unnecessary.
4. Some of the exchanges between characters was kind of cringe, especially when the bad guys were interacting with the good. Some of the villain lines were just too much, like they're almost comical instead of scary.
5. The ending. The ending felt so choppy and random. The last chapter was too much without enough time. The story, as far as we knew, was about two people, but then a third person was added and then there were two male side characters who confused me. Like I don't know, everything got really choppy and confusing by the last chapter. I couldn't put together why thing went on the direction they did, like did I miss something that had been said in the rest of the book? And the Epilogue was just as confusing as the final chapter. Usually Epilogue are supposed to kind of roundup everything, give us some closure while setting us up for another book (I hope there is another book because there are so many questions that weren't answered: ie Adrian's Vegas Family) but this one didntdo that. It confused me kor than anything.. Is the Epilogue a setup for the next book, is it going to be the prologue of another book. Like I didn't understand that part.
Overall, this wasn't a bad book. I did like it, an as mentioned before could get lost in it. I just wish there were better explanations in some things and less in others.
CW: ableist slurs
Okay, I will say that this is an enjoyable read, I did like it and at times could get lost in the story, but it had issues that could not be ignored.
1. Sometimes I had no idea what was going on. Like I'd be reading along and then something would happen and I'd be so confused about what was going. Like, I don't know if I wasn't concentrating enough or what, but there were times where I'd have to reread a section because I felt like I missed something important.
2. Some things were explained enough. Like the communication thing between kindred, is it like a Skype thing or what, like I couldn't understand it. And how is Adrian connected to his Vegas family? Like how do they know each other.
3. Some things were over explained. Like clothing, too much explaining went into clothing. And celebrity name dropping, too much celebrity and brand name dropping. Describing something like “my DKNY luggage” is not necessary, and describing every song that's being played, and the details of every item of clothing, unnecessary.
4. Some of the exchanges between characters was kind of cringe, especially when the bad guys were interacting with the good. Some of the villain lines were just too much, like they're almost comical instead of scary.
5. The ending. The ending felt so choppy and random. The last chapter was too much without enough time. The story, as far as we knew, was about two people, but then a third person was added and then there were two male side characters who confused me. Like I don't know, everything got really choppy and confusing by the last chapter. I couldn't put together why thing went on the direction they did, like did I miss something that had been said in the rest of the book? And the Epilogue was just as confusing as the final chapter. Usually Epilogue are supposed to kind of roundup everything, give us some closure while setting us up for another book (I hope there is another book because there are so many questions that weren't answered: ie Adrian's Vegas Family) but this one didntdo that. It confused me kor than anything.. Is the Epilogue a setup for the next book, is it going to be the prologue of another book. Like I didn't understand that part.
Overall, this wasn't a bad book. I did like it, an as mentioned before could get lost in it. I just wish there were better explanations in some things and less in others.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 13, 2020
I was so excited to receive an arc of this book because it's the first book by a FilAm author I'll have the privilege of reviewing. Add to that the fact that it's about Filipino folklore, a topic I'm fairly familiar with being the daughter of a woman who was born and raised in the Visayas. I remember the scary tales my relatives used to tell whenever I visited the province at summertime as a young girl, tales of aswangs, duwendes, etc. What I appreciated about this book is the historical and mythological aspects and how it was incorprated into the modern setting. I like that the author shared several songs by FilAm artists, some of whom I'm not familiar with. The author also highlights popular Filipino cuisine such as dinuguan and traditions such as pagmamano which is a sign of respect for elders. I also like the footnotes and the index of pertinent words, these will be helpful for readers who are not of Filipino descent to understand the terms used.
However, I felt the story needed more characterization and world-building. For example, I found Dorothy's characterization too perfect - pretty, valedictorian, rich (she drives a Mercedes), good in martial arts, etc. Granted she does have some family drama and personal struggles, but I found her character superficial. I was also unimpressed by how brand conscious the characters are - Givenchy jacket, DKNY luggage, BMW, etc. The reveals also felt rushed and the twist in the end didn't make sense to me. The publisher noted that this was originally a 600-page manuscript that they edited down to less than 300 pages. Perhaps this is why the story feels rushed, with several typographical errors too.
This is a series so I'm hoping the next books will be meatier and more polished. I do sense there might be a love triangle brewing so it would be interesting to see if this assumption is correct. I have high hopes for this series but the story needs more substance, endearing characters, and effective world-building.
Thank you to Pacific Boulevard Books for sending me a copy.
However, I felt the story needed more characterization and world-building. For example, I found Dorothy's characterization too perfect - pretty, valedictorian, rich (she drives a Mercedes), good in martial arts, etc. Granted she does have some family drama and personal struggles, but I found her character superficial. I was also unimpressed by how brand conscious the characters are - Givenchy jacket, DKNY luggage, BMW, etc. The reveals also felt rushed and the twist in the end didn't make sense to me. The publisher noted that this was originally a 600-page manuscript that they edited down to less than 300 pages. Perhaps this is why the story feels rushed, with several typographical errors too.
This is a series so I'm hoping the next books will be meatier and more polished. I do sense there might be a love triangle brewing so it would be interesting to see if this assumption is correct. I have high hopes for this series but the story needs more substance, endearing characters, and effective world-building.
Thank you to Pacific Boulevard Books for sending me a copy.
November 13, 2018
We are proud to publish "Enlightenment," Book One of the Bathala Series by Filipino-American author Reno Ursal. This is the first book of its kind, a Young Adult novel that uses Filipino history as the backdrop for a supernatural coming-of-age love story. We don't know of a novel that captures the push and pull of Young Adult relationships with Filipino American characters! Undoubtedly, the Filipino American perspective is largely ignored in the Young Adult market. With "Enlightenment", YA readers experience the twist and turns of a young relationship between Dorothy and Adrian that is somehow connected to the complicated history of the Philippines with supernatural flare.
The author's original manuscript was over 600 pages. We published this book at a reasonable 270+ pages that gives readers an easy read from two first-person perspectives. We have high hopes for "Enlightenment," Book One of The Bathala Series, a series that will take Dorothy and Adrian around the world. With the hard work put in by the author and editors, it is our opinion readers will find this a worthwhile read. Otherwise, we wouldn't have published it!
Thank you to all the Advanced Readers giving us feedback thus far. Release date is March 2019! We invite all readers to be Enlightened in 2019 anywhere books are sold!
The author's original manuscript was over 600 pages. We published this book at a reasonable 270+ pages that gives readers an easy read from two first-person perspectives. We have high hopes for "Enlightenment," Book One of The Bathala Series, a series that will take Dorothy and Adrian around the world. With the hard work put in by the author and editors, it is our opinion readers will find this a worthwhile read. Otherwise, we wouldn't have published it!
Thank you to all the Advanced Readers giving us feedback thus far. Release date is March 2019! We invite all readers to be Enlightened in 2019 anywhere books are sold!
November 20, 2018
This book was received as an ARC from Pacific Boulevard Books in exchange for an honest review. Opinions and thoughts expressed in this review are completely my own.
Enlightenment really opens your eyes the dependency of love and survival through Dorothy and Adrian. The power and bond they have formed throughout the book was so magically powerful that you could feel their struggle throughout the book. Everyone looks at love as something that comes and goes but they never really look at the other side of the powerful connection you have with the one another, so powerful that it is needed for survival. A powerful message that readers will easily connect to.
This book will be considered for our YFiction collection at our library. That is why we give this book 4 stars.
Enlightenment really opens your eyes the dependency of love and survival through Dorothy and Adrian. The power and bond they have formed throughout the book was so magically powerful that you could feel their struggle throughout the book. Everyone looks at love as something that comes and goes but they never really look at the other side of the powerful connection you have with the one another, so powerful that it is needed for survival. A powerful message that readers will easily connect to.
This book will be considered for our YFiction collection at our library. That is why we give this book 4 stars.
September 10, 2018
Enlightenment is a novel that definitely has the ability to keep the reader's interest throughout the course of the novel. Plot wise the novel is intense, filled with a rich Filipino history and the reader is really able to get a true sense of the culture of the ancient Filipinos. The novel takes a refreshing and interesting spin on the vampire and lets the reader view them not as humanities enemies, feasting off our blood without gratitude but as humanities protectors. It is a good novel to read if you want something to escape into, it's action packed scenes ensure that even the most reluctant readers will have trouble not seeing it through to the end.
October 19, 2018
I love any book that's got a character who comes to learn of some crucial part history of their being or culture, and this book serves that.
It fits the YA bill, with the curiosity, impatience, restlessness, uncertainty, love and drama. The chemistry between Dorothy and Adrian was quite interesting but what's even more interesting is the ending. It certainly sets the pace for the next book. Thank you Netgalley for the eARC.
It fits the YA bill, with the curiosity, impatience, restlessness, uncertainty, love and drama. The chemistry between Dorothy and Adrian was quite interesting but what's even more interesting is the ending. It certainly sets the pace for the next book. Thank you Netgalley for the eARC.
March 12, 2019
I will preface this review by saying that this type of book is not normally my cup of tea. I dislike YA fantasy in general, but especially when it features vampires. But I was willing to give this book a chance, since it was about Filipino folklore, and talked a lot about the forgotten history of the islands that became the Philippines after Spanish conquest, and #weneeddiversebooks. Also it's written by a Filipino author, so #ownvoices
First the bad: The story is not very well written. The characters go from calm collected people to raving maniacs from one sentence to the next. There is way too much that isn't explained. I found both the narrators, Dorothy and Adrian annoying. I got sick of reading about the designer labels that every character in this book could inexplicably afford. However, the history written in this book was fascinating, and I learned a heck of a lot about what the Philippines were like before Spanish contact. There were things mentioned in the book that I wish had been explained a little more (the rebellion against Magellan, who died at the hands of Filipino warriors for example, or eskrima, the martial art of the Philippines) because unless you read this book already having knowledge of the Philippines you will be a little lost. The glossary the beginning of the book helps, but it isn't the greatest. I'm grateful my Filipino husband was able to fill in some of the vague parts for me. And I was able to talk to him about Alibata and Timawa/Tumao societies, which seem very interesting! Another amazing thing about this book was that there is a lot about contemporary Filipino people that mentioned within it, such as Ruby Ibarra. Look up the people mentioned in this book, and you will be glad you did. (Brown, brown women rise!)
I really did like this book because I learned a lot about history of the Philippines that I never thought about. My husband was the one who told me about Magellan's death at the hands of Filipino warriors, and about the similarities between written Arabic and Alibata, but this book goes even deeper. It talks about the ancient societies of the islands before Spain conquered the area. It mentions these islands relationships with other island nations that were never under Spanish rule, such as Indonesia. It talks about the original religions of the islands before Spain forced everyone to convert to Catholicism. It talks about the influence of Arabic on the languages in the Philippines. My only issue with these fascinating little pieces was that they were wrapped up in a story about vapid teenagers, which meant a character literally yells them out in random pieces and they aren't fully explained, although there are sources listed at the end of the book if you are interested in doing more research. And since this book is just scratching the surface of the bigger story (presumably this book is the first in a series that is forthcoming) it ended with a lot of unanswered questions. I will definitely keep an eye out for the rest of the series, and I would be curious if Filipino young adults like this book. Most people love YA fantasy, I'm just not one of them, which was probably why I didn't love this book, but it piqued my interest. And I will recommend it for purchase at my library.
First the bad: The story is not very well written. The characters go from calm collected people to raving maniacs from one sentence to the next. There is way too much that isn't explained. I found both the narrators, Dorothy and Adrian annoying. I got sick of reading about the designer labels that every character in this book could inexplicably afford. However, the history written in this book was fascinating, and I learned a heck of a lot about what the Philippines were like before Spanish contact. There were things mentioned in the book that I wish had been explained a little more (the rebellion against Magellan, who died at the hands of Filipino warriors for example, or eskrima, the martial art of the Philippines) because unless you read this book already having knowledge of the Philippines you will be a little lost. The glossary the beginning of the book helps, but it isn't the greatest. I'm grateful my Filipino husband was able to fill in some of the vague parts for me. And I was able to talk to him about Alibata and Timawa/Tumao societies, which seem very interesting! Another amazing thing about this book was that there is a lot about contemporary Filipino people that mentioned within it, such as Ruby Ibarra. Look up the people mentioned in this book, and you will be glad you did. (Brown, brown women rise!)
I really did like this book because I learned a lot about history of the Philippines that I never thought about. My husband was the one who told me about Magellan's death at the hands of Filipino warriors, and about the similarities between written Arabic and Alibata, but this book goes even deeper. It talks about the ancient societies of the islands before Spain conquered the area. It mentions these islands relationships with other island nations that were never under Spanish rule, such as Indonesia. It talks about the original religions of the islands before Spain forced everyone to convert to Catholicism. It talks about the influence of Arabic on the languages in the Philippines. My only issue with these fascinating little pieces was that they were wrapped up in a story about vapid teenagers, which meant a character literally yells them out in random pieces and they aren't fully explained, although there are sources listed at the end of the book if you are interested in doing more research. And since this book is just scratching the surface of the bigger story (presumably this book is the first in a series that is forthcoming) it ended with a lot of unanswered questions. I will definitely keep an eye out for the rest of the series, and I would be curious if Filipino young adults like this book. Most people love YA fantasy, I'm just not one of them, which was probably why I didn't love this book, but it piqued my interest. And I will recommend it for purchase at my library.
February 1, 2021
An interesting, short book that I zipped through. I enjoyed learning about Filipino mythology and history.
The writing was not done well. But it has potential. Pacing was all over the place, characterization was lacking. Just all around needed some work. But, I think, the author has potential to get better with more practice and I would definitely read more of from this author.
Now, as to the actual story. Despite the writing quality, I was really interested in the story. I flew through this book! But I have to say, and yes, SPOILERS AHEAD!
The writing was not done well. But it has potential. Pacing was all over the place, characterization was lacking. Just all around needed some work. But, I think, the author has potential to get better with more practice and I would definitely read more of from this author.
Now, as to the actual story. Despite the writing quality, I was really interested in the story. I flew through this book! But I have to say, and yes, SPOILERS AHEAD!
April 24, 2019
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Enlightenment follows Dorothy, the main character, who meets mysterious Adrian, a new transfer student at school. She is intrigued by him during their first meeting, but knows something is off about him. But as the readers come to find out there is more than what meets the eye; he is a supernatural being sent on a mission to protect Dorothy as she holds a great ancient power.
The book starts out slow, but after several chapters into the book it picks up the pace with many action-packed scenes. I enjoyed reading the alternating viewpoints for each chapter. It gave multiple povs of the same situations and the background between humans and supernatural beings. I like how we see how Dorothy goes through herself-discovery journey to grow into her powers and learn about her heritage.
The novel has a diverse cast of characters and I appreciate all of the rich Filipino culture woven into the book’s narrative. Through reading the story I learned more about the language, history, and traditions within that culture. Additionally, the footnotes were very helpful for giving context for the background of the story and the cultural references mentioned within the story.
There is a constant aura of suspense in the plot as hidden secrets become unveiled and there is also lots of danger surrounding the villain of the story, Sitan and his minions who are out for Dorothy’s power. Romance is somewhat of a heavy aspect of the novel, but I liked that it wasn’t the full focus of the story and instead mainly centered on the folklore. The novel ends on a cliffhanger and leaves the reader wanting more with all the questions left unanswered.
An exciting start to the Bathala Series. It’s an interesting fantasy full of culture, folklore, and history!
Enlightenment follows Dorothy, the main character, who meets mysterious Adrian, a new transfer student at school. She is intrigued by him during their first meeting, but knows something is off about him. But as the readers come to find out there is more than what meets the eye; he is a supernatural being sent on a mission to protect Dorothy as she holds a great ancient power.
The book starts out slow, but after several chapters into the book it picks up the pace with many action-packed scenes. I enjoyed reading the alternating viewpoints for each chapter. It gave multiple povs of the same situations and the background between humans and supernatural beings. I like how we see how Dorothy goes through herself-discovery journey to grow into her powers and learn about her heritage.
The novel has a diverse cast of characters and I appreciate all of the rich Filipino culture woven into the book’s narrative. Through reading the story I learned more about the language, history, and traditions within that culture. Additionally, the footnotes were very helpful for giving context for the background of the story and the cultural references mentioned within the story.
There is a constant aura of suspense in the plot as hidden secrets become unveiled and there is also lots of danger surrounding the villain of the story, Sitan and his minions who are out for Dorothy’s power. Romance is somewhat of a heavy aspect of the novel, but I liked that it wasn’t the full focus of the story and instead mainly centered on the folklore. The novel ends on a cliffhanger and leaves the reader wanting more with all the questions left unanswered.
An exciting start to the Bathala Series. It’s an interesting fantasy full of culture, folklore, and history!
March 7, 2019
Reno Ursal has produced a rare type of story with Enlightenment, one with a fictional storyline told over historic details which teach the reader things they didn't previously know. The story is told mostly from the perspective of two people; Dorothy Dizon, a high school senior soon to graduate and Adrian Rosario, the mysterious new student from the Philippines who is much more than he appears. Drawn inexorably to Adrian and his first-hand knowledge of their shared Filipino heritage, Dorothy must decide who she can trust. Other forces want Dorothy for their own purposes and will scruple at nothing to attain them. At each stage, there are historical and cultural references to explain the antecedents to the coming crisis, putting the entire situation into the larger context of good versus evil.
I found the best parts of the story to be the cultural wrappings Reno Ursal sprinkled so generously throughout the tale. Being able to learn something of Filipino cultural history while reading a tale of the paranormal was a real treat for me. A new (or perhaps an old) version of the vampire legend, is told against that backdrop. Enlightenment builds multiple story threads and tension to a crescendo before resolving some of the mysteries presented. The book is beautifully formatted, with ancient Filipino text and references in the event a reader wants to learn more. The two primary characters are well developed and by the end of the book completely familiar to the reader. I'm looking forward to the next installments of the Bathala Series. (Reviewed for Readers' Favorite)
I found the best parts of the story to be the cultural wrappings Reno Ursal sprinkled so generously throughout the tale. Being able to learn something of Filipino cultural history while reading a tale of the paranormal was a real treat for me. A new (or perhaps an old) version of the vampire legend, is told against that backdrop. Enlightenment builds multiple story threads and tension to a crescendo before resolving some of the mysteries presented. The book is beautifully formatted, with ancient Filipino text and references in the event a reader wants to learn more. The two primary characters are well developed and by the end of the book completely familiar to the reader. I'm looking forward to the next installments of the Bathala Series. (Reviewed for Readers' Favorite)
December 5, 2025
Six-Word Review: Philippine mythology affects present-day lovers.
I received a complementary advance copy from the LibraryThing.com Early Reviewer section.
Enlightenment is an incomprehensible story involving ancient mythology, current mysticality, and unconnected events. I have actually lived in the Philippines and have a granddaughter there which is why I asked for a sample copy. The connection between the present and the ancient past may be clear to the author, it's not clear to me. The Las Vegas scenes are equally unreal.
At one point I thought maybe this book was intended for the Young Adult market but I changed my mind. I can't imagine a young reader getting through to the end.
The narrative switching from Adrian the warrior from the Philippines, and Dorothy, the young girl who needs protection, forces the author into a pattern that sometimes actually interrupts the flow of the plot.
There are many factual errors, like a Philippine Airlines Boeing 737 flying from the Philippines to the U.S., to name one.
To say I was unimpressed with the book would be an understatement. I gave it two stars for effort.
I received a complementary advance copy from the LibraryThing.com Early Reviewer section.
Enlightenment is an incomprehensible story involving ancient mythology, current mysticality, and unconnected events. I have actually lived in the Philippines and have a granddaughter there which is why I asked for a sample copy. The connection between the present and the ancient past may be clear to the author, it's not clear to me. The Las Vegas scenes are equally unreal.
At one point I thought maybe this book was intended for the Young Adult market but I changed my mind. I can't imagine a young reader getting through to the end.
The narrative switching from Adrian the warrior from the Philippines, and Dorothy, the young girl who needs protection, forces the author into a pattern that sometimes actually interrupts the flow of the plot.
There are many factual errors, like a Philippine Airlines Boeing 737 flying from the Philippines to the U.S., to name one.
To say I was unimpressed with the book would be an understatement. I gave it two stars for effort.
May 14, 2020
I went in not knowing any Filipino folklore, and I leave not understanding it, other than there are vampires. The author's attempt to 'mesh' Filipino culture and the American way of life felt forced -- not natural. You can include the description of American culture in that, too (with the constant insertion of songs, the younger-than-18 girls going to a club, an extremely muscular boy with tattoos on his neck gets transferred to a school mere weeks before graduation AND graduates, etc.).
Now, onto the story's plot... What is going on? Why are these bad vampires going after Dorothy, who ends up not being the actual one they mean to get? And, why is she tossed to the side when we've spent the whole book caring about her, only to shift focus on another? I'm lost and feel kinda betrayed by the author for this. I know this is the 1st book and everything may be explained in the next one, but I don't have any desire to find out.
This story also needs an editor and correct formatting, as well.
Now, onto the story's plot... What is going on? Why are these bad vampires going after Dorothy, who ends up not being the actual one they mean to get? And, why is she tossed to the side when we've spent the whole book caring about her, only to shift focus on another? I'm lost and feel kinda betrayed by the author for this. I know this is the 1st book and everything may be explained in the next one, but I don't have any desire to find out.
This story also needs an editor and correct formatting, as well.
August 31, 2020
3.5/5
Reno Ursal boldly launched a fantasy-vampire YA story line, incorporating Filipino culture and mythology with Enlightenment, the first book of his Bathala series.
I've never dabbled in the fantasy-vampire YA genre before, so I don't have anything to compare Enlightenment against. While Ursal skillfully weaves Filipino culture, mythology, and folklore into this tale of Adrian, who must protect Dorothy from medieval shape shifters out to get what they've wanted for centuries, the excessive mentioning of songs (some of which are from the 1990s—do high school seniors in 2019 really know these songs?) and luxury brands is distracting.
There are some plot holes (i.e. how are these kids affording BMWs, Givenchy, etc.) and the book could use better editing/proofreading. Nevertheless, Ursal takes a bold step in debuting with this series, and I am eager to read Book 2.
Reno Ursal boldly launched a fantasy-vampire YA story line, incorporating Filipino culture and mythology with Enlightenment, the first book of his Bathala series.
I've never dabbled in the fantasy-vampire YA genre before, so I don't have anything to compare Enlightenment against. While Ursal skillfully weaves Filipino culture, mythology, and folklore into this tale of Adrian, who must protect Dorothy from medieval shape shifters out to get what they've wanted for centuries, the excessive mentioning of songs (some of which are from the 1990s—do high school seniors in 2019 really know these songs?) and luxury brands is distracting.
There are some plot holes (i.e. how are these kids affording BMWs, Givenchy, etc.) and the book could use better editing/proofreading. Nevertheless, Ursal takes a bold step in debuting with this series, and I am eager to read Book 2.
July 31, 2025
I really appreciate the history used to create this book & that it’s based on the author’s own heritage, but the final product could have been a lot better - I also had no idea this was a vampire book. There were passages that made it obvious this book had been written by a man & the ending felt very rushed & confused. Nevertheless, I am intrigued by the myths this story is based on & would like to know more. Enlightenment also kept me interested until the final pages, so the author must have done something right.
⚠️ This book contains violence & mild sexually driven scenes ⚠️
I was sent this book in return for an honest review as part of a YA Bound Book Tour.
⚠️ This book contains violence & mild sexually driven scenes ⚠️
I was sent this book in return for an honest review as part of a YA Bound Book Tour.
January 8, 2019
I will keep my reader rant short, but after the last two chapters of Enlightenment by Reno Ursal Adrian must die. The beginning of the book is incredible, and I devoured it loving all the little tidbits on Filipino (sorry if I spelled it wrong) history. However, the ending had me feeling like I was reading a Twilight version for the Phillippines.
Poor Dorothy is the main female character, and she gets wholly pushed aside at the end which pissed me off.
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3/5 stars
Poor Dorothy is the main female character, and she gets wholly pushed aside at the end which pissed me off.
For the extended reader's rant complete with profanities and spoilers, please check out my blog at https://bookgirlreviewsbooks.blogspot...
3/5 stars
January 17, 2019
I received a copy on Netgalley in exchange for a true and honest review. Enlightenment was a well written and put together story multicultural story. A telling of Dorothy and Adrian. It's a story of the history of the Phillipines. A story of friendship and love. The imagery Reno fosters is amazing and beautiful. The world building really had me think that I was really there. The story had me hooked most of the time.
If you like to read/learn of different cultures then I highly suggest this book.
If you like to read/learn of different cultures then I highly suggest this book.
July 8, 2021
Filipino folklore, mythology and history takes center stage in this young adult novel. The balance of power between the human race and the forgotten ones of powerful, magical creatures is threatened. It's up to a warrior-protector to save an important key figure in this game until she realizes her true potential. But a desperate enemy and family secrets all make things extra difficult. While some parts were clunky, I really hope there will at least one more book in this series to tie everything up.
It was the perfect trip for my recent Vegas trip where the story takes place.
It was the perfect trip for my recent Vegas trip where the story takes place.
January 18, 2019
Enlightenment is a different kind of story with unexpected elements. It's good to read about a culture that is under represented in the ya genre. It's informative in that regard. Beyond that, I did not realize this story would involve vampires. I'm not a vampire fan,so this aspect of the story I really disliked. It's an intriguing premise with likeable characters. Overall, it's not bad, but it's not my favorite either. Thanks to NetGalley for an arc in exchange for an honest review.
August 22, 2019
I received a copy of this book for a fair and honest review. I have to honestly say that this book confused me from the get go. I did not have any previous knowledge of Filipino history or folk lore. I think that this book was written with the idea that those who would would have some of that information already. It was an okay written story, but it did take me sometime to work my way through this book and re-reading it did little to get read of my confusion.
March 23, 2019
3.5/5
A really good book filled with beautiful Filipino folklore and mythology and strong characters and a solid plotline. It was a great read especially for everyone who loves the mixture of fantasy and mythology.
I was part of the blog tour and you can read my full review here: https://bookathonblog.wordpress.com/2...
A really good book filled with beautiful Filipino folklore and mythology and strong characters and a solid plotline. It was a great read especially for everyone who loves the mixture of fantasy and mythology.
I was part of the blog tour and you can read my full review here: https://bookathonblog.wordpress.com/2...
May 14, 2019
First in a series, ENLIGHTENMENT follows young Filipine Dorothy Dizon, a resident of Las Vegas, and her unexpected protector Adrian, scion of a secret society. A contemporary fantasy weaving today's glitter society with the hidden history of the Philippines, this is a story like none I have encountered, an eye-opening and imagination-expanding novel.
March 14, 2019
For those unfamiliar with Filipino Mythology, Enlightenment is a pretty good introduction. With its worldbuilding, adventures and myths all rolled into one, Enlightenment will surely pull the reader into the world very rarely explored in world literature.
March 26, 2019
While I'm not one to enjoy a run-of-the-mill YA fantasy romance - I've read enough, some might even say too many, to know that that's just not my cup of tea - I did find the use of Filipino myths and folklore a breath of fresh air in this book.
What separates Enlightenment from other YA books is its underlying feelings of disconnection from your homeland clashing with the need to assimilate in a foreign land. This is such a unique experience for many second gen Asian Americans, Fil-Ams especially, and the book masterfully blended poignant experience with fantasy that it doesn't come across as too heavy-handed. I found it quite genuine.
TRIGGER WARNINGS: violence, descriptions of blood and other serious injuries
My Review of Enlightenment
The Philippines has always had a rich culture that's brimming with myths and folklore that, sad to say, Filipinos often don't really realize. Rather than looking inward and making use of the treasure trove of Filipino lore, most people look outward, reading Greek and Norse mythologies instead, failing to realize that our own pantheon is as fascinating and bizarre as the west's. That's why I'm always excited when a book about Filipino myths (featuring Filipino characters) makes it to the public.
Enlightenment not only delivered on that Filipino myths and lore that I've been craving but also made me rethink what I actually know about pre-colonial Philippines.
Story
For the most part, this first book of the Bathala series builds up Dorothy and Adrian's story. Most of the plot has to do with Dorothy finding out that she may not be as normal as she thought she was and Adrian infuriatingly refusing to tell Dorothy (and the readers) what and who she actually is. The typical YA romance, y'know? To this book's credit, we do have alternate Adrian POV chapters so at least we know why he can't just tell her everything.
As I said earlier, YA fantasy romance isn't my thing but I still quite enjoyed this book because, while there was a lot of soul-gazing and occasional smooching between the two teenage leads, Enlightenment mostly focused on the importance of family ties among Filipinos. Dorothy was mostly defined by her love and protectiveness of her mother and her best friend who she considers a sister. Adrian, despite literally being a world away from his family, is constantly teased and pestered by his older brother. These little touches and affections are quite subtle but extremely relatable.
Now, the romance itself was pretty cute. I may not be a connoisseur of love stories but I did appreciate how steadily the story built the groundwork for Dorothy and Adrian's relationship. There's still a lot of teenage hormones going all over the place but it's to be expected. I loved how the two leads actually got to know each other before openly considering to themselves that there might be more than just platonic vibes between them.
I admit I was a bit disappointed that the book ended before they arrived in the Philippines. I'm sure the second book will be set exclusively in the country but, from what I hear, the expected publication date of the next in the series is sometime in 2021 so *eyes emoji*
Also, and I promise to not spoil anything here but... that telenovela ending though... damn...
Characters
Right off the bat, I liked Dorothy Dizon. I mean, anyone who loves dinuguan as much as she does is a class A character in my book. But in all seriousness, Dorothy felt very much like a person to me. She's smart and athletic but also well-rounded over all. I was afraid that she'd come off as a Mary Sue (valedictorian and a varsity basketball player?) but her accomplishments actually mean something in her life rather than just throwaway quirks unlike some cookie-cutter main characters from other books that I can recall. Graduating top of her class doesn't just mean that Dorothy is praised by other characters for being so brainy and playing basketball isn't just an opportunity to show off how not-like-other-girls she is. Those things show that she's a fiercely determined young lady who's very sporty and self-reliant.
Adrian I think was intentionally mysterious because even though he has first-person POV chapters, there's still a lot about him that we don't know so his character isn't as easy to decipher.
The supporting characters were also written quite solidly. I especially loved Dorothy's interactions with her mother. Their first scene together was them cooking and if there's one thing that bonds Filipinos together, it's food. I found it especially sweet... and heartbreaking considering the mother's illness.
One last thing I want to touch upon is the refreshing lack of girl-on-girl hate in this book. I was worried that Dorothy was going to have to have a stand off with a Regina George character at some point in the story - fighting over new kid Adrian, most likely - but thankfully nothing of the sort happened.
Writing
The writing on this book was stark but serviceable. There isn't that many flourishes as you'd normally expect in a YA paranormal romance which I personally didn't mind.
This book was a breeze to read though I do have to comment that the pacing got a bit wonky at certain times. Some scenes went on longer than I thought they needed to be and others rushed by, barely giving us two lines before ending the action. The ending especially felt odd to me because it had so much going on that it was difficult to process. I read somewhere on Goodreads that this book was originally twice as long as the published output and I can't help but wonder if the author trimmed a bit too much.
The Verdict
Despite all that, I quite enjoyed this book. It's an intriguing tale about family, friendship, and the importance of going back to your roots. I can tell has a lot of heart put into it. More than that, it's got a lot of potential as a story since the world it introduced to us is so extensive and unique. I am genuinely curious what's going to happen to Dorothy.
Recommended to: readers who enjoy coming-of-age stories with a magical/paranormal twist; YA romance readers who are especially fond of warrior and princess
What separates Enlightenment from other YA books is its underlying feelings of disconnection from your homeland clashing with the need to assimilate in a foreign land. This is such a unique experience for many second gen Asian Americans, Fil-Ams especially, and the book masterfully blended poignant experience with fantasy that it doesn't come across as too heavy-handed. I found it quite genuine.
TRIGGER WARNINGS: violence, descriptions of blood and other serious injuries
My Review of Enlightenment
The Philippines has always had a rich culture that's brimming with myths and folklore that, sad to say, Filipinos often don't really realize. Rather than looking inward and making use of the treasure trove of Filipino lore, most people look outward, reading Greek and Norse mythologies instead, failing to realize that our own pantheon is as fascinating and bizarre as the west's. That's why I'm always excited when a book about Filipino myths (featuring Filipino characters) makes it to the public.
Enlightenment not only delivered on that Filipino myths and lore that I've been craving but also made me rethink what I actually know about pre-colonial Philippines.
Story
For the most part, this first book of the Bathala series builds up Dorothy and Adrian's story. Most of the plot has to do with Dorothy finding out that she may not be as normal as she thought she was and Adrian infuriatingly refusing to tell Dorothy (and the readers) what and who she actually is. The typical YA romance, y'know? To this book's credit, we do have alternate Adrian POV chapters so at least we know why he can't just tell her everything.
As I said earlier, YA fantasy romance isn't my thing but I still quite enjoyed this book because, while there was a lot of soul-gazing and occasional smooching between the two teenage leads, Enlightenment mostly focused on the importance of family ties among Filipinos. Dorothy was mostly defined by her love and protectiveness of her mother and her best friend who she considers a sister. Adrian, despite literally being a world away from his family, is constantly teased and pestered by his older brother. These little touches and affections are quite subtle but extremely relatable.
Now, the romance itself was pretty cute. I may not be a connoisseur of love stories but I did appreciate how steadily the story built the groundwork for Dorothy and Adrian's relationship. There's still a lot of teenage hormones going all over the place but it's to be expected. I loved how the two leads actually got to know each other before openly considering to themselves that there might be more than just platonic vibes between them.
I admit I was a bit disappointed that the book ended before they arrived in the Philippines. I'm sure the second book will be set exclusively in the country but, from what I hear, the expected publication date of the next in the series is sometime in 2021 so *eyes emoji*
Also, and I promise to not spoil anything here but... that telenovela ending though... damn...
Characters
Right off the bat, I liked Dorothy Dizon. I mean, anyone who loves dinuguan as much as she does is a class A character in my book. But in all seriousness, Dorothy felt very much like a person to me. She's smart and athletic but also well-rounded over all. I was afraid that she'd come off as a Mary Sue (valedictorian and a varsity basketball player?) but her accomplishments actually mean something in her life rather than just throwaway quirks unlike some cookie-cutter main characters from other books that I can recall. Graduating top of her class doesn't just mean that Dorothy is praised by other characters for being so brainy and playing basketball isn't just an opportunity to show off how not-like-other-girls she is. Those things show that she's a fiercely determined young lady who's very sporty and self-reliant.
Adrian I think was intentionally mysterious because even though he has first-person POV chapters, there's still a lot about him that we don't know so his character isn't as easy to decipher.
The supporting characters were also written quite solidly. I especially loved Dorothy's interactions with her mother. Their first scene together was them cooking and if there's one thing that bonds Filipinos together, it's food. I found it especially sweet... and heartbreaking considering the mother's illness.
One last thing I want to touch upon is the refreshing lack of girl-on-girl hate in this book. I was worried that Dorothy was going to have to have a stand off with a Regina George character at some point in the story - fighting over new kid Adrian, most likely - but thankfully nothing of the sort happened.
Writing
The writing on this book was stark but serviceable. There isn't that many flourishes as you'd normally expect in a YA paranormal romance which I personally didn't mind.
This book was a breeze to read though I do have to comment that the pacing got a bit wonky at certain times. Some scenes went on longer than I thought they needed to be and others rushed by, barely giving us two lines before ending the action. The ending especially felt odd to me because it had so much going on that it was difficult to process. I read somewhere on Goodreads that this book was originally twice as long as the published output and I can't help but wonder if the author trimmed a bit too much.
The Verdict
Despite all that, I quite enjoyed this book. It's an intriguing tale about family, friendship, and the importance of going back to your roots. I can tell has a lot of heart put into it. More than that, it's got a lot of potential as a story since the world it introduced to us is so extensive and unique. I am genuinely curious what's going to happen to Dorothy.
Recommended to: readers who enjoy coming-of-age stories with a magical/paranormal twist; YA romance readers who are especially fond of warrior and princess
January 26, 2019
"Enlightenment" stands out to me as a first; a first in being a YA novel with an emphasis on Filipino folklore and history. The legends and beliefs that were nearly wiped out by the Philippines' long painful history of colonization are front and center in 2018 Las Vegas. Hidden family histories are exposed (or, at the very least, teased), fights of epic proportions occur, and Baybayin plays a role in bringing some of that history to the present.
Along with the exploration of Filipino folklore, I also liked how this book gave a good glimpse at the Filipino diaspora here in the United States. From family nicknames, to prepping balikbayan boxes, and even a few head nods to the incredible Ruby Ibarra, it was fascinating to see a community that I've become so integrated with come alive in a novel.
As much as I've enjoyed reading all this in a novel, there were spots throughout that were difficult to overlook. We don't get a really good glimpse as Dorothy's potential except for the very beginning and end of the book, there were way too many songs that were name dropped throughout, and a few of the side characters often confused me with what exactly they were contributing to the story at large.
I commend Reno Ursal's debut novel for bringing such subject matter that has yet to be really seen and explored in a YA novel. However, as I've expressed, there were parts that I felt could have been a lot stronger. Nevertheless, this is the first in a series, so I don't have all the answers to everything yet. I await to see what happens in the sequel.
Along with the exploration of Filipino folklore, I also liked how this book gave a good glimpse at the Filipino diaspora here in the United States. From family nicknames, to prepping balikbayan boxes, and even a few head nods to the incredible Ruby Ibarra, it was fascinating to see a community that I've become so integrated with come alive in a novel.
As much as I've enjoyed reading all this in a novel, there were spots throughout that were difficult to overlook. We don't get a really good glimpse as Dorothy's potential except for the very beginning and end of the book, there were way too many songs that were name dropped throughout, and a few of the side characters often confused me with what exactly they were contributing to the story at large.
I commend Reno Ursal's debut novel for bringing such subject matter that has yet to be really seen and explored in a YA novel. However, as I've expressed, there were parts that I felt could have been a lot stronger. Nevertheless, this is the first in a series, so I don't have all the answers to everything yet. I await to see what happens in the sequel.
August 5, 2019
I received a copy of this book for an honest review. What follows is my opinion and mine alone. There was no compensation for this review.
I was conflicted. On one hand, I want to really like it, but I can't. I think I should begin at the beginning.
Well, the moment I saw a book with and about Filipino people, I jumped at it. I am a quarter Filipino and I know nothing about the culture or history. I'm not even in with any of the normal inside household things. I wasn't raised with that. So, when I saw that the book has something I want to learn about, I went for it.
On one hand, I loved that part about this book. The cultural aspects and history inside was great. I didn't care that we had to learn through a history lesson for Dorothy, because it felt off when we are already given a lot of information without the explanation during Adrian's POV.
Aside from that, there really isn't much in action. You get a nice piece when Dorothy is introduced but then it just sort of flat lines until later on. But, what really bothered me was the ending. I don't want to spoil it, but it's one of those "how did that happen" kind of endings. Upon retrospection, I guess it makes sense, but I felt cheated and disjointed and confused.
All in all, the book isn't bad, but it's not for me. I found it to be a bit bland and I honestly tried to enjoy it.
Final Rating: 2/5
I was conflicted. On one hand, I want to really like it, but I can't. I think I should begin at the beginning.
Well, the moment I saw a book with and about Filipino people, I jumped at it. I am a quarter Filipino and I know nothing about the culture or history. I'm not even in with any of the normal inside household things. I wasn't raised with that. So, when I saw that the book has something I want to learn about, I went for it.
On one hand, I loved that part about this book. The cultural aspects and history inside was great. I didn't care that we had to learn through a history lesson for Dorothy, because it felt off when we are already given a lot of information without the explanation during Adrian's POV.
Aside from that, there really isn't much in action. You get a nice piece when Dorothy is introduced but then it just sort of flat lines until later on. But, what really bothered me was the ending. I don't want to spoil it, but it's one of those "how did that happen" kind of endings. Upon retrospection, I guess it makes sense, but I felt cheated and disjointed and confused.
All in all, the book isn't bad, but it's not for me. I found it to be a bit bland and I honestly tried to enjoy it.
Final Rating: 2/5
July 30, 2019
I absolutely LOVED the Filipino culture and folklore in this book, it is where Ursal shined brightest in the book. Unfortunately, I would say that if it weren't for the culture and folklore I don't think I would have finished reading this. There are a lot of similar elements to Twilight, and I don't mean just because it has Danags/Vampires, I mean that with the characterization of the narrators and the way the developments of the story were handled. That didn't make it a bad read, it's just not something I'm a fan of in writing style and I WAS able to just put my prejudices aside with that, but, I could not stand the name dropping of name brand clothes and items and the very materialistic aspect in describing the clothes all the time. I did appreciate it when the clothing needed explanation, and I loved the new things I've learned of Filipino Culture and history, but, I couldn't get past the clothes.
I also was so frustrated by the ending but if I were honest, I would want to see what happens next in the second book.
I also was so frustrated by the ending but if I were honest, I would want to see what happens next in the second book.
January 17, 2019
I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. Thank you to the publisher and author!
I didn’t realize this would be a vampire book (as other reviews have also expressed), and paranormal romance isn’t normally my go-to read. However, I thought the author did a great job of keeping me interested in the story. I also loved the inclusion of Filipino culture.
However, I didn’t love the fact that so much of the story was similar to Twilight. And the last quarter of the book seemed to go off the rails—I personally didn’t like the ending, but that doesn’t mean other readers will dislike it. I would have given a 4 star rating if not for the last few chapters.
I didn’t realize this would be a vampire book (as other reviews have also expressed), and paranormal romance isn’t normally my go-to read. However, I thought the author did a great job of keeping me interested in the story. I also loved the inclusion of Filipino culture.
However, I didn’t love the fact that so much of the story was similar to Twilight. And the last quarter of the book seemed to go off the rails—I personally didn’t like the ending, but that doesn’t mean other readers will dislike it. I would have given a 4 star rating if not for the last few chapters.
April 24, 2022
I enjoyed the book up until the end when the main character, Dorothy was somehow mysteriously dumped and no longer destined for Adrian. And somehow Stella and Adrian are hooking up in public without a problem. And somehow after an entire book of Adrian keeping secrets from Dorothy he spills the beans to Stella. The last part ruined the whole book for me. No longer interested in a next book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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