I wanted to like "The Soldier" so much more than I actually did. It has the potential to be a much stronger story, but alas, there's too much dithering, crying, and menses cluttering up the narrative.
The idea of the story appeals greatly to me - a soldier from Waterloo buys himself an earldom, and goes to rusticate in Yorkshire while licking his wounds. He meets a child on his first day at the estate, and shortly after meets the child's caretaker: a kind woman who is slightly beyond the pale, but who has learned to support herself by baking for the village. It's a gentle romance, which I appreciate, having had rather enough of the over-sexed historicals filling up the genre of late. Unfortunately, the romance never quite gelled for me.
Part of the problem for me, is that Devlin St. Just seems to be in love with his best friend Douglas. There were a number of times where I found myself wondering if this were originally written as a historical m/m romance and was re-written. In fact, I found Douglas better characterized than Emmie, the heroine. She lacks personality - she seems to be a plot foil for the hero more than an actualized character.
The Soldier would also benefit heavily from some editing down of characters - there's obviously a LOT of back story from the previous novel, the Heir, and having not read it I felt constantly adrift. It doesn't help that everyone seems to have multiple titles that they are called by - something I suspect is historically accurate but ultimately confusing to the reader.
There is of course, a Big Secret that anyone with two brain cells to rub together will have guessed by the end, but it does leave you wondering why it took Devlin so long to figure it out. Pregnancy does not leave a woman's body untouched, after all.
And at the end of it all, while I appreciate the touch of realism, I have never gotten so sick of hearing about a heroine's menses. Especially when she keeps announcing its arrival to the hero. Persnickety of me, perhaps, but there it is.
All of those complaints put to paper, such as it were, I will still look for the NEXT Grace Burrowes novel because I do see a lot of promise in her writing. I am hoping with more time, experience, and editing, she may turn out a brilliant romance.