Somnus is a Sci-Fi M/M Romance novel written by the lovely Annya Ginger. My first impression of this ebook novel was that it definitely needs a good editor and proofreader. There are numerous spelling and grammar errors. There are some parts of the story I feel need further exploration and you were left kind of filling in many blanks. I think a good editor could greatly improve the overall quality of the book and telling of the story.
I was getting a bit confused at time with who Brendan, the main character, was more interested or attracted to. The love triangle was a bit scattered and wondered, at times, in which direction the author was trying to guide me, the reader. I felt for him, he is an empathetic soul, but I had to sit back a few times to process the feelings the story was attempting me to actually feel. I am starting to feel I may be confused YOU now. Lol. I am trying to give a decent opinion without revealing the story itself, so you can gauge your own opinion.
I understand this is the first is what is to be a series. Possibly in the additional books there will deeper character development, more detail and definitely better editing. I like the plot itself, the jealously, the sex😏, the intrigue and the relationships and hope that the get the deeper focus. I believe with a little time and restructure this could be a successful ebook series.
2 out of 5 ⭐️ stars