Maria was in the grip of a terrible nightmare, feelings of betrayal, loss of trust, something to do with a man named Chester. Although she didn’t know him, she knew she cared. It was very confusing. As she rode on the bus, she looked out at the beautiful landscape. She was doing research on the movement of bears that seemed to be leaving the area and returning a season or so later. This behavior was not typical. Even hibernation patterns were not making sense. Combined with recent bear killings, Maria was here to help in some way, even if just by discovering what was going on with the bears.
Jack-Dean, when Maria met him, was equally unfriendly – but I can fully understand that. This book was getting more and more difficult to follow.
The nightmare that started this book off was suspenseful and drew the reader in. When it ended and the “real story” begin, I was a bit confused about Maria’s role in coming to study bears and “make it right”. She sounded like just a do-gooder who was curious and figured she would save the bears just by showing an interest, risking her life or whatever else it took. It was not revealed if she worked out of a university or a corporation or what else gave her the authority for such an invasive study? She had no real plan or actual purpose. That’s a very “loose string” that should have been explained to the reader.
Maria referred to the ranger job in general, and not her knowledge of any particular person she knew to back up this thought, as “some guy who was too quick to shoot and lied about his passion for animals” and was no doubt “trigger happy and not likely to listen to her”. That was “right out of left field”, as they say when there is no basis for stating such a “fact”. To me, her credibility dropped a great deal when I read this, even more so when she said “her sole purpose was to take care of the animals, protect them and keep them safe” – huh? She’s going to protect wild animals and keep them safe in one week? When she met the ranger, instead of the reader knowing what Jack-Dean thought, we instead read Maria’s projection of what she KNEW he was thinking. It was really frustrating as a reader. With incorrect word use and other errors, this was not a fun book to read.