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Kel and his twin sister Isabel have traded places before—to escape lessons, to prank their royal cousins, and for Kel to flirt with handsome men at royal balls. But when Isabel runs away in tears shortly before her proxy wedding to Prince Darin of Pervayne, Kel takes her place, knowing he could cause serious problems between Pervayne and their home kingdom of Karleed if discovered.

Isabel will show up—eventually—and take her rightful place and no one will ever know. The question is, will Isabel arrive before Kel falls hopelessly in love with the servant his sister’s husband has sent along? What if Kel isn’t the only one pretending to be someone else?

First published November 12, 2018

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Profile Image for Devon.
136 reviews2 followers
November 3, 2018
I can’t say to much about the story without giving away major spoilers so I’ll just say that I loved it!
The MC’s were great, the plot flowed, the world building was on point and there was a happy happy ending. What’s not to like?
Includes cross dressing and a m/m relationship.

A copy of this book was provided for free by the author in exchange for an honest review.
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9,088 reviews518 followers
January 22, 2019
A Joyfully Jay review.

4 stars


A Deceptive Alliance is like a road trip story set in a time of kings and queens. Once the show hits the road, we spend countless days watching Kel, Dare, and the rest of the entourage dealing with the facts of life as part of a royal caravan. I enjoyed Blackburn’s consistent use of descriptive language. For example, “toilet” described the actions the characters took for preparing for a day (or cleaning up at the end of the day). Another was “the necessities” as a euphemism for going to the bathroom. The attention to detail in the clothes was both part of the plot and another world-building device that helped me draw a picture of the characters and their place in time. Clothing also serves an interesting focal point for plot development. Kel initially goes full-Isabel with the skirts and bodices and whatnot that require assistance to wear. The longer he is forced to continue the charade, the more he asserts his independence and starts to modify the clothing so it suits his (masculine) sensibilities more. As Kel’s clothing becomes less fussy, he simultaneously presses for more freedoms. It’s clear that as Kel shifts from desperately trying to recreate Isabel into desperately trying not to lose himself in the role, Dare’s interest in Kel seems to grow.

Read Camille’s review in its entirety here.
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442 reviews21 followers
November 17, 2018
This book was provided by the author via IndiGo Marketing & Design in exchange for an honest review.


Princess Isabel is in lust with a servant and runs off before her proxy wedding, leaving her twin brother Kel, who often dresses as her to attend balls, to take her place. 


I enjoy some of the classic tropes used here. The idea of a society that accepts non-binary people is refreshing. 


The twist is predictable, but still amusing. This is a fluffy fantasy read with a hea ending. Don't look for historical realism in this lighthearted romp. Crossdressing, ust, identity swap.


I had no issue staying interested in the characters or plot. If you enjoy high fantasy, you'll enjoy this. 


A solid 4/5
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2,696 reviews100 followers
January 13, 2022
DNF @ 54%.

I’ve read stories with similar plots, executed better. This was predictable and dragged on. I thought I was almost done, only to realize that I was only half way.

I did have an issue with how Kel felt violated after but then when seeking shelter with Dare, he had no problem .
211 reviews2 followers
November 12, 2018
This is a very sweet and light-hearted royal love story in a historial setting.
Like others before me already said, its hard talking about the book without giving any spoilers away, other than already mentioned in the blurb.
The whole story is very lovely and thought through also it has a very nice reading flow and i liked both characters a lot.
Theres not really much, if any angst or dark stuff in general. Theres some crossdressing, thought it comes natural with the story, as Kel pretends to be his sister at the beginning. Its out of necessity, not because Kel enjoys it or wants to be a woman.
I recommend this story to everyone who loves light reads and is openminded, as the book conveys just that. Its very LGBTQA friendly, to the point that it borders on unrealistic at times because things just run so smoothly for them, but at the same time exactly that is the charm of the book. I didnt mind at all, it was simply warm, pleasant and enjoyable to read.
Thanks for such an enjoyable book <3
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425 reviews6 followers
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May 16, 2023
I am not following. It just isn't my thing...
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113 reviews29 followers
November 7, 2018
I received an advanced reading copy of this book through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

I enjoyed reading this story very much. Kel (the protagonist) was such a fun character to read, i especially loved reading about his struggles to try and disguise himself in women's clothing. Dare was also a fun character, and i loved he wasn't the usual surly kind of romantic interest. There are a fair amount of sexual scenes which should be noted too, although i never found them to be overly graphic (to the point of being off-putting) or too frequent to distract from the rest of the story. It came across as just a part of the character's natural curiosity or as intimate scenes you'd expect from a grown couple in a relationship, which is largely what the story is about.

The book is very openly LGBTQA friendly right from the beginning, and stayed this way - something i was delighted to see for the first time in a novel. I found the story to be a light-hearted romance with some funny moments too.The story just flows in the way it was written, and i easily read it all in one sitting.

The reason i rated this 4 out of 5 stars is because even though i thought it was a very sweet and enjoyable read, it seemed quite short and there aren't really any surprising twists or conflicts that might have made the story even more engaging to me. (And Perhaps a tad too fluffy but i really don't think an angsty romance was the author's goal here at all.)

Overall, i would absolutely recommend this story to anyone looking for a fun, light-hearted story that is LGBTQA friendly, and who enjoys a happily ever after.
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Author 1 book9 followers
December 14, 2018
(Warning for transphobia)
On the surface, A Deceptive Alliance should have been everything I wanted. People in disguise, a runaway bride, an accidental romance, all of that is totally my thing. Unfortunately this book was absolutely PACKED with transphobia. I hear it's supposed to be fluff, but there was nothing fluffy about it to me.

The love interest Dare makes repeated attempts to "prove" that his new bride (the main character in disguise) is really a man so that he can be allowed to be attracted to him. It would have been so easy (and much less offensive) to acknowledge the possibility that Dare was bisexual. But no. He even goes so far as to mention that he's had nightmares about Kel having breasts and is visibly relieved when he sees Kel naked and can confirm that he's a man. There's no mention of the possibility that Kel could be a trans woman or nonbinary. He looks like a man to Dare so he is assumed to be one without any input from Kel. At one point Dare also suggests that Kel stop dressing "as a woman" since they're both uncomfortable with the disguise and instead... pretend to be nonbinary to avoid suspicion about their relationship? I'm not sure what that was supposed to accomplish. Kel would still be misgendering himself and... I'm just really confused about how that was supposed to be a better option.

The rest of the book is spent setting up minor conflicts and then immediately knocking them down, sometimes even in the same chapter they were introduced. Again, fluff is not my thing so to anyone who enjoys that kind of thing you will definitely find it here. I couldn't get past all the absolutely unnecessary transphobia from the love interest.
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339 reviews49 followers
December 18, 2018
At this point, when I see a new queer fantasy pop up on NetGalley from NineStar Press, I’m requesting before I’ve even really registered it! So far it seems to be working well, because A Deceptive Alliance is a wonderful fluffy fantasy romance which I absolutely adored.

This book is so sweet. As I said in my review of Daughter of the Sun, I really feel like there’s a gap on my shelves when it comes to light-hearted, character-centric fantasy that just makes you smile. Oh, and if it features queer romance, then so much the better! A Deceptive Alliance fits perfectly into this niche – it had me beaming throughout as the story unfolded in such a lovely way. This is a story that plays heavily with tropes – arranged royal marriage that turns out to be a love match, twins disguised as each other, royalty playing at being commoners – but it feels fresh and fun, and I think this is due to the warmth with which our POV character, Kel, is written.

Kel’s only trying to help his twin sister out, but somehow, in covering for her pre-wedding jitters, he finds himself dressed as her and taking part in her pre-marriage vows. Then, before he knows it, he’s on the road, travelling to his new kingdom, where he’ll meet his new husband – who’s expecting Isabel, not Kel. Sure, they look alike. But how is this going to work? Well, there’s a whole lot of awkward, and a whole lot of romance, as Kel starts to fall for a dashing young man in the travelling company…

Ah, it’s so wonderful to read about Kel and how comfortable he is with his sexuality! Same-sex relationships aren’t really accepted in his kingdom, but he still seems confident in who he is, and has very little angst about his preference for men. Most people seem to know about it on the downlow, and still accept him, because he’s a kind and nice guy. He’s willing to wear Isabel’s clothes to help her out, but he certainly doesn’t prefer them – I thought, upon reading the blurb, that it might turn out that he preferred to identify as a woman, but that’s not the case. Kel is definitely cis. This obviously creates some conflict, because it would be a lot easier for him if he could just stay in feminine clothing all the time and pretend to be Isabel!

Dare, the chap that catches his eye (and whom, spoilers, you can instantly tell is also in disguise), is so charming and fun to read about. I loved his snark, and I loved that he really seemed to understand Kel from the get-go, even before he realised he was a man. I loved the scene where he explained that he’d been trying really hard to fall for ‘Isabel’ because if she wasn’t a woman she’d be perfect for him, so the revelation of Kel being a man was such a relief. So cute. Watching their relationship blossom is adorable, and I was rooting for them so hard! They’re just utterly shippable and cute together. The ending actually made me squee out loud, when they actually manage to pull their Happy Ever After off! This is true fairy tale romance right here. It’s just adorable. I’m actually smiling writing this review, is how lovely this book is.

Look, gay relationships in literature are so often fraught with misery and and angst, and it’s wonderful to read fluffy, fun, happy stories, especially in the genre I love. Oh, this book just made me so happy. Go read it, okay?

Five out of five stars!
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1,469 reviews29 followers
November 24, 2018
An alliance between two kingdoms rests on the happy marriage of Isabel and Prince Darin. But when Isabel disappears and doesn't return for the proxy wedding, it's up to Kel to take her place...temporarily. Except he's a man and a twin, two very big marks against him according to the peace treaty and customs of Pervayne. He'll have to keep up the ruse if he wants to save their lives and their alliance. Not everything is as it seems, however, and Kel might not be the only one hiding things.

Kel was truly interesting with his abilities as well as his understanding of his country's situation regarding his sister's irresponsibility and impulsiveness. Covering for her selfishness and poor decision-making more than once in this story showed how mature and selfless he was. He was also no pushover. The way he would stand up for "himself" to Dare and the other guard was admirable. All the difficulty of assuming his sister's role was described really well, none of the awkwardness was overlooked.

Dare's character was slightly predictable but it was his confession and acceptance of his chastisement that made me like him. His sincerity regarding his former lover's attitude and actions was admirable but a little dismissive as if they weren't that big of a deal when pretty much anyone could see that it was, based on that spurned lover's reaction to seeing Kel. You can also kind of tell that he really isn't the heir apparent because he's a bit oblivious and slightly clueless about getting his way with his very domineering father or just acting in a way to be taken seriously once they reach his kingdom.

I liked the reasoning for both men's deception over the journey. While Michael judged Kel unfairly and treated him with jealous prejudice I was wondering if that would become a bigger conflict but they quickly found common ground and became friends and allies regarding Dare.

The idea of the Kindred was definitely something more modern in expression and acknowledgment while placed in a historical setting that seemed both fitting and radical at the same time. And the king's decree regarding the marriage is pretty much what many of us would like to see happen today; the way it was written made it a beautiful sentiment more than a current-time political statement.

I enjoyed this story quite a lot. The conflict was really in the consequences of the revelation rather than anything external coming at them first. And nothing more insidious than irresponsibility and extreme caution threatened them as well. There were other events that could have turned into something more dangerous or become more of a hindrance to their HEA but everything resolved quickly and simply. Perhaps too simply, but that's the beauty of something filled with love and fluff...if you're not feeling that type of story, you should skip this one. Otherwise, enjoy the simple love and the strong characters that influence a happier future for all.
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77 reviews1 follower
December 24, 2018
Full disclosure: I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review.

Overall, I thought this book was very sweet. Typically I like more angst and pain in my books, but sometimes it is nice reading something that doesn’t guarantee just a happy ending, but is also happy along the way. I read the majority of this book while visiting my in-laws, and it was a lovely treat to check in on.

What I loved
The slow-burn. Without spoiling anything, I guessed the “secret” very early on. However, that didn’t detract from my enjoyment but instead allowed me to excitedly await the reveal.

The ending: it was wrapped up very nicely in a way that did not require extended deception, in spite of the title. Kel and Prince Darin get to be together in what I see as the best possible way. I loved the ending and how sweet it was.


What could be better
The beginning: I started the book about four days ago and was reluctant to pick it up at first because the beginning annoyed me. It starts off with a huge information dump that really just seemed like lazy storytelling to me. Especially all the “wait, you KNEW I was GAY?!” at the beginning just to get that out of the way. Trust your reader a bit more to pick up on subtle storytelling. It is also fine to have established relationships and give that information along the way.

The conflict: Was contrived at best and non-existent at worst. I would have liked a little more. There were hints along the way, talking about bandits etc, but all of it came to naught and they was disappointing. What was even the point of Duke Tigone? He had no purpose except for a very forced bit of conflict at the end which really wasn’t needed.

Inconsistencies: There were a couple little weird parts within the text that pulled me away from the story. I don’t expect or require vaguely medieval Euro-inspired fantasy to be historically accurate, but the word “sexy” seemed very out of place especially because it only entered English in the 20th century. And was Dare the prince’s “squire” or “esquire?” Does he attend the prince or practice law? I really don’t know since both words were used. Lastly, if you are going to make up fake words please keep the spelling consistent. The title Tian (or maybe Tain?) had multiple spellings.
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208 reviews2 followers
November 7, 2018
ARC received through NetGalley - this review and rating is based on my personal enjoyment of the book

This author is known for "cheesy, low-angst [...] fluffy" romance books, and I wish I had known that going in. Because this is all of those things and I'm not usually about that noise. I'm that masochistic romance reader who wants to suffer . So this was definitely a different flavor from my norm - but it was enjoyable... in a fluffy, cheesy way. ;)

It does contain my ultimate romance pet peeve, though: when the couple falls in ~*love*~ really quickly and can't stop professing their ~*love*~ for eachother and just can't even imagine being apart for any length of time because they're so in ~*love*~. I can overlook it, but it does cause constant eyerolling.

That said, I do enjoy our two protagonists - Kel and Darin. In pretty much all of the M/M romance that I've read previously the protags are categorized as "top/dominant" or "bottom/submissive" from page one, so I really appreciated that Kel and Darin don't conform to those roles. The author makes sure to subtly stress that their power- and dominance dynamics are very equal.

I found Kel's frustration with his sister's selfishness realistic and his reactions to things in general very believable. But I have to say that overall I enjoyed Darin's character much more when . I wish that that tension could have been amped up and explored more through a longer page count.

Overall, I feel that this book would have benefited from a longer page count. I enjoy the setting, plotline, set up, execution, and characters, but more time to explore and deepen everything would have made this an easy four- or five stars for me. As it is, I felt rushed and the timeline feels really squished and I didn't care for the ending too much. This romance has the typical romance novel ending which disappointed me.

And the sexy scenes are graphic without being too graphic btw. *thumbs up*
430 reviews3 followers
November 12, 2018
Possible spoilers

Sydney Blackburn is a new author for me, and she did not disappoint! I've read several twin switch romance tropes, but I think this is one of my favorites.

Both MCs in this story are deceptive for different reasons. Kel is forced into the situation because his twin sister takes off just before the proxy wedding is set to take place. "Dare," on the other hand, is hiding in plain sight in order to gain information for the prince.

The way Ms. Blackburn shows us Kel's emotions and opinions throughout the journey really gives insight as to the hardships of being a man pretending to be a woman for an extended period of time; especially in the company of strangers and known servants, day in and day out.

When Dare finally reveals his secret, the story really takes flight. Kel is pleasantly surprised by his change in circumstances, and it changes the overall feel of the story. By the time the caravan reaches Pervayne, the MCs are flying high.

Unfortunately, a jealous lover from the prince's past reaches the king first and causes trouble right off the bat. Luckily, the king is a reasonable man, and listens to the case put before him. Wedding bells are in the air, and all seems well with the world. That is until Kel's sister shows up with an unexpected gift.

This is a wonderfully written, fun, love story. There is not a lot of world building, but the majority of the story takes place on the road between two kingdoms. The characters are well developed, and even though Kel is a little moody at times, you can't help but like him. This is a true HEA, stand-alone, no cliffhanger book.

Happy reading!

* I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest and unbiased review. *
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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231 reviews10 followers
November 15, 2018
I was pleasantly surprised by this book by Sydney Blackburn. It was a lovely mix of m/m romance, fantasy, and action.

Kel, Lord Lindere, and his twin sister, the lady Isabel, are wards of their uncle, the king of Karleed. Fraternal twins, they look far too similar and have traded places often, so Isabel could taste the freedom of being 'male' and so that Kel could flirt with handsome men at balls. They were as close as could be, but had always known they would have to make advantageous 'state' matches. So when Isabel is betrothed to Darin, Prince of Pervayne, third son of the ruler, she seemed resigned... until she wasn't and ran away to avoid the marriage.

Kel has no choice but to impersonate his sister until his cousin, the crown prince, locates his errant sibiling. So he dresses in her wedding dress, says her vows in the proxy wedding, and then heads off with the entourage to meet 'her' new husband. The plan is that Kel will play Isabel, his cousin will look for his sister and then race to meet the slow moving caravan so that Kel and Isabel can trade places in the dead of the night with no one the wiser. Except we wouldn't have a story if that happened.

So Kel is forced to spend weeks impersonating his sister and during the voyage falls hopelessly for the servant that Prince Darin has sent to protect his princess. At least the voluminous skirts he's forced to wear as part of his disguise cover Kel's reaction to the servant. But where the heck is his sister, and will he escape this debacle with his heart still in tact?

But what if the servant known as Dare was more than meets the eye? And what if Kel didn't have to hide behind Isabel's skirts and makeup... what would happen then?

This was a lovely, happy read that left me with all the happy feelz. I definitely recommend this book.
1,034 reviews20 followers
November 9, 2018
What do you get when you mix the wrong twin trope with the secret identity trope? A delightful & perfectly romantic read, that’s what!

Shakespeare pulled it off in Twelfth Night and Georgette Heyer had cross-dressing twins in The Masqueraders… so Sydney Blackburn’s in good company with this story that follows the (mis)adventures of a young man who impersonates his twin sister, entering into a political marriage to benefit his country. Dare and Kel are both in disguise but they are somehow more themselves with each other this way. I especially loved the scene where Dare finally figures out who Kel truly is. Such a tenderly passionate moment.

One of the things that also stood out to me was the scene where one of the maids started feeling up Kel while he was sleeping. A woman forces her unwanted attentions on a man. Kel feels violated and no longer safe in his own bed/tent. It was interesting to see this happen to a man, yet again a role-reversal, and see how that affects him.

The story takes place in a fantasy world in a historical setting that is kept vague, but which does evoke the spirit of the Elizabethan age, in another nod to Shakespeare. It has a bit of a fairy tale vibe to it. I really liked it.

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Author 19 books155 followers
May 24, 2019
I've read one of Sydney's works before and I knew from that that the writing style is fun and whimsical and I was ready to jump into this one as well.

I particularly like retellings that are inspired by Shakespeare, and this one has a nod to Twelfth Night that was rather adorable. Kel and Isabel are twins in a generic fantasy land, and both of them have at various times felt constrained by societal pressure that they can each put aside when they have impersonated the other.

The problem comes in when Isabel decides that she will not be engaging in her arranged marriage at the last minute, and Kel is forced to step in and impersonate her in her absence.

The affection that grows between Kel and Dare is some of my favourite slow burn that I've read. It's honestly perfect. Kel worrying about what Dare would do when he found that Kel was actually not his sister but a man was present, but didn't come with overwhelming angst. As I said, stories by this author tend towards whimsy more than anything else.

I did enjoy this light and fluffy short.
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209 reviews7 followers
July 25, 2024
this was… a book. or a novella, I think it technically is - it was quite short, and I think that was the big problem.

I personally enjoy novellas quite a bit, but this was the first romance-focused novella I’ve ever read - and I think this proved to me that I’m honestly not a huge fan. everything just happened so QUICKLY. I felt like if this concept had been given room to BREATHE, if it had gone a bit SLOWER and focused on each part more, it would have been good, but as it was…

they fall in love and immediately become inseparable to a ridiculous extent. each problem is solved in a single chapter. a fight happens offscreen just… to happen, I guess? the matter of heirs is resolved in a single simple chapter.

at no point did I truly feel it was BAD bad, tho some parts did feel a bit ridiculous, it was just boom boom boom boom beat after beat after beat with no moment to ever just… take it in. revel in the plot or the moment.

if the plot sounds interesting to you, I say give it a read bc it won’t take you long, but it was just… kinda a book.
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2,244 reviews23 followers
November 12, 2018
A Deceptive Alliance is a beautiful and heart warming fairy tale romance, loosely based on Twelfth Night, one of my favourite Shakespearean plays. I thoroughly enjoyed Kel and Darin's story, loved the way in which their relationship developed, and unfurled along with the two's secrets. It's such a charming and captivating little story.

The story just worked for me, the world building, the setting and the secondary characters were first class. There were also plenty of sweet scenes with lots of romance. It was just what the doctor ordered, a light read, with little to no angst, perfect to while away a wet and miserable afternoon.

My only grouch was that I thought the story was too short, I would've loved even more of a chance to explore Kel and Darin's journey. Due to its short length I felt that the build up to the finale was somewhat rushed, even though the ending is very sweet. Recommended for anyone looking for a sweet and fluffy read, with a lovely HEA.
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13 reviews
November 7, 2018
'A Deceptive Alliance' by Sydney Blackburn was an excellent, lighthearted read, that was easy to fly through! The characters were sweet and charming, and I found myself rooting for them to end up together throughout. The novel's POV was consistently Kel's, and I found him to be extremely relatable.

Perhaps my one qualm with the book (and the reason for the four star review) was that the author sometimes seemed to quickly gloss over the action - more tension could definitely have been built up throughout, both in the relationship of the two MCs and their physical relationship (details of which were quite light). Even the climax seemed a bit anti-climatic, and was quickly resolved.

Overall, a great Sunday afternoon read, with limited levels of angst! Will be looking out for other titles from this author.
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842 reviews5 followers
November 14, 2018
I received a copy of A Deceptive Alliance by Sidney Blackburn via IndiGo Marketing & Design in exchange for an honest review. I’ve always been fascinated with twins with their similarities and differences. The latest by Blackburn is a fun take on twins switching places despite being of opposite genders. Kel is a likable character, willing to sacrifice for his sister and the good of his country, while his sister Isabel is self-centered. The quasi-feudal, medieval setting added an almost Cinderella feel to the story with lots of swordplay. I enjoyed how the long journey by horse and wagon allowed the MCs to get to know one another and to encounter interesting situations. I loved the twist at the end that provided happy resolutions for all involved.
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1,437 reviews25 followers
November 14, 2018
Delightful story with a bit of intrigue, deception, betrayal and along the journey finding love. I really enjoyed the writing and the characters were really three dimensional and and touchable. The story-line was great and kept me reading from cover to cover.

Kel and Dare are wonderful characters that both create are swept up in deception for differing reasons, but i understood both of their reasons. The connection that these characters find with each other, even their deceptive selves adds a fun layer to this story.

I so enjoyed this journey for these characters and recommend that you read and enjoy also.

I was gifted this book from the author and i freely give my review
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794 reviews52 followers
December 9, 2018
Oh my friends, were you looking for a gender-flipped version of the Alanna of Trebond premise? Were you thinking it should be crossed with the disguise-and-lies aspects of Captive Prince (but less brutal), and also maybe put some actual functional thought into how a non m/f royal marriage might work politically?

CONGRATULATIONS THIS IS THE BOOK FOR YOU. Our Hero discovers his sister has vanished on the day of her betrothal, and, for Reasons, disguises himself and participates in her stead. His sister stays confusingly vanished, and so, with the aid of her maids, Our Hero sets off on the long journey to her new home. There should be plenty of time for their relatives to find her and send her to catch up (disguised as him) and perform a switcheroo. Everything is fine. Except Our Hero is not the only party to this betrothal who is acting in disguise…

There’s swordfighting! Huddling for warmth! Amusing mishaps with false bosom-stuffing! And some actual logical thought put into the denouement and the resulting political negotiations. It’s not perfect on that score (I and my giant thesis chapter on how Royals Get No Privacy had some trouble suspending disbelief when it came to so small a betrothal entourage), but it’s workable in the terms of historical-fantasy-emphasis-on-the-fantasy.

Identity wise, this book is both less problematic and less interesting than, say, the Alanna books, in that it is clear all along that Our Hero does not like being dressed as a woman and does not experience it as changing his sense of self in any way. That’s… that’s probably better than what you often get in the girl-dressed-as-a-man stories, where the experience is clearly transformative of her identity but you can tell she’s ‘really’ a girl because she’s attracted to a guy. But at the same time, if you’re after a nuanced investigation of gender through cross-dressing, this book isn’t really it. It does introduce a functionally realised non-binary option, wherein Our Hero is for some time compared to members of a sect called ‘The Kindred’ who dress in gender-ambiguous clothing and do not observe gender differentiation among themselves, which is interesting. That’s presented as an option but not one Our Hero prioritises. There’s nothing wrong with this, but the existence of this group is definitely an accessory to Our Hero’s great gay marriage, so, uh, don’t come here if you want non-binary fantasy.

Relatedly, I wasn’t entirely on board with ‘we both knew we could never love wives, but now look!’ I mean. It works? It definitely works. But I feel like the plot might have been more interesting, and the working out of the distinctions between ‘this is a political arrangement I can live with’ and ‘I want to bang you’ and ‘I’m in luuurve with you’ more complex, if one of them had been either established bi, or clueless.

So, in short: it’s fun! It is a bunch of tropes and approaches I have really wanted to see for a long time! If you like things that are fun and involve crossdressing you will probably like this.
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300 reviews3 followers
November 1, 2025
what it says on the tin. less character development than just circumstances and events, but it's sweet. maybe too sweet? it's very low angst for what it's doing with the description and illegal homosexuality and whatever

attempted assault in there also, so keep an eye out I suppose.

a solid ok story, if you like the tropes you should read it, if you are looking for something more then I don't know.
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458 reviews85 followers
November 6, 2018
Fast and funny read even though some things felt too convenient to be quite realistic. A bit too fluffy in the end for my taste, thus the 3 stars.
Anyway, all in all, I enjoyed myself while reading it.
184 reviews5 followers
November 15, 2018
I will admit I have a soft spot for the historical gender bender genre, but I think this is a great addition to the genre. I found this book to be well written and fun. The pacing was good and nothing felt overly rushed or unnecessarily drawn out.
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244 reviews
August 5, 2025
Uwuu I love a crossdressing I have to pretend to be my sister to save the alliance and ohh noo I am falling for the servaant hes too hot I cant be with himm and he dosent know the real mee what will I doo training swordfights in the woods as foreplay Plotline
That shit is crack
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292 reviews3 followers
November 12, 2018
Takes you for a ride, a very good ride. I don't give spoilers, but I almost want to. You won't go wrong by getting this book and reading it!! I will be reading it again!!!
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80 reviews8 followers
February 15, 2020
10/10 - would recommend!

Absolutely loved this novel - it was a such a charming and sweet fantasy read with a queer twist <3
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858 reviews2 followers
September 2, 2020
3,5 * - It was well written but not overly exiting.
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